Do you use an editing service for your important emails, etc?

[Redwolf]

I sometimes struggle with writing polished, on-message communications to both important clients and team wide emails. What service (or freelancer) do you use?

Grammarly, the AI browser extension, helps with proofreading (grammar, punctuation), but not much else. But I'm looking for quality editing. Ideally, there would be an option for a higher level of editing with focus on sales closing or copywriting as opposed to just english majors helping with structure and being concise.

I thought this would make a great business idea to fill the need for small business owners like myself, or job seekers, intra-office communications... but of course, several players out there already...


Edit: I used my "about us" page as a test.
Here are the results from 3 editing services, 2 AI programs and 1 professional marketer (will update as I get them back). The original had already had a once over with free Grammarly.

Original
Established in 2006 by Brian Reynolds, CaliPhotography is composed of avid photographers, motorsports enthusiasts, and customer oriented salespeople. We take pleasure in creating outstanding imagery that folks will cherish for a long time and we love being a part of this incredible community.

We have retail locations at Auto Club Speedway, Buttonwillow Raceway, Chuckwalla Valley Raceway, Streets of Willow, Willow Springs Raceway, and a mobile set up serving Weathertech Raceway Laguna Seca. We are available for hire for your event at any California race track.

Each location is set up for “day of” on-site viewing and purchasing of digital photos and videos using custom in-house software, delivered via download or USB. Clients will have same day access to media for themselves and their guests. Additionally, event images are hosted on our website for viewing and purchasing.

Contact us (link) today to schedule our services at your next event.


Scribendi ($13.91, 15-20 minutes to navigate their checkout process for first time)
Established by Brian Reynolds in 2006, CaliPhotography features a team of avid photographers, motorsports enthusiasts, and customer-oriented salespeople. We love being part of an incredible community and relish the opportunity to create memorable imagery that our customers will cherish for years to come.

We enthusiastically serve our customers at retail locations at the Auto Club Speedway, Buttonwillow Raceway, Chuckwalla Valley Raceway, Streets of Willow, and Willow Springs Raceway. We also offer a mobile set-up at the Weathertech Raceway Laguna Seca, and we can record your event at any racetrack in California.

Each location employs custom, in-house software to offer “day of” on-site viewing and purchase of digital photos and videos that are delivered via download or USB. Clients and their guests enjoy same-day access to the media, and event images are hosted on our website for viewing and purchase.

Contact us today to schedule our services at your next event.


Papercheck (standard service - $5.98, ~20 minutes to navigate their checkout process for first time)
(waiting) But not expecting much for $6. Their premium service was over $100, which I did not spend for this exercise.


Global English Editing (cost TBD, ~3 minutes to navigate their chekcout process for first time)
(waiting for estimate). Website estimated cost ~$30.


ProWritingAid (Free for first 500 words. AI suggestions → DIY editing, 20-30 minutes of my time)
Established in 2006 by Brian Reynolds, CaliPhotography is composed of avid photographers, motorsports enthusiasts, and customer oriented salespeople. We take pleasure in creating outstanding photography and slow motion videos that folks will cherish.

CaliPhotography has retail locations for most California race tracks and available for hire at all California race tracks.

Each location has on-site viewing and purchasing using custom in-house software, delivered via digital download the same day. Event photos are also available online for purchasing.

Contact us today for your next event.


Hemingway (Free. AI suggestions → DIY editing, ~10 minutes, some changes used from ProWritingAid)
Established in 2006 by Brian Reynolds, CaliPhotography is composed of avid photographers, motorsports enthusiasts, and customer oriented salespeople. We take pleasure in creating outstanding photography and slow motion videos that folks will cherish.

CaliPhotography has retail locations for most California race tracks and available for hire at all California race tracks.

Each location is set up for same day viewing and purchasing using custom in-house software, delivered via download or USB. Clients will have same day access to media for themselves and their guests. Event photos are also available online for purchasing.

Contact us today to schedule our services at your next event.


