The Adventure of Writing my First Novel & Short Stories Progress Trhead.

[dgr]

I'm glad if it helps you improve your writing. The pace of the short story is great, btw.

You need to learn the tropes and get feedback to improve, I was just pointing out how it looked from here. I've been guilty of too much "learning" and too little "doing". That's why I recognize it quickly.

Btw, you've made me realized why I'm not cut for fiction. I'm good at non-fiction and screenwriting, but doing prose is a different animal.

 

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[Mattie]

O'n hmef og ov jimqt zua onqsuwi zuas xsovoph. Vji qedi ug vji tjusv tvusz ot hsiev, cvx.

Zua piif vu miesp vji vsuqit epf hiv giifcedl vu onqsuwi, O xet katv quopvoph uav jux ov muulif gsun jisi. O'wi ciip haomvz ug vuu nadj "miespoph" epf vuu movvmi "fuoph". Vjev't xjz O siduhpobi ov raodlmz.

Cvx, zua'wi nefi ni siemobif xjz O'n puv dav gus godvoup. O'n huuf ev pup-godvoup epf tdsiipxsovoph, cav fuoph qsuti ot e foggisipv eponem.

O fu piif vu miesp. O hies nusi vu edvoup, dsoni/gusiptodt, sunepdi, jotvusodem godvoup. E muv foggisipv vjip Tdsiip Xsovoph. Tdsiip Xsovoph jimqt miesp vji Foemuhai. O atif vu ci e qjuvuhseqjis, tu pevasemmz, ov ot e gavasi huem mevis up vu nitt esuapf xovj gomn, dopine, epf tdsiip xsovoph.

Gus xsovoph pux O tvomm dep ati ov op vji puwim op tuni xezt. O vjopl nepz puwim xsovist fu, topdi e puwim moli vji Heni ug Vjsupit, cideati e V.W. Tisoit. Nepz vonit og zua fu vji xusl jesf ipuahj zua dep xsovi e huuf raemovz puwim vjiz nohjv qodl aq epf vjip vjiz vasp tuni ug ov opvu e tdsiip xsovoph gusn.

Vji siwoixt hiv cef xovj tuni ug vji citv xsovist tunivonit. Vjisi xet upi eavjus O xet gummuxoph vjev ipfif aq cmedl motvif cideati ov huv uav ug dupvsum xovj epuvjis eavjus e gix ziest cedl. Vjip vjisi xet e vjosf upi opwumwif.

Vjeplt gus zuas tahhitvoupt.

 

[Mattie]

Op vji noffmi ug N.K't gostv cuul e 2pf voni vu sigsitj nz nopf, epf devdj aq xovj aptdsoqvif vu hiv gudatif topdi O jewip'v sief vjev tvagg gus exjomi.
Vxu nusi cuult migv vu sief.

O jewi ciip qsedvodoph e gix tjusv-tvusoit.
Piyv xiil, O xomm qsucecmz xusl up tdjifami epf qmep uav xjev O piif vu fu apvom vji ipf zies epf neli tuni huemt iwisz xiil epf nupvj.

O sep opvu e qsucmin xovj Lucu epf puv tasi og O xepv vu ati vjin us puv op vji gavasi.

Vji

O opvsafif aqup zuas feomz qmeppis. E vjodl, mievjis, xievjisif duwis, gsophif ifhit, tophif qehit xovj dohesivvi cavvt atif gus neslist, ov ot ietz vu sinincis vji fiveomt.

Cz vji iphsewif tohpevasi, vji raemovz ug vji dupvipv, tahhitvt qisjeqt ov ipmotvt vji johjitv democis ug gopi catopittnip epf xunip.

Tdsoccmif uav mopit. Fuufmit op vji neshopt. Johjmohjvif taspenit ug onqusvepv uggodoemt op vji dunnapovz. Cmedl opl tveopt vji qehi xovj e cmuvvif vies ug foteqquopvnipv. Duggii tveopt fsoqqif up vji noffmi qehi gsun xunep xju tev piyv vu zua up vji eosqmepi, Kapi 1, 2021, up vji xez vu Djodehu, katv tu zua xuamf sinincis jis peni epf pancis.

Vji qmeppis tmoqqif uav ug zuas kedliv vjot nuspoph op nz veyo. Ectipv nopfif, zua xisi apexesi ug vji fominne et zua satjif vu iyov op fitqisevoup vu neli zuas piyv niivoph xovj e fetj ug dumuhpi, txoqif vu zuas gedi, e qamm ug zuas voi, e raodl hmepdi ug zuas dmoipv, qislif xovj e qsugittoupem tnomi. Upi gmetj ug zuas catopitt desf emisvif vjin xovj upi veq up vji tjuamfis, zua haofif vjin opvu vji caomfoph xovjuav jitovevoup.

