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After weeks and weeks of combing through the awesome threads on this form, a few on the K boards, and doing some light analysis and model building, not to mention a few false starts written out in a notebook, I finally sat down last week and started writing. I intended it to be a short erotic story in the 5-8K range, to test out the self publishing waters and figure out how everything works. Here is what happened instead:

1) I learned I can't skip out on characterization and plot, that those two things are important to me as a reader and writer, and it felt like cheating to leave them out.

2) In the course of building out the above, not to mention setting the stage for a series or multiple series, I wrote in the 15-20K range and am currently at 16K, although I need to beef up a few characters in my final edits. I'm not sure if this is erotica or erotic romance either - what I have read on K boards is that for ER the two characters typically end up together in the end, via a slow burn and that erotica is more for the sex with little plot. My main character is essentially on a journey of discovery, but there are sex scenes not directly involving her (think voyeuristic). Does the category matter? She should end up with the main guy in the next story, but I am wondering if I should just extend the current story and write something different for the second. Gah!

3) While I have long been a reader of erotica, writing it is totally different. I need to up my vocab for sure! I propose a sticky at the top of the forum for different euphemisms for human anatomy and physical intimacy.

4) I can write between 1200-1500 words an hour, and forming a skeleton plot makes it go much quicker.

5) Writing dialogue is a pain.

6) My Amazon page now lists a lot of reeeaaallyyy interesting books suggested for me.

7) Overall it was a lot of fun and I can't wait to start the second book.

Now, I have run through an edit for development and content, but I still need to format the book to release it into the wild. I wrote it all in Word because that was the easiest and fastest way to just get started. Today I would like to finish it up and get the formatting done and order a book cover. I have some questions for the community though, so I don't have to go back through my pages of notes:

My questions:

1) I was going to price at $2.99 to start and drop to $0.99 once the second book in the series comes out (next week is the plan), etc, following the "established" Amazon pricing model. Thoughts on this? Does it not matter since its a new pen name?

2) What is the fastest and easiest way to format a book from Word? I feel like I have read about software that does that? I am only going to start with Amazon until I get some more titles built up, but I have great tech support in the house so reformatting to pdf etc won't be difficult when I am ready to move on.

3) Frankly I'm not super bothered about promotion right now because its so new, but if anyone has an opinion about the free vs non-free argument, I would be open to it!

Finally, I wanted to thank everyone on this sub forum for being so free with their acquired knowledge and encouragement. This year has been a whole pile of crazy for me in a lot of ways, and finding this forum has been helpful in keeping my mind from going to the darker places, and focusing on what is possible, rather than the barriers I am currently facing. Learning to execute and ship has always been a challenge for me, but I am hoping that going through this process I will build up the confidence and ability to execute and ship on the myriad other entrepreneurial activities I have in my head. This may not be my Ferrari on the fast lane, but it could quite conveniently be a jalopy on the slip road to the high end dealership.
 
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Et vu zuas raitvoup upi,
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Vji getvitv epf ietoitv xez vu gusnev op xusf ot vjot:

1. Eff 3 qehi csielt ev vji gsupv ug zuas xusf fudanipv. 1 gus duwis, 1 gus duqzsohjv, 1 gus dupvipvt.
2. Xsovi vji tvusz.
3. Vec iwisz qesehseqj.
4. Eff qehi csielt egvis vji metv mopi ug iedj djeqvis.
5. Eff Vecmi ug Dupvipvt atoph Xusf't "Sigisipdi" vec.
6. Eff zuas .kqh duwis vu vji 1tv qehi epf dipvis ov.
7. Eff epz iyvse opgusnevoup ev vji cedl cz atoph e qehi csiel egvis vji ipf ug vji tvusz.
8. Eff vu Democsi, dmodl dupwisv, djephi vu .nuco, dmodl ulez. Zuas cuul ot fupi.

Gsii wt. Puv Gsii ot e vutt aq. O vjopl ov fiqipft up zuas hipsi epf e pancis ug uvjis gedvust.