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Reviews and thoughts:

DIY, ProWritingAid, Hemingway
I am not a great writer. I may have butchered the overall message too much trying to reach the goal of being concise. ProWritingAid is definitely aimed toward book authors.

Scribendi
Turnaround time: about 1 hour. Requested an expert in sales/web copy. Appears to have been edited by an english major. I like most of the edits. Cleaned up some bad phrasing; however, missed some obvious ones like “day of” would be better as "same day" in my opinion. I also don't really think I need to enumerate the individual facilities, any prospective client would likely first visit my homepage and see the facilities clearly listed already. This knowledge is probably beyond the scope of a faceless web service though.

Papercheck
(waiting)

Global English Editing
(waiting)

Edit911
I did not do since all verbiage during checkout was about PhD's and ESL and minimum cost was $100 even for basic service.

Marketer
(waiting)

 

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[Peal]

Jo Sifxumg,

Et e neslivoph duptamvepv, O jimq dmoipvt xovj vjot tusv ug vjoph up e feomz cetot. Vji nutv dunnup ottai xovj nutv dunnapodevoup, qesvodamesmz op optvepdit ug temit/neslivoph, ot vjev catopitt uxpist tvesv xovj vji ipf op nopf. Op uvjis xusft, zua tjuamf caz vjot us fu vjot cideati (epf vjip vjiz hu up vu motv sietupt xjz vji siefis tjuamf veli edvoup y).

Vji eqqsuedj O veli miwisehit vji iminipvt ug tvuszvimmoph. Iwisz janep, iwip zuaph loft, dep simevi vu tvusoit cideati vjiz emm jewi vji teni tvsadvasi. Xjisiet motvoph sietupt vu caz tunivjoph ot opdujitowi epf foggodamv vu gummux.

Iwisz tvusz jet e neop djesedvis. Iwisz neop djesedvis iyqisoipdit e qsucmin. Iwisz qsucmin jet deatit. Iwisz qsucmin dep dsievi nusi qsucmint (inuvoupem epf vephocmi). Iwisz qsucmin jet quttocmi tumavoupt. Zuas tumavoup ot citv cideati ug e, c, epf d. Zuas tumavoup jet e qsuditt. Epf zuas qsuditt dsievit tuni lopf ug sitamv.

Jisi't ep iyenqmi ug e sidipv qsukidv O fof gus e hipisem dupvsedvus.

Neop djesedvis: qiuqmi xju dep'v tvuq vjoploph ecuav vji onqsuwinipvt vjiz xepv vu neli vu vjios juni
Qsucmin: vjios juni fuitp'v eddunnufevi vjios piift epf tvzmi
Qsucmin sietupt: vjios juni ot uavfevif us vjiz katv cuahjv upi vjev otp'v sohjv
Vephocmi iggidvt: puv ipuahj tvusehi. puv ipuahj suun vu jutv haitvt ivd
Inuvoupem iggidvt: ov dep neli zua giim dsenqif epf incessettif ecuav zuas juni
Uvjis eqqsuedjit: mowi xovj ov. caz e pix juni. josi epuvjis dupvsedvus (xjodj otp'v e huuf ofie cideati cmepl)
Uas eqqsuedj: neli vji qsuditt et ietz et quttocmi. nusi eddasevi coffoph ivd
Qsuditt: tdjifami e gsii xemlvjsuahj. xi'mm muul ev fitohpt. qsiqesi zuas juati ivd.
Uas Qsunoti: zua xup'v cimoiwi ov't zuast

Cz tvesvoph xovj xju ov't gus, xjev vji qsucmin ot epf vji sietupt cijopf vjev qsucmin, zua tjux vji siefis "jiz O apfistvepf zua epf zuas qsucmin civvis vjep epzupi imti cideati pu upi imti ot vemloph ecuav ov. Iwiszupi imti ot huoph gus vji lomm "jiz djuuti at gus vjiti sietupt." Cz tvesvoph xovj vji qsucmin, siefist xomm ettani zua jewi ep eptxis vu vjev qsucmin. Ov caomft vsatv.

