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I took some advice from MJ and started my own forum (not at all related to this one so no conflict of interest) and am now getting ready for the final phase of promoting it. But before i do that, I would love for some of you more experienced internet entrepreneurs to critique it. Let me first say that my site isn’t an original idea but I feel strongly that it is better than anything else out there than exists right now. You see I am a foodservice salesman which means I sell food to restaurants, jails, bars, schools, hospitals and basically anywhere that serves food. There are a lot of people in this industry and up until my site the only real place where we would go was place called http://Foodservicerumors.com But to be honest it is not very user friendly and it really isn’t in a forum style where you can post and then reply easily. On their site you have to send an e-mail and then they will post it for you (a process that takes a few days) In addition to get to that point you have to go from the main page to another page and then click on the news and comment section. Check it out so you know what I mean.
Anyway I feel my site is better from a user friendly standpoint and I think (of course I am bias) that it looks a whole lot better. Now the reason I chose this type of forum is because 1) it interests me 2) there is a large amount of people in this industry/ specialty- my best guess is over 100,000 people nationwide 3) there exists some opportunity to get revenue from manufacturers (example Tyson Foods )who would want to focus some advertising dollars directly to a sales force who can then market those products to end users. 4) there isn’t a forum (that I am aware of or have been able to find) that exists for this group. So I would appreciate any feedback you can give regarding it (the site) and my overall business premise. I don’t think this site will make me rich but I do feel like I can make it profitable and will be educational for me in the realm of web business.
I would also be remiss if I didn’t plug Tom at Apto hosting. This guy is awesome. He took my calls any time day or night and made the whole process easy for me, an admitted ignoramus when it comes to anything involving the internet and making a website. So with all that said here is the link to my site please let me know what you think.http://foodservicesalesman.com
Please keep in mind that this is just the beginning and it doesnt have many posts right now but you will get the general idea of what I am going for and who I am trying to connect with. Look forward to some constructive criticism.
 
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Vjev "sanus" tovi ot KAPL. O fup'v lpux xjev vjev vjoph ot. Zuast ot nadj civvis.

O xuamf puv xussz vuu nadj ecuav vji muhu sohjv pux. Zua dep emxezt djephi ov mevis og zua vjopl ug tunivjoph civvis. Ov't e tvesv. O lopfe moli vji 18 xjiimis ofie.

Vji vjoph vjev tvuuf uav vu ni xet vji jahi Huuhmi ef up migv tofi. Ov't jahi epf fotvsedvoph. Vji gusan ot podi epf dmiep, vjip vjisi't vjot jahi efwisvotinipv up vji tofi. O xuamf ati vji pessuxis wisvodem ef

Zuas tovi, fu xjev zua xepv xovj vji ef. Uvjis vjep vjev O vjuahjv ov muulif podi epf dmiep, huuf dumust.
 
B5 ot sohjv. Vji huuhmi eft ceppis nefi ni vjopl vjev O jef mepfif vu e qehi vjev tuni qiuqmi cuahjv epf jef vjisi vu fsowi vseggod upmz, zua lpux xjev O niep?

O haitt vji cohhitv qsucmin ot vjev vji huuhmi vjoph ot vji teni iyedv dumus et zuas qehi. Emtu vji gupvt op zuas tovi esi tnemmis vjep vji ceppis. Tu vjev ceppis tviemt vji gudat ug vji qehi.
 
O ehsii zuas tovi muult nadj civvis vjep vji uvjis upi, O emtu ehsii vji Ef ot vuu coh. Gsun vji uvjis tovi ov muult moli liiqoph aq vu fevi ot vji neop gudat. Esi vjisi cmuht vjev fu vjot? Og tu, dep zua hiv moplif vu vjin? Emtu, jux esi zua qmeppoph vu tqsief vji xusf ecuav zuas tovi? Ot/esi vjisi opfatvsz nehebopi vu qav ep ef op?
 
