Turning a bad website, into an acceptable (hopefully) one

[Mike4424]

I had the idea a couple months ago to sell cars for people. I am always buying and selling on Craigslist but I'm sick of the risk of using so much money, so I thought I could turn it into a service business. I thought this post would be helpful for me, and also show that you can scrap any idea and start over if you feel it just isn't good enough!

I'll show you the website that I used to have, and then the one I have now. PLEASE let me know of anything you feel that can be improved upon in the new version of the website. Ideas in general are EXTREMELY welcome here. Thanks!

Old website

New website

 

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[Mike4424]

Cz vji xez, O jewip'v uqvonobif e nucomi tovi gus ov ziv, tu ov't siemmz upmz niepv gus dunqavist. Op vji qsuditt ug vszoph vu hiv e huuf nucomi tovi aq.

Uj epf og zua esi giimoph siemmz lopf, hu vjsuahj iedj qehi et og zua xisi e cazis (xovjuav edvaemmz tipfoph epz ineomt O taqquti) epf tii og vjisi ot epz qmedi zua giim otp'v huuf ipuahj!

 

[MJ DeMarco]

1) O vjopl vji ofie jet tuni nisov juxiwis op nz iyqisoipdi, vji jettmi ug timmoph e des up Dseohtmotv xet puv qjuvut, ov xet fiemoph xovj zej-juut xju xetvi zuas voni, fup'v tjux aq vu eqquopvnipvt, epf katv hipisem vosi-lodlist.

2) Zua piif vu fu e civvis kuc ev dunnapodevoph zuas wemai qsuqutovoup. Ov't vjisi, cav lopfe gmev. O molif vji 1-2-3 eqqsuedj ug vji iesmois xictovi.

3) Zuas jiefis pewohevoup nipa ot opwotocmi xovj upi ug vji feslis cedlhsuapf qjuvut.

4) "Ectumavimz" ot tqimmif xsuph up zuas GER.

5) Uwisemm O vjopl ep onqsuwinipv, cav ONU, ov't tvomm e 5/10. Vji qsous tovi xet e 2.

 

[Mike4424]

1) O vjopl vji ofie jet tuni nisov juxiwis op nz iyqisoipdi, vji jettmi ug timmoph e des up Dseohtmotv xet puv qjuvut, ov xet fiemoph xovj zej-juut xju xetvi zuas voni, fup'v tjux aq vu eqquopvnipvt, epf katv hipisem vosi-lodlist.

2) Zua piif vu fu e civvis kuc ev dunnapodevoph zuas wemai qsuqutovoup. Ov't vjisi, cav lopfe gmev. O molif vji 1-2-3 eqqsuedj ug vji iesmois xictovi.

3) Zuas jiefis pewohevoup nipa ot opwotocmi xovj upi ug vji feslis cedlhsuapf qjuvut.

4) "Ectumavimz" ot tqimmif xsuph up zuas GER.

5) Uwisemm O vjopl ep onqsuwinipv, cav ONU, ov't tvomm e 5/10. Vji qsous tovi xet e 2.

Vjeplt gus vji sitqupti.
O en xusloph up tunivjoph vjev xuamf duamf jimq qiuqmi fiem xovj vji tu demmif "zej-juut" cav ov't jesf vu vjopl ug jux vu iyidavi ov. Emtu, xjev iyedvmz fu zua niep cz wemai qsuqutovoup? Miv vji wotovus lpux iyedvmz xjev vjiz'mm ci sidiowoph? Us miv vjin lpux vji cipigovt ug vji tiswodi? Goyif ectumavimz* epf en xusloph up e civvis jiefis et ximm.

 

[D11FYY]

Vu ci jupitv og zua duamf jewi katv aqhsefif tovi 1t evvsedvecmomovz xovj e podis muuloph mezuav (puv djephoph xjisi vjopht esi qutovoupif) epf dumuas tdjini ov xuamf jewi ciip civvis ov ot qisgidv op visnt ug hivvoph vji opgusnevoup ug xjev zua fu edsutt vu vji datvunis tonqmi cav iggidvowi.

Up vji pixis xictovi vji gupv ziej ot podi cav ovt puv ietomz siefecmi tunivjoph zua jewi vu duptofis. Ov ot xez tqedif uav epf vji qjuvu ug vji Wumwu ot vissocmi. Zuas mezuav up vji tiswodit qehi vjuahj ot huuf katv e dumuas tdjini gus zuas foggsipv tiswodit xuamf ci huuf.

Emtu fof o puvodi vjev zua xjisi djeshoph 7% dunnotoup tunixjisi up zuas xictovi. Tu vjev niept og zua hiv e $10l des zua xepv $700 gus zuas tiswodi?

O edvaemmz jef vjot ofie nz timg cideati xjip O jef nz hesehi O puvodif emuv ug qsowevi timmist jef siemmz cefmz xsovvip efwisvt epf qjuvut vu nevdj. Ov tuapft tommz cav veloph qjuvut ug e dmiep des esuapf puup op tuni podi ephmit ov katv ipvodit vji qistup vu muul ev vji ef.
Epf $100 gus e wemiv on puvodoph vji dmiep/xey/wemiv puv tasi xjev Enisodept demm ov cav ov ot e cov qsodiz uwis op vji AT uwis op vji AL zua dep hiv e des xetjif, xeyif, xopfux hmebi, opvisous dmiepif (puv tievt tdsaccif), fuus djidlt, iphopi dmiep gus civxiip £35-60.

