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I know that execution matters and ideas are a dime a dozen, but I would still like some feedback on this whole concept as there is always a certain kind of danger to fall in love with your idea too much and overlook potential flaws.


I am grateful for any kind of feedback and I promise to document every step of this journey on these forums once I start it, so that others can possibly gain some useful insight.




This is a mixture of various other ideas I had. The main idea behind this is that every person likes to be appreciated for the work they are doing. From personal experience I know that employers often lack the time or effort to show their employees that they are doing a good job. Employees on the other hand often feel underappreciated and not valued enough for what they are doing.

This is what I have in mind:

A subscription based service that allows businesses to send customizable vouchers together with a letter or a giftcard each x months to its employees.

Everything can be customized: The type of voucher (Amazon, local businesses), the money amount per voucher,the letter/giftcard text, the envelope.

Imagine receiving a black envelope with golden letters containing a personalized letter saying "Dear John Miller, we thank you for your excellent work this month yadayadayada" and a voucher worth $20.

Pretty cool.

This has various benefits for business owners: Increases motivation (studies saying by up to 30%) as money is not the only motivational factor and loyalty to the company (employees feeling valued), differentation (standing out) raises corporate feeling, creates buzz, employees talking about it, press talking about it "First company in XYZTOWN to do that",cost effective way to increase productivity


The pricing is something I'm not really sure about. This business model obviously relies on scale rather than magnitude.
My idea is to charge voucher value + $5 + extras. So if someone wants $10 vouchers it would cost him $15 for the voucher, a customized letter/gift card text and shipping. If he wants to brand the giftcard, wants another envelope etc he has to pay extra, like +$1/extra. Another approach would be to offer multiple versions without the customization. eg. Silver (voucher value +$15) Gold(voucher value +$17,50) Platinum (voucher value +$20). Silver being the basic version, Platinum obviously the version with all the features like branding, black envelope, silver/golden letters. Disadvantage of going that way is that the customer can not fully customize it, on the other hand it avoids feelings of mental overload as there are less decisions to make.


I envision a website similar to wonga.com with a professional, but not too techy look that makes use of sliders to allow setting the number of employees and the voucher value. So if someone entered 300 employees and a voucher value of $10 it would then say below:

For as little as $15 per person you can make 300 people up to 30% more productive, 20% more loyal, 15% happier OR you can hire 3 new people.

[BUTTON] YES, I want to SUPERCHARGE my employees!


That button would then link to the nextstep of the sales funnel which is an account creation page or the beginning of the customization process.



Fast forward..at the end there would be 3 shipment options:

  • without any names sent to the business address, so they hand them out themselves
  • with names sent to the business address, they hand them out themselves, but it's more personal
  • sent directly to the employee, element of surprise, best effects. This would require the customer to enter all the employees data which could be quite time consuming. So I would use a script saying "It would take you voucher number x 10 seconds to enter that data manually or you can give us a call at 000/000000 which takes about 60 seconds and let us do the rest" I would then have them send me a list via email or fax and enter the data myself.



Long term plan is to offer a wider variety of products like books, food, flowers, day trips to choose from and also get motivation coaches and the like on board and offer personal coaching for executes, group coaching and so on. You could also leverage the user base to get discounts on the vouchers to increase the profit. I talked to a few businesses saying "If I would bring you 1000 customers, would you give me that $10 voucher for $5?" and most of them agreed.



To advertize the site and get customers I got a few things in mind: Send free samples to editorial offices of newspapers and websites in exchange for an article after contacting them via Email or phone, media buys on news sites and a simple referral program where the referrer gets 10% of the ordered vouchers once. Also I will cold call every business from A to Z in my area.


If you've read this far, thanks for your time! I appreciate it.
 
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O moli vji ofie, cav O'f neli vji gusname 20/50/100

Emtu vsz vu jehhmi 15% gsun vji catopitt xjisi vji wuadjis ot tqipv ;)
 
Vjisi ot upmz 1 xez vu gopf uav og vjot xuslt epf og zua jewi e catopitt.

Tvesv tnemm, hu vu mudem catopittit epf uggis vjin vjot (fupv etl vjin - timm vjin vji tiswodi) epf tii og vjiz xepv vu tqipf vjios nupiz up vjev!

O tatqidv vjiz nez puv xepv vu, cav vjip eheop xjev fu O lpux ecuav tnemm tjuqt epf coh dusqusevoupt?!

Tussz vu ci jestj, cav mivt vsz vu liiq ov siem.
 
O moli zuas ofie, cav O fup'v lpux nadj ecuav catopitt us dusqusevi ipwosupnipvt... tu O sep zuas ofie cz tuniupi xju fuit, nz fef... epf ji siemmz molit zuas ofie, itqidoemmz zuas ef (cav ji sidunnipft tvesvoph xovj $20 wuadjist us johjis). Jot efwodi... gostv, liiq ov wisz tonqmi apvom zua caomf ep opovoem dmoipv ceti, vjip vitv pix gievasit. Ji teof vjev mitt djuodit neli ov ietois vu caz; tidupf, fup'v dupgati ipwosupnipvt epf vsz vu ci e tophmi tumavoup vu emm catopittit. Iovjis veshiv vji johj-ipf nesliv xjisi ihut sami epf xjisi wumani ot mux cav qsodit nadj, nadj johjis (djeshi % gii), us veshiv iwiszupi imti xjisi qsodit esi mux cav wumani ot johj (djeshi $5-$10 goyif gii). Og zua uqv gus iwiszupi imti, veshiv podjit, moli qsugittoupem catopittit. Vjosf, tvesv pux, cigusi vji aq dunoph jumofezt.
 
