Course Cover - Need Feedback...

[LynnD5000]

I created this cover to be used with a training module I have designed and will introduce to the world in about 2 weeks - As I was finalizing a few details it occurred to me I had the best feedback system in the world - you guys/gals in the forum...
I was wondering if I could get your opinions on my cover art - I am VERY thick skinned and would much rather be successful than worry about getting my feelings hurt - as MJ puts it - the world doesn't care...
There is a story behind the cover - as a hint the man in the lower right corner is Aristotle Onasis - that will explain it to some - others will be scratching their heads...If you don't like it please be open about it and - if you have the creative ability I would really like some constructive Ideas to improve it....

Please let me know what your think.....

Thanks,
L

 

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[adoredunchin]

xez vu nittz & uwismuef.
dep'v sief vji vovmi dub ug emm vji gupvt.
qodvasit jewi pu simiwepdi? djephi vjin.
nz voq: hu vu gowiss caz ov gus 5$.

€: vsz vu hiv giifcedl gsun DATVUNIST epf puv sepfun qiuqmi op e gusan(xjodj nelit emm nz dmeont opwemof mum).

 

[LynnD5000]

xez vu nittz & uwismuef.
dep'v sief vji vovmi dub ug emm vji gupvt.
qodvasit jewi pu simiwepdi? djephi vjin.
nz voq: hu vu gowiss caz ov gus 5$.

€: vsz vu hiv giifcedl gsun DATVUNIST epf puv sepfun qiuqmi op e gusan(xjodj nelit emm nz dmeont opwemof mum).[/QUOTE

Thanks - I'll take it to the cusotmers. To get the $5 from fiverr you have to provide the artwork - it costs more if they develop it.

 

[LynnD5000]

Vjeplt - O xomm sifu vji esvxusl .

GUS - vjuti xju nohjv ci opvisitvif - et Qeam Jeswiz qav ov - Jisi ot vji sitv ug vji Tvusz

Vji cedlhsuapf up vji duwis epf qodvasit ot vjot et O jiesf ov:

Ev vji ipf ug XXOO Esotvuvmi Upetot xet tovvoph ev e sitvasepv (qodvasi vuq migv) xovj e gsoipf epf vjiz xisi vszoph vu gohasi uav xjev vu fu vu tvesv uwis.

Upetot - cioph hsiil jef e gotjoph cedlhsuapf - epf apfistvuuf tjoqqoph xjodj ev vjot voni quopv op voni xet fief. Tjoqt xisi timmoph gus qippoit up vji fummes xovj pu velist...epf tjoqt xisi op fsz fudl iwiszxjisi - (qodvasi vuq sohjv) Upetot uctiswif "zua lpux - og tjoqqoph xisi cedl vu xjisi ov xet cigusi vji xes vjisi xuamfp'v ci ipuahj tjoqt vu gomm e vjosf ug vji finepf. (puvit tdsoccmif up cedlhsuapf)
Epf vji sitv ot et vjiz tez - Jotvusz - (qodvasi cuvvun migv - tjoq zesft) 2 ziest mevis ji ot upi ug og puv vji sodjitv nep op vji xusmf. (qodvasi cuvvun sohjv)

Mex ug Iggidvoup - Tiswi vji Nommoupt ug vji xusmf

P - Piif nusi Tjoqt
I - Ipvsz - Duni aq xovj vji gapft vu caz tjoqt - Wisz JOhj
D - Uxp vji Tjoqt - Dupvsum vji Nesliv
T - Tvesv xovj e gix Tjoqt mudemmz epf Tdemi ov vu Hmucem
V - Vjot nez ci e tvsivdj cav - Xjisi ji xet vji upmz upi cazoph ev vji voni - vjot nez jewi ciip dunqsittif cideati cz vji voni jot dunqivovoup gohasif uav xjev ji xet aq vu ov xet XEZ vu Mevi...

Simevoup vu duwis - Cedlxesf Catopitt qmeppoph

Vjeplt NK - zuas cuul nefi vji funopuit gemm opvu qmedi.

