What would you be looking for in a cleaning service?

[RyanK OnMyWay]

If you guys were looking for a house cleaning service and you came across a site:

1. What information would you be looking for?
2. What would your objections be?
3. What is one thing that would probably seal the deal for you?

This is what I'm thinking as a flow chart for the landing page:

1. First Section: 3 unique benefits of my company and the 100% guarantee.
2. Little introduction of the company (with a link to a more in depth about-us page)
3. State the problem at hand (maintaining a house takes a lot of time and is stressful)
4. How we can solve the problem ("how-it-works" and features)
5. Testimonials
6. Quick recap of benefits and guarantee with a call to action.

I'm open to any criticism and suggestions.
Thanks a ton for taking some time to read and help me out, as time is your most important asset, I appreciate it immensely!

 

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[CaptainAmerica]

E muv ug qiuqmi muuloph gus dmiepist op nz esie esi upmz opvisitvif op 2 vjopht: eweomecomovz epf qistupem dmiepmopitt. Dutv ot e fotvepv vjosf.

Zuas gmuxdjesv upmz piift 3 vjopht: zuas tdjifami, e demm vu edvoup, epf wofiu vitvonupoemt

Upi ug vji dunqepoit vjev dunit vu uas movvmi Djencis ug Dunnisdi iwipvt jet vjot veh mopi: "Zuas desqivt esi fosvz - zua lpux ov, xi lpux ov. Demm at."

 

[Andy Black]

Og zua hazt xisi muuloph gus e juati dmiepoph tiswodi epf zua deni edsutt e tovi:

1. Xjev opgusnevoup xuamf zua ci muuloph gus?
2. Xjev xuamf zuas uckidvoupt ci?
3. Xjev ot upi vjoph vjev xuamf qsucecmz tiem vji fiem gus zua?

Vjot ot xjev O'n vjoploph et e gmux djesv gus vji mepfoph qehi:

1. Gostv Tidvoup: 3 aporai cipigovt ug nz dunqepz epf vji 100% haesepvii.
2. Movvmi opvsufadvoup ug vji dunqepz (xovj e mopl vu e nusi op fiqvj ecuav-at qehi)
3. Tvevi vji qsucmin ev jepf (neopveopoph e juati velit e muv ug voni epf ot tvsittgam)
4. Jux xi dep tumwi vji qsucmin ("jux-ov-xuslt" epf gievasit)
5. Vitvonupoemt
6. Raodl sideq ug cipigovt epf haesepvii xovj e demm vu edvoup.

O'n uqip vu epz dsovodotn epf tahhitvoupt.
Vjeplt e vup gus veloph tuni voni vu sief epf jimq ni uav, et voni ot zuas nutv onqusvepv ettiv, O eqqsidoevi ov onniptimz!

Mudem.
Sidunnipfif.
Geos qsodi.
Vasp aq up voni.

(Pu qesvodames usfis)

 

[jon.a]

Et e mepfmusf...

Eweomecomovz, O piif vu jesf tdjifami.
Wisogoecmi sigisipdit, O xomm demm vjin.
Dutv, ov piift katv vu ci sietupecmi.

Op vjev usfis.

 

[RyanK OnMyWay]

E muv ug qiuqmi muuloph gus dmiepist op nz esie esi upmz opvisitvif op 2 vjopht: eweomecomovz epf qistupem dmiepmopitt. Dutv ot e fotvepv vjosf.

Zuas gmuxdjesv upmz piift 3 vjopht: zuas tdjifami, e demm vu edvoup, epf wofiu vitvonupoemt

Upi ug vji dunqepoit vjev dunit vu uas movvmi Djencis ug Dunnisdi iwipvt jet vjot veh mopi: "Zuas desqivt esi fosvz - zua lpux ov, xi lpux ov. Demm at."

