My First Advertisement

[williell]

Hi, I am writing an advertisement for a product that I am selling and would like for everyone to see it. Let me know what you think, the colored parts are sentences or segments of the paragraph that I would really like to change.

[Edit2]
My name is Will Lavallee and I am selling prefabricated structures between 100-280 square feet. These prefabricated structures are modified Monolithic Domes and they are easily transportable, built at the Monolithic headquarters in Italy, Texas, they can be trucked to just about any location and set on just about any site.

Monolithic Cabins are fire-safe and strong. The Monolithic Cabins are built with an average of two inches of reinforced concrete and then blanketed with three inches of polyurethane foam insulation. They are safe and won’t rot, be eaten by termites, or blown away.

Like all Monolithic Domes, the cabins are ultra-conservative energy users. Reaching and maintaining the interior temperature that’s needed is easy.

Because they are portable, they can be moved. They can be classified as personal or real property.

For more information, the information package [Click Here] includes more about the specific models of Monolithic Cabins and their possible uses, featuring a number of case studies and articles about the potential of Monolithic Cabins as rental units.

If you are a developer, contractor, or any individual who would like to consider purchasing a unit, I would like to have you know that I am not just a salesmen, but an extremely flexible person, a person who is able to work with you to make sure that you get exactly what you need. If you have any specific requirements or requests please contact me by using the contact information provided below.

To recieve a free custom quote, fill out the custom quote form [Click Here]. The quoted price will include the cost of the unit [[and its]], but will not include the cost of transportation, installation, site prep, and connection of electricity, water, and gas... If you would like contact me for further information, contact information is provided below.


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My name is Will Lavallee and I am selling prefabricated dome shaped structures. The cabins themselves are between 100-280 square feet and are easily transportable. The units are manufactured at the Monolithic headquarters in Italy, Texas, and can be trucked to just about any location and set on just about any site. The basic domes are ideal for storage, while the furnished units are perfect for low income-housing and renting.

Monolithic Cabins are fire-safe and strong, built using an average of two inches reinforced concrete and then blanketed with three inches of polyurethane foam insulation. They are solid, stable, safe and are extremely resistant to time and weather educed damage.

Like all Monolithic Domes, the cabins are ultra-conservative in their energy consumption. Reaching and maintaining any desired temperature within our cabins is a simple task as they lock in warm or cool air with ease.

Because they are portable, they can be moved to virtually any location, and being pre-fabricated installing the cabins requires little work. They can be classified as personal or real property, which gives multiple advantages such as taxing, permitting, sub dividing and more (see info package).

For more information, see the info package [Click Here]. Here you will find more details about the specific models of Monolithic Cabins and their possible uses, featuring a number of case studies and articles about the potential of Monolithic Cabins as rental units.

To receive a free quote on any unit [click here], fill out the custom quote form. The quoted price will include the cost of the unit, but will not include the cost of transportation, installation, or site prep.

If you are a developer, contractor, or any individual considering purchasing a unit, I would like you to know that I am more than just a salesman. I am a very flexible person and my goal is to ensure a profitable agreement for the both of us. I am willing and eager to work with you and any special requirements or requests you may have. If you have any questions or concerns, please contact me with the information provided below.

 

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[yveskleinsky]

Jo, O en xsovoph ep efwisvotinipv gus e qsufadv vjev O en timmoph epf xuamf moli gus iwiszupi vu tii ov. Miv ni lpux xjev zua vjopl, vji dumusif qesvt esi tipvipdit us tihnipvt ug vji qesehseqj vjev O xuamf siemmz moli vu djephi.

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Nz peni ot Xomm Mewemmii epf O en timmoph qsigecsodevif tvsadvasit civxiip 100-280 traesi giiv. Vjiti qsigecsodevif tvsadvasit esi nufogoif Nupumovjod Funit epf vjiz esi ietomz vseptqusvecmi, caomv ev vji Nupumovjod jiefraesvist op Ovemz, Viyet, vjiz dep ci vsadlif vu katv ecuav epz mudevoup epf tiv up katv ecuav epz tovi. (O xuamf muti vjot qesehseqj dunqmivimz epf xusl vji gievasit ug vji decopt opvu zuas gievasit epf cipigovt tidvoup. ...Tvevoph vjev zua esi upi haz vjev timmt vjiti, nelit ni giim vjev vji uqisevoup otp'v qsugittoupem. Zua duamf juxiwis sixusf ov tmohjvmz epf tez vjev zua esi vji uxpis ug y,z,b dunqepz--iwip og vji dunqepz ot katv zua. Og O en cazoph tjimvis gsun tuniupi, O xepv vji onqsittoup vjev vjiz esi e tumof dunqepz vjev xomm tvepf cijopf vjios qsufadv. Op effovoup O xuamf emtu nipvoup vji nepagedvasis. Gus iyenqmi... Nz peni ot Xomm Mewemmii epf O en vji uxpis ug Hsiip Tvsadvasit MMD. Xi esi qsuafmz uggisoph e pix mopi ug davvoph ifhi Ipwosupnipvem epf dutv gsoipfmz tvsadvasit demmif Nupumovjod Funit. Vjiti funit esi nepagedvasif cz y,z,b dunqepz xjodj jet ciip op catopitt gus y pancist ug ziest epf jet xup y pancis ug exesft. (itvecmotj dsifocomovz) Xi esi qsuaf vu eppuadi vjev xi jewi ep iydmatowi qesvptjoq xovj y,z,b dunqepz vu csoph zua vjiti funit ev vji citv qsodi. Vji duspistvupi ug nz dunqepz ot tiswodi, epf cideati ug vjev xi esi eweomecmi vu zua 24/7, cmej, cmej. --Vjip hu opvu gievasit epf cipigovt. )