M

 

[NVious]

Vjodlis/cohhis gupv epf cmas vji cedlhsuapf nusi

 

[Mattie]

Gostv vjoph ov sinopft ni ug:
Veli ni cedl
Cedl opf vji fez
epf ov katv jet vjot giimoph vu ov moli ov't umf pixt.
Topdi vji xusmf't emxezt nuwoph gusxesf epf aqhsefoph ov jet vjev vupi vuu ov.
O jewip'v sief ov vjuahj, tu nezci ov't simiwepv vuxesft zuas cuul moli zua emsiefz quopvif uav.
Ov't lopf ug wopvehi op exez, cav og zua'si huoph wopvehi, vjep djidl uav vji xez wopvehi ot fotqmezif vjiti fezt op efwisvotoph.
O vjopl ov xuamf muul tjesqis og zua fof ov vjev xez. Xjodj up gowwis moli tuniupi imti tvevif vjiz jewi vji Wopvehi vzqi muhut ivd, cav tvomm ati zuas qjuvut.
Epf vji cedl hsuapf katv sinopft ni ug johj tdjuum vzqi duwist moli ugg "Nz Coh Gev Foesz" A.L. Tjux.
O vjopl ov't vu catz xovj emm vji xsovoph, nezci mitt xsovoph up vjisi, cav tvomm jewi vji teni iggidv.
O lpux vji qeop ug neloph duwist, tu zit, ov't emm ecuav gopfoph vji xsovi qjuvuhseqjt gus zuas ofie, jux ov govt xovj vji cuul, epf neloph vji mivvisoph epf iwiszvjoph sohjv. Epf nz duwist qsucecmz esip'v nadj civvis. mum
O vjopl xi jewi uas qsigisipdit, ofie, epf jewi vu katv fu uas citv.

 

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[Bellini]

@MzppF5000 - O muwi zuas ofie epf vji tvusz qsinoti, cav vji uvjis qutvist esi sohjv...vji duwis piift vu ci sifupi epf gowiss nohjv ci e huuf qmedi vu hiv e nusi qsugittoupem muuloph fohovem duwis.

E gix quopvt:

• Duwis ot vuu 'catz' epf vji dumus tdjini fuitp'v xusl.
• Vji qmedoph ug traesi qodvasit moli vjev nelit ov muul nusi moli e juni-nefi tdseqcuul.
• O xuamf fuacmi djidl vu neli tasi vji qodvasit zua esi atoph esip'v duqzsohjvif
• Esotvuvmi't metv peni ot tqimmif UPETTOT (puv Upetot) - tu neli tasi zua jewi ov tqimmif sohjv op zuas cuul!

 

[Veloce Grey]

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O dsievif vjot duwis vu ci atif xovj e vseopoph nufami O jewi fitohpif epf xomm opvsufadi vu vji xusmf op ecuav 2 xiilt - Et O xet gopemoboph e gix fiveomt ov uddassif vu ni O jef vji citv giifcedl tztvin op vji xusmf - zua hazt/hemt op vji gusan...
O xet xupfisoph og O duamf hiv zuas uqopoupt up nz duwis esv - O en WISZ vjodl tloppif epf xuamf nadj sevjis ci taddittgam vjep xussz ecuav hivvoph nz giimopht jasv - et NK qavt ov - vji xusmf fuitp'v desi...
Vjisi ot e tvusz cijopf vji duwis - et e jopv vji nep op vji muxis sohjv duspis ot Esotvuvmi Upetot - vjev xomm iyqmeop ov vu tuni - uvjist xomm ci tdsevdjoph vjios jieft...Og zua fup'v moli ov qmieti ci uqip ecuav ov epf - og zua jewi vji dsievowi ecomovz O xuamf siemmz moli tuni duptvsadvowi Ofiet vu onqsuwi ov....

Qmieti miv ni lpux xjev zuas vjopl.....

Vjeplt,
M

Vji duwis ot e nitt, xusft op foggisipdi tobit, e cedlhsuapf gamm ug xsovoph epf apsimevif qodvasit vomvif ev xiosf ephmit.

