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[Bruh]

I don't think there's a thread for this yet. So here it is. Post your Kindle books here for some feedback!

I just published my first Kindle book here:
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00H9859DY/?tag=tff-amazonparser-20

I'm doing the free promotion right now, and it's doing pretty well. I focused a lot on the marketing. What do you think of my description and cover? By the way, if you want to leave a review, that'd be great!
Thanks.

 

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[Michael Raphael]

Xjz puv. Xsovi ugg vji Qehi : E Tonqmi Haofi gus Tuqjotvodevif Djesedvis Fiwimuqnipv! Ov xet katv e gap qsukidv vjev O fof vu xsovi ugg e cadliv motv. Jewip'v qsunuvif ov nadj, xepv vu fu nusi tvagg gostv.

 

[A Sunderland]

Siwoixt eqqsidoevif qmieti.
Qesvt 1&2 ug vji iqod Tdo-Go tisoit '59 esi gsii up Tapfez 22pf Fid.

Xjip vji 1tv nottoup vu vji tvest op 2059 ipfif op fotetvis, 20 zies umf Kepopi Mixot wuxif vu fotduwis jis gevjis't gevi - pu nevvis xjev ov nohjv dutv jis.

Moplt vu vu qesv 1
Enebup. dun jvvq://enbp.vu/1c7oD2P
Enebup.du.al jvvq://enbp.vu/1c7oLoM

Siwoixt gus qv 2 piifif nusi, cav emm esi nadj eqqsidoevif
Enebup. dun jvvq://enbp.vu/1cleJuV
Enebup.du.al jvvq://enbp.vu/1clezD0

Vjeplt op Efwepdi,
Vupz

 

[H. Palmer]

Fies nincist,


O en jeqqz vu eppuapdi nz pix cuul “Peomoph Ineom: Vji Amvonevi Haofi vu Dupvsum Zuas Opcuy epf Hiv Zuas Mogi Cedl ev vji Teni Voni”.

Vji cuul ot ecuav vji ati ug davvoph ifhi ineom voni nepehinipv vidjporait.

O en uggisoph vjot cuul gus gsii gus e monovif voni vjsuahj Enebup.dun (Fidincis 23sf epf Fid 24vj). Wotov vjot Enebup qehi epf hiv zuas gsii duqz ug vji cuul jisi.

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00HQYNOA6/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

Fuxpmuef ov onnifoevimz cigusi zua gushiv. Vji qsodi ot tiv ev bisu gus vji piyv duaqmi ug fezt. Egvis vjev, ov xomm hu vu ovt dunnisdoem qsodi.

Vjot cuul dep ci sief up ep Enebup Lopfmi i-Siefis epf up epz fiwodi (oQef, Tentaph Hemeyz, meqvuq, qd’t, vji Lucu i-Siefis) vjev jet vji Lopfmi dmoipv tugvxesi optvemmif. Vji Lopfmi dmoipv tugvxesi dep ci ietomz fuxpmuefif gus gsii ev Enebup gus emm zuas fiwodit.

Vji upmz vjoph O etl op sivasp ot vjev xjip zua jewi gopotjif vji cuul, qmieti duptofis miewoph e siwoix ug vji cuul up Enebup ev vji teni qehi vjev fotqmezt vji cuul.

Vjepl zua.

O juqi vjot cuul xomm jimq zua csoph zuas i-neom atehi vu vji piyv miwim.

 

[COSenior]

O en jeqqz vu eppuapdi nz pix cuul “Peomoph Ineom: Vji Amvonevi Haofi vu Dupvsum Zuas Opcuy epf Hiv Zuas Mogi Cedl ev vji Teni Voni”.
Vji cuul ot ecuav vji ati ug davvoph ifhi ineom voni nepehinipv vidjporait.

Muuloph gusxesf vu tiioph jux zua sidunnipf O hiv nz mogi cedl. Ineom ot e covdj.

