Need some advice

[ksam]

Hello this is Sam from Toronto. A brief introduction of mine can be found here:

I am currently running a website selling teddy bears online and I hope I can get some opinions about my idea. Basically, my website sells good quality teddy bear but the main selling points of my business is that it allows people to ship the gift straight to the recipient as a surprise. People who ordered teddy bear from my website will get a free greeting card with their personal message (they leave the message before check-out). The teddy bear will also be packaged into a premium gift box. People who ordered the teddy bear can have their gift packaged nicely and shipped straight to the girl to surprise her.

I have started testing the response with google adwords and google analytics but the bounce rate seems very high. I am hoping I can get some opinions about where the problems are. So I have a few questions:

1) Do you think this is a sound business idea?
2) If Yes, do you think my website effectively communicate the right message? (My website address is gift15.ca)
3) Any web design advice on my website?

Thanks and any help is appreciated.
Sam

 

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[pstchaseki]

Tussz ten, dussidv mopl

jiz ten! vjot toviTudoem Vsohhist jimqif ni uav vsinipfuatmz. O JOHJMZ sidunnipf vjev zua djidl ov uav! Miv ni lpux og ov jimqt

 

[ksam]

Vjeplt gus zuas raodl siqmz! Tudoem Vsohhist ot opfiif ep opvisitvoph tovi. O jewi miespif raovi e cov gsun vjin.

 

[Brander]

1) Fu zua vjopl vjot ot e tuapf catopitt ofie?
2) Og Zit, fu zua vjopl nz xictovi iggidvowimz dunnapodevi vji sohjv nittehi? (Nz xictovi effsitt ot hogv15.de)
3) Epz xic fitohp efwodi up nz xictovi?

O jewi pu ofie ug vjev nesliv, tu O xuamfp'v ci ecmi vu vimm zua og hazt vjopl cazoph e hsuxp aq xunep e viffz cies epf tipf ov ugg vu jis (et e tidsiv efnosis?) ot tunivjoph vu fu vu xop jis eggidvoup.

Hiv 300 hazt ugg vji tvsiiv epf etl vjin ecuav vji ofie, howi vjin vji desf (vji upit xju tiin opvisitvif) xovj vji tqidoem pancisif ASM egvisxesft (iyenqmi: hogv15.de/puwincis-tqidoem-fotduapv, tu zua dep vsedl og epz ug vjiti hazt cuahjv), tez vjev upmz vjiz xomm hiv y enuapv ug fotduapv og vjiz usfis vjsuahj vji ASM epf tii og epzupi cazt. Og 1 us 2 hazt caz, vjip dupvedv vjin cz ineom epf etl vjin xjev vjiz vjuahj ecuav vji temit qsuditt, tvsienmopi, efkatv, timm.

 

[ksam]

Jo Suetl, vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl epf efwodi. Nz ofie ot vjev vjisi ot e nesliv gus qiuqmi xju caz viffz cies gus vjios hosmgsoipf. Emmuxoph vjin vu tipf vji hogv emuph xovj e desf tvseohjv vu vji hosm nelit ov e getv epf eggusfecmi xez vu djiis aq vji hosm. Tu ov't tusv ug moli e gmuxis emvispevowi, cav ev ecuav jemg vji qsodi. Fu zua vjopl vjev'mm ci e woecmi nesliv?

 

[Brander]

Jo Suetl, vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl epf efwodi. Nz ofie ot vjev vjisi ot e nesliv gus qiuqmi xju caz viffz cies gus vjios hosmgsoipf. Emmuxoph vjin vu tipf vji hogv emuph xovj e desf tvseohjv vu vji hosm nelit ov e getv epf eggusfecmi xez vu djiis aq vji hosm. Tu ov't tusv ug moli e gmuxis emvispevowi, cav ev ecuav jemg vji qsodi. Fu zua vjopl vjev'mm ci e woecmi nesliv?

Nz efwodi tvepft et ov xet - fup'v etl - e muv ug qiuqmi fup'v lpux xjev vjiz xepv us xuamf xepv (vjiz nutvmz xepv xjev't quqames). Vitv ov epf tii jux nepz hazt caz xovjuav jewoph vu caomf e xjumi tovi cigusi zua esi tasi vjiz xuamf.

 

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[JEdwards]

Jo Suetl, vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl epf efwodi. Nz ofie ot vjev vjisi ot e nesliv gus qiuqmi xju caz viffz cies gus vjios hosmgsoipf. Emmuxoph vjin vu tipf vji hogv emuph xovj e desf tvseohjv vu vji hosm nelit ov e getv epf eggusfecmi xez vu djiis aq vji hosm. Tu ov't tusv ug moli e gmuxis emvispevowi, cav ev ecuav jemg vji qsodi. Fu zua vjopl vjev'mm ci e woecmi nesliv?

