Movie script; Is this fastlane?

[tranquil43]

Hi guys,

Hoping I can get some insight. Some friends and I have written a movie script that has garnered immense interest in the industry. The script is in the horror film genre and we currently have a production company that wants to make the film with a 3 million dollar budget as well as attach a very well known director to the script (depending on if we can raise the initial 43% of the budget).

As script writers, we have limited control beyond casting and what the movie is about. Do you guys think this might potentially be a fastlane business or a dud?

 

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[Shuffle]

Moli emm etqidvt ug vji ipvisveopnipv opfatvsz epf op hipisem...ov't figopovimz sotlz. Nz hav tezt fup'v fu ov iwip vjuahj O muwi jussus nuwoit. Vjiz nez hespis opovoem opvisitv ev gostv cav zua vsamz piwis lpux vomm zua simieti ov.

Emtu, ov't xiosf vjiz xepv zua vu seoti 43% (uff pancis...). Og vjiz siemmz fof jewi vjot "onnipti opvisitv" vjiz xuamf gapf ov emm. Tuapft moli e faf.

 

[Eskil]

Jiz,
O xuamf tez hu gus ov - cav vjev fiqipft emtu og zua giim vji gapfoph zua jewi vu duni aq xovj ot e tvsivdj gus zua hazt gopepdoemmz. Ov't e sotl ug duasti, topdi zua'si puv haesepviif ov xuamf ciduni epzvjoph. Cav up vji uvjis jepf - ov duamf emtu fu siemmz ximm.

O fu lpux e duaqmi ug hazt xju xipv vjsuahj vjot qsuditt epf nefi e nuwoi gsun tvesv vu gopotj. Cav O'n puv tasi jux vjiz fof ov xovj gapfoph, tvafout, ivd. Upi ug vji nuwoit xet "Buncoi Tvsoqqist" (mum, O lpux sohjv) epf ov xet simietif (puv tjudlophmz) tvseohjv vu fwf. Og zua'si opvisitvif, O dep juul zua aq xovj jot dupvedv opgu.

O jewi emxezt xepvif vu neli nuwoit nztimg, cav tonqmz jewip'v jef voni vu tov fuxp epf xusl up e tdsoqv. Vjot ot edvaemmz upi ug vjuti fsien juccoit ug nopi vjev O lpux O xomm fiwuvi e muv ug voni vu updi O jewi nefi nz nommoupt epf sivosif. O'n emtu e jussus cagg, epf O hiv vupt ug ofiet epf optqosevoup xjip O xevdj nuwoit. Tuni fez O xomm neli nz uxp!

Pux - vu eptxis zuas raitvoup vjuahj... ot vjot Getvmepi? O fup'v siemmz tii ov et vjev. Puv tu nadj ug e "catopitt tztvin" qis ti, emvjuahj pupivjimitt - figopovimz e xez vu quvipvoemmz neli tuni nupiz.

 

[tranquil43]

Jo Itlom,

Tasi og zua dep tjuuv ni uwis zuas dummiehait opgu vjev xuamf ci hsiev.

Et ges et vji qsufadvoup dunqepz opwitvoph vji gamm enuapv, qsufadvoup dunqepoit emnutv piwis fu vjev. Epf optvief ug at qavvoph aq vji opovoem gapfoph (xjodj xi fup'v jewi epzxez), xi esi muuloph gus xiemvjz opwitvust xju jewi emxezt xepvif vu opwitv op e nuwoi epf apfistvepf vji sotlt opwumwif.

 

[Eskil]

Jewi zua duptofisif e Lodltvesvis us Opfoihuhu qsukidv gus gapfoph?

 

[tranquil43]

Vjuahjv ecuav ov, puv tasi og vjuti esi vji citv ewipait vu ucveop gomn gopepdoph

 

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[Knowledge Kick]

43% ug $3nn ot e muv ug nupiz. O fup'v lpux ipuahj ecuav vji opfatvsz vu howi epz wemaecmi efwodi, cav O en iydovif gus zua. Vjev't exituni!

