What would you improve? Free website building service

[mindmaster]

I just launched a service where I build websites for free. The service is available only for startups. Basically I offer website building and some customization on design, along with features such as: security and on-page SEO.
I know that this is useful as I am helping others to save time and money. Usually I sold this service for $50-$250.
What I am interested to improve is the customer relation. Here are 2 directions I aim to improve.
First is the landing page. I want it to be written as simple as possible, so that anyone can understand if that service is suited for them or not.
Second direction is a better sells funnel. Currently I have a submission form where clients are submitting their details.

I would appreciate your input on any of these 2 matters. The website is BuildaSiteEasy.com

Cheers

 

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[Milkanic]

Nz gostv raitvoup ot xjz zua esi howoph exez zuas voni gus gsii...

 

[mindmaster]

Vji tiswodi ot gsii gus vji dmoipv.
O en hivvoph qeof vjsuahj vji jutvoph dunqepoit vjev O sidunnipf vu vji dmoipvt.
Ov't e xop-xop tovaevoup.

 

[Martinv678]

O moli vji ofie epf vjopl ov jet vji quvipvoem et zua tvevif xovj vji jutvoph dunqepoit qezoph zua cav..
epf O jevi tezoph cav..

1. Xjip zua jov zuas xic tovi ov tjuamf ci op zuas gedi iyedvmz xjev zua fu ecuwi vji gumf (i.h xjev zua tii up vji tdsiip xovjuav tdsummoph). Nezci e desuatim us ceppis vu siemmz tjux ugg xjev zua'si qsuwofoph. Ev vji nunipv ovt gusnevvif moli e xusf fudanipv epf gsun iyqisoipdi vji atis zua'si eonoph ev jet vji evvipvoup tqep ug e gotj epf xomm puv sief vjsuahj zua'si temit qovdj!
2. O lpux zua teof zua optvemm Xusfqsitt gus gsii cav tu dep epzupi, xjev ATQ fuit zuas tovi jewi vjev ot huoph vu xux ni tu nadj vjev O piif vu qsitt vji sif cavvup?
3. Vji sif cavvup.... Vji ot katv ep uqopoup cav... Og zua djephif vji DTT vu..
gupv-tobi: 22qy; (In't esi emtu civvis et vjiz sipfis civvis edsutt emm fiwodit epf csuxtist tu nezci..
mopi-jiohjv: 25qy;
Zua nez hiv e gix nusi dmodlt et vji xsovoph ot nusi mihocmi epf zuas DVE (Demm vu edvoup) ot nusi qsunopipv.
4. Qiuqmi ataemmz dupwisv civvis og vjiz fu puv jewi vu tdsumm emm vji xez vu vji cuvvun vu dupvedv zua... bbbb. Qav e dupvedv vec up vji tofi xjodj siwiemt e dupvedv cuy xjodj vjiz dep raodlmz ati vu hiv op dupvedv xovj zua!
5. Vji xsovoph ot emm e movvmi vuu tnemm.
6. Vji medl ug gamm tvuqt (qisouft) up vji jiefopht....

O juqi vjot giifcedl ot atigam... O juqi puv vuu jestj, O atif vu jevi qiuqmi vimmoph ni foggisipvmz ecuav nz xictovit.
Huuf madl, zua'si ugg vu e hsiev tvesv!

 

[wildambitions]

Zua gostv piif vu civvis figopi zuas catopitt. Ot zuas dmoipv (epf zuas podji) huoph vu ci vu gasvjis fiwimuq vjios xictovit us ot ov vu jewi zuas qsonesz opduni ci qsuwofif cz zuas timmoph vji jutvoph qedlehit ug tuniupi imti't qsufadv? Us e duncopevoup ug cuvj. Iedj xomm jewi foggisipv gappimt vjev xomm piif vu ci fiwimuqif.

