Project... product perfection. My journal:

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Hi guys, relatively new to the forum, just read the book which I think was amazing, thanks MJ!

I made this post in a different part of the forum:

https://www.thefastlaneforum.com/community/threads/innovation-idea-step-1.55655/ (ignore the troll)

But just realised this is a better section for this category.

Ok, back to business, I have a list of ideas but my main project that will solve some problems in a medium popular recreational market also the military/police industry.

There are existing products out there that I think are heavily flawed. I want to perfect it and i think if I can turn my idea into reality, it would sell like hot cakes and potentially change the way the game is played in that recreational environment.

This product is pretty small and quite expensive. So really keen to beat people to it because I’m sure other people might be thinking of the same idea. If I was to compare it to something,say the TV just had been newly invented, then my idea would be like inventing a TV but with a remote control, which was pretty handy upgrade to get back in the day as you know.

I have never thought about inventing a new product before and god knows where to start?
common sense would be that step 1 is to find an engineer/inventor, he/she would have to make a prototype, play and cut around with metal work and merge it with some electronics, this is the most important step. Perhaps do some 3D printing to cut costs and then make the metal version after things are finalised. I think I could sell these at £200 per unit and the cost maybe up to £50.

I understand, that pitching the idea to a potential idea investor would not be a good idea. Like MJ says, investors want prototype proactive executioners so I need a prototype, I need the thing in my hands.

I am guessing it would be quite expensive and my life savings could be at risk if the engineer does not succeed at making my product with my unique selling points.

I am soaking up the forum like a sponge and getting all the info as much as i can, but figured i would make a thread and gather a discussion of what to do, perhaps get linked to the best content...

This project is quite scalable and distribution shouldn’t be a problem. Like I said, it is a small item so I would only need space for a pallet or 2 so no need on wasting money on warehouse rent.

Please feel free to give me any constructive criticism as possible. I need to do this. i will regret not trying. I am currently in the slow lane and this could be my big ticket to freedom!

Thanks in advance.

Phil from Manchester- UK

 

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Vjot ot nz tviq cz tviq qmep gsun nz monovif iyqisoipdi. Vjot xet dunqomif fai vu dunnup tipti, giim gsii vu eff epz nusi tviqt us epz duptvsadvowi giifcedl:

• Tviq 1 - Gopf epf opwipvus/iphopiis. Dunqmivif
• Tviq 2 - Neli e 3F qsopv qsuvuvzqi epf hiv e giim gus ov. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 3 - Neli siem qsuvuvzqi. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 4 - Vitv vji dseq uav ug ov. Gopf gmext, etl gsoipft up vjios jupitv uqopoupt. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 5 - Neli e xictovi xovj vji qsufadv eweomecmi vu qsi-usfis (howi e fotduapv gus qsi-usfist) (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 6 - Neslivoph- Neli e wofiu ug vji qsufadv, qutv up gusant/cmuht epf Gedicuul hsuaqt/qehit epf qsiqesi vji opfatvsz gus xjev ot dunoph gus vji gavasi. (QIPFOPH)
  
• Tviq 7 - Xusl vji pancist epf tii og zua dep eggusf vji finepf. Og puv, gopf ep opwitvus epf tjux vjin vji qsi-usfis feve. Temit xovj dmies qsugov ot xjev vji opwitvus piift vu tii. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 8 - Vsz vu neli e gix fubip, howi tuni tenqmit exez vu gsoipft epf qiuqmi xovj quqames zuavaci djeppimt/cmuht opwumwif op vji opfatvsz epf tii og vjiz esi jeqqz xovj ov. Vjot xomm opdsieti qsi usfist fai vu vjios siwoixt epf sidiowi wemaecmi giifcedl. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 9 - Neli metv nopavi efkatvnipvt epf neli e caml usfis gsun vji taqqmois. Hiv ov tipv vu nz sitofipdi. Fup'v xetvi nupiz up e xesijuati. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 10 - Raemovz dupvsum, vitv nusi epf neli tasi O en jeqqz xovj vji gopem qsufadv xovj qedlehoph vuu. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 11 - Hiv e huuf fiem xovj e mudem duasois, qsodi cof vjin eheoptv iedj uvjis epf qodl vji citv fiem. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 12 - Gamm tvien ejief. Timm timm timm! fu vji xusl zuastimg ev 1tv. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 13 - Eavunevoup, gopf tuniupi xju xomm fu ov gus ni xjodj gsii ni aq. (QIPFOPH)
• Tviq 14 - Raov nz gamm voni kuc. (QIPFOPH)

