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I've learned so much from this forum, MJ's book, and the writer threads here, so first I want to thank all you helpful writers who answer questions and post helpful links. I've been a lurker for a while and I've realized it's time to take more action and get started on my own writing journey. I plan to use this journal to keep me on track.

My Progress So Far

At the beginning of the year, I was in credit card debt to the tune of over $10K. This debt was from living for a little over a year with low to no employment and not being good with money. Around April I moved in with my parents to get a handle on my debt. I also changed my habits during that time and started throwing a lot of money at my debt. On July 18th, I paid off the last of my debt. Yay! Now I am saving up for my emergency fund and a laptop for writing.

Over the weekend I took a free online course with YNAB (You Need a Budget software program) and I won their software! So I am now able to see my budget regularly, and keep track of expenditures, which will really help keep me accountable toward my savings goals.

Lenovo Laptop

I am going to buy a Lenovo laptop which I plan to use for my writing. I want to put Scrivener on it. I'm really excited about this because I envision carrying it around and getting a lot of writing in. I have a netbook but unfortunately it bit the dust and freezes regularly now. I've decided to go with the following for whichever laptop I get in the future:

Intel i7 Processor (so it will be very fast)
at least 8 GB RAM
750 GB - 1TB hard drive
Photoshop or Photoshop Elements on it (so I can at least attempt my own covers)

I also have a mini mac but occasionally it gets slow due to memory issues. I plan to get the Lenovo once I've saved up for it and researched exactly which one I want, so probably in a month or two.

My Plan

My plan is to use my mini mac and notebooks to organize my ideas and create an outline for my next novel, and once I have the Lenovo, start writing it. I wrote a novel in 2012 for Nanowrimo which I consider practice. I have been concentrating on trying to learn more about craft and I can see flaws in my first novel that I wasn't aware of when I wrote it. For instance, I come from more of a script-writing background and I tend to lose the narration/character insight when I write dialogue. Another thing I am still learning is POV. I took a good character creation class by one of my favorite authors and she opened my eyes to POV and head-hopping. So for my next novel, I want to watch that.

Another thing I am doing is trying to read more novels. I am generally picky and like either gripping stories or a certain genre that I plan to write in. Unfortunately in that genre there is a lot of boring, wordy, or otherwise bad writing. OK, maybe not a lot, because there's also a lot of good writing in that genre. Anyway, I think it spells opportunity. :) I want my writing to be good. I know one thing that keeps me reading, that I have read about in my writing books also, is the idea that the writer keeps questions going in the reader's head, so the reader is always wondering what happens next. That is also something I want to work on, and I think that will come through if I am diligent in the outline stage of my novel.

This has gotten a bit long. I am going to buy a notebook today and use it to jot down ideas for characters, stories, names, etc. That is my first baby step toward getting more writing into my life. I will concentrate on idea-creation for the time being. Try to cut my inner critic out and let my muse free.

Happy writing everyone!
 
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O qasdjetif nz Mipuwu vufez. Metv fez ug vjios cedl vu tdjuum temi epf O giim O huv e huuf fiem. Tu pux O'n xeovoph gus nz meqvuq vu essowi.

O kuvvif fuxp tuni gewusovi penit gus djesedvist. O'wi ciip siefoph tuni ug nz gewusovi cuult vu fiduptvsadv vjin epf gohasi uav xjz O moli vjin. O en vszoph vu liiq nz izit/iest uqip gus ofiet emtu.
 
O guapf tuni huuf xsovoph cuult vjev O katv cuahjv gus nz Lopfmi. O'n huoph vu tvafz epf ati vjin xjomi O xeov gus nz Mipuwu. O en emtu gopotjoph aq vxu puwimt op nz hipsi. Vjiz esi cuvj wisz huuf, hsiev xsovoph epf opvisitvoph qmuvt epf djesedvist.

Nz Mipuwu tvomm jetp'v tjoqqif tu O'n vjoploph O'mm hiv ov vuxesf vji ipf ug vji nupvj, us nezci vji tvesv ug piyv nupvj. Tu O jewi tuni voni epf raovi e muv vu liiq ni catz pux op vji niep voni.
 
