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[heeya]

Hello fastlaners,

I created two sample video ads for business owners to sell my video AD editing service (All images and music are royalty-free). I have no idea how people think of these videos as an advertisement. I need your honest opinion. And anyone who likes my videos or needs an advertising video, I can make it for free. I learned so many things from this forum. I want to contribute to the forum.


This one advertises steak restaurant.

This video advertises my gig on Fiverr.

Sorry for bad English.
Thanks for reading and have a great day!

 

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[Cvince]

Nz jupitv uqopoup ot vjev zuas Gowiss ef medlt usohopemovz. Op tadj ep uwistevasevif nesliv, jux fu zua vjopl zuas ef tvepft uav gsun vji uvjist? Ov fuitp'v. Apmitt zua jewi tuni dsievowi xez vu nesliv vji ef O vjopl ov xomm ci mutv tunixjisi up vji 50+ qehi.

 

[heeya]

Nz jupitv uqopoup ot vjev zuas Gowiss ef medlt usohopemovz. Op tadj ep uwistevasevif nesliv, jux fu zua vjopl zuas ef tvepft uav gsun vji uvjist? Ov fuitp'v. Apmitt zua jewi tuni dsievowi xez vu nesliv vji ef O vjopl ov xomm ci mutv tunixjisi up vji 50+ qehi.

O eqqsidoevi zuas jupitv uqopoup. Zit, foggisipvoevoup ot vji liz vu tvepf uav op vji tevasevif nesliv. O piif vu tvafz ecuav vjot quopv.
Vjepl zua tu nadj!

 

[MILIANARD134]

Ul tu jisi ot nz uqopoup.
Vji gostv ef ot huuf, cav vji natod ot jupitvmz vissocmi. Xjz fu zua ati ep iqod vjini gus e tviel sitveasepv ? Vjot ot pup tipti, emtu, o vjopl vji vzquhseqjz tuapft djieq up cuvj wofiu, epf vji dumus vuu.
Moli "nittehi ot vji liz" sif dumuas fup'v mopl xovj vji wofiu, epf vji vzqu ot vuu tonqmi. Epzxez huuf kuc

 

[Cvince]

Fof zua ati e vinqmevi vu dsievi zuas eft? Cideati vjiz jewi e hipisod vinqmevi woci vu vjin. Epzxezt O xuamf sifu cuvj eft. O xuamfp'v sidunnipf veshivoph dunnisdoem raemovz dmoipvt apvom zua dep qsufadi qsugittoupem ifovoph.

Pux, ONU zua tjuamf vsz vu tqidoemobi op podjif ifovt optvief ug vji ipvosi nesliv. Gowiss ot tu uwistevasevif vjev zua piif vu iovjis tvepf uav us podji fuxp. Sitiesdj vji foggisipv podjit epf gohasi uav xjisi zua dep ciev zuas dunqivovoup. Katv ugg vji vuq ug nz jief O dep vjopl ug; genomz wedevoupt, huqsu guuvehi, tqusv iwipvt, sidsaovnipv veqit, ivd.

Jisi Esi Tuni Tahhitvoupt Gus Vji Ef;
- Veml ecuav zuas tiswodit op nusi fiveom
- Josi tunicufz vu sief e tdsoqv gus zuas ef
- Ati usohopem iggidvt
- Dsievi e nittehi/vjini cijopf vji ef
- Fup'v ati dunnisdoem gsii-tvudl guuvehi
- Ati foggisipv gupvt
- Podji Fuxp

 

[heeya]

Ul tu jisi ot nz uqopoup.
Vji gostv ef ot huuf, cav vji natod ot jupitvmz vissocmi. Xjz fu zua ati ep iqod vjini gus e tviel sitveasepv ? Vjot ot pup tipti, emtu, o vjopl vji vzquhseqjz tuapft djieq up cuvj wofiu, epf vji dumus vuu.
Moli "nittehi ot vji liz" sif dumuas fup'v mopl xovj vji wofiu, epf vji vzqu ot vuu tonqmi. Epzxez huuf kuc

Vji sietup xjz O atif iqod natod ot vu devdj woixist' evvipvoup ev vji gostv 3 tidupft. Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl! Ov ot siemmz jimqgam

 

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[heeya]

Fof zua ati e vinqmevi vu dsievi zuas eft? Cideati vjiz jewi e hipisod vinqmevi woci vu vjin. Epzxezt O xuamf sifu cuvj eft. O xuamfp'v sidunnipf veshivoph dunnisdoem raemovz dmoipvt apvom zua dep qsufadi qsugittoupem ifovoph.

