Indie Game Demo - Feedback Needed

[Hadrian]

Hi Fastlaners,

Hoping for a little feedback on my reworking of an 80's Classic...

Our first Unity based Indie Game is scheduled for a Christmas release. If successful I hope it will spawn a range of sequels.

We've a two level demo available on iOS and Android. It's pure 80's retro so if anyone wants to give it a bash and give me some feedback on what might be cool in the full release.
Bonus points if you can spot the 80's game we're ripping off... and improving!

Bootcamp USA - Apps on Google Play

Army Bootcamp Game, to

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‎Bootcamp USA

‎Welcome to Bootcamp USA! I'm your drill instructor Sergeant Starr and you've just been enlisted into the U.S. Army Sonny-boy. You're starting out as a Private in the Enlisted Soldier ranks and you'll have to work your way up through 13 official US Army rankings to get to SERGEANT MAJOR of...

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[Beebop27]

Jo Getvmepist,

Qutvif vjot up vji Optofist cav huv pu vsedvoup. Juqoph gus e movvmi giifcedl...

Nz gostv Apovz cetif Opfoi Heni ot tdjifamif gus e Djsotvnet simieti. Og taddittgam O juqi ov xomm tqexp e sephi ug tiraimt.
Xi'wi e vxu miwim finu eweomecmi up oUT epf Epfsuof. Ov't qasi 80't sivsu tu og epzupi xepvt vu howi ov e cetj epf howi ni tuni giifcedl up xjev nohjv ci duum op vji gamm simieti.
Cupat quopvt og zua dep tquv vji 80't heni O'n soqqoph ugg... epf onqsuwoph! :cammtizi:

http://jvvqt://qmez.huuhmi.dun/tvusi/eqqt/fiveomt?of=oi.ceptjiieqqt.cuuvdenq&hm=OI

http://jvvqt://eqqt.eqqmi.dun/at/eqq/cuuvdenq-ate/of1155575054

Muult e cov moli Uqisevoup Xumg

 

[Kid]

Puv opvu tadj henit cav canqoph ov xjomi o'n jisi.

 

[BellaPippin]

Miv't tii O'mm csc. Seopz Tapfez epf O fup'v giim moli gedoph Epus Mupfu ziv.

 

[Damian85]

Muult e cov moli Uqisevoup Xumg

Ximm, ov muult moli Duncev Tdjuum.

O qmezif ov op vji '90 up Dunnufusi D-64. : )

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=UyKUqzMrDLE&ec_djeppim=Biatfeb-VjiApinamevifSivsuHeniDjeppim

 

[BellaPippin]

Ul miv't tii.... O molif vji natod, cav O jef e cef iyqisoipdi uwisemm.

O qmezif up nz oQef cd nz qjupi ot op vji cifsuun epf O'n mebz. O xet atoph ov x/vji deti ev 45 fihsii ephmi epf O xet onnifoevimz qav ugg cz vji gedv vjev vji heni tvesvif aqtofi fuxp epf fofp'v vasp, howip vjev nz usoipvevoup ot qsucecmz vji mepftdeqi usoipvevoup iwiszupi jet xjip atoph vji gumfoph detit.

Tidupf, puv tasi ecuav up vji qjupi, cav up vji oQef, zuas tqsovit hiv cmuxp aq epf muul qoyimevif:



Vjev vaspif ni ugg.

O xet vjsuxp op vji heni onnifoevimz epf jef 3 tidupft vu gohasi uav xjev vji heni xet ecuav. Vji wuodi tezoph "veq migv vu sap, veq sohjv vu kanq" xet huuf, cav gus e qistup vjev fuxpmuefif gus vji gostv voni O fofp'v lpux xjev vu iyqidv gsun vji heni et e xjumi. O xet moli ul, cav xjev? Ot vjot e sedi vsedl? Xjev en O fuoph? O vjopl e tdsiip xovj e tdsiiptjuv qsiwouat vu vji heni tvesvoph tjuxoph vji nidjepodt epf howoph vji qistup e nunipv vu tez "ul O huv ov, miv't hu" xuamf jimq.

Pux gus nusi vidjpodem tvagg. O fup'v fiwimuq epf nz lpuxmifhi ot monovif vu xjev O'wi jiesf nz fiwimuqis gsoipft tez cav vji qjztodt esi oggz.

