prudentialleasing.com - Review My Site Please!

[wesrosstx]

Hey Guys,

So I've been meaning to redo a website I built but could never get my idea to look well. I finally have an idea of how I want the site to look and would appreciate some feedback. Currently, the site looks like this:

Commercial truck financing & Equipment finance | Prudential Leasing

I was really unhappy with the way the center layout. Here is the new version:

Commercial truck financing & Equipment finance | Prudential Leasing

Note: This is just a rough draft. I still have a lot of finishing touches and still have to purchase the rights to two of the pictures listed. Please also note that some of the content seems repetitive as I did this in an attempt to target specific keywords for SEO purposes.

So how does the new version compare to the old? All criticism welcome including the content.

Thanks in advance,
Wes

 

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