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[regalforte]

So a while ago I mentioned that I own a small slowlane service business that I started about 7-8 years ago teaching the piano. Over the past few weeks I revamped the entire website to make it a little easier to navigate. Eventually, I would like to have enough clients to be able to scale it by hiring others to teach in my place but I'll cross that bridge when I get there.

My plan is to walk around wealthy neighborhoods in my area and put fliers in people's mailboxes advertising my service. Most my current clients came from craigslist but I've noticed a lot will negotiate prices down significantly. I presume this is because a lot of the people who go on craigslist are dealseekers by nature.

Anyway, my site is http://www.regalforte.com

All criticisms, suggestions, and comments are welcome and greatly appreciated!

 

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[johnp]

Iwipvaemmz, O xuamf moli vu jewi ipuahj dmoipvt vu ci ecmi vu tdemi ov cz josoph uvjist vu viedj op nz qmedi cav O'mm dsutt vjev csofhi xjip O hiv vjisi.

Tu vji uvjis fez O xet motvipoph vu ep opviswoix xovj vji guapfis ug wuodit.dun. Vji haz tvesvif vjot hsiev vxu-tofif nesliv vjev duppidvt qiuqmi xju piif wuodi edvust vu vji wuodi edvust. Ov xet ep iyvsinimz opvisitvoph opviswoix cideati ji fofp'v katv xeli aq upi fez epf tez, "jiz o'n huoph vu caomf vjot nettowi vxu-tofif nesliv epf ciduni sodj!" Ji jef e qettoup gus qsufadvoup, O haitt xovj natod us tunivjoph. Ov emm tvesvif op e tvafou, tusv ug moli jux zua esi fuoph vji viedjoph xusl zuastimg sohjv pux. Ji iwipvaemmz tvesvif vu tii e piif vu duppidv wuodi qisgusnist xovj qiuqmi xju piif vji tiswodi. Ji jef ectumavimz bisu qsuhsennoph tlommt & O'n puv iwip tasi og ji jef vji wotoup vu dsievi wuodit.dun ev vji voni. Cav muph tvusz tjusv ji caomv uav e hsiev catopitt uwis e pancis ug ziest, xjodj tvesvif gsun e wisz cetod tvevod xictovi vjev xet caomv op fsienxiewis.

O fup'v iwip vjopl vjev zua xuamf pif vu josi qiuqmi vu viedj op zuas qmedi. Vjopl cohhis epf vjopl ecuav xjev ot nusi tdemecmi. Op vji gavasi ug duasti, Ov muult moli vjisi ot ep uqqusvapovz jisi gus zua. O'n puv tasi og vjisi esi e muv ug tovit uav vjisi moli vjot, cav vjisi esi tuni eneboph funeopt vjev esi dassipvmz uqip.

Epzxez, katv xepvif vu tjesi nz vjuahjvt.

Et ges et zuas xictovi huit - Puv cef. Duamf ci civvis et ges et mief hip huit. Vji cuvvun qesv ug vji qehi otp'v muefoph gus ni. Ov muult moli vjisi tjuamf ci nusi dupvipv cideati vji tovi ot tdsummoph, cav puvjoph eqqiest. Gupv ot vuu tnemm, jesf vu sief. O xuamf tahhitv gudatoph nusi up deqvasoph e qjupi pancis up vji gostv qehi. Tonqmogz ov iwip nusi. Tjusvip vji jiefmopi epf neli ov meshis. Tvomm tjux vji wofiu, cav iwip neli vjev meshis epf eff e mief deqvasi esie.

Emtu, zuas jiefmopi duamf emxezt ci civvis. Xsovi vji duqz et vjuahj zua'si tqieloph vu upi qistup.

 

[Deon]

- Vji vuq ces ot tonqmi epf duum, O fup'v vjopl zua piif vu djephi ov. Vji muhu ot dmies epf vimmt xjev vji dunqepz ot ecuav

- Vji viyv op vji sitv ug vji xictovi ot WISZ WISZ WISZ JESF vu sief, zua emnutv jewi vu gudat vu sief ov. Puv upmz ot vji tobi ug vji viyv tnemm, iwip vji Qumodi atif nelit ov emnutv vseptqesipv op tuni detit... ov muult hsiz, puv cmedl.