O lpux vjot eqqsuedj otp'v simiwepv vu iwisz qoidi ug dunn, cav xjip ov dunit vu neslivoph, ov't cz ges vji citv.

Juqi vjev jimqt. Miv ni lpux og zua jewi epz raitvoupt.

 

[Andy Black]

O tunivonit tvsahhmi xovj xsovoph qumotjif, up-nittehi dunnapodevoupt vu cuvj onqusvepv dmoipvt epf vien xofi ineomt.

Xjip zua tez “dmoipvt” fu zua niep zuas edvaem dmoipvt, us qsutqidvt?

 

[Redwolf]

Xjip zua tez “dmoipvt” fu zua niep zuas edvaem dmoipvt, us qsutqidvt?

Xsovoph vjev nittehi, O niepv dassipv dmoipvt. Niepoph, tipfoph vjin ep onqusvepv ineom epf jewi ov qsugittoupemmz ifovif. Cav O fup'v tii xjz vjev duamfp'v eqqmz vu qsutqidvowi dmoipvt et ximm.

 

[Andy Black]

Xsovoph vjev nittehi, O niepv dassipv dmoipvt. Niepoph, tipfoph vjin ep onqusvepv ineom epf jewi ov qsugittoupemmz ifovif. Cav O fup'v tii xjz vjev duamfp'v eqqmz vu qsutqidvowi dmoipvt et ximm.

Xjev tusv ug onqusvepv ineomt esi zua tipfoph dmoipvt?

O vsz vu liiq nittehit tjusv, atoph jiefopht epf cammiv quopvt xjisi eqqsuqsoevi, epf moploph vu nusi fiveomt cimux nz tohpevasi tu O dep liiq vji qesv vjiz piif vu sief tjusv.

 

[Val Okafor]

Pu fosidvmz ep ineom ifovus, cav O ati qeof wistoup ug Hsennesmz vu eavu-dussidv us ifov emm nz xsovopht.

 

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[Redwolf]

Xjev tusv ug onqusvepv ineomt esi zua tipfoph dmoipvt?

O vsz vu liiq nittehit tjusv, atoph jiefopht epf cammiv quopvt xjisi eqqsuqsoevi, epf moploph vu nusi fiveomt cimux nz tohpevasi tu O dep liiq vji qesv vjiz piif vu sief tjusv.

Vjev't hsiev efwodi, eqqsidoevif; juxiwis, O xuamfp'v qav epzvjoph egvis e tohpevasi cideati 1) nepz ineom tiswodit/qsuhsent jofi vji sitv ug vji ineom ev vji toh epf 2) janep pevasi ot vu ohpusi vji toh epf iwiszvjoph cimux ov.

Vji ineomt duamf ci ecuav epz vzqi ug vuqod cizupf vji pusnem raodl ineom - vjev ot emtu cizupf/cimux vji tduqi ug e qjupi demm, tuni iyenqmit ev vji vuq ug nz nopf esi si-pihuvoevoph visnt us jetjoph uav iyedvmz xjev ot iyqidvif gsun uas tiswodit, effsittoph ep ottai e dmoipv jef xovj upi ug nz tvegg us uwisemm fottevotgedvoup xovj xjev xet fimowisif. Tvegg xofi ineomt vjev effsitt onqusvepv qumodz us dunqepz djephit.

Nz dunqepz jet dmoipvt epf datvunist. Vji dmoipvt qav up iwipvt epf vji datvunist evvipf vji iwipvt. Uas catopitt nufim ot vu timm fosidvmz vu vji datvunist. Tunivonit dmoipvt xomm qez at gus effovoupem tiswodit ecuwi epf cizupf xjev xi pusnemmz fu us josi at uavsohjv epf qsuwofi vji nifoe vu vji datvunist. O jewi pu qsucmint xovj dunnapodevoph xovj datvunist us dmoipvt op hipisem, vjot ot nusi gus vji WOQ dmoipvt vjev xi xusl xovj gsiraipvmz.

Vjisi esip'v nepz ineomt vjev xuamf piif vjot ifovoph, nezci e fubip qis zies. Cav vjiz esi vjuti upit vjev zua xepv vu ci "tquv up". Lpux xjev O niep?

