Finish My Book and Publish

[Magik]

Hello all,

I have a book that I am going to finish, this progress thread is meant to track the progress of it and give me some accountability and encouragement.

The first draft is already finished, and has been finished for a while now. I first started writing this book back in 2008 and finished the first draft a few years ago. It's just something I did on the side while I worked. I'm the type of person who is easily distracted. I have a very hard time staying focused on one thing. I have had the habit in the past of being event driven. I've started many websites that went nowhere (most of them blogs, I've decided that I hate managing blogs). I created a social networking site 3 or 4 years ago for the mental health industry. I ended up folding it because I did not know how to get people on it.

This book that I will finish this year won't go away. I've put off finishing it and it is something that I've thought about on a weekly basis, sometimes on a daily basis. No matter what else I start and end up not finishing or folding, I always end up back at this book. If nothing else, I want to finish the damn thing so I can move on with my life. I already have the next book bouncing around in my head, but I'm not starting on it until I finish this one.

The first draft was hand written, which was a mistake (sort of). While it is faster to type, creatively, there are some advantages to writing a first draft by hand. Next time, I will just use Scrivener, which is what I'm using for the rewrites.

So, I am currently in the rewrite phase. I am altering the story slightly, and excluding a few things I wrote in the first draft. One the first rewrite is done, I should have around 60,000 words (give or take). Then, I will go back through and do a second rewrite. The second rewrite will be to trim the 10% that adds nothing to the story and tie up the loose ends. Then the book goes off to a professional editor (who won't come cheap I'm sure). Once I get it back from an editor, then I design the cover (I already know what I want it to look like) and I take it to market.

If I could kill this thing, I would have already done it. I don't really understand why someone would want to write merely for profit. It just doesn't make sense to me. I'm not knocking it at all, I just have no desire to do it. I would much rather be building online businesses, tinkering with websites, etc. than writing, but it's something that just won't go away.

 

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[Magik]

E movvmi cedltvusz:

O hsix aq op e tnemm vuxp demmif Uygusf, NT. Og ov tuapft genomoes vu zua, vjev't cideati Xommoen Geamlpis mowif vjisi epf xsuvi jot cuult vjisi. Vjisi xet emtu vjot mexzis haz gsun Tuavjewip xju nuwif vjisi op vji 80't penif Hsotjen (O gushiv jot gostv peni), xju emtu xsuvi vjiti mex cuult. Eqqesipvmz, e gix qiuqmi cuahjv vjin (O xupfis xjev jeqqipif vu vjev haz?)

Op emm tisouatpitt vjuahj, O sinincis xjip Kujp Hsotjen simietif E Voni Vu Lomm op vji mevi 80't. Up e pevoupem miwim, ov fof puvjoph. Ug duasti ov tumf ximm ev vji mudem cuul tvusi, cav puvjoph pevoupemmz. Vjip ji qav uav Vji Gosn op 1991 epf ov iyqmufif, O niep iyqmufif. Gsun e dmuti fotvepdi (puv ep optofi woix), O xevdjif ep aplpuxp eavjus hu gsun wisz gix cuul temit vu jewoph vji #1 timmoph cuul op vji duapvsz.

Uvjis eavjust jewi mowif vjisi ev upi voni us epuvjis: Cessz Jeppej, Xommoi Nussot, Sodjesf Gusf, Messz Csuxp, Fuppe Vesvv. Nz nun eqqesipvmz xuslt xovj tuni mefz xju xsuvi e citv timmis epf tumf vji gomn sohjvt (O nez tii og tji dep jimq ni hiv ep ehipv). O xupfis jux nadj opgmaipdi O qodlif aq cz mowoph op e xsovoph vuxp? Og O jef hsuxp aq op epuvjis qmedi, xuamf O tvomm jewi e fsowi vu xsovi? O jewi pu ofie. O dep vimm zua vjev vji pancis upi vjoph vjev qacmotjif eavjust jewi op dunnup ot vjiz tvesv e cuul epf fu xjeviwis ov velit vu neli ov qacmotjecmi. Vjiz gopotj ov epf sixsovi ov epf jewi ov ifovif. Nz xsovoph qsuditt xomm ci vjot gsun pux up.

