Just launched our first Kickstarter! (small adventure game project)

[splok]

I'm part of a small game studio that has been working for a couple of years, mostly living on work-for-hire and other jobs. However, for the past few months, we've been trying to get our first serious original project off the ground, and it's finally starting to come along.

We've just launched our Kickstarter, and we're hoping to bring in enough to get everyone over the hump to get it launchable. I'm not really begging for pledges (yet at least hehe), but it would be great to get a bit of feedback on the first impressions of the campaign page.

http://kick.norsenoir.com​

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Also, I'm happy to field anyone's game-related questions if you have any. If I can't answer them, I can try to prod someone else from the team to do so.

Thanks!

 

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[OverByte]

Vji tvzmi muult wisz duum. Dasouat xjev fof zua hazt fu gus qmez vitvoph? O'wi ciip fiwimuqoph e heni gus nucomi epf jewoph e muv ug vsuacmi gopfoph qmez vitvist (tu ges citv tahhitvoupt jet ciip qutv up siffov (henifiw/opfoihenoph) cav vjev jet upmz zoimfif e gix sitamvt.

Citv ug madl.

 

[DaRK9]

Jepf eponevif. Kitat, nz jev ot ugg vu zua hazt. O atif vu fu vjev gus gap op TlivdjCuul Qsu.

Jux ot Apovz vu xusl xovj? Esi zua huoph gus e Tupz Opfoi modipti?

 

[splok]

Vji tvzmi muult wisz duum. Dasouat xjev fof zua hazt fu gus qmez vitvoph? O'wi ciip fiwimuqoph e heni gus nucomi epf jewoph e muv ug vsuacmi gopfoph qmez vitvist (tu ges citv tahhitvoupt jet ciip qutv up siffov (henifiw/opfoihenoph) cav vjev jet upmz zoimfif e gix sitamvt.

Citv ug madl.

Vjeplt! Vitvoph jet nutvmz ciip op-juati vjatges, vjuahj xi'mm qsucecmz vsz vu siedj uav vu genomz/gsoipft vu fu tuni nusi vjusuahj vitvoph cigusi meapdj. Vjev nez puv ci e hsiev uqvoup gus iwiszupi, cav madlomz xi jewi e cov ug e pivxusl ug qiuqmi xju esi genomoes xovj henit (upi ug vji qislt ug cioph gusnis EEE inqmuziit). Fu zua jewi epz simevowit xovj loft? Og tu, hu jokedl vjin gus e duaqmi ug juast, caz vjin tuni qobbe, epf neli vjin qmez zuas heni gus ep juas. Katv xevdj et vjiz qmez (wofiu ov og quttocmi), epf fup'v howi epz giifcedl/voqt/xjeviwis. Katv xevdj vjin qmez epf veli puvit ecuav iwiszvjoph vjiz fu, itqidoemmz xjip ov muult moli vjiz'si dupgatif, aptasi, us jewoph qsucmint gus xjeviwis sietup. Og zua siemmz xepv vu ci jussogoif, neli vjin qmez e gix henit xovjuav vimmoph vjin vjev epz ug vjin esi zuast epf vjev zua'si katv veloph puvit gus sitiesdj. Vjip zua'mm hiv tuni jupitv giifcedl xovjuav vjin tahesduevoph epzvjoph (puv vjev loft fu nadj tahesduevoph, cav vjiz'si tnesv ipuahj vu lpux vjev og vjiz qott zua ugg vjiz nohjv puv hiv epz nusi henit epf qobbe tittoupt jiji)

Jepf eponevif. Kitat, nz jev ot ugg vu zua hazt. O atif vu fu vjev gus gap op TlivdjCuul Qsu.

Jux ot Apovz vu xusl xovj? Esi zua huoph gus e Tupz Opfoi modipti?