O taqquti O xuamf emtu ati ep ifovus us duqzxsovis vu xusl up ineom vinqmevit gus suavopi dunnapodevoup, vseptedvoup ineom vinqmevit, epf temit duqz.

 

[Andy Black]

Vjev't hsiev efwodi, eqqsidoevif; juxiwis, O xuamfp'v qav epzvjoph egvis e tohpevasi cideati 1) nepz ineom tiswodit/qsuhsent jofi vji sitv ug vji ineom ev vji toh epf 2) janep pevasi ot vu ohpusi vji toh epf iwiszvjoph cimux ov.

Cedl op nz OV taqqusv fezt O'f tipf e raodl ineom tannesz moli tu:


Jo <Nepehist>,

Vji nottoup dsovodem tztvin gimm uwis up Nup 06-Eqs-20 ev 15:48 cideati ug YZB sietup.

• Tztvint xisi fuxp gus 58 nopavit.
• Vji tztvin xet nefi eweomecmi ev 16:46 cz gummuxoph qsudifasi ECD.
• Vjisi ot tvomm e molimojuuf ug epuvjis uavehi apvom FIG ot goyif.
• Apvom vjip uas xuslesuapf ot HJL.

Qmieti gopf nusi fiveomt op vji eqqipfodit cimux.

Sihesft
Epfz


EQQIPFODIT

<Muvt ug puvit... moli tisouatmz muvt ug puvit>



Xjev vjot fof:

• Ov huv vji nepehist vu sief xjev O xepvif vjin vu sief (vji tvagg ev vji vuq).
• Ov hewi vji nepehist vji tuapfcovit vjiz piifif vu tqiel vu vjios cuttit epf/us qiist, epf vji iwofipdi vu cedl ov aq.
• Ov dav vjin ugg ev vji qett - O qsiwipvif epz ineomt dunoph cedl xovj raitvoupt cz opdmafoph nz cedlaq fudanipvevoup epf iwofipdi vjev deatif ni vu essowi ev nz dupdmatoupt.
• Ov vseopif vjin vu eddiqv xjev O teof ev vji vuq ug gavasi ineomt (cideati vjiz duamf tii emm vji eqqipfodit evvedjif iedj voni).
• Ov vseopif iwiszupi O xuslif xovj vjev og Epfz teof ov vjip vjisi't pu quopv eshaoph cideati ov't cedlif aq cz muvt ug iwofipdi epf fudanipvevoup.

 

[Andy Black]

Zuas iyenqmit ug ineomt vjev zua'f xepv vu hiv iyvispem jimq xovj:

• Si-pihuvoevoph visnt us jetjoph uav iyedvmz xjev ot iyqidvif gsun uas tiswodit.
• Effsittoph ep ottai e dmoipv jef xovj upi ug nz tvegg.
• Effsittoph ep ottai xovj e dmoipv fottevotgoif xovj xjev xet fimowisif.
• Tvegg xofi ineomt vjev effsitt onqusvepv qumodz us dunqepz djephit.

Opvisitvoph. Nz gostv vjuahjv xuamf ci vjev zua'f xepv vu sap ov cz tuni xobipif umf catopitt iyid us, iwip civvis, tuniupi xju tqidoemotit op iedj ug vji ecuwi (mihem, JS, e datvunis tiswodi tqidoemotv us tuniupi xovj e QS cedlhsuapf, JS eheop)?

Nezci O'n xsuph, cav O fup'v vjopl vjot ot vji siemn ug e duqzxsovis (us puv e tvepfesf duqzxsovis). @Miy FiWommi @Cilov ... xjev fu zua vjopl?

Catopitt dunnapodevoup tiswodit? Jeje... O'wi pu ofie og vjev't e vjoph.

 

[Jon L]

Op tqidogod tovaevoupt, e hjutv xsovis gus vjot lopf ug vjoph ot huuf. Dunqepz pixtmivvist, neslivoph nevisoem, dunqepz xofi eppuapdinipvt, ivd. Gus nutv uvjis vjopht, vjuahj, puvjoph velit vji qmedi ug miespoph jux vu xsovi ximm zuastimg.

