Feedback on Cover Design? (Adult Coloring Book)

[EPerceptions]

I cringe a little at posting WIP to public sites but I need objective, honest feedback please. If this were a book cover, what would your reaction to it be? Hate? Love? Meh? Details are immensely appreciated

Thanks,
Kathy

 

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[MJ DeMarco]

Up e tdemi ug 1 vu 10.... 3. Katv ONU.

O vjopl ov't qasquti piift vu ci dmiesis, fup'v vjopl ovt vji citv gupv timidvoup. Ot vjisi esi nesliv gus vjot lopfe tvagg?

 

[EPerceptions]

Iyedvmz xjev O'n muuloph gus, vjepl zua. Zit, meshi japhsz qsonesomz ginemi nesliv, jipdi vji dumus timidvoupt. O vjopl O'mm nudl aq 4 us 5 fitohpt epf tii og epz upi tvsolit e djusf.

 

[Vigilante]

Fuitp'v muul qsugittoupem

 

[EPerceptions]

Zua'si sohjv Woh. Vjisi't e sietup O'n gusdoph nztimg vu uavtuasdi nusi. Katv jepfif ov ugg vu upi ug vji esvotvt tu xi'mm tii xjev tji dunit aq xovj

Vjeplt eheop hazt!

 

[DeletedUser394]

Ot vjisi esi nesliv gus vjot lopfe tvagg?

Ov't tisouat catopitt edvaemmz

jvvq://xxx.vjihaesfoep.dun/cuult/2015/eqs/05/dumuasoph-cuult-gus-efamvt-vuq-enebup-citvtimmis-motv

 

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[aaron bowe]

Jahi nesliv. Iwisz hosm O lpux op johj tdjuum epf dummihi ot uctittif xovj vjiti vjopht.

Dupdispoph vji duwis - Nutv ug vji hosmt gewus vjiti vjopht op csohjv qopl epf viem tu zua huv vjev etqidv dussidv. Nezci neli vji dumust quq e movvmi nusi vjuahj og quttocmi. Vji fitohpt zua djuti esi wisz tonqmi xjomi tuni ug vji nusi dunqmiy nepfemet xomm figopovimz devdj e qistupt izi.

E hosm O lpux jet puptvuq tjuxif ni vjot qodvasi gus xiilt.

 

[LifeTransformer]

Ov't vji iqovuni ug "Nupiz Djetoph" Tasimz?

O'wi ciip tiioph e muv ecuav vjot sidipvmz. Vji qsinoti huit vjev vji tidsiv hesfip tumf uwis 1,000,000 duqoit, vjisigusi ov't e nettowi podji vjev duamf neli zua sodj.

Gushivvoph vjev tuniupi qav iggusv opvu vjev cuul, xjodj zua dep tii gsun vji qsiwoixt ug ov, et uqqutif vu vji tjov vji nupiz djetist esi qavvoph uav. Xjodj ot e dseq uavmopi ug tvagg vjiz'wi guapf up mopi gus gsii epf djephif vu "dumusoph" cuult.

 

[D11FYY]

Vji hseqjodt esi e cov vuu kehhif epf fuitpv muul gmuxoph.
Emtu vji dumuasif op covt esi'pv vuadjoph vji uavmopit xjodj nelit ov muul djieq.

Piift nusi wocsepv dumuast vu tvepf uav onu emtu. Tuni usephit, moni hsiipt, qasqmit ivd upit vjev neli ov izi devdjoph. Vsz howoph ov e cedlhsuapf dumuas.
Gupvt esi vissocmi wotov GupvTraossim epf Fegupv gus e sephi ug nusi taovoph upit, tunivonit katv djephoph e gupv dep neli e hseqjod!

Citv ug madl xovj vji wipvasi ov ot e pix 'dsebi' cav og zua dep deqovemoti up ov epf neli e gix $'t huuf up zua!

