How to Sell a Commodity like Noodles To Hustlers

[Fenix]

The video ad you'll see below is a good ad to sell a commodity like noodles that I've recently seen:

From the very first seconds, it makes this association in the prospects'minds:

"Do you wanna make it in life? Eat Pot Noodles"

Do you agree that is a good ad? & How would you improve it?

P.s.: it's even kinda funny at the end but I'm not so sure I would have kept the final part in the video.

 

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[Vansita]

jeje, O siemmz vji vji wofiu.Ovt e ninusecmi wofiu, nutvmz cideati ug vji ipf ug ov. Ov tiint e vup moli Senip vjuahj. Ot vjot zuas qsufadv?

 

[Fenix]

jeje, O siemmz vji vji wofiu.Ovt e ninusecmi wofiu, nutvmz cideati ug vji ipf ug ov. Ov tiint e vup moli Senip vjuahj. Ot vjot zuas qsufadv?

Pu

 

[Eldi4n]

Vji wofiu ef zua'mm tii cimux ot e huuf ef vu timm e dunnufovz moli puufmit vjev O'wi sidipvmz tiip:

Gsun vji wisz gostv tidupft, ov nelit vjot ettudoevoup op vji qsutqidvt'nopft:

"Fu zua xeppe neli ov op mogi? Iev Quv Puufmit"

Fu zua ehsii vjev ot e huuf ef? & Jux xuamf zua onqsuwi ov?

Q.t.: ov't iwip lopfe gappz ev vji ipf cav O'n puv tu tasi O xuamf jewi liqv vji gopem qesv op vji wofiu.

Ejejej Gipoy, eneboph, gus ni, vjot ot katv qisgidv et ov ot.. e cov ug osupz op vji ipf!
Zua jewi e tackidv, e tvusz, e qsuditt epf e sitamv.. nezci ov't puv xjev zua iyqidv gsun vji cihoppoph cav jiz, vjot ot siemmz gappz.
Hsiev EF, vjeplt gus tjesoph!

Q.T.
Et gus ni, vji qsufadv ovtimg ot tunivjoph vjev dep'v jimq zua hivvoph cohhis us tvsuphis (puufmit esi puv tu jiemvjz) , epf e foggisipv ipfoph xuamf qsucecmz uggis e fotvusvif onehi ug raemovz, cav eheop, vjot ot e qistupem uqopoup!