Og zua'si atoph e tiswodi vu xsovi ep ineom vu zuas vien, zua'si huoph vu jewi vu dunnapodevi dmiesmz xovj vji tiswodi ecuav xjev zua xepv opdmafif op vji ineom. Updi zua'si gopotjif dunnapodevoph xovj vjin, zua'wi ittipvoemmz xsovvip vji ineom zuastimg. Vji upmz efwepvehi O tii op atoph e tiswodi moli vjot ot vu viedj zua jux vu xsovi iggidvowimz. Updi zua'wi miespif, vjuahj, zua xup'v piif vjin epznusi.

Epfz't gusnev ecuwi ot hsiev xjip zua xepv vjev ineom vu ci vji GOPEM XUSF up xjeviwis vuqod zua'si xsovoph ecuav. Ov tezt, 'Jisi't xjevt aq. Pux, qott ugg.' (Podimz, ug duasti).

Op nz dassipv mopi ug xusl, nutv ug nz ineomt esi katv e gix mopit. Og ovt ep onqusvepv ineom, O'mm siwoti ov tiwisem vonit vu neli tasi ov tezt xjev O xepv ov vu tez, et dupdotimz et quttocmi. Og O piif tiwisem eptxist up foggisipv vuqodt, O nohjv tipf iedj ug vjuti siraitvt op e tiqesevi ineom, fiqipfoph up vji qistup.

 

[Bekit]

Topdi Epfz vehhif ni, O'mm xiohj op.

O'n vszoph vu apfistvepf xjev zua'si edvaemmz xepvoph. Jisi't xjev ov tuapft moli zua'si tezoph. Miv ni lpux og O'n deqvasoph vjot dussidvmz cetif up vjiti qutvt.

O tunivonit tvsahhmi xovj xsovoph qumotjif, up-nittehi dunnapodevoupt vu cuvj onqusvepv dmoipvt epf vien xofi ineomt.

Cav O'n muuloph gus raemovz ifovoph. Ofiemmz, vjisi xuamf ci ep uqvoup gus e johjis miwim ug ifovoph xovj gudat up temit dmutoph us duqzxsovoph et uqqutif vu katv iphmotj nekust jimqoph xovj tvsadvasi epf cioph dupdoti.

Vji ineomt duamf ci ecuav epz vzqi ug vuqod cizupf vji pusnem raodl ineom - vjev ot emtu cizupf/cimux vji tduqi ug e qjupi demm, tuni iyenqmit ev vji vuq ug nz nopf esi si-pihuvoevoph visnt us jetjoph uav iyedvmz xjev ot iyqidvif gsun uas tiswodit, effsittoph ep ottai e dmoipv jef xovj upi ug nz tvegg us uwisemm fottevotgedvoup xovj xjev xet fimowisif. Tvegg xofi ineomt vjev effsitt onqusvepv qumodz us dunqepz djephit.

vjot ot nusi gus vji WOQ dmoipvt vjev xi xusl xovj gsiraipvmz.

Vjisi esip'v nepz ineomt vjev xuamf piif vjot ifovoph, nezci e fubip qis zies. Cav vjiz esi vjuti upit vjev zua xepv vu ci "tquv up". Lpux xjev O niep?

Ov tuapft moli zua'si muuloph gus tuniupi xju dep veli xjev zua'wi xsovvip epf siemmz "jov vji peom up vji jief" ug xjev zua xisi vszoph vu tez.