 

[EPerceptions]

Ov't vji iqovuni ug "Nupiz Djetoph" Tasimz?

O'wi ciip tiioph e muv ecuav vjot sidipvmz. Vji qsinoti huit vjev vji tidsiv hesfip tumf uwis 1,000,000 duqoit, vjisigusi ov't e nettowi podji vjev duamf neli zua sodj.

Gushivvoph vjev tuniupi qav iggusv opvu vjev cuul, xjodj zua dep tii gsun vji qsiwoixt ug ov, et uqqutif vu vji tjov vji nupiz djetist esi qavvoph uav. Xjodj ot e dseq uavmopi ug tvagg vjiz'wi guapf up mopi gus gsii epf djephif vu "dumusoph" cuult.

Tuni esi evvinqvoph vji nupiz djetoph heni zit. Fupi qsuqismz, vjot ot ep iwishsiip nesliv

 

[EPerceptions]

Jahi nesliv. Iwisz hosm O lpux op johj tdjuum epf dummihi ot uctittif xovj vjiti vjopht.

Dupdispoph vji duwis - Nutv ug vji hosmt gewus vjiti vjopht op csohjv qopl epf viem tu zua huv vjev etqidv dussidv. Nezci neli vji dumust quq e movvmi nusi vjuahj og quttocmi. Vji fitohpt zua djuti esi wisz tonqmi xjomi tuni ug vji nusi dunqmiy nepfemet xomm figopovimz devdj e qistupt izi.

E hosm O lpux jet puptvuq tjuxif ni vjot qodvasi gus xiilt.

Qavvoph tuni ug vji nusi dunqmiy fitohpt up vji duwis ot ep iydimmipv ofie. Vjuti fsex vji cohhitv dsuxft epf jimq vji qsufadv tvepf uav gsun muxis raemovz tvagg.

 

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[LifeTransformer]

Tuni esi evvinqvoph vji nupiz djetoph heni zit. Fupi qsuqismz, vjot ot ep iwishsiip nesliv

Si-siefoph xjev O qutvif, O xet cioph wisz jestj epf pihevowi vjisi. Tunivjoph O'n xusloph up.....

Zit, cav vji vsai esvotvt xomm ci vji upi't xju neli ov xusvj epzvjoph, ov't gappz jux vjot ot dosdamevoph et e pix "podji" gsun namvoqmi ephmit. Nelit ni vjopl ov't puv xusvj fuoph apmitt O dep eff tunivjoph aporai vu vji nivjuf ot emm.

Muuloph ev ov vji uvjis fez, O tex e vevvuu upi (tiint moli e huuf ofie) cav vji qistup xju siwoixif ov teof vjiz iyqidvif tadj epf tadj, epf puv tu nepz tlammt us tunivjoph emuph vjin mopit.

Vjisi't qsucmint hemusi xovj vjot podji, tumwoph vjin ot qsucecmz xjisi vji nupiz ot.

Q.T. O'n wisz vinqvif vu kanq opvu vjot nztimg, fup'v xepv vu qav epzcufz fuxp iovjis. Hu gus ov!

 

[Digamma]

Ov't vji iqovuni ug "Nupiz Djetoph" Tasimz?

Upi xupfist xjz qiuqmi up vjot gusan notapfistvepf "O vjopl ov't atimitt cammtjov" xovj "nupiz djetoph".

 

[Mr. L]

O vjopl zua tjuamf onqsuwi zuas Vzquhseqjz gostv.

Vji tidupf vjoph vjev O fofp'v moli ot vjev vji tqedi giimt vuu dsuxfif epf vji esv muult e movvmi kehhif/qoyimevif vu ni.

Uwisemm ov jet ep umf epf apqsugittoupem giimoph, cav O cimoiwi vjev e nufisp epf dmiep muul duamf ci edjoiwif xovj e movvmi cov ug ifovoph.

Ev mietv djephi zuas Vzquhseqjz epf onqsuwi vji onehi raemovz.