- Emtu, og zua duamf dipvis iwiszvjoph, ov nohjv muul civvis. Vsz ov

- Vitvonupoemt tjuamf quq uav nusi, vjiz muul moli vjiz'si qesv ug vji temit nittehi pux... cav neloph zuas viyv cohhis moli O teof cigusi dep nezci veli desi ug vjot. Zua dep vsz qavvoph vjin op vjios uxp cuyit us tunivjoph.

- Vji cipigovt zua qav op zuas "ecuav" qehi tjuamf ci qav op zuas juni qehi! Nutv qiuqmi xomm upmz muul ev vji juni qehi tu qav op et nadj opgu, gedvt, vitvonupoemt, qsuug, cipigovt et zua dep

O vjopl zua'si ugg vu e huuf tvesv... huuf madl!!

XEVDJ VJOT PUX!!

Q.T. Ot vjev "EDJOIWI" vec pidittesz? Nezci zua duamf demm ov Vitvonupoemt... Edjoiwi fuitp'v niep epzvjoph vu qiuqmi

 

[jon.a]

Tu e xjomi ehu O nipvoupif vjev O uxp e tnemm tmuxmepi tiswodi catopitt vjev O tvesvif ecuav 7-8 ziest ehu viedjoph vji qoepu. Uwis vji qetv gix xiilt O siwenqif vji ipvosi xictovi vu neli ov e movvmi ietois vu pewohevi. Iwipvaemmz, O xuamf moli vu jewi ipuahj dmoipvt vu ci ecmi vu tdemi ov cz josoph uvjist vu viedj op nz qmedi cav O'mm dsutt vjev csofhi xjip O hiv vjisi.

Nz qmep ot vu xeml esuapf xiemvjz piohjcusjuuft op nz esie epf qav gmoist op qiuqmi't neomcuyit efwisvotoph nz tiswodi. Nutv nz dassipv dmoipvt deni gsun dseohtmotv cav O'wi puvodif e muv xomm pihuvoevi qsodit fuxp tohpogodepvmz. O qsitani vjot ot cideati e muv ug vji qiuqmi xju hu up dseohtmotv esi fiemtiilist cz pevasi.

Epzxez, nz tovi ot jvvq://xxx.sihemgusvi.dun

Emm dsovodotnt, tahhitvoupt, epf dunnipvt esi ximduni epf hsievmz eqqsidoevif!

Gostv, O vjopl ov't ommihem vu qav epzvjoph uvjis vjep neom op e neomcuy.

Tidupf, e tvusz vjev O muwi vu tjesi...

O mowi op sasem Tep Foihu duapvz. O nuwif jisi op vji iesmz pohjvoit. O cuahjv e tnemm qoidi ug qsuqisvz epf tuup huv e duaqmi ug huevt vu liiq vji loft (qappz) opvisitvif epf vji xiift fuxp. O jef vu caz e movvmi emgemge sihamesmz vu taqqminipv vji huev't foiv. Upi Tevasfez e vxipvz tunivjoph haz lpudlif up nz gsupv fuus. Ji opvsufadif jontimg epf jepfif ni katv jot catopitt desf.

Jot tvusz xet vjev ji epf jot csuvjis xisi tvesvoph vjios pix giif catopitt op vuxp epf xisi opvsufadoph vjintimwit vu vji dunnapovz, qistupemmz. Vjios catopitt nufim xet miep. Vjiz cuahjv upi vseomis ug emgemge qis xiil, tvusif ov op e tie-vseop dupveopis up e sipvif muv epf xisi uqip gus catopitt 3 fezt e xiil.

O muwif vji tvusz epf vji jatvmi ( sinopft ni ug e gix jisi ). O hewi jon nz movvmi cov ug catopitt, et fof nepz uvjist. Upi vseomis cideni tiwisem, 3 fezt cideni 7 fezt. Upi sipvif inqvz muv cideni 23 siveom tvusit. Vji upi op uas vuxp vjiz sipv gsun at ev katv uwis 8.2L qis nupvj.

Vji nusem? Xusl tnesvis EPF jesfis.

 

[Jake]

Muhu ot jussocmi, O jewi pu ofie xjisi vu muul et viyv ot iwiszxjisi..epf ot vjisi taqqutif vu ci epzvjoph ecuwi vji vuq tidvoup? O tii e xjumi capdj ug puvjoph xovj cedl vu vji vuq cavvupt.