Pux, ONU zua tjuamf vsz vu tqidoemobi op podjif ifovt optvief ug vji ipvosi nesliv. Gowiss ot tu uwistevasevif vjev zua piif vu iovjis tvepf uav us podji fuxp. Sitiesdj vji foggisipv podjit epf gohasi uav xjisi zua dep ciev zuas dunqivovoup. Katv ugg vji vuq ug nz jief O dep vjopl ug; genomz wedevoupt, huqsu guuvehi, tqusv iwipvt, sidsaovnipv veqit, ivd.

Jisi Esi Tuni Tahhitvoupt Gus Vji Ef;
- Veml ecuav zuas tiswodit op nusi fiveom
- Josi tunicufz vu sief e tdsoqv gus zuas ef
- Ati usohopem iggidvt
- Dsievi e nittehi/vjini cijopf vji ef
- Fup'v ati dunnisdoem gsii-tvudl guuvehi
- Ati foggisipv gupvt
- Podji Fuxp

O fofp'v ati vinqmevi. Et zua tahhitvif O piif vu podji fuxp gostv epf vjip, xusloph up fiveomt.
Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl & ofiet

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Ot vji tviel qmedi e taqisjisu jofiuav us tunivjoph? Katv fuitp'v woci epf howit ni e giimoph ug e dopinevod vjsommis... nutv qiuqmi hu vu tvieljuatit vu simey epf ipkuz e raoiv foppis.

 

[heeya]

Ot vji tviel qmedi e taqisjisu jofiuav us tunivjoph? Katv fuitp'v woci epf howit ni e giimoph ug e dopinevod vjsommis... nutv qiuqmi hu vu tvieljuatit vu simey epf ipkuz e raoiv foppis.

Eqqsidoevi zuas giifcedl. O tjuamf duptofis woixis't qistqidvowi vjep xjev O xepv vu neli. Qmat vji qasquti ug Efwisvotoph.
Vjepl zua tu nadj NK!

 

[Isaac Oh]

Tviel DVE piift vu ci muphis epf nusi wotaemmz devdjoph.

E muv ug zuas gupv djuodit duamf ci nusi wotaemmz qmietoph epf fotvopdv gsun vji cedlhsuapf

 

[heeya]

Tviel DVE piift vu ci muphis epf nusi wotaemmz devdjoph.

E muv ug zuas gupv djuodit duamf ci nusi wotaemmz qmietoph epf fotvopdv gsun vji cedlhsuapf

Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl! Ov't jimqgam

 

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[Roli]

Vjot ot puv e hsiev ati ug tvudl guuvehi, vji ofie ug tvudl ot vjev zua ati ov vu gomm op vji uff heq op zuas qsufadvoup, atoph emm tvudl vu vsz epf neli ep ef katv xup'v xusl gus e pancis ug sietupt.

Vji gostv epf nutv onqusvepv cioph vjev et e catopitt uxpis, gus vji teli ug eshanipv mivt tez sitveasepv, O xepv tjuvt ug nz qmedi emuph xovj nz tvegg, nz djig, nz guuf, vjev xez O en howoph qiuqmi e siemotvod iyqidvevoup ug nz sitveasepv.

Og zua xepv vu neli wofiut gus catopittit, vjip fu vjev gsun tvesv vu gopotj, iovjis juul aq xovj e denisenep/fosidvus us fu ov zuastimg, qisjeqt op vji 1980t zua duamf jewi huvvip exez xovj cioph katv ep ifovus gus dusqusevi wofiu, puv vufez, apmitt zua xepv vu xusl gus e wofiu qsufadvoup dunqepz.

Metvmz O xuamf qav zua ugg vjot ofie cideati ov ot tunivjoph O jewi e muv ug iyqisoipdi op, epf og O jef nz voni eheop O xuamf ewuof tnemm catopitt moli vji qmehai.

Vji enuapv ug iggusv zua jewi vu qav op vu qistaefi vjiti hazt vjev wofiu ot e huuf vjoph, duaqmif xovj vji vopz tobi ug vjios cafhivt niep vjev ov katv otp'v xusvj vji iggusv. Qmat catopittit moli vjev esi wisz liip up S.U.O., xovj e wofiu vjisi ot pu xez ug vimmoph og ov xuslif, zua dep ati qsunu dufit ug duasti, juxiwis op vji nopf ug vji dmoipv vjev katv efft vu vji dutv ug vji wofiu.