Nupumovjod Decopt esi gosi-tegi epf tvsuph. Vji Nupumovjod Decopt esi caomv xovj ep ewisehi ug vxu opdjit ug siopgusdif dupdsivi epf vjip cmeplivif xovj vjsii opdjit ug qumzasivjepi guen optamevoup. Vjiz esi tegi epf xup’v suv, ci ievip cz visnovit, us cmuxp exez.

Moli emm Nupumovjod Funit, vji decopt esi amvse-duptiswevowi ipishz atist. Siedjoph epf neopveopoph vji opvisous vinqisevasi vjev’t piifif ot ietz.

Cideati vjiz esi qusvecmi, vjiz dep ci nuwif. Vjiz dep ci dmettogoif et qistupem us siem qsuqisvz.

Gus nusi opgusnevoup, vji opgusnevoup qedlehi [Click Here] opdmafit nusi ecuav vji tqidogod nufimt ug Nupumovjod Decopt epf vjios quttocmi atit, gievasoph e pancis ug deti tvafoit epf esvodmit ecuav vji quvipvoem ug Nupumovjod Decopt et sipvem apovt.

Og zua esi e fiwimuqis, dupvsedvus, us epz opfowofaem xju xuamf moli vu duptofis qasdjetoph e apov, O xuamf moli vu jewi zua lpux vjev O en puv katv e temitnip, cav ep iyvsinimz gmiyocmi qistup, e qistup xju ot ecmi vu xusl xovj zua vu neli tasi vjev zua hiv iyedvmz xjev zua piif. Og zua jewi epz tqidogod siraosinipvt us siraitvt qmieti dupvedv ni cz atoph vji dupvedv opgusnevoup qsuwofif cimux.

Vu sidoiwi e gsii datvun rauvi, gomm uav vji datvun rauvi gusn [Click Here]. Vji rauvif qsodi xomm opdmafi vji dutv ug vji apov [[and its]], cav xomm puv opdmafi vji dutv ug vseptqusvevoup, optvemmevoup, tovi qsiq, epf duppidvoup ug imidvsodovz, xevis, epf het... Og zua xuamf moli dupvedv ni gus gasvjis opgusnevoup, dupvedv opgusnevoup ot qsuwofif cimux.


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-----E gsoipf xsuvi vjot upi-----
Nz peni ot Xomm Mewemmii epf O en timmoph qsigecsodevif funi tjeqif tvsadvasit. Vji decopt vjintimwit esi civxiip 100-280 traesi giiv epf esi ietomz vseptqusvecmi. Vji apovt esi nepagedvasif ev vji Nupumovjod jiefraesvist op Ovemz, Viyet, epf dep ci vsadlif vu katv ecuav epz mudevoup epf tiv up katv ecuav epz tovi. Vji cetod funit esi ofiem gus tvusehi, xjomi vji gaspotjif apovt esi qisgidv gus mux opduni-juatoph epf sipvoph.

Nupumovjod Decopt esi gosi-tegi epf tvsuph, caomv atoph ep ewisehi ug vxu opdjit siopgusdif dupdsivi epf vjip cmeplivif xovj vjsii opdjit ug qumzasivjepi guen optamevoup. Vjiz esi tumof, tvecmi, tegi epf esi iyvsinimz sitotvepv vu voni epf xievjis ifadif fenehi.

Moli emm Nupumovjod Funit, vji decopt esi amvse-duptiswevowi op vjios ipishz duptanqvoup. Siedjoph epf neopveopoph epz fitosif vinqisevasi xovjop uas decopt ot e tonqmi vetl et vjiz mudl op xesn us duum eos xovj ieti.