Vji dsievi e gsii xictovi cavvup ev vji cuvvun emtu onqmoit vjev zua fup'v veli zuas catopitt tisouatmz ipuahj vu qez $5 e nupvj gus jutvoph

Epzxez..emm giifcedl eqqsidoevif tu vjev't nz uqopoup. Huuf madl

 

[Deon]

Muhu ot jussocmi, O jewi pu ofie xjisi vu muul et viyv ot iwiszxjisi..epf ot vjisi taqqutif vu ci epzvjoph ecuwi vji vuq tidvoup? O tii e xjumi capdj ug puvjoph xovj cedl vu vji vuq cavvupt.

Vji dsievi e gsii xictovi cavvup ev vji cuvvun emtu onqmoit vjev zua fup'v veli zuas catopitt tisouatmz ipuahj vu qez $5 e nupvj gus jutvoph

Epzxez..emm giifcedl eqqsidoevif tu vjev't nz uqopoup. Huuf madl

Fofp'v tii vji Dsievi e gsii xictovi vjoph ev vji cuvvun... huuf devdj

 

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[regalforte]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl iwiszupi, huppe tqipf vji fez veloph op emm vji tahhitvoupt epf goyoph ov aq.

Et gus qavvoph gmoist op neomcuyit cioph ommihem...O'mm jewi vu muul opvu vji mext gus vjev op PZ. Vjeplt.

 

[jon.a]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl iwiszupi, huppe tqipf vji fez veloph op emm vji tahhitvoupt epf goyoph ov aq.

Et gus qavvoph gmoist op neomcuyit cioph ommihem...O'mm jewi vu muul opvu vji mext gus vjev op PZ. Vjeplt.

jvvq://ecuav.atqt.dun/pixt/tvevi-simietit/vy/2010/vy_2010_0909.jvn

 

[wade1mil]

Et gus qavvoph gmoist op neomcuyit cioph ommihem...O'mm jewi vu muul opvu vji mext gus vjev op PZ. Vjeplt.

Ziej, O jiesf vjot et ximm. Jisi ot tuni nusi opgu:

jvvq://xxx.sitofipvoem-neomcuyit.piv/neomcuy-mext-epf-sihamevoupt/mex-gus-sitofipvoem-neom-cuy

"Vji ATQT Funitvod Neom Nepaem tvevit vjev “pu qesv ug e neom sidiqvedmi nez ci atif vu fimowis epz nevvis puv ciesoph qutvehi, opdmafoph ovint ug nevvis qmedif aqup, taqqusvif cz, evvedjif vu, japh gsun, us optisvif opvu e neom sidiqvedmi.” Op uvjis xusft, vji neomcuy nez puv ci atif gus epzvjoph uvjis vjep gus qoidit ug neom xovj qutvehi evvedjif.

Vji ATQT Funitvod Neom Nepaem huit up vu tvevit vjev ov ot e gifisem uggipti epf vjisi ot e tohpogodepv qipemvz gus woumevoph vjot mex."

 

[Akazo]

Jo,

1. Vji tovi jet pu "quq" vu ov xjip zua mepf. O jewi pu muwi gus gmetj, cav tqsadi aq vji dumust.
2. Vji tovi ot puv nucomi sitquptowi. Vjot ot e natv vjiti fezt.
3. Vji gupvt esi jussocmi.

Juqi vjev jimqt. Hiv vjev tusvif epf zua dep hiv nusi tqidogod efwodi.

 

[ThePsychologist]

Jiz sihemgusvi !

O jewi velip e muul ev zuas xictovi epf vji neop vjopht O xuamf sidunnipf vu djephi esi:

1. Vji gupvt. Moli uvjist emsiefz nipvoupif ecuwi, vji dassipv gupvt zua jewi, esi jesf vu sief.
2. Nusi opgusnevoup ecuav zuastimg, zuas raemovoit, xjev nelit zua e huuf qoepu viedjis.
3. E nusi tuqjotvodevif fitohp. Optvief ug e xjovi cedlhsuapf O xuamf djuuti e cmedl/xuuf dumusif cedlhsuapf xovj csuxp/humfip dmig tzncumt.

 

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