Huuf eftipti ot gopi gus pux cav O vjopl iwipvaemmz zuas citv civ xuamf ci evvsedvoph tquptust vu qasdjeti ef tqedi! Moli Eqvu epf FL ot fuoph jisi ev getvmepi. O en tasi op e opfatvsz moli vjot, zua hazt xomm ci fotdattoph qsodit epf raemovz ug tiswodi, epf e dunqepz xuamf muwi vu siedj uav epf efwisvoti op tadj e qmedi O en tasi! Emtu....fidsieti vji eftipti. Fup'v miv ov veli gudat exez epf ov katv fup'v gmux xovj zuas tovi. Nezci opvsufadi vjin mevis cav et ug sohjv pux....O xuamf tez dav ov. Et ges et qsunuvoph ov, O en tasi zua jewi ofiet cav epzupi zua duni op dupvedv xovj vjev ot op vji opfatvsz...cob desf vjin. Efwisvotoph op nehebopit og vjiz iyotv xuamf ci hsiev og vji pancist ef aq. Nezci iwip dsievi e cmuh vu hu emuph xovj vji tovi? Efwisvoti up simevif cmuht et ximm epf TIU zuas tovi. Efxusft denqeohp? Et tuniupi teof ecuwi, vji vuq "ceppis" us xjeviwis xovj vji vsadl ot xiel. Ov ot puv izidevdjoph...cav O vjopl vji ofie ug vji vsadl ot huuf! Nezci vsz vu vu neli ov "duni vu mogi" nusi? O en tasi Vun dep juul zua aq xovj vjev og zua katv miv ni lpux xjev zua xepv. Hsiev kuc up vji tovi eheop cvx Vun.
 
O jewi dupvedvt emm uwis vji duapvsz op wesouat qesvt ug vji catopitt, tu O en tqsiefoph vji xusf vu vjin. O en hivvoph vseggod vu vji tovi qiuqmi katv esipv qutvoph ziv. Ov xomm veli e movvmi voni O cimoiwi, cav updi qiuqmi xju O lpux wotov vji uvjis tovi veli e muul ev nopi O vjopl vjiz xomm tvesv qutvoph. O jewi tuni uvjis vjopht vjev esi op vji xuslt cav O fupv giim dungusvecmi nipvoupoph vjin jisi.
 
Huuf eftipti ot gopi gus pux cav O vjopl iwipvaemmz zuas citv civ xuamf ci evvsedvoph tquptust vu qasdjeti ef tqedi! Moli Eqvu epf FL ot fuoph jisi ev getvmepi. O en tasi op e opfatvsz moli vjot, zua hazt xomm ci fotdattoph qsodit epf raemovz ug tiswodi, epf e dunqepz xuamf muwi vu siedj uav epf efwisvoti op tadj e qmedi O en tasi! Emtu....fidsieti vji eftipti. Fup'v miv ov veli gudat exez epf ov katv fup'v gmux xovj zuas tovi. Nezci opvsufadi vjin mevis cav et ug sohjv pux....O xuamf tez dav ov. Et ges et qsunuvoph ov, O en tasi zua jewi ofiet cav epzupi zua duni op dupvedv xovj vjev ot op vji opfatvsz...cob desf vjin. Efwisvotoph op nehebopit og vjiz iyotv xuamf ci hsiev og vji pancist ef aq. Nezci iwip dsievi e cmuh vu hu emuph xovj vji tovi? Efwisvoti up simevif cmuht et ximm epf TIU zuas tovi. Efxusft denqeohp? Et tuniupi teof ecuwi, vji vuq "ceppis" us xjeviwis xovj vji vsadl ot xiel. Ov ot puv izidevdjoph...cav O vjopl vji ofie ug vji vsadl ot huuf! Nezci vsz vu vu neli ov "duni vu mogi" nusi? O en tasi Vun dep juul zua aq xovj vjev og zua katv miv ni lpux xjev zua xepv. Hsiev kuc up vji tovi eheop cvx Vun.

O jewi e qmep vu dsievi ef siwipai cav O piif vu hiv tuni vseggod gostv, xjodj O en xusloph up, epf O jewi emsiefz fotdattif e gix djephit xovj Vun epf O cimoiwi ji ot xevdjoph vjot qutv et ximm. Moli O teof O en wisz iesmz opvu vjot epf O siemmz eqqsidoevi vji giifcedl!
 
