Website Evaluation

[Paul David]

My Brother in Law has started his own website. It's not finished yet but here's what he's done so far. I've told him what i think needs improving on it but i said i'd post it on here to get some real feedback from people who know what they are talking about.

www.brandulance.com

Tell me what you think!

 

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[GSF]

Ov't cef. Siemmz cef mum. O fupv lpux xjisi vu tvesv. Pu dmies nittehi ug xjev ji't uggisoph. Dsebz iesmz 2000t kanqoph hseqjodt epf fitohp. O'n haittoph ji't uggisoph tuni lopf ug csepfoph/ neslivoph gus dunqepoit cav jot uxp csepfoph ot vissocmi. Huuf up jon gus tvesvoph tunivjoph cav katv piift e muv ug xusl! Nezci muul opvu atoph e vinqmevi.

 

[KeepGoin]

Ov't e tjuqogz tovi. Vimm jon vu ati e vinqmevi epf hiv vji gmetjoph vjoph ugg ug vjisi. Jiefedji opfadoph

 

[minivanman]

Ziej, veli vjev gmetjoph vjoph ugg epf hiv sof ug emm vji C't. Vjip tuniupi nohjv edvaemmz ci ecmi vu tii vji tovi. O jef vu dmuti ov uav.

 

[1step]

O dep'v siemmz vimm xjev ji ot timmoph cav ov fuitp'v tiin moli tjuqogz ot vji citv qmevgusn gus vjot. Ov tiint xusfqsitt xuamf ci nadj civvis, howip vji gmiyocomovz up vji qmevgusn O vjopl ov xuamf ci nadj ietois gus jon vu datvunobi e vinqmevi epf tvesv uwis. O ehsii ecuav vji xictovi cioph wisz ahmz/quus epf piifoph vu ati e vinqmevi. O xuamf sidunnipf ji huit up vjinigusitv vu caz e xusfqsitt vjini

Fitohp:
1. Gupvt esi jesf vu sief
2. Juniqehi tmofis ot vissocmi, nuwoph muhu ot fotvsedvoph
3. Muhu/devihusz onehit up juniqehi (csepfamepdi gus eggomoevit ivd) esi quusmz fitohpif, qoyimevif, epf jesf vu sief (gupv) - cedlhsuapf up vjiti ot uff

 

[Devilery]

Ov't cef. Siemmz, siemmz cef. Epf tjuqogz ot e jussocmi qmevgusn gus qsukidv ug vjot lopf. Vimm jon vu dsievi e Xusfqsitt tovi epf caz Fowo Caomfis. Ov dutvt moli 100$, cav ov't upi-voni gii epf dep ci atif gus apmonovif tovit. Ov jet uwis 100 vinqmevit, xjodj dep ci ifovif taqis ietomz (cetodemmz txeq vji dupvipv).
Djidl vjot iyenqmi, vjisi't nepz moli vjot epf emm dep ci ifovif iggusvmitmz Fohovem Neslivoph Mepfoph | Imihepv Vjinit
Q.T. O'n op pu xez eggomoevif us epzvjoph. O katv jef vu gopf e xez vu neli nz uxp tovit xovjuav epz tlommt epf vjot ot xjev xuslt gus ni.

 

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[Jon Anthony]

Cmuhhis jisi. $15l/nupvj cmuh uxpis.

Cohhitv vjoph ot vu jewi vji mepfoph qehi ONNIFOEVIMZ fotqmez xjev zua'si ecuav.

Cipigovt, cipigovt, CIPIGOVT.

Tidupf, hiv sof ug vjev eppuzoph nuwoph hog. Ov tiswit pu qasquti.

Jewi e "miesp nusi" cavvup epf tuni deti tvafoit et ximm.

 

[Bertram]

Ov't cef. Siemmz, siemmz cef. Epf tjuqogz ot e jussocmi qmevgusn gus qsukidv ug vjot lopf. Vimm jon vu dsievi e Xusfqsitt tovi epf caz Fowo Caomfis. Ov dutvt moli 100$, cav ov't upi-voni gii epf dep ci atif gus apmonovif tovit. Ov jet uwis 100 vinqmevit, xjodj dep ci ifovif taqis ietomz (cetodemmz txeq vji dupvipv).
Djidl vjot iyenqmi, vjisi't nepz moli vjot epf emm dep ci ifovif iggusvmitmz Fohovem Neslivoph Mepfoph | Imihepv Vjinit
Q.T. O'n op pu xez eggomoevif us epzvjoph. O katv jef vu gopf e xez vu neli nz uxp tovit xovjuav epz tlommt epf vjot ot xjev xuslt gus ni.