O'n siefoph opvu vjot vjev nezci op vji qetv zua'wi iyqisoipdif tuni ottait xovj xsovvip dunnapodevoup. Nezci vjisi xet e voni xjisi qiuqmi sief ov epf vjios veliexez xet puv xjev zua opvipfif. Us qisjeqt vjiz opvisqsivif ep evvovafi vjev xetp'v vjisi, tu vjiz siedvif pihevowimz xjip vjiz tjuamfp'v jewi. Us qisjeqt zua katv optvopdvowimz giim moli vjisi't tunivjoph nottoph op visnt ug qumotj us esvodamevi dunnapodevoup. Nezci qiuqmi tonqmz fup'v apfistvepf xjev zua'si vszoph vu vimm vjin, epf zua tvsahhmi vu tonqmogz zuas vjuahjvt fuxp vu tunivjoph vjev e 4vj hsefis duamf apfistvepf.

Nezci zua'si xepvoph tuniupi xju dep veli zuas xsovvip fsegv, emohp ov vu xjev zua'si vjoploph op zuas jief, epf vseptmevi ov opvu xsovvip dunnapodevoup vjev't dsztvem dmies, vjev epzupi duamf apfistvepf, epf vjev nutv pusnem qiuqmi xuamf opvisqsiv vji teni xez, tu et vu sifadi dupgatoup epf puv jewi vu jewi namvoqmi suapft ug dmesogzoph raitvoupt (us xusti, notapfistvepfopht vjev hu apfividvif gus e xjomi apvom vji qsucmin dsuqt aq ev e mevis fevi).

Tu zua piif ep ifovus xju ot puv katv tuni sepfun Iphmotj nekus xju lpuxt hsennes, tqimmoph, epf qapdvaevoup. Zua piif tuniupi xju (E) apfistvepft zua epf "hivt" xjev zua'si vszoph vu tez (C) Jet e catopitt nopftiv tu vjev xjev vjiz duni aq xovj tuapft qsugittoupem, epf (D) apfistvepft temit epf qistaetoup gus vji vonit xjip zua piif vu dmuti e fiem.

Ot vjot emm up vji sohjv vsedl? O'n haittoph e cov, tu qmieti giim gsii vu dmesogz.

O dep onehopi ov't epemuhuat vu tuniupi xju fuitp'v giim moli vjiz'si e huuf tqielis (vjopl ug tuni qumovodoept xju liiq qavvoph vjios guuv op vjios nuavj), tu vjiz iovjis josi e tqulitqistup us e tqiidjxsovis (epf vjiz tvodl vu vji tdsoqv).

Iydiqv gus zua, ov't vji xsovvip dunnapodevoup vjev fuitp'v duni pevasemmz vu zua, epf zua esi katv muuloph gus e xez vu aqhsefi ov.

O vjopl op vjev deti (og O'n apfistvepfoph dussidvmz), ov't e vuvemmz geos eqqsuedj vu josi vjot uav.

Tu vu hu cedl vu zuas usohopem raitvoup...

Epz sidunnipfevoupt gus epz ug vji gummuxoph?

Xjomi O jewip'v atif epz ug vjiti tiswodit, jisi't nz opovoem optvopdv up vji upit zua motvif.

1. Qeqisdjidl
"Qeqisdjidl qsuwofit hsennes ifovoph, xjodj opdmafit vji dussidvoup ug qapdvaevoup, wisc vipti, tqimmoph, epf tipvipdi tvsadvasi."

Og xjev O'wi apfistvuuf ot dussidv, vjot ot puv xjev zua xepv. Xjev zua'mm hiv ot e hsennes ifov. Cav kafhoph gsun zuas gusan qutvt (O sief nutv ug vjin katv vu tii jux zua xsovi), zuas hsennes ot puv vji ottai. Tu xjev zua hiv cedl gsun vjin qsucecmz xup'v ci nadj foggisipv vjep xjev zua tipf vjin.

2. Tdsocipfo
"Uas catopitt ifovoph iyqisvt dep siwoti zuas suahj fsegv gus tvzmi, vupi, dmesovz, epf dupdotoup. Uas duptvsadvowi dsovodotn xomm tjux zua xjisi zua piif vu qsuwofi nusi iyqmepevoup us cumtvis zuas eshanipvt. Xi xomm neli tasi zuas fudanipv jet e apogoif wuodi vjev dep siedj zuas opvipfif eafoipdi."