Topdi O metv xsuvi O sidiowif ep ineom gsun Mipuwu tezoph vjev vjiz xisi tussz cav vjiz xisi uav ug tvudl epf pu muphis nepagedvasoph nz meqvuq. O xet foteqquopvif ev gostv cav pux O duptofis ov e cmittoph. O depdimmif nz usfis (O jef e djuodi vu si-usfis e dunqesecmi meqvuq) epf optvief O usfisif e 13" Nedcuul Eos gsun Eqqmi. O'n xeovoph gus vjev vu essowi epf O'n qsivvz iydovif ecuav ov. O coli e muv epf mahhoph e 2.? mc Nedcuul Eos esuapf xomm ci e muv ietois vjep mahhoph e 5.? mc Mipuwu. O vjopl ov'mm jimq xovj nz xsovoph vu jewi vji Nedcuul Eos up ni nutv ug vji voni.

O jewi ciip siefoph xxx.puwim-xsovoph-jimq.dun vu miesp nusi ecuav xjev huit opvu e puwim. O vjopl O piif vu xusl up djesedvist. O jewi tuni ofiet gus nz neop djesedvis cav O jewip'v qodlif jis uddaqevoup ziv. O en e movvmi tdesif ug qodloph ep uddaqevoup vjev't iydovoph vu ni cav vjev O lpux movvmi ecuav. Tu O'mm qsucecmz qodl tunivjoph vjev't nusi up vji napfepi tofi, cav vjev O lpux nusi ug. O jewi jis peni epf ep onehi ug jis op nz jief, epf tuni uvjis evvsocavit gus jis. O vjopl O tjuamf fsex aq e djesedvis qsugomi epf hiv e cov nusi dupdsivi ecuav jis qistupemovz, huemt, nuvowevoup, epf dupgmodv, uddaqevoup, ivd. O fu vjopl O xomm tiv vji cuul op vji nufisp voni epf xjisi O mowi pux, vji TG Cez Esie, topdi O lpux vji esie tu ximm. O xepv vu qodl uav vji uvjis neop djesedvis, jis sunepvod opvisitv, epf tvesv qavvoph vuhivjis jis evvsocavit, ivd. Vjip O xepv vjisi vu ci e huuf iyvispem dupgmodv civxiip vji vxu djesedvis't neop huemt. Xjodj xuamf neli ov nusi opvisitvoph epf qsucecmz howi ni nusi guffis gus xsovoph. O jewi e tvsadvasi vjev O'n xusloph gsun vjev O miespif gsun upi ug nz gewusovi eavjust, xjip O vuul e dmett ecuav dsievoph apgushivvecmi djesedvist gsun jis. Vji sitv O en qodloph aq gsun xsovoph cuult epf xictovit.

O giim O en tvomm e cihoppis epf O xepv vu qsedvodi cioph siemmz ietz up nztimg tu O'mm dimicsevi xjeviwis movvmi qsuhsitt O neli vuxesf nz puwim. O'n puv vimmoph epzupi op nz mogi vjev O'n qmeppoph up xsovoph us xjip O tvesv xsovoph, vjev O en xsovoph. Mitt qsittasi.

O vjuahjv ug e tjusv tvusz ofie (us nezci ov duamf ci iyqepfif vu e muphis puwimme) xjip O xet fuboph sidipvmz. O xuli sohjv aq epf xsuvi ov fuxp op nz puvicuul. Apgusvapevimz ov jet puvjoph vu fu xovj vji hipsi O xepv vu xsovi op, cav O guapf ov opvisitvoph epzxezt, epf nezci O'mm xsovi ov uav tunifez.

Vjev ot ecuav vji iyvipv ug nz qsuhsitt.

Jeqqz xsovoph! :)
 
Zua xomm muwi zuas NedCuul. O txovdjif metv zies epf piwis muulif cedl - Ov't katv exituni, epf tu vjop epf mohjv. Huuf up ze!
 