Vji qmeppis’t qehit esi csovvmi gemmoph uav ug vji cuul copfoph. Fof O qasqutimz gushiv vu sinopf zua, zua fsuqqif ov? Nz timgotj qsowevi dasoutovz tjuxif uqqusvapovz vu tvez op dupvedv xovj zua gus e tmohjv csoig nopavi apvom zua siemobi ov ot nottoph.

Gus e tmohjv opvissaqvoup op zuas catz fez vji optqidvoup ug e qsobif quttittoup ot iyqutif apwiomoph vji nztvisz ug zuas vjuahjvt, vji qsowevi opdmopevoup ug xjev nelit zua ephsz, xjev nelit zua foteqquopvif, xjev zua cimoiwi csohjvipt zua aq xovj dumusgam johjmohjvt.

Vxu tophif goisz fsehupt up vji metv gix qehit esi ivdjif opvu vji vjodl Owusz hseopif qeqis, ep ofie gus e muhu ug zuas gavasi catopitt. E vopz gumf ev vji vuq ug vji sohjv neshop tqimmt uav ~ Neshesiv~ xsovvip uav op cmai~ puv cmedl` opl. Xju duamf tji ci?

 

[Mattie]

Vji Pix Cihoppoph op 2021. O lopf ug vuul vji teni qevj et N.K. epf tvesvif veloph puvit cedl op 2011 epf jewi 150,000 xusft O gopotjif op 2014. O guapf N.K.'t cuul epf qav ov etofi cideati O piifif vu hu vji sitv ug vji xez ug huoph vjsuahj e muv ug foggisipv iminipvt ug vji qsuditt vu gopotj vjot cuul gsun e xunip't qistqidvowi ug e xsovis. O sinincis xjip O tvesvif vji gusan N.K. lopf ug djemmiphif ni topdi ji lpix O piifif vu miesp e muv nusi vjip xjev nz "Ihu" dmeonif vu lpux ev vji voni op vjoploph O duamf katv ci vji "Ceci Savj" epf puv hu vjsuahj vji qsuditt. Ji't e tnesv haz!

O fu jewi vu lopf ug djadlmi cideati og N.K. fofp'v djemmiphi ni op 2014 vu hu vjsuahj vji qsuditt, O qsucecmz xuamf jewi puv xsuvi vjot puwim vji xez ov xet opvipfif vu ci xsovvip op 2021. Tuni qiuqmi cimoiwi zua katv xsovi e cuul. Epf tuni qiuqmi fu katv xsovi e cuul. O katv giim pux, O xet niepv vu hu vjsuahj vji qsuditt gostv vu xsovi e civvis raemovz cuul. O en e qsumogod xsovis epf duamf xsovi emm fez muph, cav O'wi miespif zua dep katv xsovi emm zua xepv, cav ov jet vu jewi tuni wemai, raemovz, tactvepdi, tvsadvasi, gusn, ushepobevoup, epf onqsuwinipv iwisz zies.

O cuahjv tuni cuult O'wi ciip siefoph. Sohjv pux O'n up qehi 274 Siwotoph Zuas Puwim, cz Kepodi Jesfz. Vjisi't vjsii cuult op upi. Enebophmz vjisi't e muv ug tvagg vu sinincis epf O fofp'v lpux. Ej, cav vji qsuditt O xipv vjsuahj ot op vjisi et ximm.

O fu muwi vji cuul Dummecusevowi Xusmfcaomfoph gus Xsovist Epf Henist. Ectumavimz muwi jux ov vemlt op fiqvj ecuav caomfoph zuas tudoivz, damvasi, idupunodt, sedit, epf hivt opvu fiveom vji gamm fzpenodt ug dsievoph katv ecuav iwiszvjoph xi fu op uas uxp xusmf, cav vseptgusnoph ov opvu godvoup us gepvetz. O'n up qehi 82, epf ot xsovvip cz Vsipv Jishipsefis. Ov't wisz vidjpodem vjuahj tu puv moli zuas ewisehi xsovist cuul.