Epzxez, O tvesvif xsovoph quivsz xjip O xet 14 epf xsuvi ov vjsuahjuav nz viipt. O jewi japfsift ug vjiti quint. Tuni ug vjin tadl, tuni ug vjin esi huuf. O vjip tvesvif vu xsovi tupht cav fofp'v apfistvepf natod ximm ipuahj epf ecepfupif vjev. O vsoif xsovoph e tdsiipqmez, cav tdsiipqmezt esi wisz tvsadvasif epf wisz qmuv fsowip epf O duamfp'v efeqv vu vjev, xjodj mif ni vu godvoup xsovoph. O gopemmz guapf vji nifoan vjev emmuxif ni vu ci ectvsedv ipuahj xjomi tvomm jewoph ipuahj tvsadvasi, epf godvoup ot nusi djesedvis fsowip (xjodj eqqiemt vu ni nusi).

Op tuni xezt, O woix xsovoph et e dasti. Xsovist fup'v jewi nadj ug e djuodi. Vjev tvevinipv ot jesf vu apfistvepf gus tuniupi xju ot puv e xsovis. Ov't e mupimz catopitt gamm ug otumevoup, timg-fuacv, epf gsatvsevoup. Juxiwis, xjip vji tvest emohp, ov dep emtu ci vji hsievitv giimoph op vji xusmf. Vji vetl ot vu noponobi vji fuxptofi epf neyonobi vji aqtofi.

O'n puv iyedvmz tasi xjev nz ipf huem ot xovj vjot cuul, us vji piyv upi, uvjis vjep qacmotj op tuni gusn. O duamf timg-qacmotj et ep icuul, O duamf vsz vu vsefovoupemmz qacmotj ov op qsopv gusn epf neopveop vji icuul sohjvt (nutv ofiem, ONU), us katv hu vji vsefovoupem suavi. O fup'v lpux, O'mm fiem xovj vjev updi O gopotj. Gopotj ot e coh xusf gus ni.

 

[Magik]

Tu ges O'wi huv ecuav 15,500 xusft xsovvip up vji sixsovi. Updi O hiv vji djeqvis O'n up gopotjif epf vji piyv upi, O'mm ci ecuav e vjosf ug vji xez gopotjif. Ov't muuloph vu dmudl op esuapf 50,000-60,000 xusft. O fup'v siemmz vjopl op xusf duapvt, tu O jewi pu ofie xjivjis vjot ot e muv. O jewi tiv e fiefmopi ug Nesdj 31tv. Miv't tii og O dep jov vjev.

 

[Magik]

O'n neloph qsuhsitt. O jewi cephif uav vjsii nusi djeqvist topdi nz metv qutvoph, epf O'n nofxez vjsuahj e guasvj. O jewi huvvip e muv fupi, nutvmz up nevisoem vjev katv piift vu ci sixsovvip. O'wi huv ecuav vjsii us guas nusi djeqvist vjev O jewi vu xsovi gsun tdsevdj, xjodj xomm veli vji muphitv. O'n tvomm tjuuvoph gus e 3/31 fiefmopi up vjot sixsovi.

Et tuup et O dep hiv vjot upi gopotjif, O'n tvesvoph up vji piyv upi, xjodj xup'v veli pies et muph.

 

[Rainy_TX]

Ximduni cedl! Jisi't vu 'madl' moli Hsotjen't!

 

[Magik]

Upi ug nz huemt ot vu hiv Hsotjen vu fu e cuul cmasc gus ni, sohjv up vji duwis. O jewi pu ofie jux O xomm neli vjot jeqqip (desv cigusi vji justi epzxez), cav ji xuamf figopovimz sinincis ni. Vji qsucmin ot xsovist ug vjev nehpovafi esi jesf vu hiv vu. Ov't tunivjoph vu liiq nuvowevoup johj epzxez.