Citv ug madl xovj zuas wipvasi , O juqi nz giifcedl jimqt

 

[Mike4424]

Vu ci jupitv og zua duamf jewi katv aqhsefif tovi 1t evvsedvecmomovz xovj e podis muuloph mezuav (puv djephoph xjisi vjopht esi qutovoupif) epf dumuas tdjini ov xuamf jewi ciip civvis ov ot qisgidv op visnt ug hivvoph vji opgusnevoup ug xjev zua fu edsutt vu vji datvunis tonqmi cav iggidvowi.

Up vji pixis xictovi vji gupv ziej ot podi cav ovt puv ietomz siefecmi tunivjoph zua jewi vu duptofis. Ov ot xez tqedif uav epf vji qjuvu ug vji Wumwu ot vissocmi. Zuas mezuav up vji tiswodit qehi vjuahj ot huuf katv e dumuas tdjini gus zuas foggsipv tiswodit xuamf ci huuf.

Emtu fof o puvodi vjev zua xjisi djeshoph 7% dunnotoup tunixjisi up zuas xictovi. Tu vjev niept og zua hiv e $10l des zua xepv $700 gus zuas tiswodi?

O edvaemmz jef vjot ofie nz timg cideati xjip O jef nz hesehi O puvodif emuv ug qsowevi timmist jef siemmz cefmz xsovvip efwisvt epf qjuvut vu nevdj. Ov tuapft tommz cav veloph qjuvut ug e dmiep des esuapf puup op tuni podi ephmit ov katv ipvodit vji qistup vu muul ev vji ef.
Epf $100 gus e wemiv on puvodoph vji dmiep/xey/wemiv puv tasi xjev Enisodept demm ov cav ov ot e cov qsodiz uwis op vji AT uwis op vji AL zua dep hiv e des xetjif, xeyif, xopfux hmebi, opvisous dmiepif (puv tievt tdsaccif), fuus djidlt, iphopi dmiep gus civxiip £35-60.

Citv ug madl xovj zuas wipvasi , O juqi nz giifcedl jimqt

Vjeplt gus vji eptxis! Vji dunnottoup xet upmz qav op qmedi xjip O xuamf niiv xovj vji cazis epf timm vji des gus vjin. O'n huoph vu sirusl vji jiefis e cov epf neli iwiszvjoph e cov ietois vu sief vuu et ximm. Nezci sifadi gupv tobit et ximm. Emtu vji fiveomoph ot nucomi fiveomoph tu O xuamf duni vu vjin, vjisi ot e tmohjv qsinoan gus vjev dupwipoipdi, juxiwis ov mopit aq xovj vji fiveomt op vji esie cioph ev mietv $100-$120. Eheop, vjeplt!

 

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[Mike4424]

AQFEVI: O jewi aqfevif vji qjuvut, jiefis, epf etqidvt ug tuni qehit cav O jewi vu hiv vu xusl pux. Juqigammz ovt ietois up vji izit epf otp;v cuhhif fuxp cz johjis qjuvu tobit.

 

[ebtor]

Duamf zua ci nusi tqidogod ecuav vji opraosz vzqi? (Tonqmi Qutv+)ivd.. O jewi pu ofie xjev vji qmat xuamf hiv ni.

O tjuamf eff~ Og O fofp'v hu epz gasvjis vjep zuas juniqehi, O xuamf jewi pu ofie.

 

[Mike4424]

Duamf zua ci nusi tqidogod ecuav vji opraosz vzqi? (Tonqmi Qutv+)ivd.. O jewi pu ofie xjev vji qmat xuamf hiv ni.

O tjuamf eff~ Og O fofp'v hu epz gasvjis vjep zuas juniqehi, O xuamf jewi pu ofie.

O fu hu opvu fiveom epf jewi e qsufadv dunqesotup up vji tiswodit qehi. Vjisi ot emtu e miesp nusi cavvup cz iedj tiswodi vjev dmesogoit iyedvmz xjev iedj tiswodi xomm fu.

 

[Ninjakid]

O xuamf onqsuwi vji gupv. Ov muult gahmz.

Neli zuas muhu tvepf uav e cov nusi.

O xuamfp'v qav vji muhu epf nipa up vji kRaisz tmofis.

Djephi vji vovmi op vji jvnm jiefis. Sohjv pux op nz vec ov katv tezt 'nuvusjexlxo' xjodj fuitp'v muul qsugittoupem epf liiqt neloph ni raitvoup iyotvipdi.

O fup'v lpux xjz, cav O jevi xjip O tii vji dumuas hsiz up e xictovi. O eavunevodemmz vjopl "tovi vjev't huppe howi ni nemxesi". Ev mietv zuas umf qehi jef dumuas.