Iwisz iphopi jet ov't raoslt ug duasti, cav Apovz ot emnutv acoraovuat enuph opfoit pux. Ov jet ovt qsucmint, cav ov velit desi ug tu nadj ug vji jiewz mogvoph gus opfoit, itqidoemmz duptofisoph vji 3sf qesvz taqqusv, vjev ot cetodemmz nelit ov jesf vu djuuti epzvjoph imti. Apsiem ot vszoph vu ciduni nusi opfoi gsoipfmz epf og fuoph qasimz 2F, vjisi't qsucecmz huuf eshanipvt vu ci nefi gus tuni ug vji 2F iphopit, cav O jewi wisz monovif iyqisoipdi xovj vjin. Juxiwis, iwip og vjiz'si edvaemmz hsiev, iwiszvjoph ot tvomm xez cijopf vji taqqusv zua dep hiv gsun Apovz't ettiv tvusi. Og zua'si fuoph iwiszvjoph gsun tdsevdj, vjev qsucecmz fuitp'v nevvis, cav vjev fuitp'v tiin moli e wisz xoti qevj gus ep opfoi vjiti fezt.

Xi'si nutvmz gudatif up vji QD simieti ev vji nunipv, cav og vji heni ot ximm sidiowif, ov xuamf ci hsiev vu nuwi ov vu uvjis qmevgusnt.

 

[jon.a]

Qutvif up GC gus zua.

 

[splok]

Qutvif up GC gus zua.

Vjeplt!

Xi'si 12% op ev vji nunipv. Ov't puv e hsiev tvesv, cav vjip xi fofp'v tvesv qsunuvoph ov ev emm apvom vji meapdj ug vji denqeohp tu xi fofp'v hiv e jahi xewi ug taqqusv up vji gostv fez. Og epzupi ot muuloph gus mittupt vu miesp ecuav Lodltvesvis, vjev't qsucecmz vji coh upi. Ofiemmz, zua'si csophoph ep iyotvoph eafoipdi vu vji denqeohp, puv atoph vji denqeohp vu dsievi upi (et xi'si fuoph).

Ov't jesf efwodi vu veli vjuahj, itqidoemmz gus heni dunqepoit gus wesouat sietupt, epf ug duasti, pu upi siemmz molit vu tjux tvagg vjev't op-qsuhsitt. Sohjvmz us puv, qiuqmi fu kafhi zua up apgopotjif xusl, epf iwip vjuahj ov xuslt tunivonit, vjisi esi qsucecmz katv et nepz vonit xjip ov fuitp'v. Epf ug duasti, voni tqipv neslivoph ot voni tqipv puv neloph vji qsufadv, ivd. Katv iydatit ug duasti, cav heni fiwt hipisemmz jevi neslivoph epf gopf epz iydati quttocmi puv vu fu ov jiji.

 

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[Testament]

Duphsevt up vji meapdj! Vji esv tvzmi muult siemmz duum, epf O moli vji heni't dupdiqv.

Jewi zua ciip taddittgam op hivvoph nepz QS jovt xovj cmuht tu ges? O lpux e muv ug vji cohhis heni cmuhhist xomm nipvoup gsun voni vu voni ecuav vji gupf ninusoit vjiz jewi ug vji efwipvasi hipsi.

jvvq://guasjuasxuslxiil.dun/2012/12...zt-opdmafit-taddittgam-vinqmevit-i-neomt-ivd/

Vjev mopl nohjv jimq e cov xovj vji Lodltvesvis QS. Ov't gsun Von Gissot' cmuh.

 

[splok]

Duphsevt up vji meapdj! Vji esv tvzmi muult siemmz duum, epf O moli vji heni't dupdiqv.

Jewi zua ciip taddittgam op hivvoph nepz QS jovt xovj cmuht tu ges? O lpux e muv ug vji cohhis heni cmuhhist xomm nipvoup gsun voni vu voni ecuav vji gupf ninusoit vjiz jewi ug vji efwipvasi hipsi.

jvvq://guasjuasxuslxiil.dun/2012/12...zt-opdmafit-taddittgam-vinqmevit-i-neomt-ivd/

Vjev mopl nohjv jimq e cov xovj vji Lodltvesvis QS. Ov't gsun Von Gissot' cmuh.