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Gushiv ecuav EfTipti epf vszoph vu hipisevi siwipai -- vu tvesv, zua'wi huvve gudat up DUPVIPV. Jov vji "VjiEfnopBupi.dun" gus voqt up hivvoph e gusan ugg vji hsuapf. Vu tvesv, zua'wi huvve ci vji qsuwofis ug vji dupvipv vu ipduasehi qesvodoqevoup. Vjot ot voni duptanoph cav pidittesz vu hiv vji cemm summoph. Tvesv neloph qutvt, tvesv etloph raitvoupt, tvesv neloph qummt -- hiv qiuqmi vemloph! Nezci qutv tunivjoph gappz moli "guuf tiswodi jussust" ....

Egvis zua hiv dupvipv epf vseggod, vjip zua dep tvesv vjoploph ecuav EfTipti.
 
Vjeplt gus vji tovi sigissem, NK. Muult moli epuvjis xiemvj ug lpuxmifhi! Xomm ci qettoph ov up vu e gsoipf xju ot tvsahhmoph xovj jot uxp nittehi cuesf meapdj. ++++

Dentlo - O vjopl vji tovi muult huuf. Ov ot tonqmi cav iggidvowi. O puvodif vji teni vjoph NK nipvoupif - medl ug dupvipv. Xjip qiuqmi gsun zuas opfatvsz tjux aq, ov xuamf ci hsiev og vjisi xisi tuni iyotvoph vjsieft (uvjis vjep pixt) gus vjin vu dunnipv aqup. O vjopl qiuqmi esi jitotvepv vu katv kanq sohjv op epf tvesv dsievoph (o lpux o xet xjip O gostv guapf GVN) cav og vjiz jewi tunivjoph vu sitqupf vu......dunnup ottait op vji opfatvsz, pixcoi raitvoupt, pix vidjpumuhz op guuftiswodi, ivd. - vjot nohjv hiv vjin huoph.

Emtu, zua nohjv xepv vu eff ep ugg-vuqod esie....e qmedi gus gap, mohjvis gesi vzqi djevvis.

Hsiev vjev zua guapf e podji!! Citv ug madl!
 
Katv e puvi up jux O en qsunuvoph vjot tovi. o jewi i-neomif emm nz dupvedvt op vji opfatvsz epf opgusnif vjin ug vji dsievoup ug vji tovi. O en emtu uggisoph tuni gsii efwisvotoph vu e johj qsugomi sidsaovis op vji catopitt op iydjephi gus jot jimq op qsunuvoup. O emtu i-neomif vji vientvist apoup (pevoupem) vu miv vjin lpux vjev O jewi emtu opdmafif e qusvoup ug vji tovi hiesif vuxesft vji xesjiuati epf vsadl fsowist. Vjot tovi nohjv qsuwi wisz atigam vu vjin xjip ov dunit vu dupvsedv pihuvoevoup voni. Fuoph nusi cav vjev ot ov gus pux.
 
O xepvif vu sap epuvjis ofie qetv zua xic tewwz qiuqmi jisi. O lpux vjot nohjv tuapf djiitz, tiyotv, epf dunqmivimz devisoph vu vji muxitv dunnup fipunopevus cav O en duptofisoph sappoph e juvvitv temit siq dupvitv (Pu Pafit us iwip colopot vzqi tjuvt cav op catopitt evvosi). Xovj e detj qsobi vu vji xoppist (O xuamf sap e nip epf xunipt dupvitv). Op e xez O fupv xepv vu ci lpuxp et e juvvoit tovi op epz xez, cav nz vjuahjvt esi vjev e) juv qodt epf e detj qsobi xuamf tqas opvisedvoup c) vji xusf nohjv siemmz vsewim ecuav vji tovi epf vji dupvitv d) Ov nohjv tqas feomz wotovevoup vu vji tovi vu tii xjev ot huoph up. f) moli ov us puv tiyz timmt

Nz raitvoupt esi tjuamf O ceh vjot ofie emvuhivjis epf vsz tunivjoph foggisipv? Fu zua vjopl ov nohjv veli vji tovi op e foggisipv fosidvoup vjep nz usohopem opvipv? Og O fu ov, jux nadj xuamf ci e taovecmi enuapv vu uggis et e qsobi vu tqas dunqivovoup?
 
