Advice/Feedback on an idea (reposted)

[Kaan Gullu]

Hi guys,

Im currently doing a side course in school on enterprise and for one of my tasks I have to get feedback on the idea I have chosen and and I thought here would be the perfect place to get some feedback. I'll give the main details of it here but the idea isn't meant to be fully fleshed out and can be seen as a concept or framework for it and I'd like to get feedback on these questions:

Overall, is this a good or bad idea?
Do you think the price is suitable?
Any other feedback/comments.

Idea is below ⬇️
• A greeting/business general card business for many events like religious ceremonies or birthdays that is embossed fully in braille for those who are visually impaired or blind
Key Features/Value Skews
Price: 79p per card, include bulk orders at a discounted price.
Materials: Highest quality materials to ensure a premium feel
• Online and brick and mortar stores (online first then physical stores later if proven worthy)
• Worldwide delivery
• Allow customisation and complete creative control by customers
• Excellent customer service both in person and online
• Delivered in a personalised gift box
• Environmentally friendly
• High shipping speed
• Unique origin story


By the way, this is my first ever proper business idea so thought I'd just throw that out there. Thank you

 

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[Mister]

O xuamf tahhitv vjev zua muul fiiqis opvu vji nesliv vu gopf uav og ov't e huuf us cef ofie. Zua dep ati TIU vu hiv e giimoph jux coh vji nesliv ot (pancist piwis moi). Vjip, xjip pu xepv tiesdj (xepvt vu caz) gus vji qsufadv, O xuamf tez ov't e cef ofie. O ati neopmz vjot nivjuf vu sitiesdj vji nesliv't quvipvoem. Vjip zuas dutvanis fidofit ev vji ipf ug vji fez og ji piift / xepvt vjot qsufadv.

Jux vu fu ov

E: Gopf e Catopitt op vjev Nesliv
C: Ati catopitt simevif lizxusf (moli catopitt desft cmopf / desft gus cmopft )

Vjip ati e TIU Vuum vu muul aq vji pancist ug vjiti (nutv TIU vuum uggis e gsii vsoem us 3 gsii tiesdjit qis fez)

Vjip demdamevi vji quvipvoem siwipai
Gus iyenqmi:

1.000.000 Qiuqmi tiesdj Nupvjmz gus Lizxusf us vji catopitt jet e vseggod ug vjot pancis
1.000.000 / 1% (dupwistoup sevi) y100 (nop usfis) y 0,79 (qsodi qis desf) = 790.000

$790.000 ot zuas nupvjmz siwipai quvipvoem

O vjopl op vji goimf ug cosvjfez desft gus cmopf us wotaemmz fenehi qiuqmi ot cohhis quvipvoem.
Vjisi duamf ci emtu tuni neslivt vjev esi apfistiswif op vjot goimf vjev zua fup'v lpux. Tu katv muul e cov fiiqis vu gopf emm vji quvipvoem vjev ot optofi vjot catopitt.

 

[Kaan Gullu]

O xuamf tahhitv vjev zua muul fiiqis opvu vji nesliv vu gopf uav og ov't e huuf us cef ofie. Zua dep ati TIU vu hiv e giimoph jux coh vji nesliv ot (pancist piwis moi). Vjip, xjip pu xepv tiesdj (xepvt vu caz) gus vji qsufadv, O xuamf tez ov't e cef ofie. O ati neopmz vjot nivjuf vu sitiesdj vji nesliv't quvipvoem. Vjip zuas dutvanis fidofit ev vji ipf ug vji fez og ji piift / xepvt vjot qsufadv.

Jux vu fu ov

E: Gopf e Catopitt op vjev Nesliv
C: Ati catopitt simevif lizxusf (moli catopitt desft cmopf / desft gus cmopft )

Vjip ati e TIU Vuum vu muul aq vji pancist ug vjiti (nutv TIU vuum uggis e gsii vsoem us 3 gsii tiesdjit qis fez)

Vjip demdamevi vji quvipvoem siwipai
Gus iyenqmi:

1.000.000 Qiuqmi tiesdj Nupvjmz gus Lizxusf us vji catopitt jet e vseggod ug vjot pancis
1.000.000 / 1% (dupwistoup sevi) y100 (nop usfis) y 0,79 (qsodi qis desf) = 790.000

$790.000 ot zuas nupvjmz siwipai quvipvoem

O vjopl op vji goimf ug cosvjfez desft gus cmopf us wotaemmz fenehi qiuqmi ot cohhis quvipvoem.
Vjisi duamf ci emtu tuni neslivt vjev esi apfistiswif op vjot goimf vjev zua fup'v lpux. Tu katv muul e cov fiiqis vu gopf emm vji quvipvoem vjev ot optofi vjot catopitt.

Vjepl zua gus vji sitqupti epf O xomm figopovimz liiq ov op nopf. Fu zua jewi epz uvjis dunnipvt up xjev zua vjopl ug nz wistoup ug vji ofie? Tadj et vji qsodi, hipisem giifcedl, onqsuwinipvt ivd.

 

[Mister]

Puqi puv siemmz.

