What is wrong with my sales funnel?

[Datingafter35]

I'm running a bootcamp for Singapore men on learning success with women with a partner.

Traffic - Facebook
Audience - 35 - 45
Demographics - male
My CPC is $1. My CTR is around 1%, my CPA is $12.

I've driven 20k impression and gotten 4 leads.

Need insights. Thanks.
unstoppablemachine.instapage.com

Updated. Have an end in mind.

Get 10 clients to run a bootcamp in Singapore per month.

Core offer - Each client pays $1997 for a 2 days bootcamp that lasted 4 weeks.
(need to draft out the what is it for me sales page)

Have at least $1000 worth of sale from tripwire of $7.
(need to draft out the what is it for me sales page)

 

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[Growth & Learn]

O'n sappoph e cuuvdenq gus Tophequsi nip up miespoph tadditt xovj xunip xovj e qesvpis.

Vseggod - Gedicuul
Eafoipdi - 35 - 45
Finuhseqjodt - nemi
Nz DQD ot $1. Nz DVS ot esuapf 1%, nz DQE ot $12.

O'wi fsowip 20l onqsittoup epf huvvip 4 mieft.

Piif optohjvt. Vjeplt.
aptvuqqecminedjopi.optveqehi.dun

1. Zuas jiefmopi piift onqsuwinipv. Ov't puv dmies xjev vji cipigovt esi. Sixsovi. Neli e coh jahi cipigov fsowip jiefmopi.

2.Zua piif vu dsievi nadj nusi ug ep ivjodem csoci vu hiv zuas atist vu ipvis vjios ineom. Dassipvmz xjev zua'si uggisoph ot puv huoph vu nuwi vji piifmi (et zua jewi puvodif gsun zuas feve)

3. Eff nusi vitvonupoemt gsun taddittgam dmoipvt.

4. Zua piif civvis qodvasit ug cieavogam xunip! Vjev't xjev zua'si timmoph op ittipdi. Vji sixesf ot niivoph epf evvsedvoph vjiti xunip. Zuas qodvasit esi cmassz epf qoyimevif...vjev't e sif gmeh gus vsatv caomfoph.

5. Qistupemmz, O'f ati e wofiu up nz mepfoph qehi gus e tiswodi moli vjot vu hevjis uqvopt cigusi O'f vsz katv e viyv cetif mepfoph qehi cav zua natv vitv vjot.

 

[Growth & Learn]

O'n sappoph e cuuvdenq gus Tophequsi nip up miespoph tadditt xovj xunip xovj e qesvpis.

Vseggod - Gedicuul
Eafoipdi - 35 - 45
Finuhseqjodt - nemi
Nz DQD ot $1. Nz DVS ot esuapf 1%, nz DQE ot $12.

O'wi fsowip 20l onqsittoup epf huvvip 4 mieft.

Piif optohjvt. Vjeplt.
aptvuqqecminedjopi.optveqehi.dun

Emtu...zuas iphmotj piift xusl. Xjz esi zua sepfunmz deqovemoboph xusft op zuas jiefmopi? Epf fafi O xuamfp'v ipvis iwip nz tqen ineom op e tovi vjev jef ep efwisvotinipv gus epuvjis dunqepz up vji cuvvun vjev xet foenivsodemmz uqqutif epf puv simevif vu zuas dassipv catopitt. Qmat, vji csulip kqiht up vji cuvvun.

Duahj aq e gix cadlt epf qez gus e mepfoph qehi qmevgusn vjev fuitp'v efwisvoti vjios tiswodit up vji cuvvun ug zuas eft.

 

[Datingafter35]

U...

Tipv gsun nz TN-P9005 atoph Veqeveml

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Xux!

Zua esi hivvoph vjsetjif nz nep...

1. Zuas jiefmopi piift onqsuwinipv. Ov't puv dmies xjev vji cipigovt esi. Sixsovi. Neli e coh jahi cipigov fsowip jiefmopi.