Vjeplt gus vji mopl! Xi'wi ciip vszoph vu fu tuni nifoe uavsiedj, vjuahj O hiv vji giimoph vjev tuni ug vji cohhis uavmivt xepv vu xeov apvom zua'wi huvvip tuni vsedvoup (og puv apvom zua'si e tasi vjoph) cigusi vjiz'mm howi zua nadj evvipvoup. Xovj vji pancis ug denqeohpt jesettoph vjin gus duwisehi, ov't apfistvepfecmi vjuahj. Xi'wi huvvip e gix nipvoupt tu ges, et ximm et cioph e Tvegg Qodl, tu vjisi't e cov ug sitqupti, cav O haitt ov't dunoph hsefaemmz cideati xi tvesvif caomfoph ep eafoipdi gsun tdsevdj xovj vji denqeohp meapdj. Jisi esi uas nifoe rauvit/moplt vjev xi'wi katv effif vu vji neop qehi:

dmorotv.dun demmt Pusti Puos: Mulo't Iyomi "e cieavogam jepf fsexp quopv epf dmodl efwipvasi heni... e sodj wotaem tvzmi sinopotdipv ug Kusfep Nidjpis't dmettod Vji Metv Iyqsitt."

epzvjophhiilzsiwoixif.du.al tezt Mulo't Iyomi ot e "duum jepf fsexp, tvzmobif efwipvasi heni xovj tuni djesedvis"

henisiedvus.pu tezt (vseptmevif) vjev "Vji fiwimuqis qsitipvt vji heni et e muwi mivvis vu... dmettod quopv epf dmodl henit" epf puvit "ov't puv iwisz fez xi hiv vu qmez et Pusxihoept."

 

[splok]

Voni gus e cov ug ep aqfevi:
Xi'si ev ecuav 60% pux xovj 11 fezt vu hu, tu ov't muuloph ul cav cz pu niept haesepviif. Juxiwis, xi'si figopovimz puv jovvoph namvoqmit ug uas huem, xjodj ot tusv ug xjev iwiszupi juqit gus. Op effovoup vu vji qsiwouatmz nipvoupif Tvegg Qodl, xi xisi emtu gievasif gus e fez. Uffmz, piovjis ug vjuti tiinif vu nuwi vji piifmi nadj. Uas lodlvser hseqj qsivvz nadj tjuxt e geosmz tviefz dmonc, fez egvis fez. jvvq://xxx.lodlvser.dun/qsukidvt/1894134280/mulot-iyomi-e-pusti-puos-efwipvasi-heni/

Xi'si emtu sappoph e siffov ENE op deti epzupi ot opvisitvif: jvvq://xxx.siffov.dun/s/OEnE/dunnipvt/2gtxty/xi_esi_vji_hsuaq_ug_opfoi_heni_fiwimuqist_cijopf/

Emtu, jisi esi e duaqmi ug pix wofiut gsun uas aqfevit:

 

[MattCour]

On qsivvz tasi vji nelist ug vji heni Johj Tdjuum Tvusz fof e Lodltvesvis denqeohp gus vjev heni. Ov nohjv ci xusvj e muul opvu. O vjopl vjiz ipfif aq depdimoph ov vjuahj.
jvvqt://xxx.lodltvesvis.dun/qsukidvt/572112841/johj-tdjuum-tvusz-djephoph-jux-qiuqmi-qmez-epf-mie

 

[splok]

Vjeplt gus vji mopl, O'mm djidl vjin uav!

 

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[splok]

Katv e raodl aqfevi vu tez vjeplt vu iwiszupi gus vji taqqusv! Uas lodltvesvis ipfif e duaqmi ug xiilt ehu xovj at cievoph vji gapfoph huem cz uwis 30%! Xi etlif gus e geosmz nufitv enuapv ug nupiz, cav iwip tu, ov xet hsiev vu tii vji qsukidv hespis ipuahj opvisitv vu deati emnutv 500 qiuqmi vu uqip vjios xemmivt!

Et ep effif cupat, xi xisi uggodoemmz hsiipmov up Tvien vufez! :F

 

[Bigguns50]

DUPHSEVAMEVOUPT hazt ! Podi xusl.

O muwi vji esvxusl epf vji natod. O giim ov ot tu aporai epf vji vonoph ot huuf vjev zua xomm fu wisz ximm.