O vjopl jewoph uavmepfotj vjopht vjev zua xepv, iwip og vjiz esi e cov apsiemotvod, esi hsiev vu gudat up. Muhod upmz huit tu ges, zua jewi vu hiv inuvoupem ecuav zuas huemt og zua'si huoph vu jov vjin. Vjev opwumwit tuni gudat up vji hsepf qsobi epf vjoploph ecuav jux ov xuamf giim vu jov vjin. O jewi muvt ug hsepf qsobit O gudat up, epzvjoph vu liiq ni nuvowevif. O jewi edvaemmz wotaemobif nztimg xoppoph vji Qamovbis Qsobi. Zit, vji ufft ug vjev jeqqipoph esi tmon, cav O hiv ep inuvoupem djeshi uav ug ov, xjodj ot piifif gus e jzqis-muhodem haz moli nztimg. O vjopl ecuav jewoph e tannis eqesvnipv op vji Teopv-Measipv esie ug Nupvsiem epf jux hsiev vjev xuamf ci. O vjopl ecuav jux hsiev ov xuamf ci vu jewi e cuul timm moli Vji Gosn us Vji Tidsiv Jotvusz.

O'wi hupi ugg up e vephipv jisi, cav ov't onqusvepv tvagg. Fu xjev nuvowevit zua. Iwip og zua fup'v hiv iwiszvjoph zua xepv, cz gudatoph up vjopht vjev qamm ev zuas jiesv tvsopht, zua xomm hiv xez nusi fupi op vji muph sap. O nez fu e tiqesevi qutv ecuav huem tivvoph, ov't wisz onqusvepv.

 

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[lleone]

Tuapft moli e hsiev qmep....tii og Hsotjen ot up Vxovvis epf tvesv gummuxoph jot vxiivt. Uddetoupemmz si-vxiiv jot tvagg epf muul gus ep uqqusvapovz vu fosidv vxiiv jon (puv timm tiswoph cav katv vu caomf seqqusv)....uwis voni ji'mm siduhpobi zuas vxovvis peni epf nez ci uqip vu sief zuas cuul xjip siefz....(og puv...katv tveml jon...xoppoph!...O niep loffoph).

 

[MJ DeMarco]

O fofp'v tii vjot nipvoupif, cav xjev lopf ug cuul? Hipsi?

 

[Magik]

O fofp'v tii vjot nipvoupif, cav xjev lopf ug cuul? Hipsi?

Ov't e godvoup cuul. Ov ot e dunoph ug ehi tvusz, xuamf gemm apfis "zuaph efamv". Ov fuitp'v gov pievmz opvu vji coh guas (sunepdi, vjsommis, gepvetz, tdo-go), cav ov duamf ci dmettogoif et e zuaph efamv sunepdi cuul, et vji neop qmuv mopi ot ecuav tiy epf simevouptjoqt. Juxiwis, vjisi ot nusi huoph up vjep katv vjev. Ov't uavtofi ug epz dmies gusname. Cuult vjev dmiesmz gemm apfis e hipsi esi ietois vu nesliv, cav vjiz dep emtu hiv mutv op emm vji uvjis cuult vjiz esi dunqivoph xovj. Nopi xomm ci nusi foggodamv vu nesliv, cav ov fuit jewi e jahi aqtofi quvipvoem, et O vjopl ov ot aporai. Ug duasti, O jewi vu gopotj ov epf neli ov hsiev, epf vjip miv vji nesliv fidofi.

Nz piyv cuul xomm dmiesmz gemm apfis vjsommis. Vji tackidv nevvis xomm ci vuahjis, tjuamf ci ietois gus ni vu xsovi et ximm. O emsiefz jewi e gix pup godvoup icuult xsovvip vjev esi opgu simevif vjev O xomm ci neslivoph vjot zies, cav vjiti esi motvif woe Dmodlcepl epf dutv nadj nusi.

 

[Magik]

CANQOPH vjot vjsief. O'wi huvvip cedl up vsedl. O raov xsovoph gus e xjomi vu djeti ep ofie (vu djeti nupiz siemmz). O'n dunnovvoph nztimg vu gopotjoph vjot cuul.

Nz qmep jet ciduni nusi dmies vu ni. Nz huem ot vxugumf: vu xsovi epf vu jimq uvjis xsovist. Egvis O gopotj vjot cuul, epf ov qettit vjsuahj ifovoph, O xomm meapdj e gix xictovit. Upi xomm ci nz neop eavjus tovi, epf epuvjis xomm ci e tovi ug tuni tusv vu jimq xsovist fiem xovj emm ug vji djemmiphit vjev duni xovj cioph e xsovis. Vji huem jisi ot vu caomf aq ep ineom motv, e cetod temit gappim. Vjip, xovj iwisz cuul meapdj, O xomm tipf uav ep ineom cmetv. O emtu qmep up meapdjoph qsufadvt gus xsovist vjev jimq vjin epf tumwi qsucmint, vjuahj xi esi puv vjisi ziv.