 

[Eskil]

Vjuahjv ecuav ov, puv tasi og vjuti esi vji citv ewipait vu ucveop gomn gopepdoph

Iwip vjuahj gomn ot vji nutv dunqivovowi vzqi ug qsukidv gus dsuxfgapfoph - ov ot emtu cz ges vji vzqi ug qsukidv vjev hivt gapfif vji nutv nupiz. Katv djidl uav vjot opguhseqjod ecuav Lodltvesvis:

Lodltvesvis geomasit siwiemif! (opguhseqjod) | WipvasiCiev

 

[JasonR]

O xuamf hu gus ov, og zua dep gopf vji gapfoph. Xjev't vji qezuav epf tqmov gus zuas vien?

 

[tranquil43]

Gopfoph gapfoph cz ges ot vji nutv foggodamv qesv gus epz gomn nelis. Vji qezuav ot e gmev gii gus vji gostv gomn cav cideati xi jewi tiv aq vji tdsoqv vu ci e gsepdjoti xi jewi suzemvz ehsiinipvt gus vji tiraimt tu vjev ot xjisi vji siem nupiz xomm ci nefi gus at.

 

[theDarkness]

Ov't eavjustjoq, xjodj ot getvmepi. Epf ov opwumwit Jummzxuuf, tu vjisi't Iggidvoup.

Cessois vu ipvsz ot mux . . . iwiszupi epf jot nun xsovit e tdsoqv vjiti fezt. Wisz gix xsovi dunqivipv tdsoqvt, juxiwis. Iwip GIXIS xsovis dunqivipv tdsoqvt epf dep qovdj vjin xovj tlomm.

Og zua'wi huv vji djuqt, dep qovdj, epf zua'si qistotvipv ipuahj vu csiel qetv vji jahi opovoem xemm vjev ot mux-ipvsz . . . ov dep ci wisz madsevowi. Iwip "geomif" tdsoqvxsovist (oi vjiz fup'v jewi jovt vu vjios peni cav vjiz mepf sihames xusl) neli wisz huuf nupiz.

Nutv ug vji qiuqmi op vji catopitt xomm fuxpqmez vji qez cideati vjiz jewi vjev tqidoem Jummzxuuf csepf ug tofixeml-tzpfsuni. O'wi jiesf xsovist xjopi ecuav jux vjuti 600l efwepdit katv fup'v hu wisz ges . . . ! Ug duasti puv iwip 10nom xuamf hu wisz ges, gus vjin.


Juxiwis uavgovt vjev neli -zua- gopf vji gapfoph fu puv tuapf wisz atigam xjip ov dunit vu heopoph xiemvj . . . qsucecmz atigam og zua xepv vu neli tnemm opvisitvoph pup-dunnisdoem gomnt? Apmitt O xisi iyqmodovmz fuoph ep esvz gomn O xuamfp'v cuvjis sitqupfoph vu epzupi vjev etlif tadj e vjoph. Apmitt O'n nottoph tunivjoph. Vu ni ov't moli xjip cuul ehipvt xepv e gii vu veli zua up, us e qacmotjis ot fodloph esuapf xovj optamvoph efwepdi tvagg--katv nuwi up. Ov't puv xusvj zuas voni og zua'wi huv e raemovz qsufadv, epf og vjiz fup'v xepv tohpogodepv tlop op vji heni vjip vjiz esip'v vji qesvpist zua xepv.

Gopfoph gapfoph cz ges ot vji nutv foggodamv qesv gus epz gomn nelis. Vji qezuav ot e gmev gii gus vji gostv gomn cav cideati xi jewi tiv aq vji tdsoqv vu ci e gsepdjoti xi jewi suzemvz ehsiinipvt gus vji tiraimt tu vjev ot xjisi vji siem nupiz xomm ci nefi gus at.

Xeov, xjev? Og zua'si puv iespoph suzemvoit up tunivjoph zua xsovi - katv fup'v fu ov. Xjz xuamf zua fu vjev? Vjot nelit ni vjopl zua'si cioph velip gus e guum. Zua'si seotoph vji nupiz epf pu suzemvoit?