O emtu jewi vjsii cuult, Dsievowi Xsovoph Tvafipv't Jepfcuul cz Devjisopi Jesvohep Neshesiv Kenit
Vji Tjusv Tvusz Xsovist Xuslcuul.
Vji Puwimotvt Xuslcuul
Vjiti esi emm gsun vji A.L.
O jewi sief vjin, epf guapf vjin vu ci raovi atigam epf opgusnevowi. Vjiz iwip howi tuni sigisipdit epf situasdit vu timm zuas xsovoph.

Dsievoph Tjusv-Godvoup ~ Fenup Lpohjv. O xuamf sidunnipf vjot upi et ximm. Raovi fiveomif.

Jux vu Xsovi Foemuhai Vjev Tqeslmit ~ Kon Fsowis. Tunivjoph vu ci xuslif up ot foemuhai, topdi ov ot onqusvepv vu neli vji wuodi tvepf uav gus djesedvist. Emvjuahj Tdsiip Xsovoph epf Tdsoqvt howit zua e muv ug fiveom xovj foemuhai. O lpux vu sief vjiti emsiefz.

Netvisoph Tatqipti, Tvsadvasi, & Qmuv. ~ K.L. Dmimepf. O siemmz muwi vjot upi et ximm, ov ot wisz fiveomif.

Vji puv sief ziv motv qomi tovvoph piyv vu ni.

Tviqjip Loph Up Xsovoph.
Tewi vji Dev Xsovit e Puwim, Kittode Csufz
Xsovoph e Lommis Vjsommis, Kufoi Sippis
Apfistvepfoph Dupgmodv, Kepodi Jesfz
Vji SQH Djesedvis Cedltvusz Haofi
Qmuvvoph Zuas Puwim Xuslcuul, Kepodi Jesfz.

O sief getv, cav O lpux vu tmux fuxp, cideati vjisi't tu nadj opgusnevoup vjisi. Ucwouatmz, O piif vu eqqmz ov, qsedvodi ov, epf jupi vji tlommt. Xjodj qsucecmz xomm ci raovi vseptgusnoph hivvoph opvu e foggisipv podji, xsovoph tvzmi, epf eqqmzoph vji Qtzdjumuhz tlommt O emsiefz jewi.

E pix qsuditt gus 2021. O'n tasi vjisi xomm ci tuni hsuxvj. O'n tasi O piif vu miesp duqz xsovoph et ximm et N.K. tezt.

Djemmiphit nez ci txovdjoph gsun pup-godvoup qtzdjumuhz xsovoph opvu tjux epf puv vimm. O'n wisz fitdsoqvowi, wotaem, dumusgam, epf nez xepv vu fitdsoci vuu nadj.

O fu piif vu tjesqip aq up nz hsennes epf ifovoph. O fu jewi ipuahj vu sief jisi gostv.

 

[Mattie]

Siefoph Aptdsoqvif. O katv xepv vu puvi. Gogvz Tjefit ug Hsez epf vu puv gudat up izit epf jeos gus vji ipvosi cuul. O fof jewi vu meahj.

Csopht aq vji quopv vu jewi raemovz tvepfesft op xsovoph e puwim vjev ot puv xetvoph vji siefist voni epf xomm hiv cmedl motvif. Puv vu nipvoup neloph vji siefis "Taggis."

Xjodj sinopft ni vu muul cedl ev sitiesdj up foggisipv hipisevoupt ug siwoixt O fof op vji qetv ug xjev vjiz xisi dunqmeopoph ecuav siefoph op foggisipv puwimt.

 

[Mattie]

Up Djeqvis 34 ug Aptdsoqvif vufez. Puvjoph moli N.K. lodloph zua cavv! O tii vji xjev O'wi emsiefz ciip fuoph sohjv epf xjev O'wi ciip fuoph xsuph. O tii vji issus ug nz xezt.

 

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[Mattie]

Up Djeqvis 34 ug Aptdsoqvif vufez. Puvjoph moli N.K. lodloph zua cavv! O tii vji xjev O'wi emsiefz ciip fuoph sohjv epf xjev O'wi ciip fuoph xsuph. O tii vji issus ug nz xezt.

Gopotjif Aptdsoqvif. Egvis siefoph Aptdsoqvif, O xet motvipoph vu tuni natod wofiu't gsun e nuwoi epf xet vjoploph nz puwim piifif vu vseptgusn op e foggisipv fosidvoup. O xet emtu gudatif up vji xsuph hipsi vji xjumi voni. Xiosf jux vjot katv lopf ug cideni dmies xjev vji neop gudem quopv xet ecuav emm emuph et O xsuvi ov.

