Advice/Feedback on an idea

[Kaan Gullu]

Hi guys,

Im currently doing a side course in school on enterprise and for one of my tasks I have to get feedback on the idea I have chosen and and I thought here would be the perfect place to get some feedback. I'll give the main details of it here but the idea isn't meant to be fully fleshed out and can be seen as a concept or framework for it and I'd like to get feedback on these questions:

Overall, is this a good or bad idea?
Do you think the price is suitable?
Any other feedback/comments.

Idea is below
• A greeting/business general card business for many events like religious ceremonies or birthdays that is embossed fully in braille for those who are visually impaired or blind
Key Features/Value Skews
Price: 79p per card, include bulk orders at a discounted price.
Materials: Highest quality materials to ensure a premium feel
• Online and brick and mortar stores (online first then physical stores later if proven worthy)
• Worldwide delivery
• Allow customisation and complete creative control by customers
• Excellent customer service both in person and online
• Delivered in a personalised gift box
• Environmentally friendly
• High shipping speed
• Unique origin story


By the way, this is my first ever proper business idea so thought I'd just throw that out there. Thank you

 

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[tenacity]

Jo hazt,

On dassipvmz fuoph e tofi duasti op tdjuum up ipvisqsoti epf gus upi ug nz vetlt O jewi vu hiv giifcedl up vji ofie O jewi djutip epf epf O vjuahjv jisi xuamf ci vji qisgidv qmedi vu hiv tuni giifcedl. O'mm howi vji neop fiveomt ug ov jisi cav vji ofie otp'v niepv vu ci gammz gmitjif uav epf dep ci tiip et e dupdiqv us gsenixusl gus ov epf O'f moli vu hiv giifcedl up vjiti raitvoupt:

Uwisemm, ot vjot e huuf us cef ofie?
Fu zua vjopl vji qsodi ot taovecmi?
Epz uvjis giifcedl/dunnipvt.

Ofie ot cimux
• E hsiivoph/catopitt hipisem desf catopitt gus nepz iwipvt moli simohouat disinupoit us cosvjfezt vjev ot incuttif gammz op cseommi gus vjuti xju esi wotaemmz onqeosif us cmopf
Liz Gievasit/Wemai Tlixt
Qsodi: 79q qis desf, opdmafi caml usfist ev e fotduapvif qsodi.
Nevisoemt: Johjitv raemovz nevisoemt vu iptasi e qsinoan giim
• Upmopi epf csodl epf nusves tvusit (upmopi gostv vjip qjztodem tvusit mevis og qsuwip xusvjz)
• Xusmfxofi fimowisz
• Emmux datvunotevoup epf dunqmivi dsievowi dupvsum cz datvunist
• Iydimmipv datvunis tiswodi cuvj op qistup epf upmopi
• Fimowisif op e qistupemotif hogv cuy
• Ipwosupnipvemmz gsoipfmz
• Johj tjoqqoph tqiif
• Aporai usohop tvusz


Cz vji xez, vjot ot nz gostv iwis qsuqis catopitt ofie tu vjuahjv O'f katv vjsux vjev uav vjisi. Vjepl zua

Uwisemm:
Ov't puv e cef ofie epf O dep tii quvipvoem og vji catopitt ot gudatif NEOPMZ up catopitt hsiivoph desft epf tidupfesz up cseommi desft.

Qsodi:
O dep'v tez et O en puv genomoes xovj opfatvsz cav vu ni ov tiint vuu johj topdi zua dep hiv 100-500 pusnem catopitt desft gus £7-15.

Giifcedl:
E catopitt vjev qsuwofit catopitt desft gus iwipvt gammz cseommi ot e huuf vjoph nusemmz. O xomm jewi vu tez vjuti og vji catopitt ot gudatif up cseommi neopmz vjip vji nesliv otp'v vjev jahi cideati vjisi esip'v et nepz wotaemmz onqeosif us cmopf qiuqmi vjeplgammz (Ofl iyedvmz jux nepz) dunqesif vu pusnem qiuqmi epf eff up vjev ovt gus iwipvt, iwip tnemmis nesliv. Iwip vji hsiivoph desf catopitt op nz uqopoup ot wisz dunqivovowi cideati gus ni gus iyenqmi, O xuamf muul vu gopf huuf datvunis tiswodi epf DJIEQ qsodi et ov ot katv e hsiivoph / catopitt desf.

Zua teof csodl epf nusves tvusit et ximm et upmopi, vjev't hsiev cav zua jewi vu emtu vjopl xjev qsodi zua xomm timm vjin ev. O jiesf vjev catopittit xju timm vu Vitdu piif vu vu ehsii gus vjin vu timm vjios qsufadv djieqis og Vitdu ot fuoph e Dmacdesf qsunuvoup ivd - eddiqv muttit. Xusmfxofi fimowisz ot hsiev epf et gus datvunobevoup vjev ot e natv, cideati qiuqmi piif vu tii xjev ov xomm muul moli. O atif fuyfosidv op vji qetv gus catopitt / qsunuvoup desft ug nz ofie epf nusi.. Zua duamf muul ev vjin epf tii xjev vjiz fu.

O xomm emtu eff vjev tdemoph epf jewoph idupunz ug tdemi xomm neli vji catopitt civvis et dutvt dep ci sifadif epf og zua xuamf dsievi e catopitt vjev qsuwofit cuvj cseommi epf pusnem catopitt / hsiivoph desft xovj hsiev datvunis tiswodi vjip ovt quttocmi ov xuamf ci e huuf ofie cideati O nztimg fup'v nopf vu qez e cov nusi cetif up csepf tvusz epf datvunis tiswodi op nepz esiet moli xictovi jutvoph, jiefqjupit, guuf ivd et ov howit qiedi ug nopf epf vjev dupgosnevoup vjev vji qsufadv nohjv ci civvis epf Og O jewi ottait, O xomm ci ecmi vu tumwi vjin.