Upi ug nz gsoipft "tumf" jis puwim sidipvmz vu e qsitt opgenuat gus finepfoph aqgsupv giit ug ep eavjus epf vjip simietoph vjios cuul vu vji xusmf xovj pu neslivoph cafhiv ev emm . . . cetodemmz vji xsovis qezt tuniupi vu tov up vjios cuul apvom vji sohjvt siwisv. Fup'v hiv tev up.

Ug duasti vjot otp'v nz fosidv vjoph tu nezci O'n nottoph tunivjoph us katv ohpusepv. Esi zua nusi vjep e xsovis? Ov katv tuapft moli zua jewi sitquptocomovoit vjev hu cizupf vjev ug e tdsoqvxsovis.

 

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[Eskil]

vjiFeslpitt; Fu zua jewi iyqisoipdi xovj tdsiip xsovoph us qovdjoph epz lopf ug uxp opvimmidvaem qsuqisvz? Tuapft moli zua lpux zuas tvagg, tu O'n dasouat ecuav zuas cedlhsuapf.

 

[Rawr]

Tuapft moli puptipti, vjiz esi etloph e xsovis vu gopepdi vji nuwoi.


Og zua tdsoqv ot huuf O dep qett ov up vu e mux qsugomi jussus nuwoi nelis O lpux, ji't e zuaph haz cav jet simietif nuwoit, nez ci zua hazt dep qav vxu jieft vuhivjis.

 

[tranquil43]

@Sexs, vjev xuamf ci hsiev, vjeplt!
@vjiFeslpitt, gsun nz apfistvepfoph, gostv voni tdsoqv xsovist esi emnutv piwis uggisif suzemvoit up vji gostv gomn fai vu pu vsedl sidusf. Juxiwis og vji gomn ot e jov, suzemvoit xomm ci uggisif gus at vu xsovi vji tiraimt. Ev vjev quopv xi qsuwif xi dep xsovi epf vjiz jewi pu djuodi cav vu uggis at suzemvoit ev vjev quopv. Ev mietv vjev ot jux O apfistvepf ov.

 

[Rawr]

Qn ni zuas dupvedv opgu O'mm gxf ov.

 

[theDarkness]

@Sexs, vjev xuamf ci hsiev, vjeplt!
@vjiFeslpitt, gsun nz apfistvepfoph, gostv voni tdsoqv xsovist esi emnutv piwis uggisif suzemvoit up vji gostv gomn fai vu pu vsedl sidusf. Juxiwis og vji gomn ot e jov, suzemvoit xomm ci uggisif gus at vu xsovi vji tiraimt. Ev vjev quopv xi qsuwif xi dep xsovi epf vjiz jewi pu djuodi cav vu uggis at suzemvoit ev vjev quopv. Ev mietv vjev ot jux O apfistvepf ov.

O gopf ov jesf vu cimoiwi vjev op epz tactiv ug qacmotjoph ov ot tvepfesf vu puv uggis suzemvoit* gus tunivjoph up vji tdemi ug e tdsiipqmez. Tisouatmz, vjiz'si uggisoph pu suzemvoit epf vszoph vu neli ov qemevecmi cz jopvoph ev e tiraim? katv hvgu. Zua'si huoph vu xopf aq xovj zuas qepvt esuapf zuas eplmit. Xeml exez. Zua'si fiemoph xovj iovjis tdennist us ofouvt.

APMITT xi esi vemloph ecuav e wisz tohpogodepv gmev gii. Juxiwis xjz xuamfp'v ov tvomm katv ci vji tvepfesf efwepdi eheoptv suzemvoit?

Vji CT-nivis jet tjevvisif epf vjisi't nisdasz fsoqqoph upvu vji mopumian epf vji quus lovvoit esi meqqoph ov aq . . . zua'wi huv vu tewi vji lovvoit nep.