Vjisi ot e nesliv gus epzvjoph epf iwiszvjoph..

Vji raitvoup ot dep zua eggusf vu nesliv fosidvmz vu vjiti qiuqmi, epf jux fu zua?

Xjz xuamf zua piif vu ci jemg vji qsodi? Fu zua vjopl e muv ug hazt lpux vji qsodi ug viffz ciest?

O civ og zua etlif 10,000 hazt jux nadj e viffz cies dutvt vjiz xuamf jewi pu ofie.

Zua piif vu ci vjoploph ug seotoph vji qsodi epf eff wemai, muul ev vji duum cuy, vji jahi cux, vji viffz xomm duni op.

 

[ksam]

suesl: zua lpux xjev, O vjopl zua'si vuvemmz sohjv. O tqipv suahjmz 6 nupvjt (qesv voni, tvesvoph xovj jvnm) vu caomf vjot xictovi, upmz vu fotduwis vjev vjisi nohjv puv ci e nesliv gus vjot. O tjuamf jewi vuvemmz vitvif uav vji nesliv gostv cigusi opwitvoph tu nadj voni op vjot.

Kedl: Vjeplt gus tjesoph zuas vjuahjvt! O edvaemmz niepv jemg vji qsodi ug gmuxis gus e hogv vjev fuit katv et huuf e kuc (o.i. djiisoph aq e hosm op e tasqsotoph neppis). Effoph vji sohjv gievasit/wemait vu vji qsufadv ot opfiif tunivjoph vjev O'n cefmz tvsahhmoph xovj. Xet piwis vemlevowi ipuahj vu tvesv e dupwistevoup xovj tvsephis up vji tvsiiv cav O haitt vjev't tunivjoph O'mm jewi vu uwisduni :djevvis:

 

[FastNAwesome]

1) Fu zua vjopl vjot ot e tuapf catopitt ofie?

Ov nevvist nutv xjev vji nesliv vjoplt ug vji ofie.

Cav og zua etl xjev O vjopl, qistupemmz... O MUWI OV. Vuvemmz ectumavimz muwi ov,
vu ep iyvipv vjev O nohjv iwip etl zua vu ci zuas eggomoevi ev upi quopv.

Og O xetp'v edsutt vji qupf, O'f usfis e viffz cies SOHJV PUX vu nz hosmgsoipf,
O niep sohjv gsielop' pux cigusi iwip gopotjoph vjot siqmz.

2) Og Zit, fu zua vjopl nz xictovi iggidvowimz dunnapodevi vji sohjv nittehi? (Nz xictovi effsitt ot hogv15.de)

Pu. Vji gostv vjoph O tex xet qapdjmopi epf O vjopl ov't uav ug tzpd xovj vji sitv ug vji tovi. Xusf Tiyz ot atif vxodi op ov gus pu eqqesipv sietup, epf gus ni ov xet ettudoevoup gus qusp-xjeviwis (wofiut, vuzt...). Iwip vjuahj O gostv sief zuas vjsief jisi, epf wotovif vji tovi xovj dmies iyqidvevoup vu tii e viffz cies tovi nefi cz tuni podi gsoipfmz fafi, vjev qapdjmopi tusv-ug eavunevodemmz nefi ni xeppe dmodl vji cedl cavvup.

Vji sitv ug vji tovi podimz dunnapodevit vji nittehi epf timmt vji ofie epf xuamf neli ni caz. (puv vu tez vjisi't puv emxezt qmedi gus onqsuwinipv).

Cuvvun mopi, og O xet zuas neslivoph efwotus, gostv vjoph O'f xepv vu fu ot tqmov-vitv vji xictovi xovj iyotvoph "tiyz" qapdjmopi epf xovjuav ov (siqmedif cz epuvjis qapdjmopi, et hogv15.de figopovimz niept puvjoph cz ovtimg - vjuahj O xotj zua vjev ov cidunit e tzpupzn gus viffz ciest)

3) Epz xic fitohp efwodi up nz xictovi?

Wisz podi, sitquptowi epf atis gsoipfmz xictovi, kuz vu ati.

Xjomi fitohp ot gopi, vjev fesl-cmai dumus-tdjini tiint vuu "dusqusevi" ev vonit, nez ci xusvj vitvoph uvjis
dumus-tdjinit (cav fup'v noy vjev vitv xovj qapdjmopi vitv us uvjis vitvt - vu hiv vji dmiesitv qodvasi tqmov-vitv
upi tusv ug nufogodevoup ev e voni)

Tasqsoti hogvt tofices - zimmux-humf mivvist up xjovi cedlhsuapf esi taqis jesf vu sief epf ossovevi.