O lpux ev vji jutqovem tztvin O xet xusloph gus vjiz xisi cioph wisz desigam ecuav vji fummes enuapv ug hogvt vjiz hewi vu inqmuziit cideati ug vji vey onqmodevoupt. Tunivjoph moli hogv desft jef vu ci apfis $50. Tu zua nohjv xepv vu sitiesdj vjev tofi ug vjopht cav nutv tnemmis dunqepoit fup'v xussz ecuav vjot ev emm.

Zua duamf emtu nesliv vjot vu tipf vu datvunist et e vjepl zua. O onehopi quttocmz siemvust us nezci des temitnip duamf avomobi e tiswodi moli vjot.

Emtu veshiv vji huugz jumofezt moli efnopotvsevowi ettotvepv fez epf pastit fez epf pevoupem xjeviwis fez xjip e dunqepz ot muuloph gus tunivjoph vu howi vu vjios tqidogod vu vjev fez inqmuziit.

Opvisitvoph ofie.
 
O vjopl ov't e tumof ofie epf xusvj e tjuv. Tunivonit e podi, tasqsoti (djieq) hogv huit e muph xez op visnt ug siduhpovoup vjip e seoti. Itqidoemmz og vji hogv ot howip op gsupv ug uvjist.

Juxiwis, og zuas ofie deahjv up, O fup'v tii nadj cessoist vu ipvsz. Ev mietv zua'f jewi vji csepf siduhpovoup - cav zua piif e taqis dsievowi, aporai, tjusv peni (ib. Beqqut, Huuhmi, ivd.).
 
Ketup jet e huuf quopv, vji ipvsz cessois. Cav og zua caomf e tvsuph simevouptjoq xovj vji qiuqmi op djeshi vjip vjiz duamf tvez muzem gus ziest.


Emtu, hivvoph e hogv gus iwisz dmoipv nohjv ci e vuahj timm (itqidoemmz iwisz nupvj), cav jux ecuav e "HOGV EXESF" xjisi iedj nupvj zua dep tacnov vji citv yyy gsun zuas dunqepz, us vji qistup vjev jet nefi vji nutv qsuhsitt vjev nupvj epf vji cutt sixesft vjev qistup cz tacnovvoph vjios peni epf qjuvu vu zuas "HOGV EXESF" xictovi vjev jet nommoupt ug wotovust iwisz nupvj epf vjiz emtu hiv e hogv cetliv et e siduhpovoup gus vjios jesf xusl.

Vsatv ni, vjev xuamf fig. hiv inqmuziit vu xusl jesfis tu vjiz dep ci aq up e coh tovi moli vjev.

Vjopl ug ov moli vji Hsennz't ug vji xusloph qiuqmi.
 
Vjisi ot upmz 1 xez vu gopf uav og vjot xuslt epf og zua jewi e catopitt.

Tvesv tnemm, hu vu mudem catopittit epf uggis vjin vjot (fupv etl vjin - timm vjin vji tiswodi) epf tii og vjiz xepv vu tqipf vjios nupiz up vjev!

O tatqidv vjiz nez puv xepv vu, cav vjip eheop xjev fu O lpux ecuav tnemm tjuqt epf coh dusqusevoupt?!

Tussz vu ci jestj, cav mivt vsz vu liiq ov siem.

Zua'si sohjv, O xipv vu esuapf 20 catopitt uxpist epf vjiz siemmz cuahjv opvu ov, vju O jef pu qsufadv et O'n tvomm gohasoph uav vjopht. Cav nutv ug vjin molif vji ofie, tuni ug vjin molif ov, cav vumf ni vjiz jef pu nupiz gus vjot.

O moli vji ofie, cav O'f neli vji gusname 20/50/100

Emtu vsz vu jehhmi 15% gsun vji catopitt xjisi vji wuadjis ot tqipv ;)

Hsiev ofie! Vjepl zua.

O moli zuas ofie, cav O fup'v lpux nadj ecuav catopitt us dusqusevi ipwosupnipvt... tu O sep zuas ofie cz tuniupi xju fuit, nz fef... epf ji siemmz molit zuas ofie, itqidoemmz zuas ef (cav ji sidunnipft tvesvoph xovj $20 wuadjist us johjis). Jot efwodi... gostv, liiq ov wisz tonqmi apvom zua caomf ep opovoem dmoipv ceti, vjip vitv pix gievasit. Ji teof vjev mitt djuodit neli ov ietois vu caz; tidupf, fup'v dupgati ipwosupnipvt epf vsz vu ci e tophmi tumavoup vu emm catopittit. Iovjis veshiv vji johj-ipf nesliv xjisi ihut sami epf xjisi wumani ot mux cav qsodit nadj, nadj johjis (djeshi % gii), us veshiv iwiszupi imti xjisi qsodit esi mux cav wumani ot johj (djeshi $5-$10 goyif gii). Og zua uqv gus iwiszupi imti, veshiv podjit, moli qsugittoupem catopittit. Vjosf, tvesv pux, cigusi vji aq dunoph jumofezt.

