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Okay.
1) It's painfully obvious this entire thing is a template with 0 customization.
2) To make matters worse, it's painfully obvious it's an outdated template.
3) The copy reads like those trash infomercials from the 90s.
4) You have 1 CTA.
5) There's 0 social proof.
6) You have a countdown timer on it as if you're some hardcore fitness expert (I get the marketing point, but that only works if, you know, people actually know you/you already matter).
7) The font of the body is somewhat aids to read.
8) The URL makes me want to claw my eyes out.
9) "Powered by Leadpages" also makes me want to claw my eyes out.
10) The website title is stupid. "Expert feedback." What makes you an expert again?
11) People have next to 0 incentive to give you their email address for a "free workout plan" when there's already an infinite amount of "free workout plans" on Google. And most of them now come with accompanying nutrition plans.
My 0.2$ after 15 seconds of glancing over it.
Cheers.
1) It's painfully obvious this entire thing is a template with 0 customization.
2) To make matters worse, it's painfully obvious it's an outdated template.
3) The copy reads like those trash infomercials from the 90s.
4) You have 1 CTA.
5) There's 0 social proof.
6) You have a countdown timer on it as if you're some hardcore fitness expert (I get the marketing point, but that only works if, you know, people actually know you/you already matter).
7) The font of the body is somewhat aids to read.
8) The URL makes me want to claw my eyes out.
9) "Powered by Leadpages" also makes me want to claw my eyes out.
10) The website title is stupid. "Expert feedback." What makes you an expert again?
11) People have next to 0 incentive to give you their email address for a "free workout plan" when there's already an infinite amount of "free workout plans" on Google. And most of them now come with accompanying nutrition plans.
My 0.2$ after 15 seconds of glancing over it.
Cheers.