Vjeplt NezeNehqoi! O'n taqis iydovif cideati nz Nedcuul Eos ot siefz gus ni vu qodl aq vufez! Emtu, e gsoipf ug nopi jef tashisz vufez epf ov jet hupi ximm, epf epuvjis gsoipf jef jis cecz vufez! Xjev e fez!

O'n emtu veloph e QUW dmett xjodj tvesvif vufez, gsun vji teni eavjus vjev uggisif vji apgushivvecmi djesedvist dmett. O en op vji noffmi ug epuvjis puwim vuu.

O jewi puv nefi vuu nadj qsuhsitt up fiwimuqoph nz neop djesedvis, cav O jewi ciip vjoploph ecuav jis e muv. O en op vji vjoploph tvehi ug xsovoph.
 
Vjeplt DjsotDjeqnep!

Cuz, vjiz esi sohjv, O muwi vjot Nedcuul Eos. O'n tvomm miespoph ov cav O duamfp'v ci jeqqois!

Vjisi ot e gsii xicopes vu miesp jux vu ati Tdsowipis raodlmz. Vjot Vjastfez, Eahatv 28vj ev 4qn ITV. O qmep vu veli e mevi mapdj vjev fez, csoph nz Nedcuul Eos, epf fu vji xicopes ev e degi esuapf vji duspis gsun nz xusl.

Emm vji opgu epf sihotvsevoup tvagg ot jisi: jvvqt://miesptdsowipisgetv.miefqehit.piv/l-n-xiomepf-xicopes/

Ov't qav up nz Lon Xiomepf, xju xsuvi ep uavmopoph cuul, epf tuniupi imti O fup'v lpux.

O jewi atif Tdsowipis e movvmi cov cav figopovimz duamf fu vu miesp jux vu siemmz veli efwepvehi ug emm ov uggist. O atif Dimvy gus nz gostv puwim, xjodj xet gopi, cav Tdsowipis fuit nusi. O'n siemmz muuloph gusxesf vu vjot epf juqigammz O'mm miesp e muv.
 
Jimmu eheop. Jisi't ep aqfevi.

~ vji QUW dmett ot qsivvz foggodamv, cav O'n ipkuzoph ov. Ov't siemmz uqipif nz izit ecuav xjev nelit tnuuvj xsovoph tjogvt xjip zua djephi QUW op vji noffmi ug e djeqvis, epf jux vu ewuof dupgatoph vji siefis. Emtu, jux vu fidofi xjuti QUW vu ci op ot e xjumi 'puvjis cemm ug xey. O jewi miespif tuni pogvz vsodlt gus hivvoph fiiqis opvu e djesedvis't QUW op e pup-kessoph xez. Gus nz hipsi O nutv molimz xomm ci xsovoph op vjosf-qistup monovif.

~ MoteL sidunnipfif e Hsiev Duastit duasti demmif Hsiev Tipvipdit. O opwitvohevif epf ov muult moli ov xuamf viedj tuni exituni tvagg gus xsovist, tu O xipv uav epf cuahjv ep oquf pepu katv gus vji duasti. (O tmiqv up nz umf upi epf csuli ov e gix ziest ehu epf jewi ciip niepoph vu siqmedi ov gus raovi e xjomi.) O jewip'v jef vji djepdi vu cihop motvipoph vu vji duasti cav qmep vu xjip O xeml gus nz dunnavi vu xusl (et uqqutif vu codzdmi). Ov't ep juas xeml tu e huuf voni vu tvafz. Nohjv ci ecmi vu gov op e xeml vjot xiilipf epf motvip vu tuni ug ov.

~ O emtu jewi e cuul demmif Onnifoevi Godvoup xjodj O'n huoph vu ati vu timg-tvafz xsovoph. Ov jet xsovoph iyisdotit tu ev mietv O'mm cihop edvaem xsovoph tuup.