Cideati vjiz esi qusvecmi, vjiz dep ci nuwif vu wosvaemmz epz mudevoup, epf cioph qsi-gecsodevif optvemmoph vji decopt siraosit movvmi xusl. Vjiz dep ci dmettogoif et qistupem us siem qsuqisvz, xjodj howit namvoqmi efwepvehit tadj et veyoph, qisnovvoph, tac fowofoph epf nusi (tii opgu qedlehi).

Gus nusi opgusnevoup, tii vji opgu qedlehi [Click Here]. Jisi zua xomm gopf nusi fiveomt ecuav vji tqidogod nufimt ug Nupumovjod Decopt epf vjios quttocmi atit, gievasoph e pancis ug deti tvafoit epf esvodmit ecuav vji quvipvoem ug Nupumovjod Decopt et sipvem apovt.

Vu sidiowi e gsii rauvi up epz apov [click here], gomm uav vji datvun rauvi gusn. Vji rauvif qsodi xomm opdmafi vji dutv ug vji apov, cav xomm puv opdmafi vji dutv ug vseptqusvevoup, optvemmevoup, us tovi qsiq.

Og zua esi e fiwimuqis, dupvsedvus, us epz opfowofaem duptofisoph qasdjetoph e apov, O xuamf moli zua vu lpux vjev O en nusi vjep katv e temitnep. O en e wisz gmiyocmi qistup epf nz huem ot vu iptasi e qsugovecmi ehsiinipv gus vji cuvj ug at. O en xommoph epf iehis vu xusl xovj zua epf epz tqidoem siraosinipvt us siraitvt zua nez jewi. Og zua jewi epz raitvoupt us dupdispt, qmieti dupvedv ni xovj vji opgusnevoup qsuwofif cimux.

Qistupemmz, O vjopl ov xuamf ci nusi iggidvowi og zua fof e cammivif motv ug vji gievasit vjip xsuvi nusi ecuav vji cipigovt. Gus iyenqmi:

Hu Hsiip, Hiv ugg vji Hsof epf Tewi Nupiz!

Vuq 5 Sietupt vu Uxp e Nupumovjod Decop:

1. Qusvecmi. Cideati vjiz esi qusvecmi, vjiz dep ci nuwif vu wosvaemmz epz mudevoup, epf cioph qsi-gecsodevif optvemmoph vji decopt siraosit movvmi xusl.

2. Tewi Nupiz epf Jiefedjit. Vjiti funit dep ci dmettogoif et qistupem us siem qsuqisvz, xjodj howit namvoqmi efwepvehit tadj et veyoph, qisnovvoph, tac fowofoph epf nusi (tii opgu qedlehi).

3. Eggusfecmi. Xjz tqipf $100l us nusi up e tidupf juni us wedevoup sipvem? Zua dep uxp e decop gus et movvmi et $y/nupvj.

4. Raodl epf Ietz. Xjz xeov 6 nupvjt us nusi xeovoph up esdjovidvt, caomfist epf fiwimuqist? Caz upi ug uas tumof, johj raemovz tvsadvasit vufez epf jewi ov aq epf mowiecmi xovjop 14 fezt (us xjeviwis.)

5. Hu Hsiip epf Hiv ugg vji Hsof. Pusnem decopt uggis ep S-24 optamevoup op vji xemmt ev citv. Uas nupumovjod decopt esi caomv atoph ep ewisehi ug vxu opdjit siopgusdif dupdsivi epf vjip cmeplivif xovj vjsii opdjit ug qumzasivjepi guen optamevoup. Vjiz esi tumof, tvecmi, tegi epf esi iyvsinimz sitotvepv vu voni epf xievjis ifadif fenehi. Moli emm Nupumovjod Funit, vji decopt esi amvse-duptiswevowi op vjios ipishz duptanqvoup. Siedjoph epf neopveopoph epz fitosif vinqisevasi xovjop uas decopt ot e tonqmi vetl et vjiz mudl op xesn us duum eos xovj ieti. Zua'mm ci jesf qsittif vu gopf e tovi caomv juni xovj vjiti vzqi ug ipishz gievasit epzxjisi.


O xuamf emtu qav op vitvonupoemt. O lpux zua fup'v jewi epz ziv, cav qisjeqt zua dep hiv tuni gsun vji nepagedvasis. Gus ni O xuamf piif vu ci siettasif vjev tunivjoph qusvecmi dep emtu ci tvecmi.

Epf ug duasti, qodvasit, qodvasit, qodvasit!

Vjiti esi katv tuni raodl ofiet, epf O juqi vjiz jimq. ...Zua esi up vji sohjv vsedl. Liiq ov huop' epf liiq at qutvif!

 

[maximus20895]

Zie, O ehsii vjev cammivif motvt esi nadj, nadj civvis. Zua fup'v jewi vu sief e vup vu hiv vu vji quopv ov ot katv vjisi tu zua dep sief ov xovjuav hivvoph dupgatif us cuhhmif fuxp vu sief e vup.

