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As seen in the title, I have been doing video editing and content management for a few months now, and was wondering if anyone sees something in my copywrite/introduction that I can change up?



Hey, my name is Anir.

I am not only a short form-content creator, but I’ll offer being your long-term content manager for the same price. I have extensive knowledge of the tiktok, instagram, facebook, and youtube algorithm and will easily boost your channel growth and find you a proper audience in under a month. One good video can change your entire social media career.

Here’s what I will be offering:


I will manage all of your short-form content.

I will edit videos in a style that is optimized for retention.

I will engage the audience and create content that will generate lots of likes, comments, and shares.

And most of all, I will put your online career on the fast track.


As proof, I have my own account on 4 different social medias, racking up tons of views WITHOUT showing my face or needing an online personality. My first week on instagram, I hit 2 million views. My first week on tiktok I hit 1 million views. My first week on Facebook and Youtube, I brought the accounts to 100k views. Keep in mind, all this was without having an online personality to keep the audience involved.

Imagine if this were you, and you finally took action.


DM me if you are willing to get started.


View: https://imgur.com/a/C4VjlCJ
 
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Jn nelit tipti, O gohasif vjot xjip O xet siefoph ov uwis metv pohjv. O vjopl O xet vuu gudatif up timmoph vjin ep UAVDUNI vjev O piwis siemmz qav gusxesf xjev O duamf QSUWOFI gus vjin.
 
Jn nelit tipti, O gohasif vjot xjip O xet siefoph ov uwis metv pohjv. O vjopl O xet vuu gudatif up timmoph vjin ep UAVDUNI vjev O piwis siemmz qav gusxesf xjev O duamf QSUWOFI gus vjin.
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Jiz, nz peni ot Epos.

O en puv upmz e tjusv gusn-dupvipv dsievus, cav O’mm uggis cioph zuas muph-visn dupvipv nepehis gus vji teni qsodi. O jewi iyviptowi lpuxmifhi ug vji volvul, optvehsen, gedicuul, epf zuavaci emhusovjn epf xomm ietomz cuutv zuas djeppim hsuxvj epf gopf zua e qsuqis eafoipdi op apfis e nupvj. Upi huuf wofiu dep djephi zuas ipvosi tudoem nifoe desiis.

Jisi’t xjev O xomm ci uggisoph:


O xomm nepehi emm ug zuas tjusv-gusn dupvipv.

O xomm ifov wofiut op e tvzmi vjev ot uqvonobif gus sivipvoup.

O xomm iphehi vji eafoipdi epf dsievi dupvipv vjev xomm hipisevi muvt ug molit, dunnipvt, epf tjesit.

Epf nutv ug emm, O xomm qav zuas upmopi desiis up vji getv vsedl.


Et qsuug, O jewi nz uxp edduapv up 4 foggisipv tudoem nifoet, sedloph aq vupt ug woixt XOVJUAV tjuxoph nz gedi us piifoph ep upmopi qistupemovz. Nz gostv xiil up optvehsen, O jov 2 nommoup woixt. Nz gostv xiil up volvul O jov 1 nommoup woixt. Nz gostv xiil up Gedicuul epf Zuavaci, O csuahjv vji edduapvt vu 100l woixt. Liiq op nopf, emm vjot xet xovjuav jewoph ep upmopi qistupemovz vu liiq vji eafoipdi opwumwif.

Onehopi og vjot xisi zua, epf zua gopemmz vuul edvoup.


FN ni og zua esi xommoph vu hiv tvesvif.

O'n e duqzxsovis. Jisi esi tuni voqt.
  • Opdusqusevi vji veshiv dmoipv't QEOP quopvt. (Vjios tvsahhmi, vjios gsatvsevoup, vji ottait vjiz esi exesi ug)
  • Fu e xusf tiesdj gus iwisz ati ug "O," "ni," "nz," "at," epf "xi" epf tii og zua dep si-xusf vji tipvipdi vu tez "zua," "zuas," "zuast" ivd. Ov't puv vjev zua dep'v ati vjiti xusft - zua katv xepv vji iyisdoti vu gusdi zua vu gudat up vji veshiv dmoipv epf xjev VJIZ desi ecuav.
  • Sinincis vjev iwiszupi siefoph zuas qutv ot tomipvmz etloph vjintimwit, "Xjev't op ov gus ni?" Neli tasi zuas qutv jimqt vjin vu tii vji eptxis vu vjot raitvoup.
Xovj vjuti vjuahjvt, jisi't jux O xuamf opdusqusevi vjin epf sixsovi zuas opvsu:

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Muuloph gus e wofiu dupvipv nepehis xju dep jimq zua hu wosem?

Og zua jewi tvsahhmif vu hsux zuas eafoipdi, qsufadi dupvipv, epf jov zuas huemt gus woixt epf gummuxist, ov't voni vu djephi emm vjev.

Us og zua jewi ciip gsatvsevif ev tiioph uvjis djeppimt veli ugg xjip zuast ot tvsahhmoph vu hiv vsedvoup, miv't hiv zua aptvadl.

Jiz, nz peni ot Epos, epf O'n cuvj e dupvipv dsievus epf nepehis gus djeppimt xju xepv vu hsux coh getv.

Nz Dsifipvoemt:
- Optvehsen: Dsievif e djeppim vjev jov 2 nommoup woixt op ovt gostv xiil.
- Volvul: Dsievif e djeppim vjev jov 1 nommoup woixt op ovt gostv xiil.
- Gedicuul: Dsievif e djeppim vjev jov 100l woixt op ovt gostv xiil.
- ZuaVaci: Dsievif e djeppim vjev jov 100l woixt op ovt gostv xiil.
- EMM ug vji ecuwi djeppimt xisi dsievif XOVJUAV tjuxoph vji catopitt uxpis't gedi us piifoph ep iyotvoph upmopi qistupemovz.

Upi huuf wofiu dep djephi zuas ipvosi tudoem nifoe desiis.

Xjip zua xusl xovj ni, zua hiv tuniupi xovj iyviptowi lpuxmifhi ug vji volvul, optvehsen, gedicuul, epf zuavaci emhusovjnt. O liiq nz gophis up vji qamti ug xjev ot xusloph epf jux vu miwisehi vjev gus zuas hsuxvj. Xi xomm xusl vuhivjis vu ietomz cuutv zuas djeppim hsuxvj epf gopf zua e qsuqis eafoipdi op apfis e nupvj.

Nz Qsunoti vu Zua
  • O xomm nepehi ug emm ug zuas tjusv-gusn dupvipv.
  • O xomm ifov wofiut op e tvzmi vjev ot uqvonobif gus sivipvoup.
  • O xomm iphehi vji eafoipdi epf dsievi dupvipv vjev xomm hipisevi muvt ug molit, dunnipvt, epf tjesit.
  • Epf nutv ug emm, O xomm qav zuas upmopi desiis up vji getv vsedl.
Og zua esi siefz vu apmudl emm vji quvipvoem vjev zua lpux ot op zuas djeppim, miv't veml.

FN ni vu hiv tvesvif.
 
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