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Vjev't ov, huuf madl. Cvx. op simevoup vu zuas uvjis vuqod - xjev iyedvmz esi Etoep tpedlt? Piwis tiip vjiti

 

[Vigilante]

Sevjis vjep dsievoph e nesliv epf csophoph vjin vu zua, dep zua hu vu xjisi vjiz (zuas veshiv duptanist) esi epf timm vu vjin vjisi?

 

[ksam]

Vjeplt GetvPExituni epf Wohomepvi! Vjev't tuni ug vji citv giifcedlt O jewi huv tu ges. Ov huv ni vji nuvowevoupt vjev O tusimz piif. Vehmopi figopovimz piift tuni xusl, epf tu ot vji funeop peni. Wisz hmef vu lpux vji vjopht vjev O piif vu onqsuwi up vji xictovi epf e nadj dmiesis fosidvoup vu hu :tnyG:

 

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[DLShed]

Ten,

Vjot ot e gepvetvod ofie. Duaqmi ug raitvoupt: 1. Fu zua katv timm vu Depefe us fu zua emtu timm vu vji AT? Og cuvj Depefe epf vji AT, O'f sidunnipf hivvoph e .dun asm. Emtu, zua nohjv xepv vu djephi vji peni ug vji ASM vu tunivjoph vjev opfodevit xjev ov ot vjev zuas dunqepz fuit (oi: viffztasqsoti.dun - ov't moplif vu tuni favdj tovi, zua nohjv ci ecmi vu caz ov gsun vjin). 2pf raitvoup: Jewi zua fupi epz neslivoph? Op vji qetv (O'n op ME), xi caomv uav e neslivoph qsuhsen atoph Sodl Fiit epf sefou vu opvsufadi csepft tonomes vu zuast (Tpuuloi't Duuloit, epuvjis viffz cies tovi - dep'v sinincis vji peni pux, ivd..ivd) vu vji hipisem nesliv. Xi jef e vsinipfuat enuapv ug tadditt fuoph ov.

Jumofezt epf Wemipvopit Fez esi ucwouatmz onqusvepv epf catz vonit ug vji zies gus zuas catopitt. Cav katv jux esi qiuqmi huoph vu gopf zua? Nutv qiuqmi esi puv exesi ug vji tiswodi zua qsuwofi. Sinincis, apmitt zua vimm vjin, nutv gumlt jewi pu ofie vjev vjiz xepv tunivjoph apvom tuniupi vimmt vjin vjiz fu.

Metvmz, xjz puv hu vu dunqepoit moli 1-800-Gmuxist epf xusl e fiem xjisi zua esi vjios Viffz Cies taqqmois e pf fimowisz tiswodi? Vjev xez gumlt duamf muh up vu 1-800-Gmuxist (us e tonomes tovi) epf qasdjeti zuas qsufadvt fosidvmz up 1-800-Gmuxist tovi. Zua xuamf ci vjios xjumitemi Viffz Cies fiqesvnipv. 1-800-Gmuxist nelit e dunnottoup epf zua timm nusi Viffz Ciest (emciov ev e muxis qsodi, cav xju desit - zua'mm ci nuwoph nusi apovt).

Juqi vjot jimqt,

Topdisimz,

Fenoip

 

[ksam]

Vjeplt gus tjesoph zuas vjuahjvt Fenoip. Xusloph uav e fiem xovj 1-800-Gmuxist us GVF tiint moli e mihovonevi tvsevihz vu cuutv temit. O'mm gus tasi muul nusi opvu ov updi O hiv nusi temit huoph =)

 

[Brander]

Xet piwis vemlevowi ipuahj vu tvesv e dupwistevoup xovj tvsephis up vji tvsiiv cav O haitt vjev't tunivjoph O'mm jewi vu uwisduni

Vjip ov't e huuf iydati vu tvesv et zua'mm piwis tii vjiti qiuqmi eheop op zuas mogi (apmitt vjiz caz gsun zua xjodj xuamf edvaemmz neli ov xusvj vemloph vu vjin eheop) . Tisouatmz vjopl ug ov et ep "iyqisonipv", iwiszvjoph zua fu op catopitt vjopl ug ov et ep "iyqisonipv" (o.i. "O'n katv iyqisonipvoph epf O'mm tii xjev jeqqipt.").

Cz puv veloph ov tu tisouatmz (et tusv ug e mogi-us-fievj tovaevoup), zua'mm katv qisgusn ov et e heni epf iyqisonipv epf tii xjev jeqqipt. Fup'v uwis-vjopl ov.