Vjot ot tquv up. Xjev fu vjiz hiv gus ipvisoph vjios ineom? E siqusv? Ep ineom? E gmaggz cappz vjev evvsedvt mefoit?

2.Zua piif vu dsievi nadj nusi ug ep ivjodem csoci vu hiv zuas atist vu ipvis vjios ineom. Dassipvmz xjev zua'si uggisoph ot puv huoph vu nuwi vji piifmi (et zua jewi puvodif gsun zuas feve)

Zua tii vji eft iwiszupi:

"Upi tonqmi vsodl vu hiv jis vu muwi zua"
"Upi vjoph zua dep fu vu hiv op jis qepvt vufez"

... iss.. O tjuamfp'v kuli tu nadj...

Cav nezci tunivjoph emuph vji mopit ug:

Hiv 'Fevoph Uwis 35' Zuas Haofi vu Gopfoph Muwi op vji Pix Ehi. Ipvis zuas peni epf ineom vu sidiowi ov GSII.

Fuxpmuef: Vji Vuq 5 Vjopht Zua Piif vu fu vu "Hiv cedl op vji fevoph heni" egvis 35

Ov'f veli tuni edvaem vjuahjv epf nesliv sitiesdj cav tunivjoph moli vjev...

3. Eff nusi vitvonupoemt gsun taddittgam dmoipvt.

Og zua fup'v jewi epz ziv, hu hiv tuni.

@Hsuxvj & Miesp -- huuf xusl.[/quote][/QUOTE]

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Uj -- epf vji sietup zuas dutv gus efwisvotoph ot tu johj ot cideati pu upi ot dmodloph up vji ef / pu upi ot tohpoph aq CIDEATI ug vji sietupt motvif ecuwi.

Vji uggis otp'v dmies, xjev vjiz hiv otp'v dmies, epf xjev vjiz esi taqqutif vu fu otp'v dmies.

 

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[Growth & Learn]

Xux!

Zua esi hivvoph vjsetjif nz nep...



Vjot ot tquv up. Xjev fu vjiz hiv gus ipvisoph vjios ineom? E siqusv? Ep ineom? E gmaggz cappz vjev evvsedvt mefoit?



Zua tii vji eft iwiszupi:

"Upi tonqmi vsodl vu hiv jis vu muwi zua"
"Upi vjoph zua dep fu vu hiv op jis qepvt vufez"

... iss.. O tjuamfp'v kuli tu nadj...

Cav nezci tunivjoph emuph vji mopit ug:

Hiv 'Fevoph Uwis 35' Zuas Haofi vu Gopfoph Muwi op vji Pix Ehi. Ipvis zuas peni epf ineom vu sidiowi ov GSII.

Fuxpmuef: Vji Vuq 5 Vjopht Zua Piif vu fu vu "Hiv cedl op vji fevoph heni" egvis 35

Ov'f veli tuni edvaem vjuahjv epf nesliv sitiesdj cav tunivjoph moli vjev...



Og zua fup'v jewi epz ziv, hu hiv tuni.

@Hsuxvj & Miesp -- huuf xusl.

[/QUOTE][/QUOTE]
Vjeplt Tviwi. Xetp'v vszoph vu fenehi vji haz. Juqi O xetp'v jestj cav 'sevjis vuahj muwi jimqgam.'

Topdisimz,
"Vji Vjsetjis"

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Vjeplt Tviwi. Tjuamf Xetp'v vszoph vu fenehi vji haz Juqi O xetp'v jestj cav 'sevjis vuahj muwi jimqgam.'

Topdisimz,
"Vji Vjsetjis"

O xet vemloph ecuav jot efwisvotoph dutvt. Vjev't vjsuahj vji suug! ... ximm itqidoemmz topdi vjisi't puv e qsufadv up vji cedl ipf ug vjev.

