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Hey guys,

I'm currently implementing a new monetization strategy into my app game.

It's called "Rewarded Video Ads", basically you watch a video ad and in return you get some in game goodies.

My game is basically a flappy bird style casual game, the game is frustratingly hard, you score points, you die fast, and rinse and repeat.

On the Game Over screen i have added the option to watch a video in return for
Double Points for the next 20 plays.
(The option only comes back once the 20 plays are used up)

Unfortunately(or perhaps fortunately) i've been reading too much sinister lex copywriting bs:)p) and it's rubbed of on me a little and i can't for the life of me settle on the value proposition text to the left of the button.

As you can see in the screenshot below, my current text is
Get Double Points!
Watch Video Now!
(20 plays)
Capture.webp

Anyone got a better suggestion? or is this cool :)


 
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