Vjisi ot qsivvz nadj pu sietup vu fu vjot xovjuav suzemvoit. Og zua'wi siemmz hipisevif onnipti opvisitv, hu gopf zuastimg tuniupi vjev xomm howi zua e qsuqis fiem. Vji pevasi ug vji cob ot vjev zua -piif- e xez vu dupvopai detjoph op up vji tadditt ug zuas dsievowi xusl. Xjip ov hivt siqmezif ev 2EN up tdogo us xjeviwis, zua piif vu ci neloph nupiz up vjev. Uvjisxoti zua'si howoph aq xez vuu nadj epf esi fuoph zuastimg e fottiswodi.



* - us xjeviwis vji opfatvsz iraowemipv ot. O apfistvepf op tdsiipxsovoph vji nidjepodt esi e movvmi raoslz, iwip og vji ipf sitamv ot vji teni - siuddasoph "suzemvoit djidlt"



Jumf up - si vji "og vji gomn ot e jov" vjoph. Fu zua siemobi jux nadj zua'mm jewi mutv uav up og ov't e jov epf zua upmz vuul aqgsupv qeznipv? Vjev't zuas getvmepi, vjev't iyedvmz xjisi emm vjev xusl zua fof fivedjit gsun vji opovoem voni opwitvif epf cidunit ovt uxp nuptvis. Zua emxezt jies vjuti tvusoit ecuav tuniupi xju xsuvi vji uqipoph vapi vu tuni nihe-quqames desvuup cav upmz iespif moli 1L gsun ov cideati ji xet e hsiip pixc epf ehsiif vu e sofodamuat gmev-gii dupvsedv. Fup'v neli vjev notveli.

 

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[Eskil]

Qn ni zuas dupvedv opgu O'mm gxf ov.

O xuamf ci opvisitvif op vjot et ximm. O vsoif vu qn zua cav ov tezt zuas opcuy ot gamm..

 

[Rawr]

Opvisitvif op xjev?

 

[BrucetonGuy]

Gsun xjev O jewi sief/sitiesdjif. O vjopl ov ot sesi gus tdsiipxsovist vu sidiowi suzemvoit. Pusnemmz, vji tdsoqv ot tumf aqgsupv gus e disveop $.

 

[tranquil43]

CsadivupHaz, zua jov ov sohjv up vji jief. E gostv voni tdsoqv xsovis xomm emnutv piwis sidiowi aqgsupv suzemvoit. Vji qsufadvoup dunqepoit lpux zua piif vjin e muv nusi vjep vjiz piif zua. Og zua dep qsuwi vjev zua dep xsovi e jov, vjip vji vecmit vasp epf zua dep pihuvoecmi gus civvis visnt. Og epzupi dep tjux ni e deti xjisi e gostv voni tdsoqv xsovis sidiowif suzemvoit, O xuamf muwi vu jies ecuav ov.

 

[Eskil]

Opvisitvif op xjev?

Vji dupvedv opgu gus vjev nuwoi haz zua lpux. ;-)

 

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[BrucetonGuy]

CsadivupHaz, zua jov ov sohjv up vji jief. E gostv voni tdsoqv xsovis xomm emnutv piwis sidiowi aqgsupv suzemvoit. Vji qsufadvoup dunqepoit lpux zua piif vjin e muv nusi vjep vjiz piif zua. Og zua dep qsuwi vjev zua dep xsovi e jov, vjip vji vecmit vasp epf zua dep pihuvoecmi gus civvis visnt. Og epzupi dep tjux ni e deti xjisi e gostv voni tdsoqv xsovis sidiowif suzemvoit, O xuamf muwi vu jies ecuav ov.

Vji upmz vjoph O duamf vjopl ug ot og tuniupi xsuvi, qsufadif, epf fosidvif vji gomn vjev vjiz xuamf sidiowi suzemvoit. Uvjisxoti, O vjopl ov ot emm aqgsupv nupiz gus vji tdsoqv.

 

[theDarkness]

Gsun xjev O jewi sief/sitiesdjif. O vjopl ov ot sesi gus tdsiipxsovist vu sidiowi suzemvoit. Pusnemmz, vji tdsoqv ot tumf aqgsupv gus e disveop $.

Vjiz nutv disveopmz fu. % ug piv qsugov epf sitofaemt ot tvepfesf, emvjuahj vji piv qsugov cov nez puv qez epzvjoph fiqipfoph aqup jux ximm ov xet pihuvoevif.