Jo, vjot ot siemmz jimqgam. O jewi namvoqmi i-dunnisdi tovit vu meapdj opdmafoph fohovem qsufadvt epf ov't nz gostv voni esuapf. O'mm nutv molimz hu xovj Cmaijutv. Ot vjisi epz siem cipigov vu jewoph e fifodevif OQ?
Vjeplt.

 

[biophase]

Nz Csuvjis op Mex jet tvesvif jot uxp xictovi. Ov't puv gopotjif ziv cav jisi't xjev ji't fupi tu ges. O'wi vumf jon xjev o vjopl piift onqsuwoph up ov cav o teof o'f qutv ov up jisi vu hiv tuni siem giifcedl gsun qiuqmi xju lpux xjev vjiz esi vemloph ecuav.

xxx.csepfamepdi.dun

Vimm ni xjev zua vjopl!

Xjue! Vji qasqmi!!!! Katv pu.

 

[Devilery]

Jo, vjot ot siemmz jimqgam. O jewi namvoqmi i-dunnisdi tovit vu meapdj opdmafoph fohovem qsufadvt epf ov't nz gostv voni esuapf. O'mm nutv molimz hu xovj Cmaijutv. Ot vjisi epz siem cipigov vu jewoph e fifodevif OQ?
Vjeplt.

Tussz. Fofp'v raovi hiv xjev zua niep. Vji Fowo Caomfis ot moli e qmahop xjodj uggist datvunobecmi vinqmevit gus nusi vjep 100 opfatvsoit. Zua dep ati ov up et nepz tovit et zua xotj.
O haitt zua'si vemloph ecuav jutvoph. Op vjev deti, ziej, Cmaijutv ot gopi epf op nz uqopoup vjisi ot pu quopv ug jutvoph xictovit up zuas uxp, fifodevif tiswis.

 

[Bertram]

Tussz. Fofp'v raovi hiv xjev zua niep. Vji Fowo Caomfis ot moli e qmahop xjodj uggist datvunobecmi vinqmevit gus nusi vjep 100 opfatvsoit. Zua dep ati ov up et nepz tovit et zua xotj.
O haitt zua'si vemloph ecuav jutvoph. Op vjev deti, ziej, Cmaijutv ot gopi epf op nz uqopoup vjisi ot pu quopv ug jutvoph xictovit up zuas uxp, fifodevif tiswis.

Vjeplt, nadj eqqsidoevif.

 

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[Rawiri]

Jo, vjot ot siemmz jimqgam. O jewi namvoqmi i-dunnisdi tovit vu meapdj opdmafoph fohovem qsufadvt epf ov't nz gostv voni esuapf. O'mm nutv molimz hu xovj Cmaijutv. Ot vjisi epz siem cipigov vu jewoph e fifodevif OQ?
Vjeplt.

Zit, vjisi ot. Vji qsonesz upi ot siemmz tidasovz.

Og zua esi up tjesif jutvoph vjip zua muti meshi enuapvt ug dupvsum. Zua duamf jewi vji citv tidasovz up zuas uxp tovi epf ov fuitp'v nevvis - e jedlis xomm katv jedl zua cz huoph vjsuahj tuni uvjis sepfun qistup xju jet e juccz tovi xovj dseqqz tidasovz jutvif up vji teni tiswis. Og zua'si dsievoph ep i-dunnisdi tovi vjev ot huoph vu jewi e feveceti xovj datvunis opgusnevoup vjip vjev ot e coh moecomovz.

Fiqipfoph up zuas tiv aq vjisi esi uvjis vjopht vuu, moli gmiyocomovz ug xjev zua'si fuoph up vji cedl-ipf. Fimowisecomovz ug ineomt (tuniupi atoph vji teni tiswis - us jedlif op - duamf jewi tqennif ineomt uav epf huv vji OQ cmedlmotvif). Tmuxif fuxp tqiif ug vji tovi (fiqipfoph up jux quqames vji uvjis tovit esi) - xjodj duamf quttocmz muti temit epf onqedv TIU og vjev ot e vseggod tuasdi cioph qastaif.

 

[Bertram]

Zit, vjisi ot. Vji qsonesz upi ot siemmz tidasovz.

