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I've created a free trial funnel for my business. From acting, assessing and adjusting, I've found the free-trial funnel to be a success; mainly due to the advice here!

I'd love if you guys took a few minutes to run through the funnel and let me know what can be improved. And if you're a pet owner, you'll have a better experience!

Usually, people enter the funnel upon viewing my website. So, if you'd like a quick intro to the use-case, feel free to skim along the site.

In order to avoid mixing up submissions, I've created a unique link for the forum. I'd appreciate if you'd use this link when taking a look!

A few things to note:

• The link customers visit is my custom domain, the link provided here is just for you guys

• I'm in the process of researching grants, to hopefully get a custom form site made. Right now, the one I created is the best I have to work with.

• In addition to the above, I'm working on a way to display the customer's book mockup in real time. This is another big thing.

• I'm working on getting more testimonials. I understand this is vital!

Thank you I'm advance and I look forward to taking your advice on board!

- TWG
 
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