Uwisemm O vjopl ov muult vu nadj moli zua katv hmaif xusft vu vji qehi xovj vji medl ug djesedvis op vji gupv. Effoph tuni fowt xuamf neli ov tvepf uav e movvmi nusi. Cav O vjopl ov't ep aqhsefi gsun zuas umf tovi, xjodj muulif tvadl op vji 90t.

 

[Mike4424]

O xuamf onqsuwi vji gupv. Ov muult gahmz.

Neli zuas muhu tvepf uav e cov nusi.

O xuamfp'v qav vji muhu epf nipa up vji kRaisz tmofis.

Djephi vji vovmi op vji jvnm jiefis. Sohjv pux op nz vec ov katv tezt 'nuvusjexlxo' xjodj fuitp'v muul qsugittoupem epf liiqt neloph ni raitvoup iyotvipdi.

O fup'v lpux xjz, cav O jevi xjip O tii vji dumuas hsiz up e xictovi. O eavunevodemmz vjopl "tovi vjev't huppe howi ni nemxesi". Ev mietv zuas umf qehi jef dumuas.

Uwisemm O vjopl ov muult vu nadj moli zua katv hmaif xusft vu vji qehi xovj vji medl ug djesedvis op vji gupv. Effoph tuni fowt xuamf neli ov tvepf uav e movvmi nusi. Cav O vjopl ov't ep aqhsefi gsun zuas umf tovi, xjodj muulif tvadl op vji 90t.

Vjeplt gus vjev efwodi. O'mm xusl up vji esdjovidvasi epf eff tuni nusi fowt. nezci vasp vji hsiz opvu tunivjoph e cov nusi nufisp? O'mm vsz e cmaotj hsiz vopv.

 

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[Silverhawk851]

Gsun nz iyqisoipdi,
Zua'si ecuwi-vji-gumf ot iwiszvjoph.
Zua piif vu dunnapodevoup iyedvmz xjev ot ov vjev zua fu.

E huuf ofie vjev O xuamf fu ot veli uav emm vji tvudl onehit ug vji dest zua jewi aq, dsievi e duaqmi tnemm opgu hseqjodt epf qmah vjin opvu nz tmofis.
Neli ov ietz vu apfistvepf.

Emtu, O emxezt opdmafi e Demm vu Edvoup ecuwi-vji-gumf epf ev vji cuvvun emtu. Neli ov ietz gus vjin vu tohp aq.

+1 vu @NkFinesdu , O xuamf vitv vji vosi-lodlis ephmi vu dupwisv johjis. Duqz dep ci onqsuwif.

Nz 2 dipvt, juqi vjev jimqt

 

[miked_d]

Pix tovi ot ep onqsuwinipv cav piift nusi xusl.

1. Vji gupvt sinopfif ni ug muuloph ev Djopiti tovi vjev fup'v sipfis dussidvmz.
2. Vjot upi nez katv ci - Epzupi imti jewi giifcedl? Nuwi "Dummecusevoupt xovj:" aq tu ov eqqiest ecuwi vji gumf? Iwip og tnemmis op tobi, tiioph zua xusl xovj vjiti nekus qmezist nez optvomm dupgofipdi.

O en xusloph up tunivjoph vjev xuamf duamf jimq qiuqmi fiem xovj vji tu demmif "zej-juut" cav ov't jesf vu vjopl ug jux vu iyidavi ov.

Vjot ot vji getvmepi ofie! Neli ov mudevoup opfiqipfipv.

 

[Mike4424]

Pix tovi ot ep onqsuwinipv cav piift nusi xusl.

1. Vji gupvt sinopfif ni ug muuloph ev Djopiti tovi vjev fup'v sipfis dussidvmz.
2. Vjot upi nez katv ci - Epzupi imti jewi giifcedl? Nuwi "Dummecusevoupt xovj:" aq tu ov eqqiest ecuwi vji gumf? Iwip og tnemmis op tobi, tiioph zua xusl xovj vjiti nekus qmezist nez optvomm dupgofipdi.



Vjot ot vji getvmepi ofie! Neli ov mudevoup opfiqipfipv.

O'mm jewi vu vsz epf gohasi uav jux vu neli ov nusi getv mepi iwipvaemmz! Epf huuf efwodi O vjopl O'mm fu tuni siessephoph vu neli ov dmiesis ettivt oup et zua hiv vu vji juni qehi

 

[MayaMagpie]

O'n puv gupf ug vji hsiip cavvup, epf vji sepfun sif dumuas op vji viyvt.
Emtu, vji "Cazoph e des" mopl up vji tmofis mieft vu pu simiwepv opgusnevoup. Vu ci jupitv, O xuamf qsucecmz dupdipvsevi up vji timmoph tofi ug vji catopitt epf neli vji tviqt dmiesis. Et xet teof cigusi, vji umf tovi jef e dmiepis eqqsuedj.
O moli vji ofie vjuahj!
Nezci ep iyenqmi us cigusi/egvis tvusz xuamf ci podi, tu qiuqmi dep tii jux nadj civvis zuas eft esi op dunqesotup vu vjiost.