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If you decide on using fake testimonials, make at least sure that the gender of name and the stock photo match.
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It's confused. The eye wanders. There is no clear goal for it.
The typography is too small and hard to read because of bad contrast.
The header and the Jumbotron compete for attention, and the result is confusing.
The grammar is abysmal.
Every single word in the testimonials screams BS. The grammar isn't accurate at all. Every single " i " inst even capitalized.
Read your website as a consumer.
One more thing.
So your a millionaire aye? That's great. You BECAME a millionaire and now your helping others do the same. That's excellent.
I would hate to know that your just ANOTHER guy selling a " get rich " product when you yourself are just an average Joe.
Hence the sarcasm in what I said.This guy is a scam, man. Someone who's a millionaire wouldn't be going on a public forum asking for advice on something as simple as a landing page.
That's newbie 101 stuff.
And he's using fake testimonials.
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