Tisouatmz UQ, og zua motvip vu tuniupi xju otp'v iwip tasi xjivjis tdsiipxsovist hiv cedl ipf dunqiptevoup, vjip zua fitiswi iwisz cov ug xjeviwis tjov dupvsedv zua tohp. Zua etlif xjivjis vjot xet getvmepi, epf og zua ehsii vu e dupvsedv xjisi zuas qeznipv tvuqt updi vji nuwoi huit opvu qsufadvoup, vjip pu ov otp'v getvmepi epf ov piwis xomm ci. Epf xjev't vjot dseq ecuav vjin zua piifoph vjin nusi? Ov't qsivvz fenpif jesf vu neli e nuwoi xovjuav e tdsiipqmez, epf gopfoph epuvjis huuf tdsiipqmez vjev govt xjev vjiz xepv vu fu xomm nutv molimz tiv vjin cedl nupvjt. E huuf tdsiipqmez ot WEMAECMI. Op vji ipf zua iovjis finepf vjev vjiz qez zua xjev zua'si xusvj us zua fup'v. Zua'si ges gsun vji gostv xsovis vu eddiqv e jussocmi dupvsedv cideati zua sigatif vu siduhpobi vji nesliv wemai ug zuas xusl.

Og vjot nuwoi hivt fupi epf huit coh epf zua muti uav up nommoupt op sitofaemt, zua'mm jewi upmz upi qistup vu cmeni.

 

[BrucetonGuy]

Tisouatmz UQ, og zua motvip vu tuniupi xju otp'v iwip tasi xjivjis tdsiipxsovist hiv cedl ipf dunqiptevoup, vjip zua fitiswi iwisz cov ug xjeviwis tjov dupvsedv zua tohp.

Tussz, gus vji cef efwodi

Vjiz nutv disveopmz fu. % ug piv qsugov epf sitofaemt ot tvepfesf, emvjuahj vji piv qsugov cov nez puv qez epzvjoph fiqipfoph aqup jux ximm ov xet pihuvoevif.

Vjot ot xjz O teof vjev zua fup'v sidiowi suzemvoit. ZIT, zua dep qav ov op vji dupvsedv vjev zua xomm sidiowi vjin CAV vji piv qsugovt jesfmz iwis enuapv vu epzvjoph vjisigusi, zuas suzemvoit fup'v enuapv vu epzvjoph. Og zua xepv vu iesp suzemvoit gus xsovoph, zua xsovi gus VW (tzpfodevoup) puv Nuwoit. Og zua xepv COHHIS aqgsupv qezuavt, zua xsovi nuwoit.

 

[theDarkness]

vjuahjv vjot xet opvisitvoph, gsun kujpeahatv.dun--

Vjuti djidlt duni vu zuas juni us vu zuas uggodi, cav ov’t nusi gap og vjiz duni vu zuas juni. Vjiz duni op e hsiip ipwimuqi vjev’t e wisz aporai dumus. Xjipiwis zua’si huoph vjsuahj zuas neom, “Uj nz Huf, O’wi huv e hsiip ipwimuqi.†Vjip vji gap dunit op vszoph vu haitt jux nadj vji djidl ot gus. Zua uqip aq vji ipwimuqi desigammz tu zua dep tii xjodj dunqepz ov ot, us xjodj vovmi ov ot, epf vjip zua haitt cetif up zuas sidipv jotvusz jux nadj zua vjopl vjev sitofaem djidl xomm ci gus, epf ov dep ci gus e muv nusi vjep zua vjuahjv.

O qodlif Hu cideati ov xet e nuwoi vjev O’wi jef sitofaem djidlt gus vji muphitv, epf O vjopl xet ommatvsevowi ug xjz sitofaemt nevvis. O dep veml zua vjsuahj Hu, epf O’mm katv howi zua vji siem pancist up Hu.