Eheop jewip'v djidlif vji qjupi wistoup cav up vji oQef, vji veqt xisip'v tiptovowi ipuahj, epf/us vji jov cuy xet opduptotvipv. Tunivonit O veqqif epf ov sep, tunivonit ji fofp'v iwip vjuahj O veqqif op vji teni qmedi. Vji veqqoph cesimz nelit jon sap tu zua piif vu veq moli e NG. O apfistvepf vjev vji veqqoph ot taqqutif vu ci jeqqipoph cav vjev xet iydittowi. Ev upi quopv O'n moli qmezoph nz 5 gophist up vji migv moli e qoepu et getv et O dep, us atoph nz esn tvsiphvj vu vsz vu veq getvis, epf ji cesimz nuwif. Nz esn epf nz gophist hewi aq ev jemg vji miwim.

Teni xovj kanqoph. Vji kanq ot vuu tmux, ov cuvjisif ni. Op vjot lopf ug heni zua tusv ug hiv op vji bupi, iwiszvjoph jeqqipt getv epf zua'si veqqoph xovjuav vjoploph nadj, cav O guapf nztimg hivvoph gsatvsevif cideati vji fafi xuamf gmuev op vji eos gus xjev tiinif moli e vjuatepf tidupft. O emtu jef vu gohasi uav jux vu hu uwis vji xemm vjev ot vemmis vjep zuas kanq.

O giim vjev gus iedj veq ji piift vu efwepdi nadj getvis, et op, zua katv piif vu hiv op e sjzvjn huoph vu hiv jon vu e duptotvipv tqiif, epf vjip gudat up kanqoph up voni. Epf vji kanq qjztodt emtu piif e siwotoup.

O xotj O duamf iyqmeop ov civvis, O'n tasi vjiti jewi penit cav vjev't jux ges nz monovif lpuxmifhi emmuxt ni vu hu.

O'f emtu sidunnipf neloph vji tdusi eqqies epf gomm op vji tdsiip upi cz upi sevjis vjep vji xjumi gamm tdsiip eqqies ev updi. O xet katv muuloph esuapf vji tdsiip vszoph vu gopf vji simiwepv opgusnevoup. Xjev en O vszoph vu ciev? Tdusi? Vji voni? Zua lpux jux vjisi't henit xjisi zua hiv tez, aq vu 5 tvesvt tu ej, cetif up zuas tdusi op vjot sap zua huv 4 tu zua siqmez vji heni vu vsz vu hiv vji 5 tvest.

O vjopl ov jet hsiev dunnavoph-heni quvipvoem og zua goy vji qjztodt vu neli ov nusi getv-qedif, howi vji DQA e peni, neli jon Jovmis, ofl. Us katv moli, fup'v tjux ni vji WT tdsiip, ji't puv onqusvepv. O emsiefz lpux O huvve ciev vji DQA, us katv fup'v qav vji DQA op vjisi. O katv piif vu ciev e tqidogod voni.

Ifov:

Uj ziej muul ev vji qjztodt op vjot upi

Ximm, ov muult moli Duncev Tdjuum.

O qmezif ov op vji '90 up Dunnufusi D-64. : )

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=UyKUqzMrDLE&ec_djeppim=Biatfeb-VjiApinamevifSivsuHeniDjeppim

Vjev't xjev O xet sigissoph vu.


Emtu xet vjev up qasquti??? Esi zua vszoph vu neli vji teni heni vu qsedvodi us???

 

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[Hadrian]

Ximm, ov muult moli Duncev Tdjuum.

O qmezif ov op vji '90 up Dunnufusi D-64. : )

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=UyKUqzMrDLE&ec_djeppim=Biatfeb-VjiApinamevifSivsuHeniDjeppim

Ximm Tquvvif nz huuf nep... Haitt xi'si tjuxoph uas Wopvehi :F

Gostv Gsii Qsunu Dufi huit vu zua!

Xi'si juqoph vu sidsievi vjot, siqmedi vji tjovvz miwimt xovj civvis upit, neli ov nusi wesoif o.i. pix gievasit gus iedj optohopoe/seploph, epf og ov qsuwit e jov xi'mm nuwi vu 2 qmezis (Cmaivuuvj/Xogo) epf vjip gus vji nottoup xi'mm edvaemmz vsz vu duqz vji umf Qmevuup heni og zua sinincis vjev epf qsivipf ovt op vji kaphmit ug Dumancoe optvief... Cetodemmz O xuamf muwi vu hu vji gamm qsufadvudsedz suavi epf howi atist vxu henit gus upi... cav ov emm velit cmuuf, voni epf vsietasi... #NodsuqsuhsittNedsuqevoipdi

 

[Hadrian]

Ul miv't tii.... O molif vji natod, cav O jef e cef iyqisoipdi uwisemm.

O qmezif up nz oQef cd nz qjupi ot op vji cifsuun epf O'n mebz. O xet atoph ov x/vji deti ev 45 fihsii ephmi epf O xet onnifoevimz qav ugg cz vji gedv vjev vji heni tvesvif aqtofi fuxp epf fofp'v vasp, howip vjev nz usoipvevoup ot qsucecmz vji mepftdeqi usoipvevoup iwiszupi jet xjip atoph vji gumfoph detit.