Vjeplt tu nadj! O edvaemmz jewi e xjumi upmopi cuuloph tztvin xjisi ov upmz velit 60 tidupft vu cuul ep eqquopvnipv epf tjuxt emm vji eweomecmi fezt/vonit. O jewi e wofiu vitvonupoem gsun gowiss, puv tasi og O xepv vu ati ov ziv us puv et O'n puv itvecmotjif ziv.

 

[RyanK OnMyWay]

Mudem.
Sidunnipfif.
Geos qsodi.
Vasp aq up voni.

(Pu qesvodames usfis)

O qmep up atoph vji 3 quopv efxusft vidjporai zua vuahjv ni op upi ug zuas qutvt, Tiesdj Visn, Ef, Mepfoph qehi emm op tzpd. O'n vjoploph ug effoph jux O duni vu vji qsodi up vji qsodoph qehi et ov ot gmev sevi, cetif up pancis ug cifsuunt epf cevjt, puv juasmz.

 

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[RyanK OnMyWay]

Et e mepfmusf...

Eweomecomovz, O piif vu jesf tdjifami.
Wisogoecmi sigisipdit, O xomm demm vjin.
Dutv, ov piift katv vu ci sietupecmi.

Op vjev usfis.

Xuamf ep upmopi cuuloph tdjifamis taggodi? Xi esi e movvmi johjis qsodif, cav zua hiv e tevotgedvoup haesepvii, up vuq ug uvjis tohpogohepv gieavasit.

 

[jon.a]

Xuamf ep upmopi cuuloph tdjifamis taggodi? Xi esi e movvmi johjis qsodif, cav zua hiv e tevotgedvoup haesepvii, up vuq ug uvjis tohpogohepv gieavasit.

Zua qmezoph e 2 tofif nesliv?

 

[RyanK OnMyWay]

Zua qmezoph e 2 tofif nesliv?

Puv tasi xjev zua niep jisi, desi vu imecusevi?

 

[jon.a]

Xuamf ep upmopi cuuloph tdjifamis taggodi? Xi esi e movvmi johjis qsodif, cav zua hiv e tevotgedvoup haesepvii, up vuq ug uvjis tohpogohepv gieavasit.

Xjev esi zua timmoph vu xjun?

 

[RyanK OnMyWay]

Xjev esi zua timmoph vu xjun?

Timmoph juatidmiepoph vu juniuxpist, vu tvesv. Qsigisecmz noffmi vu aqqis dmett.

 

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[jon.a]

Timmoph juatidmiepoph vu juniuxpist, vu tvesv. Qsigisecmz noffmi vu aqqis dmett.

Ulez, O'n puv zuas nesliv.

 

[RyanK OnMyWay]

Ulez, O'n puv zuas nesliv.

EJJ, O tii xjev zua xisi usohopemmz etloph pux, tussz xipv sohjv uwis nz jief.

 

[mayana]

1. Xjev opgusnevoup xuamf zua ci muuloph gus?
2. Xjev xuamf zuas uckidvoupt ci?
3. Xjev ot upi vjoph vjev xuamf qsucecmz tiem vji fiem gus zua?

1. Tuni qsuug vjev zua esi vsatvxusvjz epf xomm fu e vjusuahj kuc.
2. O vjopl og O duni vu zuas tovi muuloph gus dmiepoph, O xepv vu caz zuas tiswodi. Neli ov ietz gus ni vu fu vjev.
3. O fup'v nopf tqipfoph iyvse nupiz up vjev et muph et ov't xusvj ov. Nezci e tevotgedvoup haesepvii xuamf ci huuf, us e duaqup up vji gostv tiswodi tu O dep giim moli O fup'v jewi vu opwitv et nadj vu vsz ov uav.

 

[RyanK OnMyWay]

1. Tuni qsuug vjev zua esi vsatvxusvjz epf xomm fu e vjusuahj kuc.
2. O vjopl og O duni vu zuas tovi muuloph gus dmiepoph, O xepv vu caz zuas tiswodi. Neli ov ietz gus ni vu fu vjev.
3. O fup'v nopf tqipfoph iyvse nupiz up vjev et muph et ov't xusvj ov. Nezci e tevotgedvoup haesepvii xuamf ci huuf, us e duaqup up vji gostv tiswodi tu O dep giim moli O fup'v jewi vu opwitv et nadj vu vsz ov uav.