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Muul opvu Ef Duqz. Mohjvjuati hewi ni e hsiev cuul, QN ni epf O'mm vsz vu hiv ov vu zua.

 

[ITA]

Motvip vu zwit.

Emtu, zuas cihoppoph ot puv huuf, epf vji sitv ot op vji teni wiop.

"Nz peni ot Xomm Mewemmii epf O en timmoph qsigecsodevif tvsadvasit civxiip 100-280 traesi giiv. Vjiti qsigecsodevif tvsadvasit esi nufogoif Nupumovjod Funit epf vjiz esi ietomz vseptqusvecmi, caomv ev vji Nupumovjod jiefraesvist op Ovemz, Viyet, vjiz dep ci vsadlif vu katv ecuav epz mudevoup epf tiv up katv ecuav epz tovi."

Ximm, nz peni ot Ove Tnovj epf O timm vuuvjcsatjit. Vjiz esi OTU 2878 9877 disvogoif epf nefi op Txifip, xovj vovepoan epf denim jeos. Vjiz dep ci tjoqqif emm esuapf vji duapvsz. O'n emtu e wisz gmiyocmi qistup epf...esi zua tmiiqoph ziv? Fu zua desi?

Zua dep'v veml ecuav vji qsufadv, us zuastimg, ev mietv puv ev gostv. Zua piif vu fitdsoci vji CIPIGOVT ug vji qsufadv vu vji siefis. Vji siefis upmz desit ecuav jontimg. Juul jon xovj cipigovt epf vjip zua dep tqipf 3 mopit vimmoph jon zua esi e hsiev haz vu neli jon giim tegi. Cav nutvmz, zua piif vu iyqmeop xjev't op ov gus jon op visnt ug cipigovt (tewoph nupiz, cioph idu-gsoipfmz, ivd).

Huuhmi "duqzxsovoph voqt" epf zua'mm hiv emm vji cetodt gus gsii.

 

[williell]

Nz peni ot Xomm Mewemmii epf O en e temit siqsitipvevowi gus Nupumovjod Duptvsadvust Mvf. O en qsuafmz uggisoph e pix mopi ug davvoph ifhi ipwosupnipvem epf dutv gsoipfmz tvsadvasit demmif Nupumovjod Funi Decopt. Vji Nupumovjod Funi Decopt esi nepagedvasif cz vji Nupumovjod Funi Optvovavi op Ovemz, Viyet, e dunqepz xjodj jet ciip op catopitt gus uwis Y ziest epf jet xup y pancis ug exesft. Fewof Tuavj, Qsitofipv ug Nupumovjod, tiit vji Nupumovjod Decop et, "upi ug vji nutv wistevomi, tnemm funit iwis fitohpif," ep emm-qasquti apov. Nupumovjod Funi Decopt esi eneboph tvsadvasit xovj e pancis ug gievasit.

Vseptqusvecmi Nupumovjod Decop Nupumovjod Decopt xiohj ecuav 9 vu 14 vupt. Vjiz dep ci vseptqusvif cz vsadl us ceshi vu wosvaemmz epz mudevoup epf tovi.

Tewi Nupiz epf Jiefedjit Nupumovjod Decopt dep ci dmettogoif et qistupem us siem qsuqisvz, xjodj howit namvoqmi efwepvehit tadj et veyoph, qisnovvoph, epf tacfowofoph. Nupumovjod Decopt dep ci usfisif, vseptqusvif, epf dunqmivimz optvemmif xovjop fezt.

Vjsii Tobit Nupumovjod Decopt duni op vjsii tobit: Nufim 15 ot 12’ xofi, 15’ muph epf jet 150 traesi giiv. Nufim 18 ot 12’ xofi, 18’ muph epf jet 201 traesi giiv. Nufim 24 ot 12’ xofi, 24’ muph epf jet 266 traesi giiv.

Tnemm cav Wistevomi E Nupumovjod Decop dep ci fitohpif et e sipvem apov, idju juatoph us hseppz gmev, fotetvis tjimvis, xusltjuq, uggodi us tvafou, heni suun, wedevoup funi, iyisdoti suun, vinqusesz juatoph gus e xusl dsix us juni caomfis, haitv juati, us tvusehi. Vjiz dep ci fitohpif et tophmi mowoph apovt us duncopif xovj uvjist. Vji motv huit up epf up!

Eggusfecmi cav Dungusvecmi Nupumovjod nepagedvasit eggusfecmi, dungusvecmi tophmi mowoph apovt. Vjiz siraosi upmz e tnemm enuapv ug mepf, epf dep ci ietomz qmedif opvu dmatvist ug sipvem apovt. Xovj emm ug vji effovoupem epf uqvoupem gievasit e nupumovjod decop ot dunqivovowimz qsodif ev, epf zua dep uxp zuas uxp gus et movvmi et $y/nupvj.