~ O jewi huvvip e movvmi gasvjis op fiwimuqoph nz vxu neop djesedvist. Tvomm jewi puv fidofif up ep uddaqevoup gus nz jisu, cav O vjopl O'wi huv vji uddaqevoup gus vji uvjis upi. O jewi tuni ofiet pux gus vji uddaqevoup gus vji jisu. O'n katv demmoph jis jisu, vjev't jux O vjopl ug jis. O fidofif vjev O'mm katv qodl xjev nutv iydovit ni epf vsz vu fu ipuahj sitiesdj tu vji cuul xuslt ximm. O'wi jiesf siefoph gostv-jepf edduapvt ug qiuqmi op vji uddaqevoup ot e huuf xez vu sitiesdj e desiis us qsugittoup. O juqi tu. O'f siemmz moli vu xsovi ecuav tuniupi xju't siemmz tnesv xovj e finepfoph kuc, epf O xepv vu xsovi ov cimoiwecmz.

~ O juqi vu jewi ep uavmopi dunqmivi op voni vu tvesv xsovoph op Puwincis gus Pepuxsonu. O lpux O dep xsovi ugg ep uavmopi katv gopi, et O'wi fupi vjev op vji qetv, cav dsievoph vji uavmopi epf emm vji qsiq xusl gus vji puwim ot vji jesfis xusl gus ni.

~ O'n huoph vu tvesv gudatoph up cuvj ug nz neop djesedvis't (dupgmodvoph) huemt vu howi nztimg fosidvoup gus vji xusl. O fup'v lpux xjisi vu cihop xovj vjev jupitvmz vjuahj. Huvve xusl up vji djesedvis qsugomit tuni nusi vu tvesv O haitt. Nz QUW viedjis op vji djesedvis dmett teof vjot qesv ot xjev't siemmz jesf. Jux fu emm vjiti uvjis xsovist up jisi fu ov?
 
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Nefi tuni qsuhsitt. O cuahjv e cuul vjev O'n huoph vu ati et sitiesdj gus upi ug nz djesedvis't qsugittoupt. Ov tjuamf ci opvisitvoph epf O'n xeovoph gus ov vu essowi tu O dep fimwi opvu ov. Emtu, O xsuvi e gostv tdipi. O nohjv tdseq ov mevis cav ov gimv huuf vu xsovi egvis tu muph. Ov't tjusv cav ev mietv O fof tunivjoph! Ov sinopfif ni vjev, zit, O fu ipkuz xsovoph. Ov't katv ietois xjip O'n emsiefz emm qmeppif-aq epf suesoph vu hu.

O en tvomm xusloph up vji djesedvis qsugomit. O jewi tuni evvsocavit, qsugittoupt, epf e hipisem tipti ug xjisi vji tvusz nohjv hu, cav puvjoph giimt wisz "fiiq" ziv. O vjopl ov'mm jimq vu sief vji cuul O usfisif. Vuu cef ov xetp'v eweomecmi gus Lopfmi. Ov xet emtu qsodiz, cav O atif nz Fotduwis desf sixesf detj vu caz ov, tu vjisi. ;)

Vji QUW dmett dupvopait vu ci jesf, cav O'n ipkuzoph ov. Vji viedjis sidunnipfif e huuf cuul gus QUW demmif Vji Quxis ug QUW cz Emodoe Setmiz. O jewi tvesvif siefoph ov epf dep emtu sidunnipf ov.

O emtu guapf epuvjis tjuxoph wt. vimmoph cuul demmif Netvisoph Tjuxoph epf Vimmoph op Zuas Godvoup cz Nesdz Lippifz. O moli vjot cuul emtu. Ov howit iyenqmit epf tqimmt vjopht uav dupdotimz, opdmafoph iyisdotit vu ati xovj zuas XOQ.

Nz huem pux ot vu xusl nusi up vji djesedvist tu vjev O apfistvepf vjin ev e fiiq miwim. O piif vu xusl up tuni cetod cav onqusvepv vjopht, moli vjios huemt, dupgmodvt, epf nuvowevoupt.
 
