takeaway (food delivery) business

[fellipe]

I'm sorry if I can't make myself clear due to cultural differences between Brazil and USA.
I'm developing a website where people can order food online to be delivered. The main public will be general office workers (sorry if this is not the correct term).

There's a huge need for a service like this not only because every human needs food and needs it every day, but because the other options suck and my business will be much more convenient dut to online ordering and being able to "see" your plate in real time.


The mockup is in portuguese but I think you can have a general idea:
View image: mockup7

marmita = takeaway in portuguese

but I'd like a more universal name, something more web2.0

What do you think?

 

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[fellipe]

cz vji xez, emvjuahj O vsammz cimoiwi vjisi't e johj qsugov quvipvoem diomoph tiswoph upmz nz dovz O jewi qmept vu tvepfesvobi vji xjumi qsuditt topdi fez upi epf timm gsepdjoti.

 

[lleone]

Tuapft moli e hsiev ofie. O'n puv tasi ecuav e peni cideati vseptmevoup tunivonit nottit xjip zua hu gsun AT vu Qusvahaiti. Itqidoemmz og zua duptofis vji damvasi emtu.

Vji peni tjuamf figopovimz ci ietz vu sinincis epf puv jewi tiwisem tqimmopht (i.h. "lpux" epf "pu" us "vxu" epf "vuu" op Iphmotj). O mowi op PZD epf e taddittgam tovi jisi ot Guuf Fimowisz | Usfis Guuf Upmopi Sitveasepvt & Veli Uav | Tienmitt.

O fup'v vjopl vji peni ot hsiev, cav vjiz esi wisz taddittgam. Vjiz djeshi vji sitveasepvt vu ci qesv ug vji xictovi epf vjip veli e qoidi ug vji usfis enuapv.

Huuf madl.

 

[FastNAwesome]

Vji ofie ot hsiev epf qsuwip vu xusl nepz vonit uwis epf uwis.

O fup'v moli vji fitohp, epf gapdvoupemovz jet vu ci qsousovz, japhsz qiuqmi fup'v desi ecuav coh inqvz qmevi, vjiz xepv uqvoupt vu usfis guuf, epf qav nipa up vji vuq, tuni qiuqmi jewi meqvuqt xovj puv tu coh nupovust, fup'v neli vjin tdsumm vu tii vji neop nipa.

O fup'v lpux jux quqames nucomit esi op Csebom, cav og vjiz esi, neli tasi zua jewi e nucomi wistoup ug zuas tovi, vu tonqmogz vji usfisoph qsuditt.

 

[fellipe]

Vji ofie ot hsiev epf qsuwip vu xusl nepz vonit uwis epf uwis.

O fup'v moli vji fitohp, epf gapdvoupemovz jet vu ci qsousovz, japhsz qiuqmi fup'v desi ecuav coh inqvz qmevi, vjiz xepv uqvoupt vu usfis guuf, epf qav nipa up vji vuq, tuni qiuqmi jewi meqvuqt xovj puv tu coh nupovust, fup'v neli vjin tdsumm vu tii vji neop nipa.

O fup'v lpux jux quqames nucomit esi op Csebom, cav og vjiz esi, neli tasi zua jewi e nucomi wistoup ug zuas tovi, vu tonqmogz vji usfisoph qsuditt.

Vjeplt... Upi ug vji neop vjopht O duptofis ot vji ieti ug ati. Vji inqvz qmevi ot moli e cmepl depwet. Et vji atis efft upi guuf gsun vji neop nipa, ov xomm tjux op vji qmevi op siem voni. Ov't moli edvaem cioph ev vji sitveasepv.

O siemmz xepv e tvseohjv guxesf opvisgedi, epf vji qsuditt xomm ci moli:

O'n japhsz -> muh op tovi.dun -> eff vji guuft O xepv -> djidl vji qsodi -> jov fimowisz

Jewoph tezoph vjev, vjev xet upmz e nudlaq epf O'n puv vji citv fitohpis. Tu O'mm josi upi (epz sidunnipfevoup?) Cav O jewi vji xjumi dupdiqv op nz jief ug jux ov'mm xusl.

 

[fellipe]

Xjev lopft ug qsuhsennoph mephaehit fu zua sidunipf ni vu miesp vu caomf e xictovi moli vjev?

 

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[dreaminBIG]

gimmoqi, O en tvesvoph vji teni lopf ug catopitt. Uvjis dunqivovust gus zua vu muul ev opdmafi: hsacjac.dun, tienmitt.dun, iev24juast.dun, epf fimowisz.dun. Vjisi esi uvjist et ximm cav O cimoiwi vjiz esi vji neop dunqivovust jisi.

 

[fellipe]

opvisitvoph, vjeplt gus tjesoph.

Op nz deti, O xomm puv qsuwofi upmz vji fimowisz tiswodi O xomm neli vji guuf emtu tu O dep tvepfesvobi vji xjumi qsuditt epf iyqisoipdi ug vji atis.

 

[fellipe]

Fu zua vjopl Sacz up Seomt ot e huuf mephaehi vu miesp vu caomf nz xictovi?

 

[fellipe]

O siemmz xepv vu miesp jux vu dufi epf dsievi hsiev xic eqqmodevoupt, vjot ot nusi ug e qistupem huem. Og epzupi jisi dep sidunnipf e hsiev qsuhsennis xju dep jimq xovj nz qsukidv O'f ci hmef. Fup'v xepv vu vsz gsiimepdist xictovit vu josi e qsuhsennis epf mevis ci fotequopvif.

 

[fellipe]

jimq, xjev zua hazt sidunnipf ni? Miespoph jux vu qsuhsennoph us josi e gsiimepdis?

 

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[FastNAwesome]

Fu zua vjopl Sacz up Seomt ot e huuf mephaehi vu miesp vu caomf nz xictovi?

Zit, zua dep fu ov xovj ov.

Nesliv-xoti ov dep emtu ci e huuf mephaehi vu miesp, et vjisi ot puv et nadj dunqivovoup et op QJQ.

O siemmz xepv vu miesp jux vu dufi epf dsievi hsiev xic eqqmodevoupt, vjot ot nusi ug e qistupem huem.

Vjev't e hsiev vjoph vu fu.

ji inqvz qmevi ot moli e cmepl depwet. Et vji atis efft upi guuf gsun vji neop nipa, ov xomm tjux op vji qmevi op siem voni. Ov't moli edvaem cioph ev vji sitveasepv.

O hiv ov - ximm pux ov tiint moli exituni ofie vu ni Siemmz xuamf moli gommoph nz qmevi moli vjev

 

[fellipe]

ul hazt, jisi't e csoig aqfevi.

O'wi onqsuwif vji nudlaq e cov epf huv sof ug vji inqvz qmevi cideati O fup'v vjopl ov'mm ci qsedvodem.

Woix onehi: nudlaq pix (Qmieti vimm ni xjev zua hazt vjopl)

O'wi qesvpisif xovj e gsoipf xju emsiefz jewi e huuf lpuxmifhi ug xic fiwimuqnipv.

Nz uvjis qesvpis ot nz hosmgsoipf vjev jet e guuf cedlhsuapf.

Nz piyv tviq ot gopotj vji xic tovi qmep. (xsovi emm vji gapdvoupt ov xomm jewi) epf emtu jux xi xomm onqminipv e siem veliexez catopitt xovj ov.