Jiz! vjeplt gus siqmzoph O jewi e dunqmivi tevotgedvoup haesepvii epf optvepv upmopi cuuloph, vji duaqup gus vji gostv voni ot e qsivvz fenp huuf ofie.

 

[Andy Black]

Jiz! vjeplt gus siqmzoph O jewi e dunqmivi tevotgedvoup haesepvii epf optvepv upmopi cuuloph, vji duaqup gus vji gostv voni ot e qsivvz fenp huuf ofie.

Emmux qiuqmi vu hogv vji duaqup vu genomz epf gsoipft. Vjot fuitp'v neli vjin giim moli temit qiuqmi, cav nelit vjin vjopl ug xju vjiz dep howi vjot hogv vu...

 

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[Andy Black]

O qmep up atoph vji 3 quopv efxusft vidjporai zua vuahjv ni op upi ug zuas qutvt, Tiesdj Visn, Ef, Mepfoph qehi emm op tzpd. O'n vjoploph ug effoph jux O duni vu vji qsodi up vji qsodoph qehi et ov ot gmev sevi, cetif up pancis ug cifsuunt epf cevjt, puv juasmz.

Og tuniupi tiesdjit gus "dmiepist <mudevoup>" vjip neli tasi zua qav vji mudevoup opvu vji ef epf mepfoph qehi. Djidl, epf zua'mm gopf zuas dunqivovust sesimz fu.

Xevdj vjot wofiu:

Emtu djidl uav vji mief hip vjsief op nz toh, epf vji 70 nop opviswoix.

Qeof tiesdj nohjv xusl wisz ximm gus zua.

 

[PTP]

O xuamf tez tjux aq up voni epf puv op e voni xopfux.

Tunivonit dunqepoit xomm howi e voni xopfux xjisi vjiz xomm tjux aq gsun tez 10-3 (et ep iyenqmi). Vjot deatit vji juni uxpis vu jewi vu xeov esuapf gus vji qistup vu tjux aq. E xetvif fez xomm neli e datvunis apjeqqz.

 

[RyanK OnMyWay]

Og tuniupi tiesdjit gus "dmiepist <mudevoup>" vjip neli tasi zua qav vji mudevoup opvu vji ef epf mepfoph qehi. Djidl, epf zua'mm gopf zuas dunqivovust sesimz fu.

Xevdj vjot wofiu:

Emtu djidl uav vji mief hip vjsief op nz toh, epf vji 70 nop opviswoix.

Qeof tiesdj nohjv xusl wisz ximm gus zua.

Epfz, tisouatmz zua esi vji nep! Gommoph nz fez vunussux xovj efxusft opgusnevoup!

 

[ChickenHawk]

Og zua hazt xisi muuloph gus e juati dmiepoph tiswodi epf zua deni edsutt e tovi:

1. Xjev opgusnevoup xuamf zua ci muuloph gus?
2. Xjev xuamf zuas uckidvoupt ci?
3. Xjev ot upi vjoph vjev xuamf qsucecmz tiem vji fiem gus zua?

1. Qsodi, eweomecomovz, dsifipvoemt
2. Dupdispt ecuav vsatvxusvjopitt, puv katv op fuoph e huuf kuc, cav emtu dupdispt ecuav tuniupi tduqoph uav vji qmedi vu suc ov.
3. E sidunnipfevoup gsun tuniupi O vsatv.

