EmotionEngine
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Hey Fastlane,
I decided to get started dropshipping this year and made my first store
Smart Phone Wallets
Credit Card, Samsung, Samsung, Samsungs, Phone Case, wallet, wallets, license, licenses, credit, credits, debit card, debit cards, great value, ID card, ID cards, smart, phone, phones, wallet, wallets, iPhone, iPhones, android, androids, new phone, new phones, digital wallets, phone casessmartphoneswallets.com
I would appreciate it if anyone of you could look at the site and let me know what you think
The purpose of the site is to combine your smartphone and wallet so it's easier to keep track of both
Especially as the country starts to open up again and things return back to a new normal
I haven't started running ads yet but I'm going to start with Facebook / Instagram ads before the end of May
I probably need a better landing page but it’s still a work in progress
Some suggestions:
- Invest in some good themes that look better than stock Shopify designs.
- Remove the "Powered by Shopify" in the footer.
- Serif font is terrible in header area and looks generic. Go Sans-serif. Look around at other shops and see what they use. (Even Amazon)
- Find someone to make a professional looking logo. This current one looks circa-1998.
- Create a better shop name.
The shop doesn't look trustworthy in it's current iteration, but that can change. Must differentiate and must be unique in this crowded space. Anyone can create these shops. It breaks the commandment of Entry. (Also breaks "Control" commandment too.) I'd re-read TMF .
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