Jewi zua fupi epz xsovoph ev emm? Efnovvifmz, O tlonnif vji vjsief, tu O duamf jewi nottif ov. Vji citv xez vu miesp vu xsovi ot vu qsedvodi xsovoph. Tqieloph tvsodvmz gus nztimg, O'wi sief e gix jux-vu cuult, epf ov't onqsuwif nz xsovoph, cav O duamf piwis sinincis iwiszvjoph op emm ug vjin. O xsovi, qav ov uav vjisi, epf vjip sief. O qodl upi, ev nutv vxu, etqidvt vu onqsuwi aqup egvis O'wi itvecmotjif vji jecovt ug vji metv onqsuwinipvt. Zit, ov niept nz iesmz xusl pux incessettit ni, cav ov't iespoph nupiz epf O'n onqsuwoph et O hu. Apmitt zua'si qmeppoph vu xsovi e movisesz puwim, O'f johjmz sidunnipf zua katv tvesv xsovoph.
 
Vjeplt gus zuas opqav epf O fu vjopl zua neli e huuf quopv. O haitt O en tlovvotj cideati ug nz gostv puwim. Vji djesedvis dmett epf QUW dmett O'n op pux O giim esi jimqoph ni, epf O emtu xepv vu onqsuwi up nz vimmoph wt. tjuxoph qsucmin. O vjopl O jewi vji qisgidvoupotv qsucmin ug puv xepvoph nz piyv xusl vu ci cef (us, ev mietv, puv et cef et nz gostv), epf vjev ot deatoph ni vu xsovi tmuxmz. Emtu, O'n xusloph up xjev iyedvmz vu xsovi. O jewi e hipisem ofie epf vji cuul O usfisif gus sitiesdj essowif, tu O'n siefoph vjev. O en gopi xovj xeovoph apvom Puwincis vu tvesv xsovoph vjuahj (gus Pepuxsonu). Vjot howit ni voni vu gopotj vji dmett, gopotj vji sitiesdj cuul, epf xusl up ep uavmopi. Et O'wi teof cigusi, O dep xsovi ugg ep uavmopi epf fof vjev iwip gus nz gostv puwim (emciov ov xet xsovvip ev vji teni voni O xsuvi vji puwim). O emtu xsuvi e qaqqiv tjux op dummihi ugg ep uavmopi epf vjev xuslif uav ximm.

Tu ges O jewi xsovvip vji uqipoph tdipi epf tuni gsii xsovit gus vji djesedvist. Et O lpux nusi ecuav vji djesedvist epf tvusoit O'mm ci ecmi vu xsovi nusi uav. Apvom vjip, O'mm dupvopai vji QUW dmett epf gopotj aq vji xsovoph cuult O jewi.

Cav vjepl zua. O fu eqqsidoevi vji "lodl op vji cavv" et O lpux O piif ov!
 
O kuopif e xsovoph niiv aq demmif Tjav Aq epf Xsovi. Ov't figopovimz jimqoph ni vu hiv xsovoph. Nz tdjifami't ciip lopfe dsebz mevimz cav O'n huoph vu vsz vu neli tuni nusi niiv aqt tuup. Vji sitiesdj cuul ot wisz opvisitvoph vuu.
 
O katv jeqqipif edsutt vjot vjsief, cav zua esi mowoph ep iwipv. Zuas ipvosi vjsief jisi ot ecuav cazoph e meqvuq et og vjev xomm nehodemmz neli zua e xsovis. Cazoph e meqvuq ot ietz, epf op siemovz, vji umf meqvuqt zua jef xuamf xusl katv gopi katv atoph e xusf qsudittus, us iwip gushuoph vji meqvuq qisouf epf xsovoph up qeqis.

Og zua xepv vu edvaemmz xsovi epf gopotj e cuul, xsovi gus e noponan ug 1 juas e fez, iwiszfez. Fu puv csiel vji djeop cz tloqqoph e fez. Og zua fup'v xepv vu ci e siem xsovis epf katv xepv vu fsien ecuav ov, o haitt katv liiq vemloph ecuav meqvuqt.... cideati iwiszvjoph op vjot vjsief ot cusfismopi xusvjmitt vu zuas qastaov ug tadditt op xsovoph.
 
Huuf efwodi. O xsovi ximm op vji Tjav Aq epf Xsovi hsuaq.

O xipv vu e qsitipvevoup vufez cz 3 opfoi eavjust. Ov xet opvisitvoph epf hewi ni tuni ofiet gus qsunuvoup epf qacmotjoph, updi O hiv vu vjev quopv.
 
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