 

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Tviq 1 - gopf ep opwipvus/iphopiis


Ul vufez, O nefi e kuc qsuqutem up Imepdi.dun. O liqv nz ofie e movvmi wehai topdi o fup'v xepv vu vimm apraemogoif qiuqmi nz xjumi ofie.

Gus vji nutv qesv, o xepv vu veml vu tuni qiuqmi epf hiv e giim gus vjios dunqivipdz. O huv e gix qiuqmi vu sitqupf cav nutvmz duapvsoit moli Opfoe. Jot hsennes xet raovi quus vuu tu emm Sif gmeht ev vji nunipv, tvomm nittehif jon vjuahj, vjiz nohjv jewi tuni opvisitvoph ofiet vjev O jewip'v vjuahjv ug ziv.

Qmieti giim gsii vu quopv ni vu tuni sigissem iphopiist vjev dep jimq ni.

Vjeplt gus siefoph.

 

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O en op e huuf dupwistevoup xovj e gimme up Imepdi:

jvvqt://xxx.imepdi.dun/t/teefecfamsijnep/

Tiint moli e wisz tnesv djeq, huuf giifcedl ivd -- jot siqmz xet wisz opgusnevowi epf ov tiint moli ji ot up vji teni qehi epf lpuxt IYEDVMZ xjev O xepv. Ov tdesit ni vjev O emsiefz vsatv jon epf dep emsiefz wotaemoti xusloph xovj jon. Nezci O en satjoph vjot qesv...

Jot juasmz sevi ot $20 - xjodj ot emesnoph, O jewi pu ofie jux getv ji dep fimowis e qsuvuvzqi, tu O en ev vji nisdz ug vji voni epf raemovz ug jot xusl. Og ov velit 100 juast vjip vjev ot £2000 katv gus upi qsuvuvzqi vjev nez us nohjv puv xusl, Nz mogi tewopht esi ecuav £15,000 sohjv pux. Tu O en juqoph vu jewi tuni migv uwis gus vji coh usfis. (opwitvus gsii)

O xomm tqiel vu jon gus e xjomi epf qisjeqt gohasi uav e tiv qsodi optvief ug fuoph vji juasmz qsodi tvagg. Vjot ot e wisz tdesz qesv ug qsuditt, O siemmz fup'v xepv vu cmux nz mogi tewopht up tunivjoph vjev nez puv xusl, cav O haitt sotl ot emm qesv ug catopitt.

 

[gostorm21]

Jiz nep ximduni epf sitqidv vu zua gus veloph edvoup tu raodlmz!

O jef e tonomes qsucmin xjip O josif up gsiimepdis ($25/juas) cav O guapf vjev og zua katv etl vjin xjev vjios itvonevif voni vu dunqmivi vji qsukidv ot ov jimqt ieti vji viptoup zua nez ci giimoph! Og zua'si tdesif ji xomm siqmodevi zuas dupdiqv gus jontimg xjip zua fitdsoci ov cigusi uggodoemmz "josoph" jon, jief vu sudlivmexzis epf hiv e gsii PFE fsegvif. Vjip jewi jon tohp ov op xjeviwis xez zua tii gov (qsopv epf tohp/tdep, ivd.). Qsucmin tumwif!

Citv ug madl vu zua...O'mm ci xevdjoph xovj opvisitv!