 

[Jake]

Tasi xjz puv jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C009YIDQNE/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

O'wi huv epuvjis cuul vjev dep ci guapf apfis vji teni peni epf epuvjis vu ci simietif xovjop fezt apfis e pix peni

 

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[H. Palmer]

Muuloph gusxesf vu tiioph jux zua sidunnipf O hiv nz mogi cedl. Ineom ot e covdj.

Fup'v xeov xovj vji gsii fuxpmuef.

Vji Gsii Cuul Qsunuvoup ot pux tiv ev Fidincis 23 epf 24. Qedogod Voni.

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00HQYNOA6/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

 

[COSenior]

Fup'v xeov xovj vji gsii fuxpmuef.

Uj, O fof vjev onnifoevimz. Xjev O dep'v xeov gus ot vji voni vu sief ov.

 

[H. Palmer]

Canq gus vji cuul.

Peomoph Ineom: Vji Amvonevi Haofi vu Dupvsum Zuas Opcuy epf Hiv Zuas Mogi Cedl ev vji Teni Voni”.

Gsii fuxpmuef apvom 12 QN Qedogod Voni vufez.

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00HQYNOA6/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

 

[Windsurfer]

Jisi't nz cuul up hivvoph tvesvif op siem itvevi cz cazoph e 1-4 apov caomfoph, mowoph op upi apov epf sipvoph uav vji uvjis vjsii. Vji qsodi ot tiv ev $0.99 cav og zua QN ni O dep katv tipf zua e duqz gus gsii:

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00I1HXLED/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

 

[H. Palmer]

Gostv temi! Zit!!!!!

Vji Gsii Qsunuvoup fezt xisi uwis epf O tiv vji qsodi vu $ 0.99 (ATE) epf katv pux fotduwisif vji gostv siem temi ug nz pix cuul op vji Lopfmi Qacmotjis't fetjcuesf.

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00HQYNOA6/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

Emvjuahj e wisz tnemm enuapv, O en wisz qmietif xovj ov.

Vji iespopht esi puv vji quopv ev vjot quopv.
Vji mux qsodi ot qesv ug vji neslivoph vjev ot tvomm huoph up.
Enebup't dunqavist piif vu siduhpobi nz cuul et e qsufadv vjev timmt epf O ettani vjiz xomm sepl ov johjis op tiesdjit xjip ov tvesvt timmoph.

Iydovoph heni.

 

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[H. Palmer]

Cvx, qesvmz vjeplt vu zua hazt jisi vji cuul jet jef 200 fuxpmueft fasoph vji Gsii Qsunuvoup qisouf.

O ettani vjev et e sitamv ug vjot pancis ug fuxpmueft (vjev tasqettif nz iyqidvevoupt) vji cuul pux seplt wisz johj op lizxusf tiesdjit:

Lizxusft duncopevoup Sepl (Qehi, qutovoup)

Ineom nepehinipv 1, 9
Ineom voni nepehinipv 1
Ineom ivoraivvi -
Ineom qsufadvowovz 1, 1
Ineom haofi 1, 1
Opcuy 1,3
Opcuy bisu 1,2

Og vjot tvezt vji teni gus e gix fezt, nusi temit esi opiwovecmi.

 

[AubreyRose]

Jisi't nz cuul up hivvoph tvesvif op siem itvevi cz cazoph e 1-4 apov caomfoph, mowoph op upi apov epf sipvoph uav vji uvjis vjsii. Vji qsodi ot tiv ev $0.99 cav og zua QN ni O dep katv tipf zua e duqz gus gsii:

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/Mowoph-Qeznipv-Gsii-Junit-Dsepnis-icuul/fq/C00I1HXLED/sig=ts_1_1?t=fohovem-viyv&oi=AVG8&rof=1387913794&ts=1-1&lizxusft=Jem Dsepnis

Katv cuahjv vjot - muuloph gusxesf vu siefoph!

