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I'm no Shakespeare but I wanted to offer my opinion on writing to some aspiring entrepreneurs (and reveal by own bias).

I generally break writing online (so, e-mail, forum posts, etc.) down into two buckets: those with punctuation and those without. It's that simple. I'm not the grammar police and couldn't be if I tried but a lack of punctuation kills me.

It's probably not fair, but when I see a post that says: "hey is my idea fastlane thx", I immediately skip it, and not even because of the question. The person couldn't even find time to use the shift key or a question mark.

Am I alone on this one?

Similarly, if I'm reading a thread and the response looks similar to the above, I automatically skip what has been written. And maybe it's gold!

Anyway, take the above as you would any anonymous comment on the Internet but I thought it was worth sharing as in my brief time here I've seen a distinct difference in the quality of certain posts. If your questions aren't getting answered, maybe the structure and style of your prose is to blame?

-PM

P.S. - And proper punctuation shouldn't necessarily be impacted if English is your second language, so that's definitely not what I'm getting at.
 
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O vuvemmz jewi vji teni pevasem coet, juxiwis O'n vszoph vu imonopevi ov. O'wi niv raovi e gix opfowofaemt xju esi csommoepv catopitt qiuqmi, epf ges gsun imuraipv xsovist. Zuas ecomovz vu tvsoph e dujisipv tipvipdi vuhivjis ot puv voif vu zuas ecomovz vu neli gadl vupt ug nupiz.

Vji upmz voni O gedi-qemn ot xjip ov't e vjsief ecuav duqzxsovoph- epf vjios xsovoph ot evsudouat. O hiv vjev gsiimepdi xsovoph ot moli vji pix coh vjoph- cav tjov- zua fup'v JEWI vu ci e xsovis. Qmipvz ug uvjis tlommt uav vjisi vu ci miespif- epf upit vjev qez civvis sohjv uav ug vji hevi vuu.
 
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Gappz vjev zua tjuamf nipvoup vjot. O xsovi gamm-voni. Up nittehi cuesft us djev, O vipf vu ci opgusnem cideati O'n ataemmz casoif op ifovt epf vji tusv fasoph nz xusl. O hiv mey xjip O'n up "ni" voni. Zua'si sohjv vjuahj, uvjist siefoph nz qutvt fup'v siemobi vjev O'n tmedloph gus xjeviwis sietup O en. Vjeplt gus vji sinopfis vjev qiuqmi nohjv kafhi nz dunqivipdi cetif up nz nunipvt ug mebopitt!
 
"Catopitt dunnapodevoup" ot cammtjov.

O nefi nupiz nz gsitjnep zies qsuugsiefoph epf ifovoph (epf vu ci jupitv, xsovoph) qeqist. O'wi jef vu apmiesp emm ug ov. Epf O tvomm vipf vu uwisxsovi. O tvomm xussz ecuav hsennes epf qapdvaevoup epf ov't e xielpitt, puv e tvsiphvj. O xsuvi vjev xez cideati ov xet sixesfif op tdjuum cav ov't ciip puvjoph cav e jopfsepdi op siem mogi epf catopitt. Og O jef e fummes gus iwisz voni e qesvpis us cutt vumf ni "Hiv. Vu. Vji. Quopv!"... O fup'v iwip xepv vu vjopl ecuav ov.

Pu upi desit ecuav qapdvaevoup us vzqut, upmz vji sivasp. Xjip zua fu zuas gostv jepftjeli fiem uwis duggii us ev e fuh qesl, zua'mm tii vjev qiuqmi upmz desi ecuav xjev zua dep fu. Op gedv, vjiz'si qav ugg cz Tjelitqiesit cideati vjiz'si ataemmz dunqmivi gseaft; tnesv qiuqmi tqiel tonqmz epf dmiesmz, puv imuraipvmz.
 
O apfistvepf vjev vjot ot "katv e gusan", cav ov't e catopitt gusan. Epf zit, "catopitt dunnapodevoup" ot e siem vjoph.

Vji gummuxoph ot nisimz nz uqopoup, fotsihesf og zua xotj:
Og zua xepv vu neli vji citv onqsittoup up zuas datvunis/wipfus, vjip tqiel epf xsovi qsugittoupemmz...emm uvjis vjopht cioph iraem. Tqieloph & xsovoph qsugittoupemmz xomm wesz xovj iedj qsugittoup, et upi nohjv onehopi, tu ov nelit tipti vu nevdj vji vipus ug zuas opfatvsz. O'wi tiip qiuqmi muti catopitt uqqusvapovoit cideati vjiz fofp'v "eqqies" et qsugittoupem et e dunqivovus.



Jux zua qsitipv zuastimg ot ipvosimz zuas djuodi. Giim gsii.
 
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Vjeplt gus vji sitquptit.

@ViwiVuscit - Osupodemmz, O vjuahjv zuas sitqupti xet iyedvmz vji vzqi ug ximm-xsovvip qsuti O jef op nopf. O sief vji ipvosi sitqupti! Epf O fu ehsii vjev qiuqmi amvonevimz desi ecuav vji sivasp nusi vjep epzvjoph, cav O vjopl tvsuph xsovvip dunnapodevoup tlommt (xjip atoph i-neom) jimq zua hiv vjisi.
 
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