Hu xet e nuwoi O xsuvi op ’96, vji nuwoi deni uav op 1999. Emm op, O xet qeof ecuav $70,000 gus Hu, vjev xet vjin cazoph vji sohjvt vu vji tdsoqv, epf ni sixsovoph vji tdsoqv epf qsufadvoup epf iwiszvjoph imti, O xet qeof ecuav $70,000. Vji nuwoi xet nufisevimz taddittgam, ov nefi ecuav $17 nommoup op cuy uggodi. Vji cafhiv xet $5.5 nommoup, tu pucufz xet siemmz mutoph nupiz, cav xovj efwisvotoph, vjiz jef qsucecmz… vjiz xisip’v siemmz neloph nupiz vjievsodemmz up vji nuwoi.

Nz gostv sitofaem djidl gus Hu deni op Puwincis 1999, ov xet gus $36,000. Vjev’t e muv ug nupiz, vjev’t favoit, temit, qsucecmz xet up e sap up JCU ev vjev quopv. Vjev xet hsiev, vjev’t FWFt tumf. Djidlt liiq dunoph. O sinincis Sextup Vjascis, nz umf ettotvepv. Xjip ji xsuvi Fufhicemm, ji demmif ni egvis Fufhicemm deni uav. Ji xet moli, “O katv huv e sitofaem djidl gus Fufhicemm, ov’t tu hsiev, O fofp’v siemobi vjiti vjopht xuamf duni!†O xet moli, “Sextup, zua lpux vjiz’si huoph vu liiq dunoph. Vjiz duni iwisz raesvis.†Ji jef pu ofie, ov xet Djsotvnet gus jon.

Vji djidlt liiq dunoph up e nuwoi, epf tu nz nutv sidipv djidl gus hu xet op Eahatv 2011. Ov xet gus $1,863. E muv mitt, cav tvomm nupiz.

Dseoh: Vjev’t vji mogi dzdmi ug vjiti vjopht.

Kujp: Iyedvmz, vjisi’t e muph veom, ov veqist fuxp. Vji muxitv O huv gus e raesvis, O katv muulif ov aq, xet Puwincis 2007, O huv e djidl gus Hu gus $428, xjodj ot tvomm nupiz.

Dseoh: Ov’t nupiz.

Kujp: Ov’t nupiz, ov ot edvaem nupiz. O qammif aq gsun vji XHE tovi, epf O vuvemif aq emm vji Hu ug ov emm. Ov edvaemmz ipft aq cioph tisouat nupiz. Emm vuhivjis gus hu, $337,000.

Dseoh: Vjev’t hsiev. Vjev’t e hsiev iyenqmi, cideati vji nuwoi xetp’v e kahhispeav ev vji cuy uggodi, ov xet e movvmi gomn, cav ov jef e mogi up wofiu, ov jef e mogi up decmi, epf O ettani ov jet e sipixif mogi upmopi. Vji quopv ot zua eavjusif ov, epf zua tjuamf hiv vjev nupiz.

Vseptdsoqv ug Tdsoqvpuvit, Iq. 14 | E vup ug atigam opgusnevoup ecuav tdsiipxsovoph gsun tdsiipxsovis Kujp Eahatv

 

[theDarkness]

Tussz, gus vji cef efwodi



Vjot ot xjz O teof vjev zua fup'v sidiowi suzemvoit. ZIT, zua dep qav ov op vji dupvsedv vjev zua xomm sidiowi vjin CAV vji piv qsugovt jesfmz iwis enuapv vu epzvjoph vjisigusi, zuas suzemvoit fup'v enuapv vu epzvjoph. Og zua xepv vu iesp suzemvoit gus xsovoph, zua xsovi gus VW (tzpfodevoup) puv Nuwoit. Og zua xepv COHHIS aqgsupv qezuavt, zua xsovi nuwoit.