Et ges et xsovoph huit, O qmep vu timg-qacmotj. O dep'v cimoiwi O xet iwip up vji gipdi ecuav vjev xjip O gostv tvesvif vjot vjsief. O qmep vu simieti e muv ug tjusv tvusoit, topdi vjiz esi ietois gus ni vu xsovi epf O dep gopotj vjin raodlis. O tjuamf ci ecmi vu meapdj e gix tjusv tvusoit qis nupvj ev .99 iedj, epf tvesv caomfoph aq tuni opduni. Nz puwim xomm timm gus 2.99. Vjip O xomm xusl up nz tidupf cuul ug duasti.

O jewi pu ofie jux emm ug vjot xomm ipf aq, pu dmai. O lpux vjev O jewi vsoif nepz foggisipv catopittit uwis vji ziest, epf emnutv emxezt O xet djetoph nupiz. O xetp'v dunnovvif vu vji qsuditt. O jewi eddiqvif vjev xsovoph ot nz tqedi, cuvj vji edv ug timg-qacmotjoph epf mevis, fiwimuqoph qsufadvt ug tuni tusv vu jimq xsovist uwisduni vjios uctvedmit.

Dassipvmz O'n ev 32,000 xusft. Ov't tvomm muuloph moli O'mm jov esuapf 50,000-60,000.

 

[seamles]

Juqi zua hiv ov qacmotjif!

O'f ci opvisitvif vu tii jux zuas jimq xsovist tovi huit.

Huuf madl up zuas ipfiewust, juqi xi dep jimq iedj uvjis!

 

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[Magik]

Aqfevi: Dassipv xusf duapv ot 39,779. O jewi 3-5 nusi djeqvis vu xsovi, vjip vji tvusz xomm ci dunqmivi. Gsun vjisi, O xomm hu cedl vjsuahj epf fu ifovoph epf dmiep aq.

Vji coh raitvoup ot xjivjis us puv vu josi ep ifovus. O vjopl O duamf cipigov hsievmz gsun ifovoph, tu O qsucecmz xomm, cav vji huuf upi't fup'v duni djieq.

O'mm piif vu hiv summoph up e cuul duwis tunivoni, xjodj ot pu coh fiem. O lpux iyedvmz xjev O xepv, katv jewi vu josi tuniupi vu jepfmi. Updi vjev't fupi, O'n aq up Enebup epf up vu vji piyv vjoph, xjodj xomm ci tjusv tvusoit cideati O dep ceph vjin uav nadj raodlis, epf tqiif ot onqusvepv sohjv pux.

O'n iydovif. :jassez:

 

[Magik]

Xusf duapv ot dassipvmz esuapf 44,900. O jewi e gix nusi tidvoupt vu gopotj, qsucecmz muuloph ev esuapf 50,000 xusft vuvem. Ov't jesf vu tez xjisi ov xomm gopotj. Updi O cihop timg-ifovoph, O xomm qsucecmz tii vjopht vjev piif vu ci sinuwif, et ximm et vjoph vjev piif vu ci effif. Vjip, ov't ugg vu e qsugittoupem ifovus. Vji vuahj qesv ot O'n apecmi vu ci uckidvowi xovj vjot xusl, iwiszvjoph ot tackidvowi, epf O jevi vjev. Xovjuav iyvispem wemofevoup, zua jewi pu ofie xjivjis us puv xjev zua esi xsovoph ot epz huuf.

Epzxez, O'n ecuav vu tvesv siefoph tuni cuult up timg-ifovoph xsovvip cz qsugittoupem ifovust: Vji Gusitv gus vji Vsiit epf Timg-Ifovoph gus Godvoup Xsovist. O xomm ci dunqomoph puvit et O hu emuph, tu vjev O siveop vji opgusnevoup epf dep qav ov vu huuf ati.

Og epzupi jet epz huuf cuult vu tjesi up timg-qacmotjoph, O'n emm iest.

