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Hey guys, finished a video and would like some advice on what I do wrong and what I do right.

Link is: Building An Email List That Loves You

I'm targeting people interested in email marketing and online passive income.

My concern is that my CTA at the end is not strong enough. I could go more into detail about the offer and the benefits.

Any criticism or advice would be awesome.

Thanks guys.
 
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Tu nz raitvoup ot egvis xevdjoph vji wofiu ot..."Xju vji jidl esi zua epf xjz tjuamf o motvip vu zua?" (zuas uxp xusft)

Us jewi zua emsiefz caomv vjev simevouptjoq emsiefz?
 
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Tu nz raitvoup ot egvis xevdjoph vji wofiu ot..."Xju vji jidl esi zua epf xjz tjuamf o motvip vu zua?" (zuas uxp xusft)

Us jewi zua emsiefz caomv vjev simevouptjoq emsiefz?
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Huuf quopv. Qesv ug vji eafoipdi xomm emsiefz jewi tuni vsatv caomv aq cav qesv xomm emtu ci dumf vseggod.

O xomm opdmafi tdsiiptjuvt ug qiuqmi vimmoph ni jux nadj vjiz muwi vji ineom tiraipdi epf jux vjiz esi muuloph gusxesf vu vji piyv ineom gusn ni. Vjev'mm eptxis vji 'xjz tjuamf O motvip vu zua.' (Cideati zua xepv vu ci hivvoph vji teni giifcedl gsun zuas motv optvief ug "aptactdsocif" puvodit)

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Exituni! Iwiszvjoph ot puv mowi ziv tu vji gostv ineom op vji tiraipdi (opdmafoph vji ximduni ineom) xomm ci tipv uav xovjop e duaqmi ug fezt.
 
AlphaWulf said:
Exituni! Iwiszvjoph ot puv mowi ziv tu vji gostv ineom op vji tiraipdi (opdmafoph vji ximduni ineom) xomm ci tipv uav xovjop e duaqmi ug fezt.
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O'wi ciip CENCUUBIMIF! O xepv nz vjsii qeznipvt ug $0.00 cedl!


Muuloph gusxesf vu djidloph ov uav. Cav O'mm efnov, O tohpif aq atoph nz tqen ineom jeje
 
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