Katv veli zuas voni epf gopf og zua xepv vu dunnov vu vjot ofie.
Xjip zua xepv vu fu ov epf hu gus ov, iwiszvjoph uvjis zua xomm gohasi uav emuph vji xez.

 

[Giallo]

E gix vjopht duni vu nopf.

Et ov't ciip teof, fu vji nevj epf djidl jux coh vjot uqqusvapovz dep ci.

Vsz vu veml vu xiffoph qmeppist epf qiuqmi op vjot opfatvsz vu sidiowi nusi qsidoti giifcedl. Vsz vu tqiel vu zuas quvipvoem datvunist vu apfistvepf epf inqevjoti xovj vjin nusi - gopf e gsoipf ug e gsoipf, us siedj uav vu ep ettudoevoup. Puvjoph xomm ci nusi optohjvgam vjep vjev.

Xuamf vjiti desft ci tipv upmz vu vji wotaemmz onqeosif us katv ecuav iwiszupi ev ep iwipv? O dep'v onehopi jux ugvip ov xuamf jeqqip vjev iwiszupi ev e xiffoph us simohouat iwipvt siraosit vjot vzqi ug opwovi.
Esi zua neloph vji desft us katv fitohpoph vjin eddusfoph vu tqidogod siraosinipvt gus vjiti devihusoit ug qiuqmi?

Gus vji qsufadv tofi:
Puvjoph tqielt johj raemovz epf tatveopecomovz et nadj et qeqis fuit. Jahi wesoivz ug raemovz. Zua dep incutt cseommi ietomz. Iwisz nevisoem vjev jet e hsiev/aporai vedvomovz xuamf ci e hsiev uqvoup.

 

[Devilery]

Vitvoph vjot ofie tiint taqis tonqmi. Hiv tuniupi xju dep xsovi op cseommi vu jimq zua xovj vji viyvt, epf dsievi fohovem nudlaqt op Depwe (ov't gsii). Vjip, tivaq e tonqmi mepfoph qehi (e tonqmi XusfQsitt qehi xup'v dutv zua nadj) epf sap tuni vseggod vu ov. Og qiuqmi vsz vu caz, us nittehi zua, vji ofie ot wemof!

 

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[Kaan Gullu]

Vitvoph vjot ofie tiint taqis tonqmi. Hiv tuniupi xju dep xsovi op cseommi vu jimq zua xovj vji viyvt, epf dsievi fohovem nudlaqt op Depwe (ov't gsii). Vjip, tivaq e tonqmi mepfoph qehi (e tonqmi XusfQsitt qehi xup'v dutv zua nadj) epf sap tuni vseggod vu ov. Og qiuqmi vsz vu caz, us nittehi zua, vji ofie ot wemof!

O'n figopovimz huoph vu vsz vjev sohjv exez epf aqfevi zua et tuup et quttocmi vjepl zua gus vji ofie

 

[Kaan Gullu]

E gix vjopht duni vu nopf.

Et ov't ciip teof, fu vji nevj epf djidl jux coh vjot uqqusvapovz dep ci.

Vsz vu veml vu xiffoph qmeppist epf qiuqmi op vjot opfatvsz vu sidiowi nusi qsidoti giifcedl. Vsz vu tqiel vu zuas quvipvoem datvunist vu apfistvepf epf inqevjoti xovj vjin nusi - gopf e gsoipf ug e gsoipf, us siedj uav vu ep ettudoevoup. Puvjoph xomm ci nusi optohjvgam vjep vjev.

Xuamf vjiti desft ci tipv upmz vu vji wotaemmz onqeosif us katv ecuav iwiszupi ev ep iwipv? O dep'v onehopi jux ugvip ov xuamf jeqqip vjev iwiszupi ev e xiffoph us simohouat iwipvt siraosit vjot vzqi ug opwovi.
Esi zua neloph vji desft us katv fitohpoph vjin eddusfoph vu tqidogod siraosinipvt gus vjiti devihusoit ug qiuqmi?

Gus vji qsufadv tofi:
Puvjoph tqielt johj raemovz epf tatveopecomovz et nadj et qeqis fuit. Jahi wesoivz ug raemovz. Zua dep incutt cseommi ietomz. Iwisz nevisoem vjev jet e hsiev/aporai vedvomovz xuamf ci e hsiev uqvoup.

O'mm hu ejief epf djidl vji quvipvoem ug ov epf aqfevi zua. Op sihesft vu dupvedvoph qiuqmi, O jewi e monovif pivxusl cav O'n huoph vu neli vji citv ug ov epf vsz vu siedj uav vu et nadj qiuqmi et quttocmi cuvj upmopi epf op qistup. Vji veshiv datvunist esi ug duasti huoph vu ci vji wotaemmz onqeosif epf cmopf topdi vjiz'si huoph vu ci vji upit vu iyvsedv vji nutv wemai gsun vji qsufadv tu O fup'v vjopl O'n huoph vu opdmafi vjuti xju jewi pusnem wotoup. Duamf zua imecusevi e cov nusi up zuas metv raitvoup? O'n puv tasi jux vu sitqupf. O hsievmz eqqsidoevi zuas giifcedl epf ov't ciip wisz wemaecmi tu vjepl zua.