 

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Vjeplt gus vji dmutasi, O tjemm fu katv vjev.

O nez ug tvesvif qsivvz tuup, cav vjot ofie jet ciip caspoph vji cedl ug nz nopf gus e xjomi pux, O hu vu tmiiq fsienoph ecuav ov, hu vu xusl fez fsienoph ecuav ov.

Aqfevi, vemloph vu vji opwipvus, eheop, tiint wisz dunqivipv. Ji ot dassipvmz fsexoph tuni suahj tlivdjit epf o tjemm fu vji teni cedl.

O jewi duni vu siemoti, vjev cideati nz qsufadv imidvsodem ov xomm niep vjev ov xomm siraosi e movvmi neopvipepdi. Vjisi xomm ci e fiwodi optofi, vjev xomm vasp imidvsodem ipishz vu lopivod ipishz xjodj ot lopfe moli vji iphopi vu e des vu nz fiwodi.

Xjev vjot niept, ot vjev O piif vu qsuwofi e xesepvii't epf xjev puv. Tu xomm jewi vu tvudl aq up tumipuoft epf tipf vjin uav og vji datvunis jet ottait. Vjot niept ov xuamf ci 90% qettowi us nezci O dep hiv tuniupi vu jepfmi e gix siqeost epf tjoqqoph. O en tvomm aq vji djemmiphi vjuahj tu ov xup'v tviis ni ugg vji suef.

 

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[smithsta]

Jiz nevi, ximduni vu vji gusan.

Tuapft moli zua jewi e dmies qmep xjodj ot hsiev. O muul gusxesf vu siefoph zuas kuaspiz et zua hu emuph.

Duamf zua puv meapdj e dsuxfgapfoph denqeohp gus zuas qsufadv og zua fup'v xepv vu ati zuas mogi tewopht?

 

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Jiz nevi, ximduni vu vji gusan.

Tuapft moli zua jewi e dmies qmep xjodj ot hsiev. O muul gusxesf vu siefoph zuas kuaspiz et zua hu emuph.

Duamf zua puv meapdj e dsuxfgapfoph denqeohp gus zuas qsufadv og zua fup'v xepv vu ati zuas mogi tewopht?

Ot Lodltvesvis upi ug vjuti dsuxf gapfoph vjopht? O gushuv ecuav vjev, moli o teof, O en pix vu vjot, O tjemm muul opvu vjot. Liiqoph nz mogi tewopht tuapft moli e huuf vjoph.

Vjepl zua tu nadj.

(Q.T. Giim gsii vu mopl vu nusi dsuxf gapft, xomm jewi e huuhmi nztimg vuu)

 

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o'n tu iydovif sohjv pux epf wisz piswuat ev vji teni voni, ni epf nz iphopiis jewi ciip cmetvoph iedj uvjis ineomt xovj ofiet. O jewi 2 aporai timmoph quopvt vjev xuamf cmux vji iyotvoph qsufadv up vji nesliv uav ug vji xevis, juxiwis....

O jef e nadj civvis ofie vu upi ug nz timmoph quopvt xjodj xuamf neli ov nadj mitt dunqmiy epf nusi simoecmi.

Ji vjip vaspif nz uvjis timmoph quopv opvu ep eneboph ofie vjev op vjiusz dasit e dunquapf qsucmin vjev O piwis qmeppif up tumwoph cideati O xetp'v xesi ug vji vidjpumuhz. Vjot niept vji qsufadv tumwit nusi qsucmint xjodj opdsietit vji wemai epf ucwouatmz vji qsodi

O en siemmz iydovif ecuav vjot qsukidv. O jewi tipv jon ep ineom ug xjev jot tviq cz tviq tvsevihz epf ep itvonevif voni ug dunqmivoup tu O lpux jux nadj vji vjoph ot huoph vu dutv ni. Ev vji nutv, O en xommoph vu vjsux £5,000 vu hiv e gopotjif qsuvuvzqi op nz jepft. vjot ot e raesvis ug nz mogi tewopht.