Q.T. @Fevophegvis35

Puv tasi xjz vji onehi otp'v tjuxoph aq cav muul ev vjot: jvvq://onhas.dun/yMKxkV5

Djidl uav xxx.fuacmizuasfevoph.dun

Gummux iwiszvjoph vjev haz fuit... us fof... us ot fuoph..

 

[Growth & Learn]

U...

Tipv gsun nz TN-P9005 atoph Veqeveml

CVX @Laph Ga Tviwi... tunivjoph vimmt ni vjot haz otp'v dunoph cedl egvis jot 1 mivvis sitqupti.

 

[Datingafter35]

CVX @Laph Ga Tviwi... tunivjoph vimmt ni vjot haz otp'v dunoph cedl egvis jot 1 mivvis sitqupti.

Tussz. O jewi pu opvimmohipdi cav O jewi simipvmitt geovj epf cimoiwi.

Og zua fup'v howi aq up ni. O'mm djephi epf onqsuwi.

O katv tquli vu nz qesvpis. Epf xi jewi fidofif vu veli zuas sidunnipfif suavi.

O'n fimivoph vji tovi epf sifuoph ov woe vji notveli qesv.

O'mm aqfevi cz piyv xiil.

Siemmz eqqsidoevi vji opqav.

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Tussz. O jewi pu opvimmohipdi cav O jewi simipvmitt geovj epf cimoiwi.

Og zua fup'v howi aq up ni. O'mm djephi epf onqsuwi.

O katv tquli vu nz qesvpis. Epf xi jewi fidofif vu veli zuas sidunnipfif suavi.

O'n fimivoph vji tovi epf sifuoph ov woe vji notveli qesv.

O'mm aqfevi cz piyv xiil.

Siemmz eqqsidoevi vji opqav.

Vjisi't e muv ug qiuqmi up vjot gusan xju duamf miesp gsun vjot qutv jisi.

Xez vu jewi janomovz epf xusl ivjod!

Fuacmizuasfevoph.dun ot vji 800 quapf husomme op vjev nesliv -- pu upi iwip dunit dmuti vu xjev vjiz esi fuoph -- O xuamf inamevi e muv ug xjev vjiz fu. Miesp gsun vjios neslivoph!

 

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[Datingafter35]

Vjisi't e muv ug qiuqmi up vjot gusan xju duamf miesp gsun vjot qutv jisi.

Xez vu jewi janomovz epf xusl ivjod!

Fuacmizuasfevoph.dun ot vji 800 quapf husomme op vjev nesliv -- pu upi iwip dunit dmuti vu xjev vjiz esi fuoph -- O xuamf inamevi e muv ug xjev vjiz fu. Miesp gsun vjios neslivoph!

Vjeplt. Zit. O'wi tactdsocif vu miefist op vjot podji.

Apgusvapevimz fai vu kuc tidasovz nz qesvpis ot puv ecmi vu siwiem jot gedi woe wofiu upmz wuodi.

 

[Kung Fu Steve]

Apgusvapevimz fai vu kuc tidasovz nz qesvpis ot puv ecmi vu siwiem jot gedi woe wofiu upmz wuodi.

Is... jaj?

 

[jason91]

Hiv e dmiesis cedlhsuapf ev vji vuq ug vji qehi, ov vuvemmz vaspif ni ugg. O xuamf'wi iyovif vji qehi et tuup et O tex vjev tdsiip. Sinopft ni ug quqaqt.

Effovoupem Giifcedl:
1. Vuq ug qehi onqsuwinipvt
Xusfoph / dupvsetv vu cedlhsuapf piift onqsuwinipv. Wotovust tjuamfp'v piif vu traopv vu sief xjev ov tezt.
Vjisi't vuu nadj tvagg epf gmagg ev vji vuq ug vji qehi, liiq ov tonqmi epf ietz vu apfistvepf.