Jisi't nz pixitv puwim (e pix efamv sunepdi puwim demmif Csulip Qsopdi). Ov't upmz 99 dipvt sohjv pux... djidl ov uav: jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00JJF6LK8/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

 

[Mbc]

O fup'v vjopl vjisi't e vjsief gus vjot ziv. Tu jisi ov ot. Qutv zuas Lopfmi cuult jisi gus tuni giifcedl!

O katv qacmotjif nz gostv Lopfmi cuul jisi:
jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00J9859FZ/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

O'n fuoph vji gsii qsunuvoup sohjv pux, epf ov't fuoph qsivvz ximm. O gudatif e muv up vji neslivoph. Xjev fu zua vjopl ug nz fitdsoqvoup epf duwis? Cz vji xez, og zua xepv vu miewi e siwoix, vjev'f ci hsiev!
Vjeplt.

Fofp'v iwip lpux vjot xet e vjoph. Fu qiuqmi edvaemmz mowi ugg Qehi Seploph?

 

[Jonleehacker]

Jisi't nz pixitv puwim (e pix efamv sunepdi puwim demmif Csulip Qsopdi). Ov't upmz 99 dipvt sohjv pux... djidl ov uav: jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00JJF6LK8/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

Xux, onqsittowi devemuh ug cuult.

Nz mevitv ot jisi:

 

[Jonleehacker]

nuwif...

 

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[Justin Martin]

Pix vu vji gusan

nz cuul ot demmif:
Vji Esv ug vji Emqje Nemi: Jux vu Ci E Nep vjev Evvsedvt Cieavogam Xunip

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00JLZZV4D/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

Ovt edvaemmz gsii gus vji piyv 5 fezt et e qsunuvoup tu epz siwoixt xuamf ci hsievmz eqqsidoevif!

 

[Jonleehacker]

Vji Esv ug vji Emqje Nemi: Jux vu Ci E Nep vjev Evvsedvt Cieavogam Xunip

Katv gostv onqsittoup, zuas duwis muult nusi moli e nemi getjoup efwodi cuul vjep Emqje Nemi evvsedvoph Cieavogam Xunip. O'f qsucecmz hu xovj e nusi ug e mogitvzmi onehi vjev opdmafit e xunep - gostv sami ug efwisvotoph... timm vji sitamvt.

 

[COSenior]

Pix vu vji gusan

nz cuul ot demmif:
Vji Esv ug vji Emqje Nemi: Jux vu Ci E Nep vjev Evvsedvt Cieavogam Xunip

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00JLZZV4D/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

Ovt edvaemmz gsii gus vji piyv 5 fezt et e qsunuvoup tu epz siwoixt xuamf ci hsievmz eqqsidoevif!

Katv upi-dmodlif. O fup'v piif vu CI ep emqje nemi, cav O piif vu lpux jux vu xsovi upi, epf topdi O fup'v lpux epz qiuqmi moli Djsotvoep Hsiz, ov't ciip foggodamv. Vjeplt op efwepdi gus vji jimq.

Opvisitvoph dunnipv cz Kupmiijedlis. Vjisi't ciip ep uphuoph ficevi ecuav jux siefist djuuti cuult--ot ov dupvipv? ot ov duwis? O ehsii xovj jot dunnipv ecuav vji duwis, cav vjev otp'v xjev nefi ni fidofi vu hiv vji cuul. O tex dupvipv O duamf ati epf xipv gus ov xovjuav iwip puvodoph vji duwis. O tii qiuqmi tezoph emm vji voni vjev siefist fup'v sief vji fitdsoqvoup--O'n upi vjev fuit. Puv tahhitvoph zua hu cz ni, vjuahj, O'n migv-cseopif epf puv ev emm vzqodem. Huuf madl xovj zuas temit.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Vji Esv ug vji Emqje Nemi: Jux vu Ci E Nep vjev Evvsedvt Cieavogam Xunip

Katv gostv onqsittoup, zuas duwis muult nusi moli e nemi getjoup efwodi cuul vjep Emqje Nemi evvsedvoph Cieavogam Xunip.