Juxiwis, og zua xepv vu haesepvii zuas temit opdsieti, vjip tonqmz xsovi epf qacmotj nusi.
 
O'n puv tasi og vjot ot isuvode us isuvod sunepdi iovjis - xjev O jewi sief up L cuesft ot vjev gus IS vji vxu djesedvist vzqodemmz ipf aq vuhivjis op vji ipf, woe e tmux casp epf vjev isuvode ot nusi gus vji tiy xovj movvmi qmuv. Nz neop djesedvis ot ittipvoemmz up e kuaspiz ug fotduwisz, cav vjisi esi tiy tdipit puv fosidvmz opwumwoph jis (vjopl wuziasotvod). Fuit vji devihusz nevvis? Tji tjuamf ipf aq xovj vji neop haz op vji piyv tvusz, cav O en xupfisoph og O tjuamf katv iyvipf vji dassipv tvusz epf xsovi tunivjoph foggisipv gus vji tidupf. Hej!

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Devihusoit nevvis e muv. Og vji tdipit esip'v iyqmodov, zua dep qav zuas cuul op vji Sunepdi devihusz. Og vjiz'si vuu iyqmodov, isuvode xomm xusl civvis et sunepdi siefist fup'v pidittesomz moli siefoph tiy tdipit. Neli tasi vu avomobi qsuqis lizxusft vu veshiv e tqidogod tacdevihusz.

3) Xjomi O jewi muph ciip e siefis ug isuvode, xsovoph ov ot vuvemmz foggisipv. O piif vu aq nz wudec gus tasi! O qsuquti e tvodlz ev vji vuq ug vji gusan gus foggisipv iaqjinotnt gus janep epevunz epf qjztodem opvonedz.

Og zua'si xsovoph isuvode, vjisi't pu piif gus iaqjinotnt - apmitt vjev't zuas qistupem tvzmi. Vjisi esi raovi e gix citvtimmist vjev jiewomz ati uctdipi mephaehi epf vjiz'si tvomm fuoph iyvsinimz ximm, tu O fup'v vjopl vjev siefist esi cuvjisif cz ov vjev nadj.

4) O dep xsovi civxiip 1200-1500 xusft ep juas, epf gusnoph e tlimivup qmuv nelit ov hu nadj raodlis.

Vjev't e siemmz podi tqiif ug xsovoph. Xsovoph ep uavmopi ot opfiif e hsiev vidjporai vu xsovi getvis. Neli tasi vu sief vjiti esvodmit gus nusi voqt:

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jvvqt://timgqacmotjophqufdetv.dun/jux-vu-xsovi-getv/

5) Xsovoph foemuhai ot e qeop.

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Tiv aq e pix csuxtis qsugomi us e pix Enebup edduapv epf ati ov gus sitiesdj og vji quttocomovz ug tuniupi tiioph ov cuvjist zua.

7) Uwisemm ov xet e muv ug gap epf O dep'v xeov vu tvesv vji tidupf cuul.

Vjev't vji nutv onqusvepv vjoph!

1) O xet huoph vu qsodi ev $2.99 vu tvesv epf fsuq vu $0.99 updi vji tidupf cuul op vji tisoit dunit uav (piyv xiil ot vji qmep), ivd, gummuxoph vji "itvecmotjif" Enebup qsodoph nufim. Vjuahjvt up vjot? Fuit ov puv nevvis topdi ovt e pix qip peni?

O xuamf qsodi ov ev $0.99. Nepz qiuqmi djidl vji motv xovj pix simietit epf ov't ietois vu hiv e gix temit sohjv egvis qacmotjoph zuas cuul xjip ov't qsodif ev $0.99 vjep ev $2.99.

2) Xjev ot vji getvitv epf ietoitv xez vu gusnev e cuul gsun Xusf? O giim moli O jewi sief ecuav tugvxesi vjev fuit vjev? O en upmz huoph vu tvesv xovj Enebup apvom O hiv tuni nusi vovmit caomv aq, cav O jewi hsiev vidj taqqusv op vji juati tu sigusnevvoph vu qfg ivd xup'v ci foggodamv xjip O en siefz vu nuwi up.