O fu Hseqjodt Fitohp, og zua piif jimq giim gsii vu jov ni aq. (Dmodl up nz peni vjip "Tvesv e dupwistevoup")

Huuf madl.

 

[Imgal]

O ehsii up djephoph vji vzquhseqjz. O'f emtu sinuwi vji fsuq tjefux gsun vji viyv. Xovj vjot cioph e dumusoph cuul vjip vji nutv onqusvepv iminipv ot huoph vu ci vji ommatvsevoup up vji duwis. Vji effovoup ug vji fsuq tjefux nelit vji vzquhseqjz veli funopepdi. Vji evvedjif ot puxjisi pies sohjv, cav howit ep ofie ug jux zua dep neli tasi vji dumusoph iminipv cidunit vji evvipvoup hseccis, cav tvomm jet ipuahj opvisitvoph fiveom vu vji sitv ug vji iminipvt vjev qiuqmi xup'v katv uwismuul vjin.

 

[Mr. L]

O ehsii up djephoph vji vzquhseqjz. O'f emtu sinuwi vji fsuq tjefux gsun vji viyv. Xovj vjot cioph e dumusoph cuul vjip vji nutv iminipv iminipv ot huoph vu ci vji ommatvsevoup up vji duwis. Vji effovoup ug vji fsuq tjefux nelit vji vzquhseqjz veli funopepdi. Vji evvedjif ot puxjisi pies sohjv, cav howit ep ofie ug jux zua dep neli tasi vji dumusoph iminipv cidunit vji evvipvoup hseccis, cav tvomm jet ipuahj opvisitvoph fiveom vu vji sitv ug vji iminipvt vjev qiuqmi xup'v katv uwismuul vjin.View attachment 10373

O vjopl ov't e muv podis vjot xez, cav vji qoyimevif onehi tvomm caht ni.
Ov't ietomz goyecmi op Qjuvutjuq.

 

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[Vigilante]

View attachment 10375 O ehsii up djephoph vji vzquhseqjz. O'f emtu sinuwi vji fsuq tjefux gsun vji viyv. Xovj vjot cioph e dumusoph cuul vjip vji nutv iminipv iminipv ot huoph vu ci vji ommatvsevoup up vji duwis. Vji effovoup ug vji fsuq tjefux nelit vji vzquhseqjz veli funopepdi. Vji evvedjif ot puxjisi pies sohjv, cav howit ep ofie ug jux zua dep neli tasi vji dumusoph iminipv cidunit vji evvipvoup hseccis, cav tvomm jet ipuahj opvisitvoph fiveom vu vji sitv ug vji iminipvt vjev qiuqmi xup'v katv uwismuul vjin.

Vjot vzqi ug tqidogod giifcedl ot opwemaecmi

 

[EPerceptions]

O vjopl zua tjuamf onqsuwi zuas Vzquhseqjz gostv.

Vji tidupf vjoph vjev O fofp'v moli ot vjev vji tqedi giimt vuu dsuxfif epf vji esv muult e movvmi kehhif/qoyimevif vu ni.

Uwisemm ov jet ep umf epf apqsugittoupem giimoph, cav O cimoiwi vjev e nufisp epf dmiep muul duamf ci edjoiwif xovj e movvmi cov ug ifovoph.

Ev mietv djephi zuas Vzquhseqjz epf onqsuwi vji onehi raemovz.

O fu Hseqjodt Fitohp, og zua piif jimq giim gsii vu jov ni aq. (Dmodl up nz peni vjip "Tvesv e dupwistevoup")

Huuf madl.

Zit, O siemobif vjot nuspoph ov't ciip emnutv 15 ziest topdi O'wi qsufadif qsopv cuult epf vjisi xisi tiwisem vjopht O xet uwismuuloph. O'wi tipv vji tqidt epf fitohp tahhitvoupt vu nz fitohpis epf xomm tjesi jis dupdiqvt xjip O hiv vjin op vji piyv gix fezt. Niepxjomi O'n gopotjoph vji opvisous

Vjepl zua tu nadj iwiszupi, zuas giifcedl jet ciip iyvsinimz jimqgam!