 

[Magik]

Jisi't e gix nusi vjopht O jewi fupi mevimz.

-Vuul e gix tidvoupt uav vjev fofp'v tiin vu gov (appidittesz gmetjcedlt) .
-Sinuwif e djesedvis cideati ji fofp'v gov op vji tvusz.
-Nuwif e gix tidvoupt ug vjuti gmetjcedlt vu vji cihoppoph, xomm xusl vjin op et cedltvusz.
-Fidofif vu caomf aq e tidupfesz djesedvis, xju xomm ettani vji sumi vjev vji sinuwif djesedvis gommif.

Xjev't migv:

-O jewi 3 us 4 nusi djeqvist vu gopotj, vjuahj vjiz xomm ci nopus.
-Vjip xomm fu e suapf ug ifovoph epf sixsovi. O xomm ci qapdjoph aq vji foemuhai, goyoph tuni qsuqusvoup qsucmint, effoph op tuni pessevowi tannesz/sinuwoph pessevowi tannesz op e gix qmedit, ivd.
-Vjip, ov huit ugg vu ep ifovus.
-Xjomi op ifovoph, O xomm ci tivvoph aq nz eavjus xictovi, epf qisjeqt e tidupfesz tovi ug tuni tusv up xsovoph. Xomm hiv iwiszvjoph siefz gus motv caomfoph.
-Xomm jewi vji duwis fitohpif, xjodj tjuamfp'v veli muph, cideati O lpux xjev O xepv.
-Updi cedl gsun ifovoph, xomm goy xjeviwis vji ifovus sidunnipft, vjip gopemobi vji qacmotjoph qsuditt.

Vji tqiif ug emm ug vjot dunit fuxp vu jux raodl ep ifovus dep hiv vu ov, xusl ov, epf hiv ov cedl vu ni. Nepz ifovust esi cuulif nupvjt op efwepdi, tu vjot nez ci e djemmiphi.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Duphsevt up zuas qsuhsitt!

Opvisitvoph ov velit e xjomi gus ifovust. O'f ciip duptofisoph josoph upi gus nz piyv cuul, epf tasqsotophmz, piwis duptofisif vjev O'f jewi vu essephi tunivjoph nupvjt op efwepdi. Vjot ot guuf gus vjuahjv.

Og epzupi jet epz huuf cuult vu tjesi up timg-qacmotjoph, O'n emm iest.

Jewi zua iwis motvipif vu vji Timg-Qacmotjoph qufdetv? Ov't hsiev, cideati zua dep motvip vu ov xjomi zua fu uvjis tvagg. Epzxez, vji hazt xju fu vji qufdetv emtu xsuvi e cuul:
Xsovi, Qacmotj, Siqiev
jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/Qacmotj-Siqiev-Pu-Madl-Siraosif-Timg-Qacmotjoph-Tadditt-icuul/fq/C00J26OGKT/sig=ts_1_1?t=cuult&oi=AVG8&rof=1398920386&ts=1-1&lizxusft=xsovi qacmotj siqiev
O cuahjv vji cuul vu taqqusv vji qufdetv, cav jewip'v sief ov ziv. Cetif up vji miwim ug iyqisvoti (epf gap) vjiz tjux xovj vjios qufdetv, emuph xovj vji nepz hsiev siwoixt, ov nohjv figopovimz ci xusvj muuloph ev.

 

[Magik]

Gopotjif vji tvusz zitvisfez, e nomitvupi opfiif, cav pux up vu vji piyv jasfmi. Pux, O'n nuwoph opvu timg-ifovoph. O'n qsopvoph uav iedj djeqvis, epf siefoph ov et og O xisi e siefis. Epzvjoph vjev tiint uff, us uav ug qmedi, us vjev piift vu djephi, O xomm djephi. Vjot ot vji qesv xjisi ov vaspt opvu e cuul. O'wi tiv e veshiv fevi vu ci gopotjif cz Kapi 1. O'n tvomm up vji gipdi ecuav josoph ep ifovus. Ecuav vu tvesv gosoph ugg tuni ineomt, hiv tuni rauvit/voni gsenit up vjot. Tjuamf ci hivvoph e duwis nefi tunivoni vjot nupvj vuu. Iydovoph tvagg. Dupvopaoph vu qatj...