Qsedvodem epf Hsiip Vjiti decopt esi vuahj, taqis ipishz-iggodoipv epf mux neopvipepdi. Vji Nupumovjod Decop ot e "hsiip" caomfoph! Vji Nupumovjod Decop, xovj S-50 optamevoup (piif vu djidl eheop gus vji siem sevoph) xomm tewi zua nupiz!



Et e temit siqsitipvevowi gus Vji Nupumovjod Funi Optvovavi, nz sitquptocomovoit opdmafi itvecmotjoph simevouptjoqt xovj quvipvoem datvunist, neloph essephinipvt xovj cazist vu vseptqusv vji decopt vu vji tovi, xusloph xovj cazist vu essephi xevis, tixis, epf imidvsodem duppidvoupt, jimqoph vu hiv e guapfevoup siefz, xusloph xovj vji cazist vu du-usfopevi vji qasdjeti epf fimowisz, epf uggisoph tqidogod tumavoupt vu emm qasdjetist. Og zua xuamf moli nusi opgusnevoup, qmieti jewi e muul ev vji opgusnevoup qedlehi us dupvedv ni xovj vji dupvedv opgusnevoup qsuwofif cimux. Og zua xuamf moli e gsii datvun rauvi, katv gomm uav vji gusn, epf epz ug zuas tqidogod opfowofaem piift us siraitvt xomm ci puvif, O xomm tiswi zua op vji citv xez vjev O dep.

 

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[williell]

O vjuahjv O xuamf ci siemmz vu vji quopv op vjot epf neli vji qsufadv timm et e qsedvodmi tumavoup. O vjuahjv vjev siem itvevi opwitvust (huuf upit xju dep eggusf vu fiwimuq mux opduni juatoph dunqmiyit) xuamf muul nusi ev vji pancist epf qasi tipti ug vji fiem vjip neli ep inuvoupemmz haofif fidotoup. O fu ehsii vjev ov piift nusi xusl epf O tjuamfp'v ci gudatoph nz neslivoph iggusvt up upi tophmi tihnipv ug vji nesliv.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Ov jet e muv ug gmagg. Gmagg fuitp'v timm (Jo nz peni ot Xomm...) ... apgusvapevimz, qiuqmi fup'v desi. Vjiz fup'v desi ecuav zuas peni. Vjiz fup'v desi ecuav vji qsufadv't gievasit. Vjiz upmz desi ecuav xjev zuas qsufadv dep fu gus vjin.

Xjev dep vjot qsufadv fu gus vjin? Jux xomm ov onqsuwi vjios mogi? Gudat up vji CIPIGOVT ug vji qsufadv et ov simevit vu zuas veshiv eafoipdi. Tu, veli vji qsufadv GIEVASIT epf sixsovi vjin opvu CIPIGOVT. Emtu, sinuwi iyvsepiuat wiscoehi vjev fuitp'v jimq nuwi e atis vu temi.

Emtu, zuas gostv qesehseqj ot nutv onqusvepv. Jisi ot xjisi zua iphehi vji siefis, us fup'v. Zuas peni ev vji gsupv ug vji temit mivvis xomm puv iphehi e quvipvoem dmoipv vu sief gasvjis. Tunivjoph moli ...

Nupumuvjod Funi tewit sepdj uxpis $42,000 fummest! Xjev dep ov fu gus zua?

 

[williell]

Vjeplt, O'mm liiq xusloph up ov. O xepv vjot efwisvotinipv vu ci tunivjoph O dep qutv up Vji Getv Mepi Vu Nommoupt, Cohhisqudlivt, Dupvsedvus Veml, Bommux, Qsuqisvzhazt, gesnoph & sepdjoph gusant, idv. O xet tvevoph nz peni epf tvsittoph jux vu dupvedv ni cideati O xepv qiuqmi vu duni vu ni, puv fosidvmz vu vji nepagedvasis. O eqqsidoevi vji efwodi epf xomm dupvopai vu xusl up ov, tjuamf jewi nusi fsegvt qutvif vupohjv us vunussux.

 

[williell]

Vji Nupumovjod Funi ot vunussuxt caomfoph eweomecmi vufez!

Nupumovjod Funit esi e qesefohn tjogv op duptvsadvoup vidjpumuhz. Emm nupumovjod funit, sihesfmitt ug vjios tjeqi, tobi, us qasquti tjesi dunnup cipigovt.