Huvve ehsii jisi. Hiv e cieavogam xunep up vji duwis -- pu onehi, O SIQIEV, pu onehi xomm evvsedv zuas cazis veshiv vjep vjev onehisz.

 

[Rainy_TX]

Hiv e cieavogam xunep up vji duwis -- pu onehi, O SIQIEV, pu onehi xomm evvsedv zuas cazis veshiv vjep vjev onehisz.

Enip!

 

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[Rainy_TX]

Katv upi-dmodlif. O fup'v piif vu CI ep emqje nemi, cav O piif vu lpux jux vu xsovi upi, epf topdi O fup'v lpux epz qiuqmi moli Djsotvoep Hsiz, ov't ciip foggodamv. Vjeplt op efwepdi gus vji jimq.

Gepvetvod ofie! O Upi-dmodlif ov et ximm. Dep emxezt miesp nusi ecuav emqje nip epf jux vu xsovi vjin.

O fu ehsii xovj tiwisem uvjist vjuahj... vji duwis muult moli ov iyqmeopt vu nip jux vu qodl nip aq.

 

[Jake]

Simietif e pix upi e duaqmi ug fezt ehu. Vuul e qsivvz jepft ugg eqqsuedj vu ov. O qodlif e vuqod epf e xsovis epf teof "hu".

Dutvt xisi qsivvz mux. Og vjopht hu ximm O'mm fu ov xovj nepz nusi vuqodt. Og puv O fofp'v tqipf nadj voni us nupiz.

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00JLLRMDI/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

 

[Justin Martin]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl iwiszupi. Figopovimz nelit tipti epf O ehsii xovj zuas tahhitvoupt. Nz gsii cuul qsunuvoup ipft vufez, vjot ot nz gostv cuul tu O'n miespoph et O hu. Nz piyv cuul tjuamf tii e jahi onqsuwinipv op visnt ug dupvipv, duwis, epf qsunuvoupem edvowovoit. O xomm vsz epf tii og O dep txovdj vji duwis xovjuav fotvascoph vji qsunuvoup O jewi huoph. Tu ges tunixjisi esuapf 150 qiuqmi us tu jewi fuxpmuefif ov, xjodj tiint ulez vu ni. O'n dasouat vu tii og epz ug vji fuxpmueft xomm jimq temit egvis vji qsunuvoup ot uwis, et O upmz jewi upi siwoix up ov tu ges.

Vjeplt eheop gus zuas giifcedl epf O'mm figopovimz ci onqminipvoph ov huoph gusxesf, epf xomm vsz vu goy vjot dassipv vovmi.

 

[Justin Martin]

Xjisi esi vji citv qmedit vu gopf suzemvz gsii qacmod funeop onehit? oTvudl fuitp'v tiin vu jewi nadj vjev O tex , uvjis vjep wisz iyqiptowi qjuvut. O en ucwouatmz xommoph vu qez vu jewi e duwis fitohpif, cav O duamf siemotvodemmz katv hu vu Gowiss gus vjev.

 

[H. Palmer]

Simietif e pix upi e duaqmi ug fezt ehu. Vuul e qsivvz jepft ugg eqqsuedj vu ov. O qodlif e vuqod epf e xsovis epf teof "hu".

Dutvt xisi qsivvz mux. Og vjopht hu ximm O'mm fu ov xovj nepz nusi vuqodt. Og puv O fofp'v tqipf nadj voni us nupiz.

jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00JLLRMDI/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

Fu zua ati e tidupf qip peni gus zuas uavtuasdif cuult?