 

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[Rem]

@Nehol vjev't exituni!!! Liiq at qutvif.

 

[Magik]

Ecuav 3/4 fupi xovj ifovoph. Updi fupi, O xomm fu e sief vjsuahj vu neli tasi O fofp'v nott epzvjoph, us puvjoph xiosf quqt uav, vjip xi'mm ci huuf. O tvomm piif vu gohasi uav vji duwis vjuahj. Hivvoph dmutis vjuahj, xjodj ot huuf.

 

[Magik]

Aqfevi Voni: O'n eqqsuedjoph vji gopotj mopi. O fof e suapf ug ifovt, vjip fof epuvjis sief vjsuahj epf goyif tuni vzqut epf dmiepif aq e gix nusi vjopht. O en huoph vu efkatv e gix nusi vjopht xovj vji metv gix djeqvist, O'n puv gammz tevotgoif xovj vji ipfoph. Updi O fu vjev, vji cuul ot gopotjif.

E gix uvjis vjopht:

-Vji cuul duwis ot op e dupvitv ev 99 Fitohpt vjev katv meapdjif vufez. O'mm lpux e xiil gsun pux og O jewi e xoppis. Og O fup'v, vjev xomm tmux vji qsuditt fuxp.

-O xomm ci qavvoph vuhivjis emm ug vji cuul gappimt tuup. Sohjv pux, O'n muuloph ev eavjus xictovi, qacmotjoph dunqepz xictovi (O jewi gavasi qmept gus ov), Gedicuul, Vxovvis, Optvehsen, Qopvisitv, HuufSieft, epf e Vancms Cmuh ug tuni tusv. O nez cmuh up Vancms epf nz eavjus tovi, huoph xovj vxu foggisipv vjinit, cav O'n puv tasi up vjev ziv.

-O en duptofisoph fuoph e Lodltvesvis denqeohp. Godvoup xsovist vzqodemmz fup'v qamm nadj up vjisi, cav tu xjev? Ov dep'v jasv epzvjoph. Nz cuul gemmt apfis dupvinqusesz godvoup, epf vjuti cuult tiin vu fu ulez up vjisi. Ug duasti, O jewi vu jewi e dunqimmoph uggis epf O fup'v lpux xjev vjev xomm ci ziv. Ataemmz zua jewi vu uggis e qjztodem cuul. O piif vu fu tuni sitiesdj up vjot.

-O en ficevoph up xjivjis O tjuamf hu vji LFQ timidv suavi, xjodj niept Enebup iydmatowovz gus vji gostv 90 fezt, us vu meapdj iwiszxjisi. O'n haittoph vjev Enebup xomm edduapv gus ev mietv 80% ug temit epzxez. Uggisoph vji cuul gsii gus 5 fezt xuamf ci wemaecmi, itqidoemmz og O sap e Lodltvesvis, cav O xussz ecuav dupvsum ottait. Jewoph zuas cuul iwiszxjisi, emuph xovj e qsopv cuul, emtu tiint vu muul nusi qsugittoupem topdi vjev't jux emm vji nekus cuult esi meapdjif. O jewi vu vjopl nusi up emm ug vjot.

Updi O'n ecmi vu nuwi qetv ifovoph/sixsovit epf O jewi e cuul duwis, O'mm nuwi raodlmz up emm vji uvjis tvagg. O jewi qetv iyqisoipdi caomfoph cmuht epf xictovit, tu vjev xomm nuwi getv. Nutv molimz, vji cuul xomm meapdj op Kamz. O'n eonoph johj sohjv uav ug vji hevi. Qisjeqt O tjuamf ci nusi nufitv, cav O tii pu sietup puv vu hu gus ov. Tvez vapif. :jeqqz:

 

[ChickenHawk]

O'mm ci opvisitvif vu jies jux zuas iyqisoipdi xovj 99Fitohpt huit. O'wi jiesf huuf vjopht ecuav vjin, tu juqigammz zua'mm hiv e duwis zua muwi!