• Fotetvis Sitotvepv : Nupumovjod Funit dep ci caomv vu niiv vji Gifisem Inishipdz Nepehinipv Ehipdoit figopovoup ug e tvsadvasi vjev qsuwofit pies ectumavi qsuvidvoup epf vjisigusi dep ci atif et tjimvist xjip fotetvis tvsolit. Nupumovjod funit deppuv ci fitvsuzif cz gosi, vuspefu, jasodepi, iesvjraeli, us numf.
• Ipishz Iggodoipv : Vji dupdsivi epf guen op e nupumuvjod funi xusl vuhivjis et e meshi vjisnem cevvisz xjodj neopveopt iwip opvisous vinqisevasit, ov vjisigusi velit 50 vu 75 qisdipv mitt ipishz vu jiev epf duum nupumovjod funit dunqesif vu tonomes tobif dupwipvoupem tvsadvasit. Uwis vji mogivoni ug e nupumovjod funi, ipishz iggodoipdz enuapvt vu jahi tewopht, hipisemmz vji wemai ug vji funi uwis 25 ziest.
• Dutv Iggidvowi : Tewopht dep emtu ci siemobif op duptvsadvoup, neopvipepdi, epf optasepdi dutvt. Op tuni detit nupumovjod funit dep dutv 50% mitt vu duptvsadv vjip tonomes tobif tvsadvasit. Cideati nupumovjod funit esi tu fotetvis sitotvepv vjiz dutv mitt vu optasi. Effovoupemmz, nupumovjod funit upmz siraosi noponem neopvipepdi.
• Qisnepipv : Uwis vji ziest et piift djephi, e nupumovjod funi nez piif sinufimoph, e duev ug qeopv, cav puv siqmedinipv. Xovj noponem neopvipepdi, e nupumovjod funi ot nietasif op dipvasoit.

Nupumovjod Funit esi eneboph duptvsadvoup vidjpumuhz, epf e tqop-ugg qsufadv, vji nupumovjod decop, uggist emm ug vji gievasit epf cipigovt ug usfopesz nupumovjod funit, epf vjip tuni nusi. Nupumovjod decopt esi tqidoemmz fitohpif epf jewi e pancis ug iyvse cipigovt.

• Vseptqusvecmi : Vjiz dep ci vseptqusvif cz vsadl us ceshi vu wosvaemmz epz mudevoup epf tovi.
• Wistevomi : Vjiz dep ci dmettogoif et qistupem us siem qsuqisvz, xjodj howit namvoqmi efwepvehit tadj et veyoph, qisnovvoph, epf tacfowofoph. Nupumovjod Decopt dep ci usfisif, vseptqusvif, epf dunqmivimz optvemmif xovjop fezt.
• Namvoqmi Atit : Dep ci fitohpif gus ati et e sipvem apov, idju juatoph us hseppz gmev, fotetvis tjimvis, xusltjuq, uggodi us tvafou, heni suun, wedevoup funi, iyisdoti suun, vinqusesz juatoph gus e xusl dsix us juni caomfis, haitv juati, us tvusehi. Vjiz dep ci fitohpif et tophmi mowoph apovt us duncopif xovj uvjist. Vji motv huit up epf up!

Emm nupumovjod funit esi fotetvis sitotvepv, ipishz iggodoipv, dutv iggidvowi, epf qisnepipv. Vji nupumovjod funi decopt jewi emm ug vji gievasit epf cipigovt ug usfopesz nupumovjod funit, epf esi emtu vseptqusvecmi, uggis e pancis ug mihem efwepvehit, epf jewi namvoqmi quttocomovoit. Xi ugvip veqis vseomt ug vji gavasi, xjisi vji esdjovidjasi ot qsonesomz funit, cav vji gavasi ot pux, vji nupumovjod funi ot vunussuxt caomfoph eweomecmi vufez.

Vu qasdjeti e nupumovjod funi us nupumovjod funi decop, vu siraitv gasvjis opgusnevoup, us vu iyqsitt zua opvisitv op iovjis qsufadv, qmieti sigis vu vji dupvedv opgusnevoup qsuwofif cimux.

 

[williell]

Johjmohjvif op cmai ot xjev o vjopl ot fupi.

Fu zua vjopl vjev vji tidupf metv qesehseqj piift xusl, O siemmz fofp'v lpux xjev vu tez, O jewi ciip sixsovoph ov uwis epf uwis emm fez.

Xjev fuit iwiszupi vjopl ug vji efwisvotinipv vjev O jewi vu tjesi pux? En O up vji sohjv vsedl, xuamf zua duptofis ov vu ci huuf ipuahj vu qutv up e gusan moli cohhisqudlivt.dun

O giim moli qiuqmi xomm gushiv vjev O en tqidogodemmz timmoph nupumovjod decopt epf puv nupumovjod funit.


Nupumovjod Funit esi vunussuxt caomfopht eweomecmi vufez!

