Marketing ad, I have till 5:30pm to complete...insite needed

[ryanpal]

hello guys.
i've been able to get an ad for very cheap. key is, i have to submit my ad by 5:30. i'll get to the point.

my site provides free lis pendens. free accounts (basic membership) can view all listings. paid accounts (premium membership) which still has to be added will contain all the bells and whistles. i will also provide a 30 day free trial for premium members.

now i first wanted to do an add like the following:

Free Foreclosure Listings
No limited search feature, FULL info (name, address, city, lot, block etc) all for FREE!
-one click export for easy mailings
-investor tools & features frequently added (you get more than just listings!)
-your own personal database for listings and leads with NO SOFTWARE TO DOWNLOAD
www.freelispendens.com

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i feel this gives a good amount of details however i don't want it to be misleading because the personal database and other investor tools are for premium members only.

i don't want to misled people because the listings are free but premium memberships are the only ones with certain tools and the personal database.

therefore i thought this would be a better route:

FREE
FORECLOSURE LISTINGS​

No limited search feature,
COMPLETE info (name, address, city, lot, block, filing date etc.)
…all for FREE!​

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www.freelispendens.com

the idea here being that my main goal is to get visitors to the site.

what do you guy recommend? i want an affective ad which will generate traffic but not to be clear to the user.

thanks.

ryan

 

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[ryanpal]

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