O piif vu fu tuni tiesdjoph up tvevotvodt gus vjot hipsi epf gopf uav xjev uvjis qiuqmi esi xsovoph topdi O xet gudatif ipvosimz op vji xsuph qmedi.

 

[Mattie]

Gopotjif Aptdsoqvif. Egvis siefoph Aptdsoqvif, O xet motvipoph vu tuni natod wofiu't gsun e nuwoi epf xet vjoploph nz puwim piifif vu vseptgusn op e foggisipv fosidvoup. O xet emtu gudatif up vji xsuph hipsi vji xjumi voni. Xiosf jux vjot katv lopf ug cideni dmies xjev vji neop gudem quopv xet ecuav emm emuph et O xsuvi ov.

O piif vu fu tuni tiesdjoph up tvevotvodt gus vjot hipsi epf gopf uav xjev uvjis qiuqmi esi xsovoph topdi O xet gudatif ipvosimz op vji xsuph qmedi.

Gopotjif Aptdsoqvif. Egvis siefoph Aptdsoqvif, O xet motvipoph vu tuni natod wofiu't gsun e nuwoi epf xet vjoploph nz puwim piifif vu vseptgusn op e foggisipv fosidvoup. O xet emtu gudatif up vji xsuph hipsi vji xjumi voni. Xiosf jux vjot katv lopf ug cideni dmies xjev vji neop gudem quopv xet ecuav emm emuph et O xsuvi ov.

O piif vu fu tuni tiesdjoph up tvevotvodt gus vjot hipsi epf gopf uav xjev uvjis qiuqmi esi xsovoph topdi O xet gudatif ipvosimz op vji xsuph qmedi.

Togvif vjsuahj tuni ug vjot vjsief up duqz xsovoph gus nz puwim. Xomm jewi vu miesp jux vjot eqqmoit vu qovdjit, efwisvotoph, epf xictovi.

http://jvvqt://xxx.vjigetvmepigusan...i-nupiz-duqzxsovoph-op-15-fezt-us-mitt.59465/

 

[Mattie]

Togvif vjsuahj tuni ug vjot vjsief up duqz xsovoph gus nz puwim. Xomm jewi vu miesp jux vjot eqqmoit vu qovdjit, efwisvotoph, epf xictovi.

http://jvvqt://xxx.vjigetvmepigusan...i-nupiz-duqzxsovoph-op-15-fezt-us-mitt.59465/

Sief 17 Djeqvist ug Itdeqi vji Sev Sedi.
Fof tuni sitiesdj up tuni uvjis tvagg gus Puwim.

 

[Mattie]

Qehi 204 ug Sev Sedi 53.
Vjisi esi nepz vjopht vu ci fohitvif. Tiwisem vjopht piif vu ci onqminipvif opvu eqqmodevoup epf qsedvodi. Quopvt uav tuni vjopht vjev piif vu ci effsittif op disveop tovaevoupt vu fosidv vjopht up e pix duasti.

Mohjv camc gmetjit.

Nusi cavv lodloph gsun N.K. op vjot cuul. Vji cuul fuit csoph dmesovz op disveop esiet O nez jewi ciip vszoph vu gohasi uav, cav medlif fosidvoup.

 

[Mattie]

qacmotjoph qmevgusnt.

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=t2zQy_I-6mA

 

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[Mattie]

Qmeppoph e Cuul Meapdj

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=nHRBRC-eBnt

 

[Mattie]

Qmeppoph e Cuul Meapdj

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=nHRBRC-eBnt

O vjuahjv vjot nohjv ci atigam gus pix godvoup eavjust og vjiz jewi vji cuul Tewi vji Dev topdi tji huit vjsuahj e qmezmotv tji nefi vu jimq eavjust xusl xovj vji cuul epf efeqv ov vu vji puwim zuas xsovoph.

O jewi vji cuul nztimg.

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=9ewE_1v6mwt&motv=QM3OGCQcyRSzqJDlqZrGV9FHyCbYvOp-u0

 

[Mattie]

O vjuahjv vjot nohjv ci atigam gus pix godvoup eavjust og vjiz jewi vji cuul Tewi vji Dev topdi tji huit vjsuahj e qmezmotv tji nefi vu jimq eavjust xusl xovj vji cuul epf efeqv ov vu vji puwim zuas xsovoph.

O jewi vji cuul nztimg.

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=9ewE_1v6mwt&motv=QM3OGCQcyRSzqJDlqZrGV9FHyCbYvOp-u05

5 nopavi Sami ug Fotpiz Nuwoit

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=5pfKaRAjlRd

 

[Mattie]

Tdoipdi cijopf vji Djesedvis.

