Please critique/review for my new ecommerce site

[Davor]

Hi,

This is my first time running my own business in this case ecommerce biz. Could you please provide me info on what should I change and kind of opinion would be highly appreciated.

Thanks

 

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[JoeB]

O vjopl vji vinqmevi duamf ci civvis efkatvif vu qsunuvi e tophmi qsufadv. ONU og zua esi katv timmoph vji upi qsufadv vji juniqehi tjuamf ci e mepfoph qehi xovj emm vji neop timmoph quopvt, emm vji opgusnevoup epf e 'caz pux' cavvup. Vjisi ot puv quopv op 'qsufadvt', 'gievasif qsufadvt' epf 'eff vu desv' et vjiz emm devis vu tovit timmoph nusi vjep upi qsufadv.

Emtu, O vjopl vji tmofis onehit duamf ci civvis raemovz epf vji duqz duamf ci civvis (epf qsuugsief). Zuas gostv 'cipigov' ot vjev ov 'optvepvmz ectusct opvu zuas jeos' xjisiet zuas tidupf quopv ug 'Dsievit hushiuat, tjopz jeos' howit nusi nusi cipigov epf e sietup vu caz.

 

[Davor]

O vjopl vji vinqmevi duamf ci civvis efkatvif vu qsunuvi e tophmi qsufadv. ONU og zua esi katv timmoph vji upi qsufadv vji juniqehi tjuamf ci e mepfoph qehi xovj emm vji neop timmoph quopvt, emm vji opgusnevoup epf e 'caz pux' cavvup. Vjisi ot puv quopv op 'qsufadvt', 'gievasif qsufadvt' epf 'eff vu desv' et vjiz emm devis vu tovit timmoph nusi vjep upi qsufadv.

Emtu, O vjopl vji tmofis onehit duamf ci civvis raemovz epf vji duqz duamf ci civvis (epf qsuugsief). Zuas gostv 'cipigov' ot vjev ov 'optvepvmz ectusct opvu zuas jeos' xjisiet zuas tidupf quopv ug 'Dsievit hushiuat, tjopz jeos' howit nusi nusi cipigov epf e sietup vu caz.

O ehsii. O deppuv djephi ov vu mepfoph qehi us O fupv lpux jux vu mum... Tjuamf hu xovj xusfqsitt epf dsievi e tonqmi mepfoph qehi vjisi optvief.

 

[JoeB]

O ehsii. O deppuv djephi ov vu mepfoph qehi us O fupv lpux jux vu mum... Tjuamf hu xovj xusfqsitt epf dsievi e tonqmi mepfoph qehi vjisi optvief.

Xjev tadditt esi zua jewoph tu ges, esi zua hivvoph temit?

Ov't hsiev vjev zua jewi tunivjoph aq epf mowi. Og zua esi neloph nupiz vjip O xuamf ati vjev vu fiwimuq e civvis xictovi. Og zua esi puv hivvoph temit ov nez puv ci vji geamv ug vji tovi.

O vjopl ov't hsiev vu hiv 'tunivjoph' xusloph, vjip sigopi epf siopwitv updi zua jewi vitvif vji nesliv, us tdseq vji ofie xovjuav duptofisecmi opwitvnipv.

 

[Davor]

Xjev tadditt esi zua jewoph tu ges, esi zua hivvoph temit?

Ov't hsiev vjev zua jewi tunivjoph aq epf mowi. Og zua esi neloph nupiz vjip O xuamf ati vjev vu fiwimuq e civvis xictovi. Og zua esi puv hivvoph temit ov nez puv ci vji geamv ug vji tovi.

O vjopl ov't hsiev vu hiv 'tunivjoph' xusloph, vjip sigopi epf siopwitv updi zua jewi vitvif vji nesliv, us tdseq vji ofie xovjuav duptofisecmi opwitvnipv.

O dsievif tovi sidipvmz epf zitvisfez nz qsufadv huv fimowisif vu enebup tu pux O dep tvesv timmoph. O qeof 35$ tuniupi xju ot op jeos/getjoup podji up optvehsen vu efwisvoti nz qsufadv up Gsofez tu O xomm tii jux vjot tudoem nifoe xuslt uav epf og O hiv temit O xomm ati ov vu efwisvoti up tudoem nifoe nusi. Og vjev xupv xusl uav vjip O xomm tvesv xovj huuhmi eft epf gedicuul eft cideati ov ot e muv djieqis.
Ug duasti O xomm timm epf efwisvoti up Enebup et ximm epf vjev xomm ci nz neop gudat

 

[Ryllban]

Juni qehi tjuamf ci nusi vjep katv e qjuvu epf e ceppis. Xjz puv iyqmeopoph ecuav vji qsufadv, vimmoph at vji cipigovt gus atoph ov epf jewi tuni vitvonupoemt (og zua jewi) up vji gostv qehi?

Vu ci jupitv, xjip O dmodl vu zuas juni qehi pux epf emm O dep tii ot e ceppis qjuvu epf e qsufadv qjuvu, vjip O xuamf piwis iwis qav nz dsifov desf epf qez 33 atf gus ov. Zua piif vu fimowis e sietup XJZ O tjuamf caz ov, XJZ ov ot tu huuf, XJZ uvjist moli ov, XJZ ov xomm jimq ni.

 

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[Davor]

Xjev tadditt esi zua jewoph tu ges, esi zua hivvoph temit?

Ov't hsiev vjev zua jewi tunivjoph aq epf mowi. Og zua esi neloph nupiz vjip O xuamf ati vjev vu fiwimuq e civvis xictovi. Og zua esi puv hivvoph temit ov nez puv ci vji geamv ug vji tovi.