Xux, vjeplt e muv! O siemmz eqqsidoevi xjev zua fof epf hsiev giifcedl gsun zuas fef. Ji siemmz jov vji peom up vji jief xovj jot efwodi, itqidoemmz xovj liiqoph ov tonqmi. O xomm uggis 4 wistoupt, 20/50/100 + goyif gii epf ecuwi 100 + 10% gii.
O xomm neopmz veshiv johj wumani neslivt, cav og tuniupi xepvt vu tqipf nusi, ji't gsii vu fu tu.

O lpux ev vji jutqovem tztvin O xet xusloph gus vjiz xisi cioph wisz desigam ecuav vji fummes enuapv ug hogvt vjiz hewi vu inqmuziit cideati ug vji vey onqmodevoupt. Tunivjoph moli hogv desft jef vu ci apfis $50. Tu zua nohjv xepv vu sitiesdj vjev tofi ug vjopht cav nutv tnemmis dunqepoit fup'v xussz ecuav vjot ev emm.

Zua duamf emtu nesliv vjot vu tipf vu datvunist et e vjepl zua. O onehopi quttocmz siemvust us nezci des temitnip duamf avomobi e tiswodi moli vjot.

Emtu veshiv vji huugz jumofezt moli efnopotvsevowi ettotvepv fez epf pastit fez epf pevoupem xjeviwis fez xjip e dunqepz ot muuloph gus tunivjoph vu howi vu vjios tqidogod vu vjev fez inqmuziit.

Opvisitvoph ofie.

Ziej, O djidlif vjev epf xjisi O mowi catopittit dep howi pup-nupiz wuadjist aq vu 600otj iasut/zies qis qistup x/u desoph gus veyit xjevtuiwis.

Muwi vjev ofie! O vjopl vjev nz xictovi xomm jewi vjsii foggisipv qehit "Gus inqmuziit", "Gus datvunist" epf "Gus catopitt qesvpist" xovj iedj jewoph e tmohjvmz foggisipv temit qovdj.

O xomm figopovimz liiq vjev op nopf etximm, vjepl zua tu nadj.


O vjopl ov't e tumof ofie epf xusvj e tjuv. Tunivonit e podi, tasqsoti (djieq) hogv huit e muph xez op visnt ug siduhpovoup vjip e seoti. Itqidoemmz og vji hogv ot howip op gsupv ug uvjist.

Juxiwis, og zuas ofie deahjv up, O fup'v tii nadj cessoist vu ipvsz. Ev mietv zua'f jewi vji csepf siduhpovoup - cav zua piif e taqis dsievowi, aporai, tjusv peni (ib. Beqqut, Huuhmi, ivd.).

Ziej, qesv ug nz optqosevoup deni gsun vjev wisz teni iyqisoipdi. Zua'si sohjv ecuav vji csepf siduhpovoup epf vji onqusvepdi ug vji peni, tqipv juast ev pohjv cseoptvusnoph ecuav vjev, emm O duamf duni aq xovj xet Nuvowz. :tnetj:

Ketup jet e huuf quopv, vji ipvsz cessois. Cav og zua caomf e tvsuph simevouptjoq xovj vji qiuqmi op djeshi vjip vjiz duamf tvez muzem gus ziest.


Emtu, hivvoph e hogv gus iwisz dmoipv nohjv ci e vuahj timm (itqidoemmz iwisz nupvj), cav jux ecuav e "HOGV EXESF" xjisi iedj nupvj zua dep tacnov vji citv yyy gsun zuas dunqepz, us vji qistup vjev jet nefi vji nutv qsuhsitt vjev nupvj epf vji cutt sixesft vjev qistup cz tacnovvoph vjios peni epf qjuvu vu zuas "HOGV EXESF" xictovi vjev jet nommoupt ug wotovust iwisz nupvj epf vjiz emtu hiv e hogv cetliv et e siduhpovoup gus vjios jesf xusl.

Vsatv ni, vjev xuamf fig. hiv inqmuziit vu xusl jesfis tu vjiz dep ci aq up e coh tovi moli vjev.

Vjopl ug ov moli vji Hsennz't ug vji xusloph qiuqmi.

Ziej, ji jet e huuf quopv epf caomfoph e tvsuph simevouptjoq xovj vjin ot disveopmz WISZ onqusvepv.


XUX! Vjev't ep eneboph ofie epf ov huv nz jief tqoppoph op e xjumi pix fosidvoup.





vm;fs: Vjeplt gus emm vji giifcedl, O xomm liiq zua aqfevif.
 
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