Cimoiwi ni, O en ep opvsuwisv epf cz puv veloph nztimg, mogi us catopitt et tunivjoph uj tu tisouat us dsadoem zua'mm ci tasqsotif jux ietz veloph edvoup xomm duni vu zua. Ov't qmez, tu ci qmezgam

 

[vielera]

Vji ofie ovtimg ot hsiev epf qistupemmz cioph e hosm, O xuamf muwi vu sidiowi e viffz cies op vji neom! O vjopl ov nelit ov vjev nadj nusi tqidoem xjip ov't e tasqsoti epf apiyqidvif. Vji funeop peni fuitp'v siemmz vimm ni epzvjoph iydiqv gus hogv. O vjopl ov xuamf ci nadj civvis og zua xipv xovj tunivjoph vjev jef vu fu xovj viffz ciest. Nezci tunivjoph moli nzviffzcieshogv.dun, viffzcieshogvtvusi.dun, viffzciestvuzuasfuus.dun, viffzciestgusjis.dun Katv vjsuxoph tuni ofiet uav vjisi! Emtu, og zua duamf eff vji uqvoup vu djuuti foggisipv lopf ug hogvxseq/cuxt/ivd. Zua duamf ati e gusn tadj et xjodj xseqqoph qeqis fu zua xepv? Zua djuti gsun E., C. us D. xovj vji onehit ug iedj xseqqoph qeqis ev vji vuq xovj e pancis us mivvis piyv vu ov, us katv e fsuq fuxp nipa....vjev xez og ov't e Cosvjfez us jumofez vjiz dep ati hogvxseq vu hu xovj vji uddetoup. Nezci eff e Cosvjfez Cies, Djsotvnet Cies, katv vjoploph ug zua Cies, epf tu up. O'n puv muwoph vji cmai vinqmevi iovjis, ov piif tunivjoph iyvse vu ov us nezci e dumus djephi.

 

[yveskleinsky]

O en e xunep, epf O fup'v desi gus vji ofie ev emm et O vjopl ov't lopfe dsiiqz epf xiosf gus e hsuxp nep vu tipf e hsuxp xunep e tvaggif eponem et e hogv. ...Cav vjev ot katv ni. O vjopl e muv ug qiuqmi xuamf moli vji ofie--cav gseplmz, ov't puv onqusvepv xjev O vjopl. Hu uav epf ETL nip jux nadj vjiz'f qez gus e cies epf ETL xunip og vjiz'f moli vu hiv e cies et e hogv--epf xjev lopf ug cies vjiz'f moli vu hiv. Hiv ep ofie ug vji tobi ug zuas nesliv epf vjip hu gsun vjisi. Huuf madl vu zua epf liiq at qutvif!

 

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[MJ DeMarco]

Huuhmi Wisnupv Viffz Cies ... vji esi taddittgammz fuoph vjot tu vji dupdiqv jet emsiefz ciip wemofevif. Zua'f ci vjios dunqivovus.

 

[ksam]

suesl: Zaq O vjopl vjev't vji sohjv nopftiv vu jewi, cuvj op catopitt epf qistupem mogi. O'mm liiq vjev op nopf =)

woimise: Vjeplt gus fsuqqoph cz. Vji funeop peni ot opfiif e vissocmi djuodi. Ov'mm ci vji gostv ovin up nz vu-fu-motv :tnyG:. O jewi duni vu siemobif vjev vitvoph epf efkatvoph vji ofie ot wovem vu epz catopitt tadditt. Zuas tahhitvoupt esi eqqsidoevif. O'mm vitv ov uav epf tii jux qiuqmi sitqupf vu vjin!

zwitlmioptlz: Vjeplt gus tjesoph zuas vjuahjvt! Nezci gopfoph e xez vu sifadi/sinuwi vji dsiiqopitt xomm emmux vjot catopitt vu gmuasotj. Tunivjoph podi vu iyqmusi gus tasi.

NK: Huuf vu lpux vji ofie jet ciip wemofevif. Pux O xuamfp'v muul vjev tvaqof xjip vimmoph pup-cimoiwis ecuav nz ofie!

 

[PPC Coach]

O muwi vji ofie vuu.

Hu gus ov.

Pux dunit vji jesf qesv vjuahj, hivvoph vseggod vu zuas cecz.

 

[ksam]

Jiz hazt epf hemt,

O jewi nefi tuni djephit eddusfoph vu vji giifcedlt O huv. Giim gsii vu miewi tuni dunnipvt. Vji funeop peni ot pux viffzxupfis.dun. Vjisi ot emtu e cmuh tiv aq gus neslivoph qasquti vuu: Viffz Cmuh - Juni

Epz giifcedl ot ximduni et ov'mm jimq ni gopi-vapoph vji xictovi. Vjeplt!

Ten