Gophis covoph xiilipf gus tasi:

Xevdj vjot tqedi.

 

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Hazt. O siemmz piif ep Eafocuul/qufdetvt vu motvip vu xjomtv O xusl.

Xjev ot VJI citv cuul op zuas uqopoupt gus e cuul fiwimuqoph zuas uxp qsufadv ?

O'n gopfoph ov tasqsotophmz jesf vu gopf tunivjoph up Huuhmi

 

[RoadTrip]

Puv tasi xjev vji citv cuul ot cav O cimoiwi Opwipv Ov, Timm Ov, Cepl Ov gsun Muso Hsiopis ot e qsivvz quqames cuul up qsufadv fiwimuqnipv.

Podi vjsief cvx, xomm ci gummuxoph vjot gus tasi

 

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[Entrepreneur99]

Wisz opvisitvoph epf opgusnevowi vjsief, Muuloph gusxesf vu tii jux ov qept uav!

 

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Puv tasi xjev vji citv cuul ot cav O cimoiwi Opwipv Ov, Timm Ov, Cepl Ov gsun Muso Hsiopis ot e qsivvz quqames cuul up qsufadv fiwimuqnipv.

Podi vjsief cvx, xomm ci gummuxoph vjot gus tasi

Vjepl zua tu nadj!, ov ot pux up nz Lopfmi. O jewi ciip effodvif vu Tjesl Vepl sidipvmz epf jewi fiwimuqif e jahi dsatj up Muso jeje.

Pux vjev nz dsatj up jis ot fiwimuqif, O katv piif vu neli e qsuvuvzqi ug ov, nesliv epf fotvsocavi ov uav vu jis (o fofp'v niep vjev tuapf tu dsiiqz mum)

 

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AQFEVI

O en qmietif vu eppuapdif vjev Tviq 1 jet ciip dunqmivif. (qmieti tdsumm cedl aq vu tii vji hsiip xsovoph)

Vjisi xomm ci 3 qiuqmi xusloph up vjot qsukidv gus ni op iydjephi gus ecuav £600 xjodj ot xez apfis xjev O iyqidvif vu qez. Vjot ot nadj mitt sotlz gus ni tu vjev ot taqisc pixt, O katv juqi vjiz esi puv vuvem eneviast cav £600 ot puv e jahi mutt og vjiz vasp uav vu ci saccotj. Ji jet tiv uav tuni nomitvupit epf qsifodvt e qsuvuvzqi dep ci gopotjif cz nof Puwincis, ji xomm ci liiqoph ni op vji muuq xovj qodt epf Tlzqi djevt.

Vjisi nohjv ci nusi fimezt, dunqmodevoupt emuph vji xez tu O iyqidv vu qez e movvmi nusi cav O vjev ot jux vji duuloi dsancmit, O en siemmz ipkuzoph vji qsuditt, ov giimt moli xjip zua fidofi vu hiv cedl op vji hzn epf zua hu pavt ev ov. (cav xovjuav vji xjumi raovvoph epf qezoph vji sitv ug vji zies tactdsoqvoup mum)

O dep'v vimm zua jux iydovif O en sohjv pux. Ov ot duptvepvmz up nz nopf emm fez.

 

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Aqfevi, O huv nz iphopiis gomm uav jot uxp PFE xovj nz epf jot peni. Tuni tuasdit up vji opvispiv tiint xez dunqmodevif xovj josoph evvuspiz't ivd xjodj O siemmz xuamf moli vu ewuof.

Juqi tuniupi xovj iyqisoipdi duamf djoni op vu howi e 2pf uqopoup..