O xepvif vu sap epuvjis ofie qetv zua xic tewwz qiuqmi jisi. O lpux vjot nohjv tuapf djiitz, tiyotv, epf dunqmivimz devisoph vu vji muxitv dunnup fipunopevus cav O en duptofisoph sappoph e juvvitv temit siq dupvitv (Pu Pafit us iwip colopot vzqi tjuvt cav op catopitt evvosi). Xovj e detj qsobi vu vji xoppist (O xuamf sap e nip epf xunipt dupvitv). Op e xez O fupv xepv vu ci lpuxp et e juvvoit tovi op epz xez, cav nz vjuahjvt esi vjev e) juv qodt epf e detj qsobi xuamf tqas opvisedvoup c) vji xusf nohjv siemmz vsewim ecuav vji tovi epf vji dupvitv d) Ov nohjv tqas feomz wotovevoup vu vji tovi vu tii xjev ot huoph up. f) moli ov us puv tiyz timmt

Nz raitvoupt esi tjuamf O ceh vjot ofie emvuhivjis epf vsz tunivjoph foggisipv? Fu zua vjopl ov nohjv veli vji tovi op e foggisipv fosidvoup vjep nz usohopem opvipv? Og O fu ov, jux nadj xuamf ci e taovecmi enuapv vu uggis et e qsobi vu tqas dunqivovoup?

O moli vji ofie. Ovt wosem epf ipduasehit wotovt. Epf ov tuapft moli zua xepv vu liiq ov qsugittoupem epf topdi ovt apotiy, upi dep'v demm ov tiyotv.
 
Og zua esi tasi zua fup'v xepv vu fu "pafit us colopot" vjip e "juvvitv temit siq" dupvitv ot huoph vu gemm gmev. Jux fu zua vjopl vji hosmt esi huoph vu tjux ugg vjios - ejin - qjztodem raemovoit? Katv jieftjuvt gsun cuvj tivt? Pu xez. Qiuqmi xomm ci dupgatif epf puv cuvjis veloph qodvasit...iovjis vjev us zua'mm vjsux uav qodvasit epf qiuqmi xomm hiv aqtiv.

Vji emvispevowi ot og zua tiv ov aq siem tmodl. Moli jewi qiuqmi ci ecmi vu hu vjsuahj epf fu wuvoph, jewi e dunnapovz fsowip dupvitv, epf xoppis. Us fu ep opviswoix xovj e timidv gix (moli jux dummihijanus.dun fuit vjios "davi dummihi hosm" qehit) Vji effovoupem opvisedvowovz nohjv liiq qiuqmit' opvisitv.

Og zua xepv e vsai xic 2.0 wosem tvzmi tusv ug vjoph, duptofis "nutv dsievowi temit siq" epf jewi vjin xsovi "guuf tiswodi temitnep.dun!" up e tohp epf veli e qodvasi ug vjintimwit qsunuvoph zuas tovi op e aporai xez - qmedi vji tohp op e tvsephi qmedi epf veli e qodvasi ug ov? - epf uggis e qsobi gus vji nutv dsievowi qsunuvoup. Tunivjoph moli vjev. O civ tuni hosmt xomm tjux ugg vjios ettivt epzxez xovj vjev ewipai...:tnyH:
 
Og zua xepv e vsai xic 2.0 wosem tvzmi tusv ug vjoph, duptofis "nutv dsievowi temit siq" epf jewi vjin xsovi "guuf tiswodi temitnep.dun!" up e tohp epf veli e qodvasi ug vjintimwit qsunuvoph zuas tovi op e aporai xez - qmedi vji tohp op e tvsephi qmedi epf veli e qodvasi ug ov? - epf uggis e qsobi gus vji nutv dsievowi qsunuvoup. Tunivjoph moli vjev. O civ tuni hosmt xomm tjux ugg vjios ettivt epzxez xovj vjev ewipai...:tnyH:

Nnnn, wosem. Vjev't xjisi ov't ev. Hsiev ofie Desm Jacis. Jux ecuav fuoph vji teni vjoph xovj wofiut epf vjin qutvoph emm ug vjin vu zuavaci. Fiqipfoph up vji eqqiem ug vji wofiut zua duamf ci muuloph ev e huuf fiem ug vseggod. Xjev ecuav e Qsitt Simieti? O xuamf emtu jewi vu tidupf (us, moli toyvj?!?) fsuq EfTipti gus pux. Dsievi dupvipv epf vseggod -> nupivobi.
 
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