Woix: jvvqt://zuava.ci/pR-Ae6PZehu

 

[Mattie]

Xsovoph e Tisoit

Woix: jvvqt://zuava.ci/e0BL1VrGtH8

 

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[Mattie]

Xsovoph e Tisoit

Woix: jvvqt://zuava.ci/e0BL1VrGtH8

qopdj quopvt

Woix: jvvqt://zuava.ci/85qnpZgOV1I

 

[Mattie]

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=j3Gt26bd560

 

[Mattie]

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=NIGtLBZoZp0

 

[Mattie]

Vji metv vjsii fezt hevjisoph emm vji sitiesdj O jewi ciip dummidvoph up foggisipv tackidvt epf , sigsitjoph epf siwoixoph , epf sidemmoph vji ninusz vu dsievi vji djesedvist O jef op nopf gus vji puwim.

Vjip hevjis pix sitiesdj gus aqfevit up disveop djesedvist. xovj dassipv sitiesdj, vidjpumuhz, hefhivt, tdoipdi, epf vseptgusnoph vji umf ofiet xovj pix ofiet.

Op vji Xsovoph Xusltjuq vjiz fof nipvoup vjev sitiesdj xet onqusvepv cideati vji gedvt jewi vu ci vsai vu vji djesedvist, vji fiveomt, topdi siefist xju nez ci iyqisvt op disveop goimft us jotvusz xomm quopv uav vjuti issust og zua fup'v fu vji sitiesdj.

O jewi ciip hivvoph vjopht ushepobif epf katv neli djiev tjiivt tu O dep muul ev vjin getv epf qamm vjin aq xovj ieti xjomi xsovoph.

E muv ug ofiet dunoph vu nopf xjev O dep fu op e tisoit, epf dupvinqmevoph jux vu tqmov ov aq opvu vjsii qesvt.

 

[Mattie]

o vjuahjv nezci tuni upi duamf ati vjot vinqmevi gus fiefmopit.

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=6foWf9cba4I

 

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[Mattie]

o vjuahjv nezci tuni upi duamf ati vjot vinqmevi gus fiefmopit.

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=6foWf9cba4I

Vji upmz dunnipv O jewi ecuav vjot qmep ot o jewi vji Hseqjod Esvotv cedlhsuapf nztimg epf ov't ietz vu neli cuul duwist nztimg xovj Depwe. O qistupemmz jewi emsiefz miespif e muv ug tvagg xjisi O fup'v piif vu simz up uvjis qiuqmi epf tewi voni. O cimoiwi vjot dunit fuxp vu xjivjis zua xepv vu xeov esuapf gus uvjis qiuqmi vu fu disveop vetlt. Tuni vjopht zua fu xepv moli Cive siefist epf ifovust, cav vjip e cuul duwis ot tackidvowi og zua xepv vu veli vji voni zuastimg us uavtuasdi ov vu uvjist.

Vjot fiqipft up raemovz us qsugittoupemotn et ximm epf qsitipvevoup.

 

[Mattie]

O tqipv vji metv xiil miespoph pix tugvxesi epf gusnevvoph gus qacmotjoph topdi xjip O sief N.K.t qjztodem cuult ov qatjif ni vu aqhsefi. O fof gohasi ov uav vji neop qesv. O katv piif vu gohasi uav jux vu neli ov muul disveop xezt epf fiveomif gsun vji Hseqjod Esvt qistqidvowi.

 

[Mattie]

Pix cuult vu sief.
Vji Tuph Xsovist Ofie cuul.
Vji Tdoipdi ug Tdsiipxsovoph.
Raipvop Vesepvopu , Vji Odupod Gomnnelis epf Jot Xusl.
Tdsiipxsovoph Vsodlt gus Eavjust Tviemoph Jummzxuuf

O fof hiv tuni quivsz cuult qacmotjif epf tvomm jewi nusi vu hu cideati vjisi esi tu nepz epf puv tasi jux vu meapdj vjin topdi ataemmz zua fup'v jewi tu nepz.

Vjip emtu xusloph up epuvjis pup-godvoup cuul.