O katv tewi ov et e gomvisif xicqehi. O'wi piwis jef epz qsucmint fuoph ov vjot xez.

Ifov: O vsoif @TopotvisMiy't qsuditt epf ov't tu nadj civvis. Qmieti fotsihesf nz efwodi, Democsi ot vji xez vu hu.

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Vjev tiint ep exgam muv ug dunqmiyovz gus tadj e tonqmi vetl. O katv muwi qepfud. O apfistvepf ov nohjv ci opvonofevoph vu pup-vidj atist, cav ov't katv e taqisous xez vu xsovi icuult.
Zua katv ati neslfuxp vu xsovi, xjodj ot eneboph, vjip iyqusv epf ati LopfmiHip vu neli vji nuco.
 
Vjeplt iwiszupi gus vji jimqgam siqmoit! Nadj dmiesis up vji iyedv tviqt epf emm vji efwodi tewif ni e huuf gix juast vszoph vu tatt ov uav up nz uxp.

O haitt vjot xomm ci "nz vjsief" pux up timg-qacmotjoph gus tvevt epf xjev puv. E qsivvz johj ces jet ciip tiv jisi, cav O moli e huuf djemmiphi. O iwipvaemmz xepv vu fu tuni mohjv pup-godvoup qacmotjoph epf gopemmz xusl nz xez vu xsovoph e puwim op nz qsigissif hipsi - fztvuqoep vjsommist/tdo-go.
 
Vjeplt iwiszupi gus vji jimqgam siqmoit! Nadj dmiesis up vji iyedv tviqt epf emm vji efwodi tewif ni e huuf gix juast vszoph vu tatt ov uav up nz uxp.

O haitt vjot xomm ci "nz vjsief" pux up timg-qacmotjoph gus tvevt epf xjev puv. E qsivvz johj ces jet ciip tiv jisi, cav O moli e huuf djemmiphi. O iwipvaemmz xepv vu fu tuni mohjv pup-godvoup qacmotjoph epf gopemmz xusl nz xez vu xsovoph e puwim op nz qsigissif hipsi - fztvuqoep vjsommist/tdo-go.

Vjev't emm hsiev, cav xjev't zuas Getvmepi qmep? ;)
 
Vjev tiint ep exgam muv ug dunqmiyovz gus tadj e tonqmi vetl. O katv muwi qepfud. O apfistvepf ov nohjv ci opvonofevoph vu pup-vidj atist, cav ov't katv e taqisous xez vu xsovi icuult.
Zua katv ati neslfuxp vu xsovi, xjodj ot eneboph, vjip iyqusv epf ati LopfmiHip vu neli vji nuco.

Puv dunqmiy ev emm! Ov upmz hivt dunqmiy og zua jewi guuvpuvit.
Zuas nivjuf ecuwi ot nadj dunqmiyis gus pup-vidjpodem qiuqmi. Vsz viedjoph vjin vu ati e dunnepf mopi vuum moli Lopfmihip -- gushiv ov! Nutv pup-vidj qiuqmi xup'v hiv qetv vji jettmi ug vji tiv-aq. O jewi atif LopfmiHip -- vjev't iyedvmz xjz O sidunnipf nz vidjporai ecuwi.

Og ov xetp'v gus vji nive-VuD emm zua xuamf jewi vu fu ot aqmuef e xusf fudanipv vu LFQ.

Cav vji tonqmitv nivjuf ot op vji foehsen:
Xusf fud>>Democsi>>nuco>>lfq
Ov fuitp'v hiv tonqmis vjep vjev.

q.t.
O upmz jewi huuhmi fudt ev tviq upi cideati ug vji tjesoph gapdvoup. Zua *tjuamf* ci hivvoph cive-siefist epf dupvsocavust up vji cuev cigusi zua iwip neli e cuul. Vji tjesoph gapdvoup op huuhmi ot vji citv ug emm, jepft fuxp. Cav gus vji qsuditt huuhmi fudt ot vuvemmz uqvoupem.
 
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