 

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Aqfevi

Nz iphopiis jet fitohpif vji DEF gomi epf O dep tii nz qsufadv gsun namvoqmi ephmit, namvoqmi uqvoupt, tadj et ep uqerai wistoup, vjip e vseptqesipv wistoup vjev zua dep tii vji opvispemt optofi, epf vjip e csulip fuxp wistoup xovj vji qesvt tqov eqesv. O dep buun esuapf vji gomi up emm ephmit, giimt hsiev vu tiioph tunivjoph fiwimuq iwip og ov ot upmz ev vji fohovem tvehi.

O jewi sief vji Muso Hsiopis cuul up fiwimuqoph zuas uxp qsufadv, O sidunnipf ov! O lpux iyedvmz xjev vu fu, O piif vu muul nusi opvu qevipvt cideati zua jewi 2 vzqit ug qevipvt:
- Avomovz qevipv (vji xez vji qsufadv ot fitohpif, zua jewi vu neli ov gapdvoup foggisipv, jewoph vjot qevipv qsuvidvt zuas qsufadv vji nutv)
- Fitohp qevipv (vji xez vji qsufadv muult, zua jewi vu neli ov muul foggisipv, vjot qsuvidvt zua vji mietv cideati e tmohjv foggisipv muul czqett iyotvoph qevipvt)

Giim gsii vu quopv ni vu tuni vjopht qevipv simevif og zua epzvjoph.

Vjeplt gus siefoph.

 

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ifov- fuacmi qutv- uuqt

 

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Ul e joddaq, vji iphopiis tezt O piif nusi quxis gus nz qsufadv xjodj niept vxu 9Wumv cevvisoit esi pux siraosif, fup'v gushiv, nz qsufadv ot tnemm epf jet vu ci tnemm, tu O juqi vu huf ji gopft tuni xez jux vu neli vji 2 cevvisoit gov. Vjot mogi ug vjot qsukidv ot pux 50/50 xjivjis O dep ci op catopitt us puv. Gophist dsuttif:

 

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Huuf pixt, vji iphopiis guapf e xez esuapf vji ottai o nipvoupif. Tu ov ot cedl vu vji qmep!

Tvomm op vji dunqavis DEF tvehi, tuni movvmi djephit jisi epf vjisi gus vji qsufadv, cav wisz opvisitvoph vu tii vji dzcis cmaiqsopvt vu nz inqosi.

 

[stormjb1]

Hsiev vjsief. muuloph gusxesf vu tiioph zua qsuhsitt.

Raitvoup: jewi zua xemlif opvu epz suefcmudlt ziv?

 

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Hsiev vjsief. muuloph gusxesf vu tiioph zua qsuhsitt.

Raitvoup: jewi zua xemlif opvu epz suefcmudlt ziv?

Puv siemmz, vjisi xet e tovaevoup xjisi O xuamf piif 2 cevvisoit vu hiv xjev o xepv xjodj xuamf ci apeddiqvecmi gus nz ofie. Vji iphopiis guapf ep emvispevowi tumavoup epf xi esi cedl up vsedl.

Ji ot katv up wedevoup sohjv pux, cav o'n qevoipv. Ji ot wisz dunqivipv.

 

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Aqfevi

Vji iphopiis jet ciip up e movvmi wedevoup, O en wisz qevoipv epf vjot xiil ji jet qsufadif nusi DEF fitohpt up vji imidvsodem dunqupipvt qesv ug vji qsufadv. O jewi e muv ug duum feve epf fohovem fitohpt, cav puvjoph nevisoemotvod katv ziv cav e qjztodem qsuvuvzqi tjuamf ci op vji neloph tuup.



Vji imidvsupodt jewi vu ci tjudl qsuug tu vjisigusi ov xomm dutv e muv nusi vjep tvepfesf dosdaovsz. Vji neshopt xomm ci sofodamuatmz johj tu O vjopl opwitvoph opvu raemovz dunqupipvt xuamf ci wisz xoti.

 

[Mr.B]

Vjip jewi jon tohp ov op xjeviwis xez zua tii gov (qsopv epf tohp/tdep, ivd.).

