Hey guys, I would like some honest feedback, and in particular help in improving my copy for a product I am developing.
Here is the current copy, I tried my best with it, but it doesn't seem like it is going to hit the spot as such... I am going to try charging $97.95 to begin with. I also have some upsell's planned.
Want To Accurately Predict Someone's Future In As Little As A Week?
Dear Friend,
I am James Sinclair, I have been doing psychic work since I was 14 years of age. I am not promising miracles but rather stating that you can accurately predict someone's future, including your own in as little as a week.
In this package you obtain access to ten, thirty minute interviews with psychics who have been in the business for over 15 years. In the interviews you will be able to have first hand knowledge of some of the common pitfalls and some unique tips and techniques that will increase the likelihood of your predictions in being accurate.
Furthermore, you have lifetime access granted to a special forum where there is more in-depth knowledge than is available on the blog, and have the ability to have free readings, and also tutorials by people who have completed the course.
There is also an opportunity to win one on one coaching with me for an entire month!
I guarantee that if you follow the steps laid out in the guides provided you will, and can accurately state the future.
You will learn numerology, palmistry and astrology and until you have become a master.
Buy now and receive a free secret gift
When you buy now you will receive:
How to master Numerology, Astrology and Palmistry
Ten half hour interviews
Transcripts to the interviews
How to start your own psychic business
10 Signs of Astral Travel
How to begin Astral Travel
And
10 top ways to protect yourself and your loved ones from negative influences.
Here is the current copy, I tried my best with it, but it doesn't seem like it is going to hit the spot as such... I am going to try charging $97.95 to begin with. I also have some upsell's planned.
Want To Accurately Predict Someone's Future In As Little As A Week?
Dear Friend,
I am James Sinclair, I have been doing psychic work since I was 14 years of age. I am not promising miracles but rather stating that you can accurately predict someone's future, including your own in as little as a week.
In this package you obtain access to ten, thirty minute interviews with psychics who have been in the business for over 15 years. In the interviews you will be able to have first hand knowledge of some of the common pitfalls and some unique tips and techniques that will increase the likelihood of your predictions in being accurate.
Furthermore, you have lifetime access granted to a special forum where there is more in-depth knowledge than is available on the blog, and have the ability to have free readings, and also tutorials by people who have completed the course.
There is also an opportunity to win one on one coaching with me for an entire month!
I guarantee that if you follow the steps laid out in the guides provided you will, and can accurately state the future.
You will learn numerology, palmistry and astrology and until you have become a master.
Buy now and receive a free secret gift
When you buy now you will receive:
How to master Numerology, Astrology and Palmistry
Ten half hour interviews
Transcripts to the interviews
How to start your own psychic business
10 Signs of Astral Travel
How to begin Astral Travel
And
10 top ways to protect yourself and your loved ones from negative influences.
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