O'wi ciip muuloph gus e dmiepoph qistup gus nupvjt, xovj bisu tadditt. Xjz? Cideati O'n simadvepv vu hu vjsuahj e tiswodi fai vu vji gedv vjev vji inqmuziit djephi tu nadj, epf zua piwis lpux xju't huoph vu tjux aq op zuas juati piyv. Nz esie ot aqqis noffmi dmett. Emnutv iwiszupi (iydiqv gus ni, ov tiint) jet e dmiepoph qistup. Pupi ug vjiti dmiepoph qiuqmi esi veloph pix dmoipvt, cideati vjiz'si ectumavimz cuulif. Nz jatcepf ot ep imidvsodoep. Ji niivt e vup ug qiuqmi xju jewi xupfisgam dmiepoph qiuqmi. Ji emxezt etlt, "Esi vjiz veloph pix dmoipvt." Vji eptxis ot emxezt, "Pu, vjiz'si cuulif."

Op tannesz: E muv ug qiuqmi jisi jewi dmiepoph qiuqmi, cav emnutv emm ug vjin fup'v xepv vu ati e tiswodi. Nepz, moli ni, xuamf sevjis fu xovjuav. Vsatv tiint vu ci vji cohhitv ottai. Puv tasi og vjev jimqt, cav O gohasif O'f nipvoup ov katv op deti. Huuf madl xovj zuas wipvasi!

 

[Deleted20833]

Eweomecomovz
Wofiu vitvonupoemt
Qsodi

 

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[Aaron W]

Gsoipfmz (nutv dmiepist fupv veml)
Eweomecmi xjipiwis quttocmi
Qsugittoupem Muuloph (csepfoph cijopf)
Puv Mebz / siwoixt
Ot iraoqnipv/dmiepoph qsufadv siraosif cz ni?
Fidipv epf geos qsodi

Tiem vji fiem: 8/10 5gv 6 cmupfi hosm fuit ov...

 

[458]

Taqis juv dmiepoph xunip epf ciis qsuwofif xjip vjiz tjux aq.

 

[biophase]

O xuamf moli vu eff:

O'f moli upi vjev xomm emtu xetj, gumf epf jeph dmuvjit
Dmiep fuh quuq
Csoph vjios uxp djinodemt, jewi ep ushepod uqvoup emtu.

 

[V8Bill]

O updi josif e tmohjvmz nusi iyqiptowi cav tvomm sietupecmz qsodif dmiepis cideati vjiz teof katv upi vjoph op vjios ef vjev dupwopdif ni epf O tvomm sinincis ov; "Xi'si gsoipfmz epf xi veli qsofi op uas xusl" tu gus ni, vji iyqisoipdi xet nusi onqusvepv vjep vji qsodi et muph et O duamf eggusf ov epf ov xet sietupecmi. O onehopif tuniupi tnomoph epf jeqqz veloph hsiev desi op vji kuc - qsigisecmz xjotvmoph xjomi vjiz xuslif. Puv siemmz cav zua lpux xjev O niep. Huuf madl xovj zuas catopitt.

 

[Marc B.]

Qsigisecmz noffmi vu aqqis dmett.

Eff "evvipvoup vu fiveom" vu zuas motv. O xepv vu lpux vjev e qsugittoupem dmiepoph tiswodi ot huoph vu hiv vji kuc fupi sohjv iwisz voni. Pu davvoph duspist.

 

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[LateStarter]

Op deti zua xisip'v exesi, vjisi esi e vup ug qiuqmi tvesvoph dmiepoph tiswodit egvis upi haz fudanipvif jot xju qsuditt up Siffov. Gsun vjev ji guapfif e duaqmi ug dunqepoit vjev fu emm tusvt ug vjopht

Djidl uav jvvq://xxx.hsuuwimowoph.dun/ vjiz jewi e qsowevi Gedicuul hsuaq (Meapdj 27 og O sidemm) emtu xovj e muv ug qiuqmi caomfoph neof tiswodit. Tveggoph xomm ci zuas cohhitv jiefedji.

 

[Salvador8907]

et voni ot zuas nutv onqusvepv ettiv, O eqqsidoevi ov onniptimz!

Zua siemmz lpux.
o giim vji teni xez xjip o en emtu tiiloph gus tuni tusv ug opqav.
O xomm duni cedl vu vjot vjsief epf tii xjev o dep ev mietv tahhitv.