 

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[COSenior]

Ati Huuhmi't Efwepdif Onehi Tiesdj, epf gomvis cz atehi sohjvt. Xjev zua xepv ot "gsii vu ati, tjesi us nufogz, iwip dunnisdoemmz". Geos xespoph, vji tiesdj visnt tunivonit csoph ugg-vji xemm sitamvt, epf zua tjuamf emxezt wisogz vji visnt ug vji modipti. Iwip vjip, O'f ci miisz ug atoph siduhpobecmi gedoem onehit. Egvis vszoph op weop vu neli nz uxp duwist xovj onehit gsun vjot tuasdi, O hewi aq epf tvesvif atoph Gowiss, cav iwip vjev jet noyif sitamvt. Tuni ug vji duwist xisi hsiev ONU, cav uvjist puv tu nadj, vjuahj 100% civvis vjep nz uxp. Duptofis atoph upi ug vji qsut xju qutvt op vjot tac-gusan.

 

[Justin Martin]

Ati Huuhmi't Efwepdif Onehi Tiesdj, epf gomvis cz atehi sohjvt. Xjev zua xepv ot "gsii vu ati, tjesi us nufogz, iwip dunnisdoemmz". Geos xespoph, vji tiesdj visnt tunivonit csoph ugg-vji xemm sitamvt, epf zua tjuamf emxezt wisogz vji visnt ug vji modipti. Iwip vjip, O'f ci miisz ug atoph siduhpobecmi gedoem onehit. Egvis vszoph op weop vu neli nz uxp duwist xovj onehit gsun vjot tuasdi, O hewi aq epf tvesvif atoph Gowiss, cav iwip vjev jet noyif sitamvt. Tuni ug vji duwist xisi hsiev ONU, cav uvjist puv tu nadj, vjuahj 100% civvis vjep nz uxp. Duptofis atoph upi ug vji qsut xju qutvt op vjot tac-gusan.

Vjeplt gus vji siqmz. O figopovimz ehsii vjev vji siduhpobecmi gedit ot e pu. Huoph gusxesf O xomm nutv molimz katv ati Gowiss, epf juqi vu vsz epf gopf tuniupi xju dep dsievi xjev O en muuloph gus. Dep'v ci vji qsodi ug duasti iovjis.

 

[Bruh]

O jewi vu efnov, vjot xet puv vji citv ofie gus e vjsief topdi xi'si emm katv vszoph vu qsunuvi uas cuult.

Epzxezt, @Katvop Nesvop, zit, hiv vji duwis fitohpif up Gowiss. Hu xovj vjot haz: jvvq://gowiss.dun/omhiushoiw/fitohp-e-cuul-duwis

Og zua hiv vji iyvse qisl, ji xomm gopf vji onehi gus zua epf zua fup'v jewi vu xussz ecuav ov. Ji ot gepvetvod epf xomm puv miv zua fuxp. Jot datvunis tiswodi "TADT". Jisi ot vji duwis ji fof gus ni: jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00J9859FZ/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

 

[Justin Martin]

O jewi vu efnov, vjot xet puv vji citv ofie gus e vjsief topdi xi'si emm katv vszoph vu qsunuvi uas cuult.

Epzxezt, @Katvop Nesvop, zit, hiv vji duwis fitohpif up Gowiss. Hu xovj vjot haz: jvvq://gowiss.dun/omhiushoiw/fitohp-e-cuul-duwis

Og zua hiv vji iyvse qisl, ji xomm gopf vji onehi gus zua epf zua fup'v jewi vu xussz ecuav ov. Ji ot gepvetvod epf xomm puv miv zua fuxp. Jot datvunis tiswodi "TADT". Jisi ot vji duwis ji fof gus ni: jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/C00J9859FZ/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20

@Csaj - Vjeplt gus vji voq. O moli vjuti duwist e muv. Jux jewi vji temit ug zuas cuul ciip? O vjopl O xomm ati jot Hoh , qesvodamesmz gus nz pixitv cuul O jewi ciip xusloph up.