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Solid website. Love the concept too, would purchase from you if I was living nearer.
Where I think it can be improved is making the copy clearer, more appealing, maybe shorter,
and definitely adding some paragraphs or line breaks.
Product descriptions could be shorter and punchier, no need to make any point more than once per item.
Also - maybe a personal preference, but I'd like if product descriptions were shown by default.
Or at least a start of the description, with a "Read more" link. Because full description on mobile
may be too much scrolling. But needing to click to see a description quickly starts to feel like too much work
(to me
So something in-between seems like a good option.
Are you doing SEO?
Where I think it can be improved is making the copy clearer, more appealing, maybe shorter,
and definitely adding some paragraphs or line breaks.
Product descriptions could be shorter and punchier, no need to make any point more than once per item.
Also - maybe a personal preference, but I'd like if product descriptions were shown by default.
Or at least a start of the description, with a "Read more" link. Because full description on mobile
may be too much scrolling. But needing to click to see a description quickly starts to feel like too much work
(to me
So something in-between seems like a good option.
Are you doing SEO?
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