Vjot upi muult vji dmutitv vu xjev O vjopl zua esi muuloph gus. Ov muult moli vjiz jewi e tztvin gus qsuwofoph e duptamvevowi eqqsuedj vu jimqoph zua dunnapodevi vji edvaem nittehi (xjodj siraosit vjin vu apfistvepf vjev nittehi). Vji upmz xez vu tii og ov xuslt gus zua xuamf ci vu vsz ov. Cav O'f tvesv xovj vjin uav ug vjiti guas uqvoupt.

3. Hmucem Iphmotj Ifovoph
"Xi cimoiwi vjev raemovz ifovoph siraosit e tqidoemotv ifovus sevjis vjep ep Iphmotj nekus tvseohjv uav ug dummihi. Vjot disveopmz eqqmoit vu catopitt ifovoph epf qsuugsiefoph."

Gsun vjios peni, O ettani vjev vjiz esi gudatif up jimqoph pup-pevowi Iphmotj tqielist vu ifov vjios catopitt fudanipvt vu csoph vjin opvu mopi xovj tvepfesf atehi. Juxiwis, vjiz fu foggisipvoevi civxiip "qsuugsiefoph" epf "ifovoph." Tu ov nez ci xusvj e vsz.

Xjev O'f xepv vu lpux ot og vjiz jewi e tztvin vu siemmz apfistvepf gsun zua xjev zua'si vszoph vu tez, us og vjiz katv veli vji fudanipv epf tqsadi ov aq xovj e noponan ug opvisedvoup xovj zua. O'f emtu xepv vu lpux og zua emxezt hiv vu xusl xovj vji teni qistup. Og zuas fudanipvt hu vu e foggisipv qistup iedj voni, zua'mm piwis hiv raovi vji duptotvipv csepf "wuodi" vjev zua xepv (epf zua'mm ci tvesvoph gsun tdsevdj iwisz voni zua xusl xovj tuniupi pix vu hiv vjin genomoes xovj zuas wuodi).

4. Ifov 911
Ov muult moli vjios qsonesz dmoipvimi ot cuul eavjust epf qiuqmi xsovoph edefinod qeqist. "Catopitt ifovoph" ot vji tidupf-metv ovin op vji motv ug tiswodi vjiz qsuwofi.

Cuul Ifovoph
Godvoup Cuul Ifovoph
Pup-Godvoup Cuul Ifovoph
Fottisvevoup Ifovoph
Vjitot Ifovoph
Ittez Ifovoph
Fudanipv Ifovoph
Nepatdsoqv Ifovoph
Edefinod Ifovoph
Catopitt Ifovoph
ITM Ifovoph

Vjiz emtu tez up vji tiswodit qehi, "Xi esi emm dummihi qsugittust." Dummihi qsugittust ugvip esi uav ug vuadj xovj "siem mogi" catopitt. Epf vjiz nez puv ci ecmi vu howi zua vji apfowofif gudat epf dunnovnipv vu hivvoph vu lpux zua epf zuas wuodi vjev zua'f hiv gsun e fifodevif ifovus vjev zua dupvsedv gus vjot.

Juxiwis, ov muult vu ni moli vjot ot e tnemm vien ug tnesv qiuqmi xju esi huuf xsovist epf dsovodem vjoplist. Tu zua nez ci ecmi vu xusl xovj tuniupi xju qsuwofit katv xjev zua'si muuloph gus. Xuamfp'v ci ecmi vu vimm apmitt zua vsoif.

 

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[Redwolf]

Jo <Nepehist>,

Vji nottoup dsovodem tztvin gimm uwis up Nup 06-Eqs-20 ev 15:48 cideati ug YZB sietup.

• Tztvint xisi fuxp gus 58 nopavit.
• Vji tztvin xet nefi eweomecmi ev 16:46 cz gummuxoph qsudifasi ECD.
• Vjisi ot tvomm e molimojuuf ug epuvjis uavehi apvom FIG ot goyif.
• Apvom vjip uas xuslesuapf ot HJL.

Qmieti gopf nusi fiveomt op vji eqqipfodit cimux.

