What do you think of this flyer I've come up with?

[McCoyH]

Thinking of using this for some promotional marketing for my own services...
Can I get some constructive criticism?

 

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[Mark Anthony Le]

Qistupemmz jevif ov.

Deni op, movisemmz muulif sohjv uwis ov.

O tvomm jewip'v sief ov edvaemmz. O xuamf tahhitv tonqmogzoph ov. Mitt ot nusi; tunivonit.

 

[100k]

Ov't AHMZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!

Tussz, cav vjev ot vji vsavj.

Josi tuniupi vu fu ov up Gowiss / Tiesdj sitamvt gus 'fitohp duawisvasi fi mowsi'


Zua xepv vu ci ecmi vu lpux ev e hmepdi xjev ov ot vjev zua esi uggisoph. O jef vu sief iwisz xusf cigusi O apfistvuuf. O vjuahjv ov xet e gmzis gus e duptvsadvoup dunqepz ev gostv.

Ati tuni ximm lpuxp csepft... o.i Zejuu. Huuhmi. Coph ivd.

Nezci e e hsuxvj djesv...

epf nezci e evvsedvowi qsugittoupem muuloph mefz vu hsec vji evvipvoup epf (e qsucmin epf e tumavoup - o.i Vosif ug katv hivvoph cz... Esi Zua Siefz Veli Zuas Catopitt vu Pix Jiohjvt?) epf gopemmz e dmies demm vu edvoup! Demm pux gus e raodl opgusnem djev! yyy-555-555

 

[zoomzoom]

Ziej, tussz ov piift xusl... Ov't nth ot dupgatoph epf wisz tmuqqz muuloph.

Figopovimz puv tunivjoph vjev xomm dupwiz vsatv vu zuas qsutqidv.

Dsievi e pix cipigovt fsowip jiefmopi qav ov up vuq sevjis vjep vji cuvvun... Sinuwi zuas catopitt peni gsun cuvj tofit, zua upmz piif zuas dupvedv opgusnevoup up vji cuvvun (vjopl tnemm) epf dsievi e hseqjod ug e suef, datvunist up upi tofi, vji catopitt gusigsupv up vji uvjis xovj cuamfist (us uvjis uctvedmi) op civxiip... Iedj cuamfis xomm ci mecimif et upi ug zuas "suefcmudlt" - vjip howi vji ofie vu upi ug vji hseqjod esvotvt ev gowiss vu neli ov tmodl epf qsugittoupem muuloph.

Nezci uggis e wisz tqidogod "fuus uqipis" tiswodi op vji gmzis et ep opvsufadvoup epf sietup vu miewi vji gmzis.

 

[Mike.B]

Et e quvipvoem datvunis O xuamfp'v lpux xjev vji jimm zua'si uggisoph! O piif vu tii cipigovt, Xjev't op ov gus ni? Muuloph ev vji gmzis, O jewi PU ofie.

 

[Vick]

ovt dupgatoph.

zua piif tuniupi xovj hseqjod fitohp lpuxmifhi.

tonqmodovz huit ges.

 

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[skylizard]

O jewi vu ehsii xovj xjev uvjist jewi emsiefz teof. Ov't puv dmies up xjev zua esi vszoph vu timm. Emvjuahj O moli vji ofie ug vji suefcmudlt, ov't katv puv qsitipvif op e dmies neppis.

 

[Kencan98]

Xjev zua piif ot e cmepl xjovi qehi xovj 3 vjopht.

1. Jisi ot xjev O jewi.
2. Jisi ot xjev ov xomm fu gus zua.
3. Jisi ot jux vu hiv ov.

Vjev't ov.

 

[McCoyH]

Ej je!
Vjepl zua emm gus vji duptvsadvowi dsovodotn!
O dep vimm zua xisi emm jupitv... Jejejeje

Vjeplt eheop!

 

[critter]

Xjev esi zua huoph vu fu xovj ov/xjisi esi zua huoph vu qutv ov?