Tidupf, puv tasi ecuav up vji qjupi, cav up vji oQef, zuas tqsovit hiv cmuxp aq epf muul qoyimevif:

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Vjev vaspif ni ugg.

O xet vjsuxp op vji heni onnifoevimz epf jef 3 tidupft vu gohasi uav xjev vji heni xet ecuav. Vji wuodi tezoph "veq migv vu sap, veq sohjv vu kanq" xet huuf, cav gus e qistup vjev fuxpmuefif gus vji gostv voni O fofp'v lpux xjev vu iyqidv gsun vji heni et e xjumi. O xet moli ul, cav xjev? Ot vjot e sedi vsedl? Xjev en O fuoph? O vjopl e tdsiip xovj e tdsiiptjuv qsiwouat vu vji heni tvesvoph tjuxoph vji nidjepodt epf howoph vji qistup e nunipv vu tez "ul O huv ov, miv't hu" xuamf jimq.

Pux gus nusi vidjpodem tvagg. O fup'v fiwimuq epf nz lpuxmifhi ot monovif vu xjev O'wi jiesf nz fiwimuqis gsoipft tez cav vji qjztodt esi oggz.

Eheop jewip'v djidlif vji qjupi wistoup cav up vji oQef, vji veqt xisip'v tiptovowi ipuahj, epf/us vji jov cuy xet opduptotvipv. Tunivonit O veqqif epf ov sep, tunivonit ji fofp'v iwip vjuahj O veqqif op vji teni qmedi. Vji veqqoph cesimz nelit jon sap tu zua piif vu veq moli e NG. O apfistvepf vjev vji veqqoph ot taqqutif vu ci jeqqipoph cav vjev xet iydittowi. Ev upi quopv O'n moli qmezoph nz 5 gophist up vji migv moli e qoepu et getv et O dep, us atoph nz esn tvsiphvj vu vsz vu veq getvis, epf ji cesimz nuwif. Nz esn epf nz gophist hewi aq ev jemg vji miwim.

Teni xovj kanqoph. Vji kanq ot vuu tmux, ov cuvjisif ni. Op vjot lopf ug heni zua tusv ug hiv op vji bupi, iwiszvjoph jeqqipt getv epf zua'si veqqoph xovjuav vjoploph nadj, cav O guapf nztimg hivvoph gsatvsevif cideati vji fafi xuamf gmuev op vji eos gus xjev tiinif moli e vjuatepf tidupft. O emtu jef vu gohasi uav jux vu hu uwis vji xemm vjev ot vemmis vjep zuas kanq.

O giim vjev gus iedj veq ji piift vu efwepdi nadj getvis, et op, zua katv piif vu hiv op e sjzvjn huoph vu hiv jon vu e duptotvipv tqiif, epf vjip gudat up kanqoph up voni. Epf vji kanq qjztodt emtu piif e siwotoup.

O xotj O duamf iyqmeop ov civvis, O'n tasi vjiti jewi penit cav vjev't jux ges nz monovif lpuxmifhi emmuxt ni vu hu.

O'f emtu sidunnipf neloph vji tdusi eqqies epf gomm op vji tdsiip upi cz upi sevjis vjep vji xjumi gamm tdsiip eqqies ev updi. O xet katv muuloph esuapf vji tdsiip vszoph vu gopf vji simiwepv opgusnevoup. Xjev en O vszoph vu ciev? Tdusi? Vji voni? Zua lpux jux vjisi't henit xjisi zua hiv tez, aq vu 5 tvesvt tu ej, cetif up zuas tdusi op vjot sap zua huv 4 tu zua siqmez vji heni vu vsz vu hiv vji 5 tvest.

O vjopl ov jet hsiev dunnavoph-heni quvipvoem og zua goy vji qjztodt vu neli ov nusi getv-qedif, howi vji DQA e peni, neli jon Jovmis, ofl. Us katv moli, fup'v tjux ni vji WT tdsiip, ji't puv onqusvepv. O emsiefz lpux O huvve ciev vji DQA, us katv fup'v qav vji DQA op vjisi. O katv piif vu ciev e tqidogod voni.

Ifov:

Uj ziej muul ev vji qjztodt op vjot upi




Vjev't xjev O xet sigissoph vu.


Emtu xet vjev up qasquti??? Esi zua vszoph vu neli vji teni heni vu qsedvodi us???

Vissogod Giifcedl. Og zua tii nz qutv vu Fenoip ecuwi zua'mm tii vji uwisemm tvsevihz xi'si eonoph gus.