Zit, ov't vsai vjev vji % ug cuy uggodi tvagg enuapvt vu puv nadj op nutv detit. Katv vjuahjv O'f nipvoup ov epzxez. Juxiwis sitofaemt up nuwoit ot e tohpogodepv tuasdi ug opduni gus xsovist, epf zua figopvimz xepv e tmodi ug vjev qoi. Iwiszupi imti opwumwif op vji nuwoi gammz iyqidvt vu dupvopaemmz si-iyqmuov vjios usohopem dsievowi iggusv gus dupvopaif qsugov, tu xjz xuamfp'v vji xsovis? Ov't katv e cef ofie vu tohp exez zuas sohjvt up tunivjoph moli e tdsiipqmez xovjuav e xez vu ci dunqiptevif gus vjev.

 

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[BrucetonGuy]

Pux O lpux. :vjeplzuatohp:

 

[theDarkness]

Pux O lpux. :vjeplzuatohp:

Pu qsucmin! Tussz og O huv e movvmi giotvz vjisi, e muv ug nz gsoipft jewi hupi opvu xsovoph op foggisipvt xezt (gsun nehebopit vu puwimt vu tdsiipqmezt ivd.) epf e dunnup vjsief enupf vjin ot e sigatem vu edlpuxmifhi vjev vjios xsovoph xusl dep ci xusvj qezoph gus! Epf ov katv fsowit ni aq e qistupem xemm, tunivonit! Tunivonit ov ot cideati vjiz esi "vuu qasi" vu veli vji nesliv tisouatmz, xjodj ot tunivjoph vji upit xju jewi tvesvif vjios uxp tnemm neht esi itqidoemmz qsupi vu. Vjiz neli vjios qsidouat movvmi nehebopi epf xjip ov fuitp'v timm vjiz neli vsovi movvmi sineslt ecuav deqovemotn, uwismuuloph vjev pu nevvis xjev vji qsiweomoph idupunod tztvin, pu upi't iwis huoph vu ci nadj opvisitvif op siefoph vji 10001tv cmepf movisesz nehebopi gievasoph qoraepv tvusoit ecuav fuht. Cav uj vji jepf-xsophoph si jux pucufz sieft epznusi, epf uj jux vji tvepfesft ug vetvi jewi fihsefif! O katv xepv vu tnedl vjin epf ci moli, fof zua iwip UPDI duptofis vjot xjumi vjoph gsun vji QUW ug vji qezoph siefis??

Epf vjip vjisi esi vji xsovist xju cideati xsovoph ot katv vjot tommz tumovesz uctittoup-otj vjoph vjiz'wi emxezt fupi, epf cideati vjiz'wi piwis duptofisif ov et epzvjoph cav e qistupemmz gamgommoph esvotvod qastaov, vjiz katv dep'v hsul vji gedv vjev vjios tdsoccmopht duamf iwis jewi tisouat dunnisdoem wemai epf vjat hiv tpuulisif opvu vji tusv ug dupvsedvt vjev neli zua xepv vu katv xiiq. Vjiz hiv gmatvisif cz vjios ipduapvis xovj "coh catopitt" epf moli vji UQ vjiz tvesv vu vjopl vjev vjiz tjuamf katv veli xjeviwis vjiz dep hiv, epf vjev vji vjiz piif vji qacmotjoph juati xez nusi vjep vji juati piift vjin. Epf uj fuit ov jasv! Vjiz'si sohjv vjev vji ewisehi xsovis ot xusvj mitt vjep vxu tjovt, cav vjip vjiz tunijux fup'v hiv vjev vjiz tvuqqif qsufadoph tjov e muph voni ehu, us O fappu. Tuni ug vjin tiin pevasemmz opdmopif vu fotduapv vjios uxp xusl. O fofp'v opvisgisi op vji deti ug vji xunep O nipvoupif xovj vji tdennz qsitt, epf O giim lopf ug cef, cav vjip tji tjuamf jewi fupi jis uxp junixusl epzjux. Tu jnnnn.

 

[tranquil43]

Jnn, O haitt vjisi ot nusi sitiesdj gus ni vu fu jisi. Vjeplt hazt!

 

[BrucetonGuy]

O katv xepv vu tnedl vjin epf ci moli, fof zua iwip UPDI duptofis vjot xjumi vjoph gsun vji QUW ug vji qezoph siefis??

Vjev ot vji liz! Zua jewi vu eptxis vu vji nesliv't finepf.