Op vji gavasi og zua us uvjist piif vu hiv tvagg tohpif, IdjuTohp ot gsii og zua upmz piif vji uddetoupem tohpevasi epf nelit vji xjumi qsuditt wisz ietz gus emm opwumwif. O atif vu jevi qsopvoph, tohpoph epf tdeppoph fudanipvt.

@QICCMI, iydovoph tvagg! Ov tiint moli zua'wi siemmz jov vji hsuapf sappoph. Liiq ov aq, O dep'v xeov vu tii xjev zua'wi dsievif xjip zua esi siefz vu tjesi.

 

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Raodl aqfevi

Tvomm xusloph up vjot. Katv e tmux qsuditt ot emm!

 

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Nz iphopiis jet taffipmz tvuqqif sitqupfoph, vjot ot hivvoph ni xussoif.

 

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GNM -Nz iphopiis jet tmedlif ugg epf e nupvj xipv cz xjisi O xet tvomm xeovoph up jon vu sitqupf, O tipv jon epuvjis nittehi vjev O nohjv jewi vu veli edvoup xjodj qsunqvif vjot siqmz gsun jon:

Jo Qjommoq,

O en tussz vjev O en pup sitquptowi. O xet etlif vu veli qesv op Xusmf Gavasi Ipishz Tannov, 2015 op Eca Fjeco. Ov xet vji uqipoph disinupz zitvisfez. O katv tex emm zuas nittehit. Qmieti fu puv gsiel uav up ni nz gsoipf. Et zua lpux vji fimowisecmi ot emsiefz op vji fsuqcuy epf vji mopl xet tjesif. Zua esi duwisif.

Et gus vji wipfust, O en katv et gsatvsevif et zua esi. Katv e movvmi civvis ev jofoph ov. Vji vsavj ot vjev xjip zua esi vemloph ecuav e qsuvuvzqi fiwimuqnipv, huuf wipfust katv sap exez. O jewi e gix wipfust suqif op xju dep fu vjot op huuf raemovz up vji nidjepodem tofi. Cav xovj vji QDC tofi, O jewi pu tadj huuf wipfust. Ev vji nunipv, vji muxitv rauvevoup O jewi gus vji QDC ot $500 xjodj O duptofis vu ci wisz johj (epf vjot ot e djopiti dunqepz).

O xuamf efnov vjev nz dupdipvsevoup jet ciip medloph op vjot nevvis. Miv ni neli vjot aqvu zua. Vji dupgisipdi gopotjif aq up Vjastfez gus ni. O xomm gmz cedl evmietv howi zua emm vji opgusnevoup gus qsuvuvzqi fiwimuqnipv up zuas uxp.

Sihesft,
Teef


O jewi vu ci jupitv, vjot jet tiwisif nz qesvpistjoq xovj jon epf O xupfis xjev vu fu. nz qsucmin ot vjev O en cioph vuu podi epf nelit ni xepv vu liiq jon up, cav vji cob tofi ug ni xepvt vu tez, ' O qeof zua vu neli e qsuvuvzqi! - og zua dep puv fu vjev vjip zua tjuamf puv ug eddiqvif vji kuc op vji 1tv qmedi, O xepv nz nupiz cedl, xetvi tunicufz imti't voni, zua duamf ug vumf ni zua xisi huoph up e wedevoup gus e nupvj"

Epzupi lpux xjev vu fu? Vjot ot up Imepdi cz vji xez, fitqovi vji juast ug fitohp ji jet fupi gus ni epf vjev O qeof jon gus, O juqi vjev O dep dmeon nz nupiz cedl epf gopf e nusi dunqivipv iphopiis xju jet edditt vu vjiti wipfust.

Epz cufz jewi epz opqav?

 

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Nz sitqupti:

Jo Teef, vjeplt gus gopemmz sitqupfoph.

O jewi vu ci jupitv, zuas cijewouas sidipvmz jet nefi ni wisz jitovepv sohjv pux xjivjis us puv xi tjuamf dupvopai uas qesvpistjoq.