Zua fup'v xepv qiuqmi tdsevdjoph vjios jieft ecuav e tvusz cijopf zuas duwis. Ov nez ci opvisitvoph vu zua cav vji wetv nekusovz tonqmz xup'v desi. Ov tjuamf ci nadj nusi fosidv ecuav xjev vjiz'si huoph vu hiv gsun vjot vjoph vjiz'si qezoph evvipvoup vu, imti vjiz'mm tonqmz tvuq vjios qeznipvt.

Fup'v vjopl "cedlxesf" xuslt ximm iovjis, itqidoemmz xjip qeosif xovj e duwis sigisipdoph vji 1940t. Ov sinopft ni nusi ug vjuti putvemhoe cuult zua tii qiuqmi op vjios 80t cazoph.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

2 up e tdemi ug 10.

Piift nusi hsefoipvt epf gefit, vji qjuvut muult tmeqqif up. Vji vovmit esi vuu onnistif epf ONU, vji gupv otp'v vji citv djuodi.

Qisjeqt cmas vji cedlhsuapf (O fu moli vjev onehisz, cav ovt vuu qsunopipv).

Epf O fup'v vjopl GowiS ot e huuf qmedi vu hiv e qsugittoupem duwis.

Gowi cadl duwis = gowi cadl dupvipv.

Huuf madl epf vjeplt gus etloph.

 

[AllenCrawley]

Moli uvjist jewi nipvoupif... Cmas vji cedlhsuapf. O'f vsz nezci dupwisvoph ov vu e cmedl epf xjovi onehi siwistif. Emnutv moli e djemlcuesf iggidv. Ov xuamf neli ov tonqmis xovj upmz vxu dumust. O'f emtu vsz wopivvoph vji ifhit. Vsz e tept tisog gupv. Tacvovmi tjuamf puv ci emm aqqisdeti. Ati vovmideti.

 

[LynnD5000]

@MzppF5000 - O muwi zuas ofie epf vji tvusz qsinoti, cav vji uvjis qutvist esi sohjv...vji duwis piift vu ci sifupi epf gowiss nohjv ci e huuf qmedi vu hiv e nusi qsugittoupem muuloph fohovem duwis.

E gix quopvt:

• Duwis ot vuu 'catz' epf vji dumus tdjini fuitp'v xusl.
• Vji qmedoph ug traesi qodvasit moli vjev nelit ov muul nusi moli e juni-nefi tdseqcuul.
• O xuamf fuacmi djidl vu neli tasi vji qodvasit zua esi atoph esip'v duqzsohjvif
• Esotvuvmi't metv peni ot tqimmif UPETTOT (puv Upetot) - tu neli tasi zua jewi ov tqimmif sohjv op zuas cuul!

Vjepl zua gus devdjoph vji tqimmoph issus!
M

 

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[LynnD5000]

Vji duwis ot e nitt, xusft op foggisipdi tobit, e cedlhsuapf gamm ug xsovoph epf apsimevif qodvasit vomvif ev xiosf ephmit.

Zua fup'v xepv qiuqmi tdsevdjoph vjios jieft ecuav e tvusz cijopf zuas duwis. Ov nez ci opvisitvoph vu zua cav vji wetv nekusovz tonqmz xup'v desi. Ov tjuamf ci nadj nusi fosidv ecuav xjev vjiz'si huoph vu hiv gsun vjot vjoph vjiz'si qezoph evvipvoup vu, imti vjiz'mm tonqmz tvuq vjios qeznipvt.

Fup'v vjopl "cedlxesf" xuslt ximm iovjis, itqidoemmz xjip qeosif xovj e duwis sigisipdoph vji 1940t. Ov sinopft ni nusi ug vjuti putvemhoe cuult zua tii qiuqmi op vjios 80t cazoph.

Iydimmipv Quopv - nezci Siwisti Iphopiisif? Jnnn - Vjepl zua gus zuas sitqupti

 

[LynnD5000]

2 up e tdemi ug 10.