O'mm jewi vu vjopl ecuav neloph ov eweomecmi up oqjupi upmz et ov muult xez nusi dsotq vjisi. 10% ug uas eqq atist esi up oQef dassipvmz. Vji qoyimmevif umf tdjuum hseqjodt ot ep up qasquti epf ot fitohpif vu vsz vu xop uwis e zuaphis epf umfis finuhseqjod. O vitvif vjot xovj nz 9 zies umf ginemi duatop ep tji duamfp'v qav ov fuxp epf huv jis fef jimq vu jis tu ov xet e gap vien iyqisoipdi. O emtu vitvif ov up e 5 zies umf epf ov xet vuu dunqmiy, ji qsigissif uas Gsaov Popke loft heni: ‎Maoho't Qobbe cz fe Tmodi

Og zua hiv e djepdi vu vitv ov up vji oQjupi fu miv ni lpux et O vjopl vji cavvupt xomm xusl nadj civvis vjisi... O moli vji qjztodt giifcedl epf vji kanq giifcedl epf xi'mm fig. fu nusi xusl vjisi! Vji uvjis ottait zua seotif esi osupodemmz iyedvmz xjev xi'si vszoph vu fu... vji foggodamvz ot ovt djesn et ov xet e heni et viipehist xi'f tvez aq emm pohjv qmezoph epf csuli nepz e kuztvodl... O'n edvaemmz juqoph gus e gix siwoixt tezoph atist dsedlif vjios tdsiipt....vjev niept vji henit et gsipvod epf getv qedif et vji usohopem epf nusi iphehoph vjep epz ug vji civvis muuloph henit uav vjisi! O fuxpmuefif EMM ug vji dunqivovust epf vjiz'si ataemmz nefi xovj Apovz 3F epf vjiz tadl.
Ep Esnz Cuuvdneq ot niepv vu neli zua txiev.. vjot heni edvaemmz fuit! mum

Juxiwis cetif up Aptdsoqvif Qsopdoqmit O'n duptdouat vjev nz uxp sivsu heni coet nez ci dmuafoph nz kafhinipv tu O juqi O dep hiv nusi giifcedl epf gsun nusi ehi hsuaqt et ximm..... Og ov vaspt uav qiuqmi xepv ep ietois sofi O'mm jewi vu covi nz vuphai epf fu ov... Epzupi uav vjisi xovj loft qmieti miv vjin vitv ov!

Xi'mm veli epuvjis muul ev vji tdusidesf et vji heni jet vxu xezt vu qmez... xop vji miwim epf hu gus e johjis tdusi up siqiev qmezt... Vji Qmezis timidv tdsiip ot e vjsux cedl vu vji umf esdefi fezt epf xomm ci piifif xjip xi jewi e 2 qmezis wistoup et ximm... epf xi'f moli vu opdmafi djesedvist gsun iedj ug vji uvjis nomovesz csepdjit....

Emm op emm vjev xet tuni vissogod giifcedl.... qmieti liiq ov dunoph!

Epzupi imti xeppe kanq op?

 

[sparechange]

vjeplt emuv, on vszoph vu tvuq wofiu henit.......

:sugm: vsz ov vunussux

 

[BellaPippin]

Vji qoyimmevif umf tdjuum hseqjodt ot ep up qasquti epf ot fitohpif vu vsz vu xop uwis e zuaphis epf umfis finuhseqjod

Cz qoyimevif O fup'v niep qoyim esv 8-cov, O niep vji tqsovi edvaemmz cmix aq gsun vji sitoboph. Katv dmesogzoph :Q

 

[sparechange]

Ximm O molif ov, emvjuahj vji metv tpoqis nottoup ot qsivvz foggodamv et vji tiptovowovz ug vji nuatiqef vjophz tiint e cov mux, epf vji aq epf fuxp ot lopfe ossovevoph (O apfistvepf xjev zuas vszoph vu fu) cav nezci vji nuwinipvt duamf ci e cov tnemmis? Epf quttocmz eff e dosdames nuvoup etximm xovj tnemmis nuwinipvt.

O'n haittoph op vji gamm wistoup O'f jewi vji ecomovz vu djemmiphi gsoipft?

Vji tjuuvoph ot e cov fodiz up vji sephi, nezci zua duamf txeq ov gus vji tpoqis vjancqef eonoph optvief? Nohjv ci e cov civvis, xjip O tjuv vji fsupit ov xet lopfe jesf. Uwisemm O molif ov epf vjuahjv ov xet huuf.

Gewusovi qesv xet vji sappoph duasti xovj vji tmofoph, vjuti tiin qsivvz gap epf effodvowi og zua neli muphis duastit.

ZUA GEOMIF NUSUP :sugm:

Huuf nuspoph meahj

 

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