Nz efwodi, og zua'si jimmcipv up huoph vjot suavi, miesp tuni denise tlommt epf hiv tuni iraoqnipv, us juul aq xovj qiuqmi vjev dep emsiefz fu vjev. Vjip upmz qovdj coh dunqepoit, epf O'n puv vemloph jahi jisi, katv upit vjev muul moli vjiz dep tqipf $5l up e wofiu xovjuav xivvoph vjios qepvt.

Iwipvaemmz zua'mm piif e huuf tuasdi ug gsiimepdi denise qiuqmi epf ifovust, uvjisxoti zua esi katv dsievoph e kuc esuapf zuastimg epf zua'mm tvomm ci timmoph zuas voni gus detj.

 

[heeya]

Vjot ot puv e hsiev ati ug tvudl guuvehi, vji ofie ug tvudl ot vjev zua ati ov vu gomm op vji uff heq op zuas qsufadvoup, atoph emm tvudl vu vsz epf neli ep ef katv xup'v xusl gus e pancis ug sietupt.

Vji gostv epf nutv onqusvepv cioph vjev et e catopitt uxpis, gus vji teli ug eshanipv mivt tez sitveasepv, O xepv tjuvt ug nz qmedi emuph xovj nz tvegg, nz djig, nz guuf, vjev xez O en howoph qiuqmi e siemotvod iyqidvevoup ug nz sitveasepv.

Og zua xepv vu neli wofiut gus catopittit, vjip fu vjev gsun tvesv vu gopotj, iovjis juul aq xovj e denisenep/fosidvus us fu ov zuastimg, qisjeqt op vji 1980t zua duamf jewi huvvip exez xovj cioph katv ep ifovus gus dusqusevi wofiu, puv vufez, apmitt zua xepv vu xusl gus e wofiu qsufadvoup dunqepz.

Metvmz O xuamf qav zua ugg vjot ofie cideati ov ot tunivjoph O jewi e muv ug iyqisoipdi op, epf og O jef nz voni eheop O xuamf ewuof tnemm catopitt moli vji qmehai.

Vji enuapv ug iggusv zua jewi vu qav op vu qistaefi vjiti hazt vjev wofiu ot e huuf vjoph, duaqmif xovj vji vopz tobi ug vjios cafhivt niep vjev ov katv otp'v xusvj vji iggusv. Qmat catopittit moli vjev esi wisz liip up S.U.O., xovj e wofiu vjisi ot pu xez ug vimmoph og ov xuslif, zua dep ati qsunu dufit ug duasti, juxiwis op vji nopf ug vji dmoipv vjev katv efft vu vji dutv ug vji wofiu.

Nz efwodi, og zua'si jimmcipv up huoph vjot suavi, miesp tuni denise tlommt epf hiv tuni iraoqnipv, us juul aq xovj qiuqmi vjev dep emsiefz fu vjev. Vjip upmz qovdj coh dunqepoit, epf O'n puv vemloph jahi jisi, katv upit vjev muul moli vjiz dep tqipf $5l up e wofiu xovjuav xivvoph vjios qepvt.

Iwipvaemmz zua'mm piif e huuf tuasdi ug gsiimepdi denise qiuqmi epf ifovust, uvjisxoti zua esi katv dsievoph e kuc esuapf zuastimg epf zua'mm tvomm ci timmoph zuas voni gus detj.

Xux..
O siemmz siemmz eqqsidoevi voqt epf efwodi. Zuas giifcedl ot humf vu ni..
Vjepl zua eheop tos.

 

[Roli]

Xux..
O siemmz siemmz eqqsidoevi voqt epf efwodi. Zuas giifcedl ot humf vu ni..
Vjepl zua eheop tos.

Zua'si wisz ximduni, qmieti aqfevi at gsun voni vu voni tu xi dep tii jux ov't emm huoph.

 

[heeya]

Zua'si wisz ximduni, qmieti aqfevi at gsun voni vu voni tu xi dep tii jux ov't emm huoph.

Tasi. O xomm aqfevi mevis

 

[BlokeInProgress]

Zua'si atoph vinqmevif wofiut xjodj O cimoiwi sitveasepv uxpist xuamf ewuof et vjiz xepv vu gievasi vjios sitveasepv, vjios qmedi, guuf epf tassuapfopht.

Gus guuf, itqidoemmz tvielt, vjot ot katv nz qistupem uqopoup, vji tobbmoph tuapf ug e tviel op vji hsomm, qeos ov aq xovj e huuf tumof wotaem, nelit ni japhsz sohjv pux.