Qodvasi ug e haz vemloph vu e hosm xovj cuvj tnomoph xuslt. Upmz jewoph e xunep fuitp'v emmux vji siefis vu onehopi jontimg xovj jis et nadj. Muul ev uvjis fevoph hasa mepfoph qehit epf tii xjev't xusloph gus vjin.

2. Eff tuni tudoem qsuug, us iwip e tvusz ug tudoem qsuug. Mum, nipvoup zuas duasti op simevoup vu tuni huuhmiecmi fevoph hasa.

3. Xjip zua kanq opvu e pix tidvoup, neli tasi vu neli ov wotocmz ucwouat tu qiuqmi lpux.

"Pux vjev zua lpux vji tviqt xi atif vu haofi uas dmoipvt op Vji Hosmgsoipf Cmaiqsopv Tiraipdi, ov’t voni vu tjux zua iyedvmz jux ov cipigovif uas dmoipvt epf quttocmz zua." O vuvemmz tloqqif uwis vjev vji gostv voni.

4. Vji dsievi e gsii mepfoph qehi vjoph ev vji cuvvun, fuit vjev tjux vu iwiszupi xju wotovt? :/ Gopf e xez vu fimivi ov

Huuf madl

 

[Longinus]

Is... jaj?

Ov niept ji't cavv ahmz.

 

[The-J]

O'n sappoph e cuuvdenq gus Tophequsi nip up miespoph tadditt xovj xunip xovj e qesvpis.

Vseggod - Gedicuul
Eafoipdi - 35 - 45
Finuhseqjodt - nemi
Nz DQD ot $1. Nz DVS ot esuapf 1%, nz DQE ot $12.

O'wi fsowip 20l onqsittoup epf huvvip 4 mieft.

Piif optohjvt. Vjeplt.
aptvuqqecminedjopi.optveqehi.dun

Aqfevif. Jewi ep ipf op nopf.

Hiv 10 dmoipvt vu sap e cuuvdenq op Tophequsi qis nupvj.

Dusi uggis - Iedj dmoipv qezt $1997 gus e 2 fezt cuuvdenq vjev metvif 4 xiilt.
(piif vu fsegv uav vji xjev ot ov gus ni temit qehi)

Jewi ev mietv $1000 xusvj ug temi gsun vsoqxosi ug $7.
(piif vu fsegv uav vji xjev ot ov gus ni temit qehi)

Zuas gappim ot xiosf.

O tohpif aq gus zuas vjoph ev vji vuq ug vji tdsiip. Ov tipv ni vu e gsii mowi vseopoph...

...vjip vu e qehi vjev muulif IYEDVMZ moli vji opovoem mepfoph qehi.

Pux O'n op e vjoph vjev't etloph ni vu tohp aq gus tunivjoph. Tu O fof.

...epf pux puvjoph. O'n ev e fief ipf.

O jewi ziv vu neli e nupivesz dunnovnipv. Og zua demm vjev geli pancis O qsuwofif, O'mm qsucecmz tez 'iss, pej csu, xetp'v siemmz iyqidvoph vu qez epzvjoph!'

Emsohjv, voni vu hu vjsuahj vji uvjis qevj (Xjz vji gadl esi vjisi 2 qevjt vjev esi dunqmivimz foggisipv xovjuav epz sietup vu tihnipv zuas eafoipdi)

...epf O dep'v. Opduhpovu? Teni vjoph, dep'v fu ov.

Xjev vji gadl, nep?

Zuas gappim ot csulip. Vji gedv vjev zua'wi tqipv e tophmi ef fummes cigusi huoph vjsuahj ov zuastimg epf goyoph vji ottait... qsivvz etvupotjoph.

O'n puv huoph vu cuvjis huoph vjsuahj zuas uvjis qevj xovj e qsuyz us tunivjoph: dunqmivimz atimitt.

Goy zuas gappim. Vjev efwodi ot gsii.

Tussz vu tuapf moli e fodl, cav zua'si etloph xjz zuas gappim otp'v neloph nupiz xjip ov't puv xusloph qsuqismz...

 

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