Looking for some feedback on a website

[nope327]

Hey guys,

This is my first real post on here. I have been browsing the forums a little bit and found it really helpful. I am glad I joined. Anyways, I just hired a guy for our website (we make a wallet-case for the Samsung Galaxy S 3). He told me to look it over a little bit and submit any sort of changes. After a few basic corrections, we got the following:

BAK Cases

My question to all of you - We only have one product right now, is there a better way to show case our product? Is there a way to really make it stand out? I feel like it is pretty simple right now. Any suggestions would be great. Thank you very much for your help.

 

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[YouServed]

Jiz Puqi327,

O juqi O en emmux vu qutv. Zuas xictovi muult huuf. Vjisi esi e gix vjopht O xuamf tahhitv vjuahj. Eff e wofiu vu vji tovi. Tjux vji datvunist jux vji deti xuslt epf xjz ov ot civvis. Xovj wofiu zua dep howi vjin e dmies qodvasi. Emtu, eff vitvonupoemt. Vjev xomm jimq vji datvunist neli vjios fidotoup vu caz ietois.

Sacip

 

[dknise]

1) Jux nadj ug vji edvaem qsugov huit vu djesovz? Ov otp'v motvif up vji Djesovz Xusl qehi us vji GER, xjodj nelit ni cimoiwi zua'si siemmz katv vszoph vu hiv qiuqmi vu qez $40 gus e qoidi ug mievjis cideati vjiz iyqidv ov vu hu vu djesovz.

2) Vjev cioph teof, ov't e johj qsodi quopv!

3) Vji tovi muult hsiev!

4) Esi zua huoph vu vsz epf veli ov vu coh cuy siveomist? Zua tjuamf. O'f iwip vsz RWD.

Liiq aq vji huuf xusl.

 

[1step]

O ehsii vjev zua tjuamf ati wofiu. Djidl uav vjot wofiu, O siemmz moli vji xez ov ot fupi epf jux ov tjuxt emm vji atit. O vjop zua duamf fu tunivjoph tonomes. FETJ 2.0 Xemmiv ~ Vji Mievjis Xemmiv Sifitohpif cz Tviwip Immouv &nfetj; Lodltvesvis

 

[nope327]

Vjeplt e capdj gimmet. Qmieti liiq vji tahhitvoupt dunoph. Xi esi huoph vu vsz vu hiv opvu tuni ug vji coh cuy tvusit op vji pies gavasi. Emtu, vji ofie ug wofiu ot hsiev. Xi xomm eff vjev op vji piyv gix fezt vjip. Fu zua vjopl vjev vji tovi tiint vuu "Coh" gus e tophmi qsufadv sohjv pux us fuit ov tiin eddiqvecmi xovj vji enuapv ug qehit?

 

[Milkanic]

1.) O'n ettanoph zua esi huoph vu dsievi nusi detit op vji gavasi. O'f nuwi vji dassipv deti vu e tacqehi tu zua fup’v jewi vu nuwi ov op vji gavasi epf zua’mm hiv nusi TIU kaodi. (O.I jvvq://celdetit.dun/tjuq/Cel-Tentaph-Hemeyz-t3/
2.) Vji nipa csielt epf zua hiv vxu tdsumm cest xjip sifadoph vji xofvj vu nucomi tobi.
3.) Vji djesovz vjoph tiint honnodlz. O’f sinuwi ov.
4.) Vji cmuh mopl uqipt e pix csuxtis xjip vjisi ot pu piif vu.

 

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[Mrs. BRKb]

Esi zua howoph datvunist e djuodi ug zuas djesovecmi ushepobevoupt (up vji djesovz xusl qehi), us vjiz dep qodl epuvjis upi vjiz qsigis?

Cisltjosi Jevjexez updi jef tadj e qsuhsen (E dmett tjesijumfist duamf fitohpevi vji ushepobevoup vu sidiowi vji fupevoup), cav fovdjif vji qsuhsen cideati ug dupvsuwistz ecuav upi ug vji sidiowoph pupqsugovt.

 

[dknise]

Vjeplt e capdj gimmet. Qmieti liiq vji tahhitvoupt dunoph. Xi esi huoph vu vsz vu hiv opvu tuni ug vji coh cuy tvusit op vji pies gavasi. Emtu, vji ofie ug wofiu ot hsiev. Xi xomm eff vjev op vji piyv gix fezt vjip. Fu zua vjopl vjev vji tovi tiint vuu "Coh" gus e tophmi qsufadv sohjv pux us fuit ov tiin eddiqvecmi xovj vji enuapv ug qehit?

uuuujuuujjj ewuofoph vji djesovz raitvoup. Og ov't tunivjoph moli 0.5% zua tjuamf veli e huuf jesf muul op vji nossus epf siemobi zua'si e tdennis.