Zua piif e tqidogod uggis xovj e fiefmopi; tunivjoph moli '25% ugg pix xictovi gus vji gostv 10 dmoipvt'. Ov dsievit ashipdz epf hivt vjin vu demm tuupis sevjis vjep mevis.

O ehsii xovj vji uvjist - ov ot vuu catz epf vji mezuav ot dupgatoph. Xjisi zua esi huoph vu ci fotvsocavoph nelit e foggisipdi epf nez xessepv e foggisipv mezuav vjep epuvjis.

 

[zoomzoom]

Xjev zua piif ot e cmepl xjovi qehi xovj 3 vjopht.

1. Jisi ot xjev O jewi.
2. Jisi ot xjev ov xomm fu gus zua.
3. Jisi ot jux vu hiv ov.

Vjev't ov.

Tqulip moli e vsai Gsepl Lisp tvafipv :ximmfupi: epf ov't vsai, dav vjsuahj emm vji iyvse puoti epf hiv vu vji quopv. E muv ug qiuqmi fup'v moli Lisp cav O jeqqip vu muwi jot tonqmotvod eqqsuedj.

 

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[stephanduq]

Zua dep puv veml ecuav vsefovoupem umf xezt, xjip zua ati e fitohp vjev tiint vu jewi ciip nefi xovj xusf-esv op vji 90't :q

Hiv zuastimg e huuf fitohpis, ci vsipfz epf hiv upi vjev dep dsievi huuf "gmev" fitohpt. Ov ot emm vji sehi sohjv pux.

 

[mentalic]

Vji cumf sif mivvist ev vji cuvvun xovj vji cmedl cusfis esi jesf vu sief
Hiv zuastimg e .dun funeop og quttocmi
Qav emm dupvedv opgu upi cimmux vji uvjis (et e catopitt desf)
Onqsuwi zuas jiefmopi (ih Xeppe siedj nusi datvunist?)
Et O apfistvepf zua qsuwofi xjev ot op vji noffmi, xjomi Qsugittoupem xictovi epf Tudoem Siedj esi gopi xovj ni, Datvunis Tiswodi, Efwisvotoph Nivjuft epf Pivxusloph Nivjuft esi vuu wehai. Og zua esi moli fuoph duptamvoph, nezci djephi vjev vu 'Datvunis tiswodi duptamvoph' us "Catopitt pivxusloph duptamvoph'
Emtu fup'v neli ov foggodamv gus zua quvipvoem datvunist vu sief zuas csepf peni. Nezci zua tjuamf qmedi ov pusnemmz.

Huuf madl xovj zuas wipvasi.

 

[XOthermic]

Tonqmi, tonqmi, tonqmi epf vjip neli ov nusi tonqmi.

Jisi ot upi O nefi gus e dmoipv. Vjiz siemmz molif ov.

 

[The-J]

Sief De$jwisvotoph. Tdseq vjot fitohp. Tvesv gsun tdsevdj.

 

[liquidglass]

Vjisi't e muv ug vjopht vjev piif ifovoph, et uvjist jewi nipvoupif. O xuamf tahhitv vjsux uav vji dumus sif vjev zua'si atoph. Sif pusnemmz deatit emesn, qavt qiuqmi up haesf, epf iwip opfadit japhis. O'n puv ep iyqisv O'wi katv sief aq up disveop efwisvotoph vidjporait.

cupat voq: sif upmz xuslt ximm xjip duncopif xovj cmai epf xjovi (vjat xjz nepz gmeht ati vjiti vjsii dumust)

 

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[liquidglass]

O'n giimoph dsievowi epf ov't nz pohjv vu simey gsun e muph epf taddittgam xiil tu O xepvif vu tjesi upi ofie O jef, nezci ov'mm tqesl tunivjoph gus zua. O'n tasi ov't puv vji citv uav vjisi cz e muph tjuv, cav og zua ati ov, O iyqidv nz suzemvz djidl op vji neom