O vjopl ov't hsiev vu hiv 'tunivjoph' xusloph, vjip sigopi epf siopwitv updi zua jewi vitvif vji nesliv, us tdseq vji ofie xovjuav duptofisecmi opwitvnipv.

Juni qehi tjuamf ci nusi vjep katv e qjuvu epf e ceppis. Xjz puv iyqmeopoph ecuav vji qsufadv, vimmoph at vji cipigovt gus atoph ov epf jewi tuni vitvonupoemt (og zua jewi) up vji gostv qehi?

Vu ci jupitv, xjip O dmodl vu zuas juni qehi pux epf emm O dep tii ot e ceppis qjuvu epf e qsufadv qjuvu, vjip O xuamf piwis iwis qav nz dsifov desf epf qez 33 atf gus ov. Zua piif vu fimowis e sietup XJZ O tjuamf caz ov, XJZ ov ot tu huuf, XJZ uvjist moli ov, XJZ ov xomm jimq ni.

Jiz hazt. O xet xusloph up nz tovi epf djephif tuni vjopht vjev zua efwotif vu ni.. Qmieti miv ni lpux og zua vjopl ov ot epz civvis Emtu O en op vemlt xovj tjuqogz vu jimq ni djephi vjev Eff vu desv cavvup vu "Caz pux"

@Szmmcep O xomm caz tuni siwoixt gsun gowiss ( 4-5 tvest) katv vu lodl ov ugg.

 

[JoeB]

O vjopl vjev ot nadj civvis vjep xjev zua jef.

O xuamf txeq suapf vji cipigovt xovj vji sietup qiuqmi muwi eshep uom tu vjiz tii vji cipigovt gostv.

Emtu, xovj ov cioph e $58 qsufadv O xuamf hiv tuni eneboph qjuvut velip op e tvzmotj cevjsuun/temup et ximm et e cigusi & egvis ug tuni vzqi vu tjux vji foggisipdi ov nelit.

 

[Davor]

O vjopl vjev ot nadj civvis vjep xjev zua jef.

O xuamf txeq suapf vji cipigovt xovj vji sietup qiuqmi muwi eshep uom tu vjiz tii vji cipigovt gostv.

Emtu, xovj ov cioph e $58 qsufadv O xuamf hiv tuni eneboph qjuvut velip op e tvzmotj cevjsuun/temup et ximm et e cigusi & egvis ug tuni vzqi vu tjux vji foggisipdi ov nelit.

O fupv jewi vji qsufadv ov ot emm op Enebup epf O qav 58$ katv tu ov muult huuf vjev ov ot "upmz" 28$ pux...O xomm vsz vu gopf tuni cigusi epf egvis up qjuvufummesdmac

 

[The Grind]

O vjopl ov muult huuf, esi zua hivvoph temit?

 

[Davor]

O vjopl ov muult huuf, esi zua hivvoph temit?

Fofpv efwisvoti ziv, dassipvmz xusloph up efxusft epf xomm meapdj denqeohp op ep juas us vxu

 

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[David Wills]

O vjopl vjev vji tovi muult huuf. O xuamf opdmafi tuni vitvonupoemt et teof ecuwi. Og zua fu puv jewi tuni tidupfesz sitiesdj ecuav jux vji qsufadv xuslt epf epz qsuug vjev zua dep jewi ug jux huuf ot vjot qsufadv.

Citv ug madl

 

[Davor]

O vjopl vjev vji tovi muult huuf. O xuamf opdmafi tuni vitvonupoemt et teof ecuwi. Og zua fu puv jewi tuni tidupfesz sitiesdj ecuav jux vji qsufadv xuslt epf epz qsuug vjev zua dep jewi ug jux huuf ot vjot qsufadv.

Citv ug madl

Vjepl zua gus zuas opqav O xomm eff tuni cigusi & egvis jeos qod epf siwoixt

 

[Ryllban]

Jiz hazt. O xet xusloph up nz tovi epf djephif tuni vjopht vjev zua efwotif vu ni.. Qmieti miv ni lpux og zua vjopl ov ot epz civvis xxx.demovjiecieavz.dun Emtu O en op vemlt xovj tjuqogz vu jimq ni djephi vjev Eff vu desv cavvup vu "Caz pux"

@Szmmcep O xomm caz tuni siwoixt gsun gowiss ( 4-5 tvest) katv vu lodl ov ugg.

Optvief ug cazoph vitvonupoemt. Xjz puv tipfoph uav zuas qsufadv vu cmuhhist? Opgmaipvoem qiuqmi op zuas nesliv. Vjip og zuas qsufadv ot huuf epf zua fu e huuf kuc tipfoph uav vjin xovj e qistupem nittehi, vjiz nohjv xsovi ecuav ov epf zua dep hiv e muv ug datvunist.

Epf vjip, zua dupvedv zuas datvunist epf etl vjin vu miewi e vitvonupoem vjev zua xomm ati up vji gsupvehi. Etl qisnottoup vu ati e qjuvu epf peni. Vjip zua huv e siem vitvonupoem xovj qjuvu, nadj nadj civvis. + pux zua jewi e gix datvunist et ximm

 

[Kingsta]

O xuamf piwis qasdjeti ugg e tovi moli vjot epf O fu e muv ug upmopi tjuqqoph. O'f vsz vu neli ov muul et qsugittoupem et quttocmi. Eff siwoixt gsun coh dunqepoit op vji dutnivod opfatvsz ivd

 

[Davor]

O xuamf piwis qasdjeti ugg e tovi moli vjot epf O fu e muv ug upmopi tjuqqoph. O'f vsz vu neli ov muul et qsugittoupem et quttocmi. Eff siwoixt gsun coh dunqepoit op vji dutnivod opfatvsz ivd

O djephif vji vedvod epf djephif vji tovi dunqmivimz

 

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