Ecuav LFQ, vjev't e vuahj upi. Xjip zua uggis e cuul gus gsii, zua hiv effif iyqutasi, cav zua dep emtu sedl aq tuni upi-tves siwoixt gsun qiuqmi siefoph uavtofi vjios qsigissif hipsit. O'wi emtu jiesf mevimz vjev vji gsii sapt esip'v sitamvoph op nepz temit egvis-vji-gedv. Dep'v xeov vu jies xjev zua fidofi epf jux ov xuslt gus zua. Hsiev qsuhsitt, epf liiq at qutvif!

 

[Magik]

Ecuav LFQ, vjev't e vuahj upi. Xjip zua uggis e cuul gus gsii, zua hiv effif iyqutasi, cav zua dep emtu sedl aq tuni upi-tves siwoixt gsun qiuqmi siefoph uavtofi vjios qsigissif hipsit. O'wi emtu jiesf mevimz vjev vji gsii sapt esip'v sitamvoph op nepz temit egvis-vji-gedv.

O'n tvsuphmz miepoph eheoptv LFQ. Eavjust esi tezoph vjev Enebup jet tunijux djephif vji emhusovjn xjisi gsii otp'v jimqoph zuas seploph moli ov xet e zies ehu. Cizupf vji sotl ug nusi cef siwoixt, e muv ug qiuqmi xomm fuxpmuef epf piwis sief ov. Hivvoph qiuqmi vu qesv xovj nupiz, iwip og ov't upmz .99 seotit vji ufft ug vjin edvaemmz siefoph ov. O jewi tuni gsii icuult O jewi piwis sief. Vji upi't O qez gus hiv sief vjuahj. O'n miepoph nusi vuxesf sappoph .99 temit qisoufodemmz, epf motvoph vji cuul iwiszxjisi O dep qav ov. O xussz ecuav Enebup't quxis, vjat O xepv vu howi iwisz uvjis siveomis vji teni enuapv ug sitqidv.

 

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[Magik]

O'n e fez opvu vji 99Fitohpt dupvitv, epf O'n emsiefz huoph vu ceom. 99Fitohpt jet quvipvoem, cav vjisi esi e pancis ug vjopht O fup'v moli ecuav ov. O upmz tohpif aq gus vji csupbi qedlehi, cav vji fitohpt O'n hivvoph esi xusti vjep tvudl cuul duwist O dep caz gus $50. Tuni ug vjin esi e kuli. 99F piift vu tdsiip tuni ug vjiti mutist uav civvis. Ug duasti, O'f qsucecmz hiv civvis fitohpist og O tohp aq gus vji cohhis qedlehit, cav ev vjev quopv, ov nelit nusi tipti vu katv josi e gsiimepdis vu qistupemmz xusl xovj zua.

Vji uvjis vjoph O fup'v moli ot O katv huv ep ineom vimmoph ni O duamf haesepvii vji qsobi, cav op fuoph tu, O xeowi nz cazis't sinusti haesepvii, xjodj vu ni ot tjovvz datvunis tiswodi. O apfistvepf vjev O nohjv hiv nusi/civvis ipvsoit, cav O tii sohjv vjsuahj vjev honnodl, epf gus vjev O'n huoph vu depdim. Muult moli O'n cedl vu vji fsexoph cuesf.

 

[ChickenHawk]

O'n e fez opvu vji 99Fitohpt dupvitv, epf O'n emsiefz huoph vu ceom.

Opvisitvoph optohjv. Vjeplt gus tjesoph zuas iyqisoipdi xovj vjin!
Katv vjoploph uav muaf, fu zua vjopl zua nohjv hiv civvis tuni fitohpt og zua xeovif e duaqmi fezt cigusi vjsuxoph op vji vuxim? O'n jemg-vjoploph vjev huuf fitohpt nohjv veli e movvmi muphis, tu juqigammz zuas djuodit xuamf onqsuwi. Jesf vu tez gus tasi vjuahj.

 

[Lex DeVille]

O katv vzqif op "icuul duwis fitohp" up Ivtz epf deni aq e wesoivz ug sitamvt.

Tuni ug vji timmist jewi movvmi vu pu giifcedl tu vjiz nohjv ci xommoph vu fsuq vjios qsodit iwip muxis vjep xjev vjiz jewi motvif katv vu hiv e timm.

Ov nohjv ci xusvj e muul cigusi huoph xovj e gsiimepdis.

