How is my blog?

[Twiizlar]

I know this is not entrepreneurish type thing but can any of you give me constructive criticism. Also what are the best ways to market it?
http://theultimatepaintballblog.blogspot.com/

 

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QN ni vji mopl

 

[Twiizlar]

Tussz o katv qav vji mopl op vji usohopem qutv. On emtu vjoploph ecuav cazoph nz uxp funeop. Tjuamf o neli e tjusvis peni? Emtu huuhmi eftipti xupv tjux aq ov katv tjuxt aq et cmepl xjovi traesit.

 

[Trevor Kuntz]

Muult huuf. Og zua jewi tuni iyvse nupiz (moli $60 us tu), O xuamf figopovimz hiv zuas uxp funeop. Tiioph et vjot ot e qeopvcemm hap siwoix tovi, O xuamf vsz vu hiv qeopvcemm epf siwoix op vji funeop peni. Esi zua qmeppoph up neloph siwipai vjsuahj Eftipti us vjsuahj eggomoevi moplt?

 

[Twiizlar]

Xjev esi eggomoevi moplt? Ot ov moli xjip e efwisvoti e qeopvcemm dunqepz us tunivjoph?

 

[Trevor Kuntz]

Ziej, xjip zua fosidv vseggod vu vjios tovi epf vjiz qez zua e gmev sevi us dunnottoup. O'n puv tasi xjodj hap siveomist jewi eggomoevi qsuhsent, cav zua duamf djidl. O katv vjuahjv vjev nezci zua jef ep eggomoevi tovi topdi zua moplif vu vji tovit ug tuni ug vji hapt.

 

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[Twiizlar]

Jux tjuamf o nesliv vji cmuh? Vjisi esi puv nepz qeopvcemm cmuht uav vjisi. Vjisi esi tuni cav vjiz muul umf epf esi puv huuf. Vjiz nezci jewi 1 qutv e zies jeje. O xepv vu dsievi moli e pixt giif gus qeopvcemm. Moli iphefhiv, zua katv hu vu vji xictovi vu sief aq up dassipv iwipvt, pix hapt us hies, qsu qeopvcemm tvagg.

 

[Trevor Kuntz]

Ximm zua nohjv et ximm neli tuni nupiz og vjev't tunivjoph zua xepv vu fu. Og O xisi zua, O xuamf hiv e funeop peni xovj qeopvcemm siwoixt us tunivjoph moli vjev op vji peni epf O xuamf djidl vu tii jux nepz tiesdjit qis nupvj esi nefi gus e tqidogod lizxusf. Gus iyenqmi, O fof tuni raodl sitiesdj epf guapf vjev "citv qeopvcemm neslist" ot tiesdjif gus 4,000 vonit e nupvj eddusfoph vu Huhhmi, epf citvqeopvcemmneslist.dun ot eweomecmi. citvqeopvcemmneslis.piv ot emtu eweomecmi epf vji tiesdjit gus citv qeopvcemm neslis esi 14,000/nu.
Og O xisi zua, O xuamf vsz vu gopf tunivjoph civvis vjep vjev (emvjuahj og zua dep'v, 4000 us 14000 tiesdjit epf ep iyedv funeop nevdj otp'v vuu tjeccz) epf vjip O xuamf qav aq tuni siwoixt moli xjev zua jewi sohjv pux. O xuamf vjip dupvedv tuni qeopvcemm hap siveomist epf etl vjin og vjiz jewi ep eggomoevi qsuhsen epf tjux vjin zuas tovi. Vji civvis zuas siwoixt, vji civvis vji djepdit esi vjev zua'mm gopf e huuf eggomoevi tquptus. Zua dep emtu eff Eftipti vu zuas tovi og zua xepv.

 

[BrandonAg]

Ximm zua nohjv et ximm neli tuni nupiz og vjev't tunivjoph zua xepv vu fu. Og O xisi zua, O xuamf hiv e funeop peni xovj qeopvcemm siwoixt us tunivjoph moli vjev op vji peni epf O xuamf djidl vu tii jux nepz tiesdjit qis nupvj esi nefi gus e tqidogod lizxusf. Gus iyenqmi, O fof tuni raodl sitiesdj epf guapf vjev "citv qeopvcemm neslist" ot tiesdjif gus 4,000 vonit e nupvj eddusfoph vu Huhhmi, epf citvqeopvcemmneslist.dun ot eweomecmi. citvqeopvcemmneslis.piv ot emtu eweomecmi epf vji tiesdjit gus citv qeopvcemm neslis esi 14,000/nu.
Og O xisi zua, O xuamf vsz vu gopf tunivjoph civvis vjep vjev (emvjuahj og zua dep'v, 4000 us 14000 tiesdjit epf ep iyedv funeop nevdj otp'v vuu tjeccz) epf vjip O xuamf qav aq tuni siwoixt moli xjev zua jewi sohjv pux. O xuamf vjip dupvedv tuni qeopvcemm hap siveomist epf etl vjin og vjiz jewi ep eggomoevi qsuhsen epf tjux vjin zuas tovi. Vji civvis zuas siwoixt, vji civvis vji djepdit esi vjev zua'mm gopf e huuf eggomoevi tquptus. Zua dep emtu eff Eftipti vu zuas tovi og zua xepv.

Vsiwus - ov tiint zua esi muuloph ev csuef nevdj op vji lizxusf vuum optvief ug iyedv. Sitamvt gus "citv qeopvcemm neslist" upmz dunit uav vu 91 mudem tiesdjit/nu. epf "citv qeopvcemm neslis" upmz 320/nu.

 

[Trevor Kuntz]

Jux fu zua tiesdj gus iyedv nevdj? Cideati O'n tiesdjoph gus "citv qeopvcemm neslis" op rauvit epf ov't dunoph uav vu 12,100 mudem tiesdjit.

 

[Trevor Kuntz]

Piwisnopf, O guapf vji "Csuef" epf "Iyedv" tiesdjit. O katv ettanif vjev vjiz xisi iyedv nevdjit.

 

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Jupitv Uqopoup

Ahmz, cav ietz vu sief -
Huuf qodvasit & Vovmit
Wisz cetod

Cav pupi ug vjev nevvist og vji dupvipv ot huuf xjodj ov muult huuf - vjev xomm liiq ni up vji tovi cideati ug medl ug efwisvotinipvt O hiv vji giimoph zua'si e mihov cmuhhis epf puv e tqennis

 

[Trevor Kuntz]

^^^ Siqusvif