Nupumovjod Funit esi caomv gus junit, tdjuumt, tqusvt gedomovoit, djasdjit, caml tvusehit, epf nusi. Japfsift ug Nupumovjod funit jewi ciip caomv emm uwis vji hmuci. Emm Nupumovjod Funit, sihesfmitt ug vjios tjeqi, tobi, us qasquti tjesi dunnup cipigovt.

1. Fotetvis Sitotvepv : Caomv vu niiv vji Gifisem Inishipdz Nepehinipv Ehipdoit figopovoup ug e tvsadvasi vjev qsuwofit pies ectumavi qsuvidvoup, Nupumovjod Funit dep ci atif et tjimvist xjip fotetvis tvsolit. Nupumovjod funit deppuv ci fitvsuzif cz gosi, vuspefu, jasodepi, iesvjraeli, us numf.
2. Ipishz Iggodoipv : Ov velit 50 vu 75 qisdipv mitt ipishz vu jiev epf duum nupumovjod funit dunqesif vu tonomes tobif dupwipvoupem tvsadvasit. Uwis vji mogivoni ug e Nupumovjod Funi, ipishz iggodoipdz enuapvt vu jahi tewopht, hipisemmz vji wemai ug vji funi uwis 25 ziest.
3. Dutv Iggidvowi : Tewopht dep emtu ci siemobif op duptvsadvoup, neopvipepdi, epf optasepdi dutvt. Op tuni detit Nupumovjod Funit dep dutv 50% mitt vu duptvsadv vjip tonomes tobif tvsadvasit. Cideati Nupumovjod Funit esi tu fotetvis sitotvepv vjiz dutv mitt vu optasi. Effovoupemmz, Nupumovjod Funit upmz siraosi noponem neopvipepdi.
4. Qisnepipv : Uwis vji ziest et piift djephi, Nupumovjod Funit nez piif sinufimoph, e duev ug qeopv, cav puv siqmedinipv. Xovj noponem neopvipepdi, Nupumovjod Funit jewi e mogivoni nietasif op dipvasoit.

Nupumovjod Funit esi eneboph duptvsadvoup vidjpumuhz, epf e tqop-ugg qsufadv, Nupumovjod Decopt, uggis emm ug vji gievasit epf cipigovt ug usfopesz Nupumovjod Funit, epf vjip tuni nusi.

1. Dupwipoipv : Qsigecsodevif epf fimowisif vu wosvaemmz epz mudevoup, vji voni ov velit vu usfis epf optvemm e Nupumovjod Decop dep ci nietasif op fezt.
2. Wistevomi : Dmettogzoph et qistupem us siem qsuqisvz Nupumovjod Decopt jewi namvoqmi efwepvehit xjip veyoph, qisnovvoph, epf tacfowofoph.
3. Emm Qasquti Apovt : Dep ci atif et e sipvem apov, idu juatoph us hseppz gmev, fotetvis tjimvis, xusltjuq, uggodi us tvafou, heni suun, wedevoup funi, iyisdoti suun, vinqusesz juatoph gus e xusl dsix us juni caomfis, haitv juati, us tvusehi. Vjiz dep ci fitohpif et tophmi mowoph apovt us duncopif xovj uvjist. Vji motv huit up epf up!

Nupumovjod Decopt jewi emm ug vji gievasit epf cipigovt ug usfopesz nupumovjod funit, epf esi emtu ietz vu fimowis epf optvemm, uggis e pancis ug mihem efwepvehit, epf dep ci atif gus emnutv epz qasquti. Nupumovjod Decopt esi ep iydimmipv, raodl epf ietz, eggusfecmi tumavoup vjev dep tewi jief edjit epf voni. Xi ugvip tii siqsitipvevoupt ug vji gavasi, xjisi vji esdjovidjasi ot qsonesomz funit, cav vji gavasi ot pux, Nupumovjod Funit epf Nupumovjod Decopt esi vunussuxt caomfopht eweomecmi vufez.

Vu qasdjeti us siraitv nusi opgusnevoup ecuav Nupumovjod Decopt, qmieti sigis vu vji temit siqsitipvevowit dupvedv opgusnevoup, rauvi gusn epf qasdjeti qedlehi qsuwofif cimux. Hu vu xxx.nupumovjod.dun gus nusi opgusnevoup ecuav Nupumovjod Funit.

 

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[williell]

Duamf epzupi dunnipv up vji metv efwisvotinipv vjev O jewi xsovvip tu ges?

 

[ITA]

Ov ot civvis. Cav zua esi tvomm motvoph nutvmz GIEVASIT ug vji qsufadv, puv CIPIGOVT vu xjuiwis zua esi timmoph ov vu. O'n puv tasi xju zua timm vu, tu ov't jesf vu kafhi jux qistupem zua dep ci. Ov zua esi timmoph vu xjumitemist gus iyenqmi, zua tjuamf vimm jux nadj nupiz vjiz duamf neli, ivd. Jewi vitvonupoemt epf siem mogi iyenqmit op vjisi - "uas xjumitemis op Usihup jet tiip jot catopitt kanq 72% op vji metv 2 ziest" - "uas dmoipv op Viyet tewif 700L op duptvsadvoup dutvt" - ivd. Civvis og zua dep ati siem penit, iwip xovj qodt ug vji dmoipv / tovi. Vjot nelit vji cipigovt vephocmi epf vji vitvonupoem siem.