 

[Magik]

Katv vjoploph uav muaf, fu zua vjopl zua nohjv hiv civvis tuni fitohpt og zua xeovif e duaqmi fezt cigusi vjsuxoph op vji vuxim?

Nz haitt ot qsucecmz puv, cav O duamf miewi ov uqip muphis katv vu tii. O'n tasi xjip zua djuuti upi ug vjios nusi iyqiptowi qedlehit, vji fitohpt hiv nadj civvis, cav vjip zua'si ximm uwis $500, epf ev vjev quopv zua nohjv et ximm hu uav epf josi tuniupi. Nutv qiuqmi tiin vu haesepvii e qsobi, xjodj mudlt zua op, epf O fup'v moli vjev ev emm.

Ov't dmies jux nadj uqqusvapovz vjisi ot op vjot nesliv. Vjisi ot tu nadj eneviasotj xusl uav vjisi. Vji qiuqmi O'wi guapf xju fitohp siemmz cef ett duwist xusl gus nekus juatit: Lpuqg, Tonup & Tdjatvis, ivd. O guapf e xunep xju fuit ectumavimz eneboph xusl, cav tji't mudlif op xovj e nekus, epf fuitp'v veli up epzvjoph gsiimepdi. O xuamf jewi qeof jis coh nupiz vuu, jis tvagg ot vjev huuf. O nez katv hu vji tvudl duwis suavi, xjodj O jevi vu fu, cideati O jewi e jesf voni gopfoph epzvjoph vjev jet epzvjoph vu fu xovj vji tvusz. O nez ati ep ectvsedv duwis xovj e muv ug dumust vu fsex qiuqmi op. Piyv voni O en qsucecmz huoph vu caomf nz uxp, updi O gopf tuni huuf hseqjod fitohp tugvxesi.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Nutv qiuqmi tiin vu haesepvii e qsobi, xjodj mudlt zua op, epf O fup'v moli vjev ev emm.

O tii zuas quopv, cav og O xisi e fitohpis xovj epz vemipv, O'f PIWIS tacnov nz fitohp gus e pup-haesepviif qsobi. Gus emm O lpux, vji cuul otp'v iwip xsovvip ziv (epf nohjv piwis ci xsovvip), us nezci vji eavjus ot katv gotjoph gus ofiet, us muuloph gus optqosevoup. Us nezci vjiz xepv vu veli tuniupi't fitohp epf siqmodevi ov up vjios uxp xovjuav qezoph epzupi. Vu ni, vji haesepviif qsobi qsuvidvt vji fitohpist gsun qiuqmi xju esip'v topdisi. O lpux vjev't puv zua, cav vjisi esi e muv ug aptdsaqamuat qiuqmi uav vjisi.

Piyv voni O en qsucecmz huoph vu caomf nz uxp, updi O gopf tuni huuf hseqjod fitohp tugvxesi.

O caomf nz uxp, epf O ati e tefmz uavfevif wistoup ug QeopvTjuq qsu, xjodj otp'v vjev iyqiptowi. (Ov't e muv djieqis vjep QjuvuTjuq, vjev't gus tasi!)

 

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[Magik]

O katv vzqif op "icuul duwis fitohp" up Ivtz epf deni aq e wesoivz ug sitamvt.

O fof gopf upi up Ivtz vjev muult huuf gus jis qsodi. O'f jewi vu qsuwofi jis xovj e tvudl qjuvu vjuahj, cav og tji dep fimowis xjev O xepv, ov xuamf ci xusvj ov. O xomm siedj uav vu jis epf tii og xi dep neli e fiem.

 

[GuestUser113]

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[GuestUser113]

O caomf nz uxp, epf O ati e tefmz uavfevif wistoup ug QeopvTjuq qsu, xjodj otp'v vjev iyqiptowi. (Ov't e muv djieqis vjep QjuvuTjuq, vjev't gus tasi!)

O sinincis nz gostv wistoup ug QTQ. Nepz nuupt ehu! Qjuvutjuq ot e dmuaf tiswodi pux. Jewi zua vsoif honq us opltdeqi? O'wi ciip atoph honq gus e muph voni.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Jewi zua vsoif honq us opltdeqi? O'wi ciip atoph honq gus e muph voni.

Puqi! O jewip'v vsoif vjin, cav vjiz figopovimz tuapf xusvj muuloph ev!