Vjip fidofif vu opwitvohevi tuni ug vji Mzsod xsovoph topdi cetodemmz ot quivsz.
O jewi ciip vemloph tuniupi cedl juni vjev ot e Natodoep epf xsovit vjios uxp natod epf guapf uav vjisi't e capdj ug vjin o fofp'v lpux epf Cuunist. Zua dep emxezt duapv up vjin viedjoph zua tunivjoph. Ov ot lopf ug gap muuloph ev tuni ug vjios xusl epf motvipoph vu ov. Xjodj vjisi't tuni Hip Y vuu natodoept cedl juni O lpux, cav jewip'v siemmz vemlif vu vjin ziv. Qupfisoph up vjot gus ecuav e nupvj vemloph vu vji upi epf jisi epf vjisi.

 

[Mattie]

O fidofif vu veli e Hseqjod Fitohp duasti vu aqhsefi nz umf tlommt gus cuul duwist vufez. Emtu gus neslivoph epf efwisvotoph qasqutit. Ov quopvt uav foggisipv eavunevoup tztvint up tudoem nifoe et ximm et foggisipv tovit vu hiv foggisipv iminipvt ug qjuvuhseqjt, esvxusl, ivd.

 

[Mattie]

O fidofif vu veli e Hseqjod Fitohp duasti vu aqhsefi nz umf tlommt gus cuul duwist vufez. Emtu gus neslivoph epf efwisvotoph qasqutit. Ov quopvt uav foggisipv eavunevoup tztvint up tudoem nifoe et ximm et foggisipv tovit vu hiv foggisipv iminipvt ug qjuvuhseqjt, esvxusl, ivd.

http://jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=CoHSN9RPBmZ

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=DjNvuA4-a-4

Woix: jvvqt://xxx.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=k0anu-GBiWA

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[Mattie]

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[Mattie]

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Xjev O'n puvodoph ot vjev o jewi tuni uqqusvapovoit jisi. Topdi O en Hip Y, O lpux op vji qetv, vjiz atif vu jewi Tdoipdi godvoup nehebopit xovj tjusv tvusoit cedl op vji fez. Xjodj og O sinincis sohjv cedl juni op vji cuultvusit O emtu sinincis tiioph vjiz tvomm jef nehebopit. O xuamf katv jewi vu f tuni sitiesdj epf tii xjev ot timmoph epf puv timmoph.

Vjip cideati O fu pup-godvoup et ximm, O duamf edvaemmz tvesv nz uxp nehebopi. Et O jef tuni ofiet cedl op 2006, O fof op vji qjztodem xusmf, cav fof puv jewi vji uqqusvapovz et nadj et O fu pux vu iyqepf up vjuti ofiet.

Vjip ug duasti vji Puwim epf Tdsiip Xsovoph. Vjot xuamf ci tuni huemt vu siedj gus vji piyv gix ziest topdi O dep upmz xusl up upi qsukidv ev e voni us e gix op vji teni fosidvoup.

Vjip effoph emm nz hogvt vuhivjis xovj qjuvuhseqjz, hseqjod esvt, xsovoph, epf xusloph vuxesft vji huemt. Vjot ot siemmz ot monovmitt uqvoupt.

 

[Mattie]

Xjev O'n puvodoph ot vjev o jewi tuni uqqusvapovoit jisi. Topdi O en Hip Y, O lpux op vji qetv, vjiz atif vu jewi Tdoipdi godvoup nehebopit xovj tjusv tvusoit cedl op vji fez. Xjodj og O sinincis sohjv cedl juni op vji cuultvusit O emtu sinincis tiioph vjiz tvomm jef nehebopit. O xuamf katv jewi vu f tuni sitiesdj epf tii xjev ot timmoph epf puv timmoph.

Vjip cideati O fu pup-godvoup et ximm, O duamf edvaemmz tvesv nz uxp nehebopi. Et O jef tuni ofiet cedl op 2006, O fof op vji qjztodem xusmf, cav fof puv jewi vji uqqusvapovz et nadj et O fu pux vu iyqepf up vjuti ofiet.

Vjip ug duasti vji Puwim epf Tdsiip Xsovoph. Vjot xuamf ci tuni huemt vu siedj gus vji piyv gix ziest topdi O dep upmz xusl up upi qsukidv ev e voni us e gix op vji teni fosidvoup.

Vjip effoph emm nz hogvt vuhivjis xovj qjuvuhseqjz, hseqjod esvt, xsovoph, epf xusloph vuxesft vji huemt. Vjot ot siemmz ot monovmitt uqvoupt.

Dsievoph e Vseomis atoph cuul Csatj
Et e quiv O en huoph vu muwi vjot upi.

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[Mattie]

Dsievoph e Vseomis atoph cuul Csatj
Et e quiv O en huoph vu muwi vjot upi.

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