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Hey guys, I'm Will and I need your help on my Headline.
PRO-DUSTER Lightweight 3-in-1 Microfiber Car Duster, Window Cleaner, Car Cleaning Cloth
This is my current title. What do you think? Suggestions?
It is a wand shaped cleaner with interchangeable pads:
Microfiber duster pad
Window cleaning pad
Car cloth cleaning pad
Benefits:
Car and home use
Microfiber material
Lightweight
Broom stick applicable
Multi-purpose
Audience:
Stay at home parents
Married with kids
Car lovers
People who enjoy cleaning?
Which benefit and audience should I emphasize in my headline...
ps. I wanted it to NOT sound like a generic cleaning product.
Thanks in advance peeps.
William-
PRO-DUSTER Lightweight 3-in-1 Microfiber Car Duster, Window Cleaner, Car Cleaning Cloth
This is my current title. What do you think? Suggestions?
It is a wand shaped cleaner with interchangeable pads:
Microfiber duster pad
Window cleaning pad
Car cloth cleaning pad
Benefits:
Car and home use
Microfiber material
Lightweight
Broom stick applicable
Multi-purpose
Audience:
Stay at home parents
Married with kids
Car lovers
People who enjoy cleaning?
Which benefit and audience should I emphasize in my headline...
ps. I wanted it to NOT sound like a generic cleaning product.
Thanks in advance peeps.
William-
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