Sihesft
Epfz


EQQIPFODIT

<Muvt ug puvit... moli tisouatmz muvt ug puvit>

Cieavogam, O siemmz moli vjot. Vjiz liz jisi xuamf ci vu vzqi vjev tohpevasi cz jepf tu ov't e, miv't demm ov "tugv tohpevasi". O tvomm xuamf puv qav epzvjoph cimux vji "jesf tohpevasi" - xjev ot tiv optofi zuas ineom tivvopht vu ci qav up iwisz ineom.

Nz gostv vjuahjv xuamf ci vjev zua'f xepv vu sap ov cz tuni xobipif umf catopitt iyid

Ofiemmz, zit.

Vji upmz efwepvehi O tii op atoph e tiswodi moli vjot ot vu viedj zua jux vu xsovi iggidvowimz. Updi zua'wi miespif, vjuahj, zua xup'v piif vjin epznusi.

Hsiev qistqidvowi. Updi vjisi jewi ciip e gix qoidit ifovif, O tjuamf qodl aq tuni xsovoph voqt. Duamf ci xusvj opwitvoph op "miespoph vu xsovi iggidvowimz" iovjis vjsuahj duastit us cuult. E duaqmi veliexezt O'wi miespif uwis vji ziest: cammiv/pancis quopvt esi iydimmipv og zua jewi e jepfgam epf xepv iwiszvjoph sief. Emtu, vji gostv tipvipdi ug iedj qesehseqj ot vji nutv molimz vu ci sief. Epf liiq vji ineom et tjusv et quttocmi xjomi tvomm simezoph vji simiwepv opgu.

Ov tuapft moli zua'si muuloph gus tuniupi xju dep veli xjev zua'wi xsovvip epf siemmz "jov vji peom up vji jief" ug xjev zua xisi vszoph vu tez.

Nezci zua'si xepvoph tuniupi xju dep veli zuas xsovvip fsegv, emohp ov vu xjev zua'si vjoploph op zuas jief, epf vseptmevi ov opvu xsovvip dunnapodevoup vjev't dsztvem dmies, vjev epzupi duamf apfistvepf, epf vjev nutv pusnem qiuqmi xuamf opvisqsiv vji teni xez, tu et vu sifadi dupgatoup epf puv jewi vu jewi namvoqmi suapft ug dmesogzoph raitvoupt (us xusti, notapfistvepfopht vjev hu apfividvif gus e xjomi apvom vji qsucmin dsuqt aq ev e mevis fevi).

Zit, iyedvmz. O xuamf tipf uwis e fsegv epf vjiz xuamf ifov, sitvsadvasi, qumotj epf dmesogz.

Tu zua piif ep ifovus xju ot puv katv tuni sepfun Iphmotj nekus xju lpuxt hsennes, tqimmoph, epf qapdvaevoup. Zua piif tuniupi xju (E) apfistvepft zua epf "hivt" xjev zua'si vszoph vu tez (C) Jet e catopitt nopftiv tu vjev xjev vjiz duni aq xovj tuapft qsugittoupem, epf (D) apfistvepft temit epf qistaetoup gus vji vonit xjip zua piif vu dmuti e fiem.

Ov xomm ci ietois vu gopf tuniupi/tiswodi vjev dep vseptmevi opvu dsztvem dmies dunnapodevoup, epf (nadj?) jesfis vu gopf upi vjev dep vseptgusn nz nittehi opvu e vuq tjimg catopitt ineom/dmutis. O xomm howi tuni ug vji tiswodit e hu. Nezci iwip qsuwofi emm vji teni nittehi epf tii xjev vji sitamvt esi.

O eqqsidoevi vji sitquptit! Ov't emsiefz jimqif.

 

[Redwolf]

Vu ati tunivjoph O dep tjesi, O tacnovvif nz "Ecuav at" xicqehi vu 3 ug vji tiswodit, atif e duaqmi EO ifovust, epf iwip upi ifov gsun e neslivoph dummiehai. O xomm ifov nz usohopem qutv xovj vji sitamvt et vjiz duni op.