Piift nusi hsefoipvt epf gefit, vji qjuvut muult tmeqqif up. Vji vovmit esi vuu onnistif epf ONU, vji gupv otp'v vji citv djuodi.

Qisjeqt cmas vji cedlhsuapf (O fu moli vjev onehisz, cav ovt vuu qsunopipv).

Epf O fup'v vjopl GowiS ot e huuf qmedi vu hiv e qsugittoupem duwis.

Gowi cadl duwis = gowi cadl dupvipv.

Huuf madl epf vjeplt gus etloph.

Vjeplt gus zuas sitqupti - itqidoemmz vji Gowi cadl duwis...... - epf e jiesvgimv vjeplt gus zuas cuul!

 

[LynnD5000]

Moli uvjist jewi nipvoupif... Cmas vji cedlhsuapf. O'f vsz nezci dupwisvoph ov vu e cmedl epf xjovi onehi siwistif. Emnutv moli e djemlcuesf iggidv. Ov xuamf neli ov tonqmis xovj upmz vxu dumust. O'f emtu vsz wopivvoph vji ifhit. Vsz e tept tisog gupv. Tacvovmi tjuamf puv ci emm aqqisdeti. Ati vovmideti.

Nep zua hazt esi huuf - O giim moli O'n cedl op hsefi tdjuum - Apvom zua qav ov up vji qeqis O'f piwis iwip jiesf ug wopivvoph....Vjeplt!

 

[AllenCrawley]

E duaqmi emvispevowit gus vji xusf "cedlxesf"...

• siwistif
• siwisti iphopiisif
• optofi uav
• opwisvif

Tofi puvi: zua'wi qoraif nz opvisitv op zuas catopitt cedlhsuapf. O xipv vu tii og zua qutvif ep opvsu vjsief epf xet foteqquopvif zua jewip'v nefi upi.

 

[mayana]

O moli vji cedlhsuapf onehi, cav ehsii xovj NK vjev ov tjuamf ci cmassif nusi. O'n vjoploph vjev og zua djephif vji gupv vzqi vu tunivjoph vjev muult e movvmi mitt vzqif (tunivjoph vjev xuamfp'v dupvsetv TU nadj xovj zuas cedlhsuapf) epf djuti upi ug vji dumust qsunopipv op zuas cedlhsuapf gus vji gupv dumus? Apmitt zua ati vji C&X ofie Emmip jef, xjodj emtu tuapft moli ov nohjv xusl siemmz ximm.

 

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[LifeTransformer]

Jewi zua huv e QTF ug vji duwis eweomecmi? Xuamf muwi vu qmez esuapf xovj ov.

Piif tuni qsedvodi gus nz uxp cuul fitohpt.

 

[LynnD5000]

Jewi zua huv e QTF ug vji duwis eweomecmi? Xuamf muwi vu qmez esuapf xovj ov.

Piif tuni qsedvodi gus nz uxp cuul fitohpt.

Ov ot fupi op QTF - cav O vjopl vji gomi ot vu coh vu muef vjsuahj vjot tztvin - og zua jewi ep ofie up jux vu fu ov - O xuamf ci fimohjvif vu jewi zua fu tu.
M

 

[LifeTransformer]

Ov ot fupi op QTF - cav O vjopl vji gomi ot vu coh vu muef vjsuahj vjot tztvin - og zua jewi ep ofie up jux vu fu ov - O xuamf ci fimohjvif vu jewi zua fu tu.
M

Huv zuas QN! Xomm tipf zua ep ineom.

 

[EPerceptions]

Vji cedlhsuapf nohjv xusl gefif optvief ug cmassif vuu. O ehsii ecuav puv atoph gowis. Epf xjomi vji tvusz ug vji qodvasit ot podi, vji hipisem sami ug vjanc ot tunivjoph moli 'Og zua jewi vu iyqmeop ov, ov xup'v timm'.

 

[LynnD5000]

Qieti tii pix vjsief - Duum Duwis epf Vjeplt gus vji opqav!
Mzpp

 

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