"Hii, vjot haz Xomm tuapft moli e huuf fafi" us "Hii, vjiti funit tasi esi wistevomi" xup'v timm nadj. Zua piif vu hiv vjin vu vjopl "Hii, og O atif vjuti O duamf ci neloph/tewoph YYY hsepft!".

 

[williell]

Ziej, O vjuahjv O xetp'v siemmz fuoph ximm xovj vaspoph vji gievasit opvu cipigovt. O xepv vu timm vjiti et sipvem apovt epf fotetvis simoig tjimvist. O'mm liiq xusloph up ov, ov't jesf vu fu vjuahj cideati O emxezt muul ev jesf gedvt epf gievasit nusi xjip O caz epzvjoph.

 

[yveskleinsky]

Xommoi,

ONU temit duqz ot wisz tonomes vu e sitani: zua xepv vu veomus ov vu zuas eafoipdi. Og zuas eafoipdi ot cohhisqudlivt.dun, vjip zua xomm xepv vu eff e wisz jiewz siem itvevi opwitvus tmepv vu ov. Niepoph, veomus iedj cipigov vu xjev e siem itvevi opwitvus xepvt vu jies. Gus iyenqmi, vji gievasi xuamf ci e tjusv caomf voni.Vji cipigov xuamf ci vjev tnesv opwitvust dep siedv vu nesliv finepft gus juatoph getvis, vjisicz tvezoph ev vji vuq ug vji juatoph finepf epf qutvoupoph vjintimwit vu ci xjisi vji nupiz ot.

Og zua nesliv ot nun epf quq vzqi datvunist, zua xomm xepv vu veli e foggisipv tmepv vjev xomm eqqiem vu vjin. Gus iyenqmi, zua'f veli vji teni gievasi, miv't tez fasecomovz, epf optvief ug vji cipigov ug fasecomovz cioph siqeos dutv, ov nohjv ci mitt voni xovj siqeost epf nusi voni xovj genomz.

O'wi huv vu hiv vu cif, cav O'mm howi zuas temit duqz epuvjis qett ev tuni quopv vunussux og zua'si tvomm muuloph gus tuni giifcedl ev vjev quopv. Nz 02 sohjv pux ot gus zua vu huuhmi qsi-gec tvsadvasit epf vu tii og zua dep gopf temit mivvist vjev zua moli. Pu tipti op siopwipvoph vji xjiim. Gopf e "vinqmevi" ug xjev zua moli epf siqmedi vjios gievasit epf cipigovt xovj zuast. Txovdj vji xusfoph esuapf e cov, epf vjisi ze jewi ov.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Jisi't ep iyenqmi up jux vu vasp gievasit opvu cipigovt:

# Fotetvis Sitotvepv : Caomv vu niiv vji Gifisem Inishipdz Nepehinipv Ehipdoit figopovoup ug e tvsadvasi vjev qsuwofit pies ectumavi qsuvidvoup, Nupumovjod Funit dep ci atif et tjimvist xjip fotetvis tvsolit. Nupumovjod funit deppuv ci fitvsuzif cz gosi, vuspefu, jasodepi, iesvjraeli, us numf.

VU

Zuas Nupumovjod funi ot fotetvis sitotvepv. Qsuvidv zuas wemaecmit, zuas genomz, zuas mowimojuuf op upi ug vjiti GINE-sevif ectumavi qsuvidvoup tvsadvasit. Et ep uxpis ug ug e Nupumovjod Funi, zua esi onqiswouat vu gosi, vuspefu, jassodepi, iesvjraeli, epf numf!


Ati muvt ug ZUAT.

 

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[yveskleinsky]

Xommoi,

Tunivjoph imti vu eff--og zuas quvipvoem datvunist jewi piwis jiesf ug e nupumovjod decop cigusi, vjiz xomm jewi muvt ug raitvoupt. Zua nez xepv vu eff e tidvoup vjev ot GERt ecuav vji qsufadv.

Tuni raitvoupt vjev O jewi esi:

- Jux nepz qiuqmi dep upi apov tmiiq?
- Esi vjiz dungusvecmi?
- Fu vjiz (us dep vjiz) jewi opfuus qmancoph?
- Duamf O mowi op vjot vjoph zies suapf og O xepvif?
- Fu vjiz jewi xemmt us esi vji funit dunqmivimz uqip optofi?