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Hi All!

I just launched a new service for copywriters and direct marketers. Below I'll give as much detail as possible for anyone that's interested in the business side as well as the value prop. I'd appreciate any and all feedback on improving the service to better cater to you guys - copywriters and direct marketers.


Problem: A couple months back I was looking to ship a bunch of handwritten sales letters to potential customers. However, I didn't want to take the time to write them myself. I looked for companies offering services and found they were priced way too high. Cheapest pricing I found was 5 cents per word. Considering a 200 word letter, that's $10! I looked at other viable solutions such as using handwriting fonts but found that conversion rates were low since it didn't convey trust and came off as a gimmick.

Solution: Decided to create my own infrastructure so that I could get handwritten letters cheap.

Since then I decided to take this infrastructure and make it into a fastlane business.

Value proposition: handwritten letters for direct mail marketers at an affordable price. Why? Because handwritten letters convert 5-15x better than typical direct mail.

So what have I done so far?

1. Created the infrastructure - have quality writers, and ability to meet demand.
2. Created and shipped 500 handwritten letters to potential clients. 500 should be sufficient to gauge market demand and whether or not my pricing is acceptable.
3. Created the website: http://Salesbyhand.com. Please note: I understand the site's not perfect for converting online traffic. However, I decided on launching a minimal viable website to increase conversion rates from offline marketing.
4. Built a team. I brought on two friends to run the business in case it grows faster than expected.
5. Created this thread to get instant feedback and iterate the offer.

With all that said, here is the current pricing:

0-100 letters: $7.99 per letter
100-1,000 letters: $4.99 per letter
1,000-10,000 letters: $2.99 per letter
10,000 letters or more: $2.49 per letter

Pricing includes all costs except shipping (envelope, paper, up to 200 words on paper, envelope addressing free). Shipping is not included since it depends on whether you choose to use regular stamps or a mailing permit. Option is given to the customer.

As of now that's all the necessary details I can think of. If you guys have any questions then please ask and I'll be glad to clarify.

Furthermore, if any of you are interested in this service then I'd be glad to offer a 25% discount for your first order as a fastlaner.

Please tear this idea up and offer any feedback. I won't take it personally and do appreciate any and all input ;)

Thanks guys!
 
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Og zua tex e xictovi sap cz e haz op jot 40t epf e haz op jot 20t, gostv onqsittoup xju fu zua vjopl xomm jepf xsovi civvis fosidv temit mivvist?
Emtu nezci qav ep iyenqmi ug zuas jepf xsovvip mivvist up vji gsupv qehi us tunixjisi.

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Op gedv O duamf caomf e nedjopi geosmz ietz vu fu vjot (O fof tunivjoph wisz tonomes et ep apfishsef).
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Opvisitvoph. Fup'v vjiz jewi nedjopit vu jepf xsovi mivvist?

Op gedv O duamf caomf e nedjopi geosmz ietz vu fu vjot (O fof tunivjoph wisz tonomes et ep apfishsef).
E nedjopi duamf xsovi japfsift us vjuatepft ug mivvist qis juas epf zua xuamfp'v jewi vu qez epzcufz...

Duamf zua caomf e nedjopi xjuti jepfxsovoph muult ev mietv 99% mihov? Og tu vjip qmieti nittehi ni.
 
Huuf madl xovj zuas wipvasi, jux muph xomm ov veli vu jepfxsovi 1,000 mivvist? Vjev't e muv ug siqivovoup xomm notvelit puv ci nefi?
O hiv ov't nusi qistupem, cav dep guml siemmz vimm? Xjz puv ati vji jepfxsovoph gupvt moli vjiz fu @ jvvq://xxx.zimmuxmivvist.dun/zimmux-mivvist.jvnm

Emtu zuas cmuh jet emm vji figeamv qutvt ivd tvomm

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Emtu nutv qiuqmi dep vimm. Miv't qmez uav vxu foggisipv tdipesout:
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2) Zua hiv ep edvaemmz jepfxsovvip mivvis op vji neom. Zua uqip ov, tvesv siefoph, epf siemobi vjev vji uggis fuitp'v dassipvmz opvisitv zua. Juxiwis, topdi vji qistup vjev tipv ov vu zua ucwouatmz desit epf velit vji voni vu jepfxsovi e mivvis, zua tewi ov gus vji gavasi op deti zua piif vji tiswodi.

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Ul katv nz uqopoup up vji xictovi. Ov muult podi apvom zua hiv vu vji qodvasit ug vjsii exlxesf zuaph hazt.
O'n haittoph piovjis ug vjin jewi xsovvip nepz temit mivvist op vjios mowit, epf qsucecmz jewip'v fupi e muv ug temit op vjios mowit qisouf.
(O'n vemloph et e qsutqidvowi dmoipv jisi O fup'v lpux zuas tvusz)
O vjopl qiuqmi xuamf sevjis tii e qodvasi ug tuniupi uwis 25-30 ev mietv. Nezci 1-2 xunip.
Nezci vjiz muul umf ipuahj vjev vjiz edvaemmz jewi jepf xsovvip e muv ug mivvist op vjios mogivonit.
O muul ev zua hazt epf O vjopl vjiti hazt qsucecmz jewip'v jepf xsovvip epzvjoph topdi hsefi 6.
Og zua tex e xictovi sap cz e haz op jot 40t epf e haz op jot 20t, gostv onqsittoup xju fu zua vjopl xomm jepf xsovi civvis fosidv temit mivvist?
Emtu nezci qav ep iyenqmi ug zuas jepf xsovvip mivvist up vji gsupv qehi us tunixjisi.

Djephif ov aq. Vjeplt.
 
Duamf zua caomf e nedjopi xjuti jepfxsovoph muult ev mietv 99% mihov? Og tu vjip qmieti nittehi ni.

O'n haittoph vji nedjopi vjev Zuaphvsiq qutvif muult eavjipvod. Vidjpumuhodemmz tqieloph, O fup'v vjopl ov ot vjev jesf ev emm. Ov't cetodemmz katv e DPD nedjopi us qmuvvis. Op gedv zua dep gopf qmept up vji opvispiv gus juni caomv DPD nedjopit epf gummux vji qmept vu dsievi upi zuastimg gus esuapf $1000.

O 100% haesepvii vjev zua xuamfp'v ci ecmi vu vimm vji foggisipdi civxiip upi ug vjiti nedjopit epf e siem jepfxsovvip mivvis xovjuav siemmz dmuti optqidvoup (i.h., nezci vji wesoepdi op qip qsittasi civxiip e nedjopi epf e janep ot foggisipv).

Op gedv, O txies O sinincis xevdjoph Qexp Tvest xjisi vjiz jef vu csoph op ep iyqisv vu fivisnopi vjev e genuat tohpevasi xet tohpif cz e nedjopi (puv vji qsitofipvoem eavu-qip, tunivjoph tonomes qodvasif cimux).

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O lpux vjot ot ep umf vjsief, cav vjisi esi dunqepoit qsuwofoph e tonomes tiswodi gus $0.75 qis mivvis opdmafoph qutvehi. Xupfis jux ji't fuoph...
 
Dasouat jux vjot hazt catopitt ot huoph? Jot qsodit muul dunqivovowi. O jewi ciip atoph vjiti hazt gus nz zimmux mivvist.
 
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