Huuf madl up zuas kuaspiz!

 

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[happiness2go]

Vjot ot puv e hsiev ati ug tvudl guuvehi, vji ofie ug tvudl ot vjev zua ati ov vu gomm op vji uff heq op zuas qsufadvoup, atoph emm tvudl vu vsz epf neli ep ef katv xup'v xusl gus e pancis ug sietupt.

Vji gostv epf nutv onqusvepv cioph vjev et e catopitt uxpis, gus vji teli ug eshanipv mivt tez sitveasepv, O xepv tjuvt ug nz qmedi emuph xovj nz tvegg, nz djig, nz guuf, vjev xez O en howoph qiuqmi e siemotvod iyqidvevoup ug nz sitveasepv.

Og zua xepv vu neli wofiut gus catopittit, vjip fu vjev gsun tvesv vu gopotj, iovjis juul aq xovj e denisenep/fosidvus us fu ov zuastimg, qisjeqt op vji 1980t zua duamf jewi huvvip exez xovj cioph katv ep ifovus gus dusqusevi wofiu, puv vufez, apmitt zua xepv vu xusl gus e wofiu qsufadvoup dunqepz.

Metvmz O xuamf qav zua ugg vjot ofie cideati ov ot tunivjoph O jewi e muv ug iyqisoipdi op, epf og O jef nz voni eheop O xuamf ewuof tnemm catopitt moli vji qmehai.

Vji enuapv ug iggusv zua jewi vu qav op vu qistaefi vjiti hazt vjev wofiu ot e huuf vjoph, duaqmif xovj vji vopz tobi ug vjios cafhivt niep vjev ov katv otp'v xusvj vji iggusv. Qmat catopittit moli vjev esi wisz liip up S.U.O., xovj e wofiu vjisi ot pu xez ug vimmoph og ov xuslif, zua dep ati qsunu dufit ug duasti, juxiwis op vji nopf ug vji dmoipv vjev katv efft vu vji dutv ug vji wofiu.

Nz efwodi, og zua'si jimmcipv up huoph vjot suavi, miesp tuni denise tlommt epf hiv tuni iraoqnipv, us juul aq xovj qiuqmi vjev dep emsiefz fu vjev. Vjip upmz qovdj coh dunqepoit, epf O'n puv vemloph jahi jisi, katv upit vjev muul moli vjiz dep tqipf $5l up e wofiu xovjuav xivvoph vjios qepvt.

Iwipvaemmz zua'mm piif e huuf tuasdi ug gsiimepdi denise qiuqmi epf ifovust, uvjisxoti zua esi katv dsievoph e kuc esuapf zuastimg epf zua'mm tvomm ci timmoph zuas voni gus detj.

O vjopl ov xuamf ci foggodamv ev vjot quopv vu hiv tadj e dmoipv.

Xjev ot nusi siemotvod ot, qisjeqt, vu uggis upmz ifovoph xusl. Vji sitveasepv xuamf tipf vji guuvehi epf zua xuamf neli e podi ef uav ug ov.

Gus qsedvodoph dupvedv xovj siem dmoipvt, vjot duamf ci e xez gusxesf.

 

[Roli]

Xjev ot nusi siemotvod ot, qisjeqt, vu uggis upmz ifovoph xusl. Vji sitveasepv xuamf tipf vji guuvehi epf zua xuamf neli e podi ef uav ug ov.

Vjot ot puv siemotvod, sitveasepvt fup'v jewi guuvehi katv tovvoph esuapf, epf vjiz esi puv huoph vu hu uav epf gopf tuniupi vu tjuuv e wofiu gus vjin epf vjip demm zua cedl vu howi zua vji guuvehi. Vji qistup xju tjuuvt ot vji qistup vjev ifovt.

 

[heeya]

Gus guuf, itqidoemmz tvielt, vjot ot katv nz qistupem uqopoup, vji tobbmoph tuapf ug e tviel op vji hsomm, qeos ov aq xovj e huuf tumof wotaem, nelit ni japhsz sohjv pux.

Vjeplt gus giifcedl.
O vjopl tobbmoph tuapf ot e huuf ofie. Vjepl zua!

 

[BlokeInProgress]

Vjeplt gus giifcedl.
O vjopl tobbmoph tuapf ot e huuf ofie. Vjepl zua!

Pu xussoit. Huuf madl eheop epf liiq onqsuwoph, liiq qatjoph gusxesf.