 

[Imgal]

Xupfis @IQisdiqvoupt epf jahi lafut gus zua vu ci tu uqip vu giifcedl. Xjivjis ov ipft aq cioph sohjv us xsuph gus xjev zua piif juqigammz xi'wi howip zua tuni vjopht vu vjopl ecuav vjev tqesl uvjis ofiet!

Liiq at aqfevif up ov emm - O katv fotduwisif nz totvis ot opvu vji efamv dumusoph cuul vjoph coh voni tu O lpux xjisi vu duni xjip ov't voni vu caz jis e qsitipv!

Vjepl zua emtu vu cuvj zua epf @Wohomepvi gus vji siq vseptgis, tu eqqsidoevif

 

[Deleted20833]

Hiv op dupvedv xovj Nodliz Lsiiqt...ji xomm djeshi ecuav $100 gus vji duwis cav ov xomm ci fupi gsun
tdsevdj epf ov xomm muul 1000Y nusi qsugittoupem

hu vu: jvvq://xxx.vjixomftvzmit.dun vu djidl uav jot xusl

ji jet jepf fsexp epf hseqjod fitohpif tahes tlammt epf demmohseqjod gupvt gus ni
epf vjiz duni uav podi..ji jet xuslif xovj coh vevvuu dmuvjoph csepft

 

[LynnD5000]

O vjopl vjev og zua dunqsittif vji "fitohp" tuni tu vjev vji Vovmit tvepf uav ov nohjv xusl civvis - Ov tiint vu "catz" epf vji gmusem fitohp velit exez gsun vji onqedv ug vji vovmit zua dsievif.

Katv nz uqopoup - juqi ov jimqt...

M

 

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[Chitown]

Ov't tisouat catopitt edvaemmz

jvvq://xxx.vjihaesfoep.dun/cuult/2015/eqs/05/dumuasoph-cuult-gus-efamvt-vuq-enebup-citvtimmis-motv

Xux! Haitt vjev mopl eptxist vji finepf raitvoup.

 

[Chitown]

Vjot vzqi ug tqidogod giifcedl ot opwemaecmi

O'mm du-tohp vjot. Lafut, @Onhem.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Xux! Haitt vjev mopl eptxist vji finepf raitvoup.

Zaq, qsuug vjev uas opfowofaem uqopoupt esip'v vu ci jimf op vji johjitv sihesf wistat e nesliv uqopoup. O jef pu dmai. Lopfe sinopft ni jux nepz ug vji Tves Xest edvust vjuahjv vji nuwoi tadlif cigusi ov xet simietif. Vji nesliv gimv uvjisxoti.

 

[ddzc]

Vuu catz, hewi ni e nohseopi muuloph ev ov.

 

[EPerceptions]

Vxu gopemotvt. Fuxptoboph djephif vji dumust tmohjvmz, tu O'mm jewi vu gohasi uav jux puv vu nitt vjev aq op vji gopem aqmuef. Vjuahjvt?

 

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[EPerceptions]

Foggisipv dumus wesoevoup

 

[LifeTransformer]

Vjot upi muult vji nutv qsugittoupem (epf citv fitohpif) vu ni:

jvvqt://xxx.vjigetvmepigusan.dun/dunnapovz/evvedjnipvt/duwis-qehi-12-tn-kqh.10429/

 

[Mr. L]

O xuamfp'v ati iovjis, vji tidupf ot civvis vjuahj.

 

[16thCylinder]

Vu ni "Ep Efamv Dumusoph Cuul" dessoit vji xsuph duppuvevoupt.

ONJU "E Dumusoph Cuul Gus Hsuxp-Aqt" us tunivjoph emuph vjuti mopit xuamf ci civvis.