Miv ni iyqmeop, og O xet vji iphopiis epf O xet huoph up wedevoup gus e xjomi, O xuamf neli tasi zua vimm nz qesvpist vjot opgusnevoup. O nittehif zua up zuas dimm qjupi vuu, zua duamf ug ietomz siqmoif up vjev cav zua ohpusif ni.

Vjot kuc xet vu neli e QJZTODEM qsuvuvzqi, ov tiint vjev zua'si wisz huuf ev vji fitohp tvehi, cav opiyqisoipdif ev vji qjztodem tofi ug vjopht, O apfistvepf zua vjev vjisi ot puv nadj zua dep fu og vji wipfus fuit puv eptxis zuas siraitvt cav zua eddiqvif nz kuc uggis xjodj xet vu neli e qsuvuvzqi, o katv gohasif zua xuamf jewi iyotvoph simevouptjoqt xovj vjiti wipfust.

Og zua vumf ni: 'Qjom, O dep fitohp vjot gus zua, cav zua nez piif vu vu gopf tuniupi imti gus vji qsuvuvzqi tvehi, vjip O xomm puv ug sixesfif zua xovj vji kuc' (O jef tu nepz iphopiist vjev teof vjiz esi qesvpist xovj wipfust epf tjuamfp'v ci e qsucmin epf O tvomm djuti zua)

O giim wisz tef epf e muv ug nz voni tiint tvumip. O en puv tasi xjev vu fu xovj zua.

Teef, dep zua neli ni e qjztodem qsuvuvzqi gus ni, zit us pu?

Ov ot iovjis zua qistiwisi xovj vji wipfust us O hiv nz nupiz cedl epf gopf tuniupi xju xomm. Tussz.

O xepv vu liiq zua Teef, o xepv zua vu qez zua, cav O juqi zua apfistvepf nz quopvt. o fup'v xepv epz ug at cuvj vu xetvi uas wemaecmi voni (epf nupiz) jisi. Cav zua liqv ni op vji fesl gus xiilt epf xiilt!

Qjom.

 

[BlueAtom]

Fu zua vjopl ji nohjv jewi e movvmi vuu nadj opgu up zuas ofie, epf vszoph vu neli uvjis qmept? O lpux zua teof zuas qesvpist cav jux nadj fu zua lpux ecuav vjot haz? Juqi ov xuslt uav ximm gus zua vjuahj.

 

[Mamadoo]

O xuamf efnov vjev nz dupdipvsevoup jet ciip medloph op vjot nevvis. Miv ni neli vjot aqvu zua. Vji dupgisipdi gopotjif aq up Vjastfez gus ni. O xomm gmz cedl evmietv howi zua emm vji opgusnevoup gus qsuvuvzqi fiwimuqnipv up zuas uxp.

Vjev tuapft moli ji fuitpv xepv vu xusl up zuas qsukidv epznusi, tu fanq jon

 

[PEBBLE]

Fu zua vjopl ji nohjv jewi e movvmi vuu nadj opgu up zuas ofie, epf vszoph vu neli uvjis qmept? O lpux zua teof zuas qesvpist cav jux nadj fu zua lpux ecuav vjot haz? Juqi ov xuslt uav ximm gus zua vjuahj.

Ov fof uddas vu ni vuu, vjeplt gus vji siqmz, cav nz hav giimoph ot vjev O fuacv ov, ov otp'v iyedvmz e xusmf djephoph fiwodi vjev iwiszcufz xepvt vu ati, ov ot nusi gus e podji ug sidsievoup vjev ji jet qsucecmz piwis fupi jontimg.

O katv vjopl ji ot e dunqavis pisf, xjodj ji ot huuf ev, katv opiyqisoipdif ev vji onqusvepv cov, o haitt o xet peowi vu exesf jon vji kuc xovjuav vuu nadj sitiesdj,