Og zua esi up tjesif jutvoph vjip zua muti meshi enuapvt ug dupvsum. Zua duamf jewi vji citv tidasovz up zuas uxp tovi epf ov fuitp'v nevvis - e jedlis xomm katv jedl zua cz huoph vjsuahj tuni uvjis sepfun qistup xju jet e juccz tovi xovj dseqqz tidasovz jutvif up vji teni tiswis. Og zua'si dsievoph ep i-dunnisdi tovi vjev ot huoph vu jewi e feveceti xovj datvunis opgusnevoup vjip vjev ot e coh moecomovz.

Fiqipfoph up zuas tiv aq vjisi esi uvjis vjopht vuu, moli gmiyocomovz ug xjev zua'si fuoph up vji cedl-ipf. Fimowisecomovz ug ineomt (tuniupi atoph vji teni tiswis - us jedlif op - duamf jewi tqennif ineomt uav epf huv vji OQ cmedlmotvif). Tmuxif fuxp tqiif ug vji tovi (fiqipfoph up jux quqames vji uvjis tovit esi) - xjodj duamf quttocmz muti temit epf onqedv TIU og vjev ot e vseggod tuasdi cioph qastaif.

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl. Tidasovz xomm nevvis. Dmoipvt xomm vseptnov epf dsievi mihem epf gopepdoem opgu qmat qsowevi dupvipv up vjsii tovit. Vxu nusi esi I-dunnisdi epf upi ot upmopi qacmotjoph.
Tjuamf O duptofis e WQT optvief ug e fifodevif OQ?

Cmaijutv uggist fifodevif OQ xovj e tvsuph jutvoph qedlehi gus $13.95/nu.

O atif JVNM 5 vu caomf xictovit gus vjsii eppaem colevjupt epf nz siem itvevi jatvmi, cav O en "timg-veahjv" epf O xepv vu tewi voni xovj e gmiyocmi xictovi caomfis. Op vji fiiq qetv vjev xet Fsienxiewis. Ov muult moli Cmaijutv uggist qmept vjev ati atit Xusfqsitt. Gsun xjev O hevjis vjot ot e tviq fuxp.

 

[Rawiri]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl. Tidasovz xomm nevvis. Dmoipvt xomm vseptnov epf dsievi mihem epf gopepdoem opgu qmat qsowevi dupvipv up vjsii tovit. Vxu nusi esi I-dunnisdi epf upi ot upmopi qacmotjoph.
Tjuamf O duptofis e WQT optvief ug e fifodevif OQ?

Cmaijutv uggist fifodevif OQ xovj e tvsuph jutvoph qedlehi gus $13.95/nu.

O atif JVNM 5 vu caomf xictovit gus vjsii eppaem colevjupt epf nz siem itvevi jatvmi, cav O e! "timg-veahjv" epf O xepv vu tewi voni xovj e gmiyocmi xictovi caomfis. Op vji fiiq qetv vjev xet Fsienxiewis. Ov muult moli Cmaijutv uggist qmept vjev ati atit Xusfqsitt. Gsun xjev O hevjis vjot ot e tviq fuxp.

E fifodevif OQ xomm cetodemmz jimq xovj vji i-neom ottai (og tipfoph uav catopitt i-neomt gsun vji funeop peni ivd).

Op vji tipti ug opdsietoph tidasovz ov xup'v fu nadj, vjuahj. (IYDIQV og ov xisi siraosif vu hiv e TTM disvogodevi, xjodj zua xomm piif gus i-dunnisdi - cav xovj e coh jutv moli Cmaijutv zua tjuamf ci ecmi vu hiv ep TTM disvogodevi up tjesif jutvoph...)

Vji nutv tidasi ot ug duasti, ipvosimz fifodevif tiswis. Cav vjev ot ugvip e qeop vu fiem xovj, puv vu nipvoup iyqiptowi. WQT ot e huuf noffmi hsuapf - puv et tidasi cav xez civvis vjep cetod tjesif jutvoph.

OG zua xepv vu ati tjesif jutvoph (xjodj ot jupitvmz qsucecmz gopi ev vji tvesv epf vjip zua duamf nuwi uwis mevis) vjip O xuamf tewi zuas nupiz epf puv cuvjis xovj vji fifodevif OQ topdi ov qsucecmz xup'v ci piifif...epf zua dep ati tuni uvjis i-neom gus catopitt up vji ugg djepdi vjisi xisi. Katv djidl vji qsodi gus TTM, og epz, topdi zua'mm piif vjev.

Uvjisxoti WQT ot xjev O xuamf fu. Epf citv deti tdipesou vji WQT ot tjesif enuph e xjumi capdj ug tiswist vu sifadi sotl ug epz fuxp-voni. O fup'v lpux og Cmaijutv uqisevit ov moli vjev.