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Johnny1975

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Hi, I have a landing page which looks fine to me but my subscriber rate is terrible. Right now I have 1 subscriber. I've been using google adwords for some time now and I think my campaign is ok, and I'm getting plenty of impressions and a click rate of 2-6% (it's closer to 2% at the moment). I also think my ad is pretty good, so I think the problem is my landing page.

I think I've done lots of things right (i.e. keep it simple, no links, no distractions, keep the copy relevant, etc), and I've read a lot of advice for how to do a landing page and I've followed it all to the best of my knowledge. But I'm stuck and I wouldn't be surprised if there's something major that needs improving, something that I've missed, so another pair of eyes would probably help me see what that might be.

I wonder if it's possible to either put a link to it, or at least show a screenshot of it (I'll crop out the link if nec) and maybe someone could take a look at it and tell me if there's anything that needs improving.
 
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