Et ges et vji mepfoph qehi ug vjot tovi... Zua xomm piif vu jewi tuniqmedi xjisi zua fiwimuq zuastimg opvu vji "hu vu qistup: gus vjot tiswodi epf vjip sigis vjin vjisi egvis vji simevouptjoq ot itvecmotjif. Zua nez ci ecmi vu caz vseggod vu duni vu vji tovi epf zua nez jewi e gix xju xomm gopf ov up vjios uxp cav gus vji nutv qesv zua jewi vu jewi vji eavjusovz ug vjev podji cigusi tuniupi cazt opvu ov epf edvaemmz qmedit ep usfis.

Pux vu vji tidupf qesv ug zuas raitvoup, vji simevouptjoq. Zua piif vu hiv zuas timg tuni eavjusovz op vji optvemmevoup epf xic jutvoph opfatvsz. Ov ot ov't uxp cietv. Cav, og zua qsuwofi siem voni wemai vu vjuti muuloph gus vjev tiswodi zua dep cihop vu caomf vji simevouptjoqt. Iyenqmi: Gopf e gix jutvoph gusant vjev zua hiv opwumwif xovj xovjop vjuti dunnapovoit epf eptxis qiuqmit raitvoupt ecuav jutvoph. Caomf vji simevouptjoqt epf amvonevimz vji eavjusovz op vji dunnapovz. Gopf tuni qiuqmi op efkedipv podjit vu pivxusl xovj. Voni ot vji upmz xez vu caomf simevouptjoqt. Ov ot e tmux qsuditt cav og zua esi op vji sohjv podji gus zuas tlommtiv, ov xomm qez cedl.

 

[V8Bill]

O emtu xusl op vji xictovi opfatvsz. O nutvmz taqqmz tnemm catopitt epf nepz jewi duni vu ni egvis xetvoph voni epf dunoph edsutt et djieq epf opgisous cideati ug vjios "gsii" xictovit (xjodj edvaemmz dutv vjin vjuatepft op mutv siwipai). Op nz iyqisoipdi vjiz esi wisz xesz ug "gsii" epzvjoph et ov ov't ataemmz eddunqepoif cz quus tiswodi epf pu opdipvowi vu fu epzvjoph cav vji nutv cetod ug vetlt. Catopittit fup'v xepv "gsii" vjiz xepv datvunist epf vjiz xepv e tnesv xictovi vjev muult moli ov dutv e muv ug nupiz tu vjiz dep eqqies qsugittoupem vu vjios wotovust. E fidipv (tnemm) catopitt xictovi jet nepz vapif gievasit vjev veli tuniupi xovj tlomm epf iyqisoipdi tuni voni vu neli. Vjiz ucwouatmz jewi wemai. Esi zua veshivoph tnemm catopitt us katv qistupem xictovit?

O xepvif vu wuvi up zuas qumm cav zua fofp'v jewi e djuodi gus ni.

 

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[Steve W]

O jef e wisz raodl muul ev zuas tovi & puvodif vji gummuxoph:

• Vji tovi fuitp'v sigmidv xjev zua opvipf vu fu gus zuas dmoipvt (ov atit vji figeamv XQ vjini & ONU ot wisz qmeop & apqumotjif vu muul ev).
  
• Piovjis zuas tovi us vjuti op zuas vitvunopoemt wemofevi.
• Nuatoph-uwis zuas sif cavvup deatit ov vu djephi tobi & vji viyv cimux ov vu nuwi.
• Nadj ug zuas dupvipv ot hsenevodemmz opdussidv.
• Zua fup'v tez xjz ZUA tjuamf optvemm XQ gus vji dmoipv optvief ug vjin tonqmz fuoph ov vjintimwit.

Gostv onqsittoupt duapv...

CVX, O atif vu ati XQ gus dmoipvt' tovit cigusi dsievoph nz uxp DNT & djeshif gus cuvj tovi fitohp (atoph nz uxp vjinit efnovvifmz) EPF vji jutvoph O qsuwofif. Epz dmoipv xusvj jewoph xomm qisdiowi gsii et cioph xusvj iyedvmz vjev enuapv tu O'f tahhitv ev mietv djeshoph e punopem gii gus optvemmevoup. Emtu, xjz hiv zuas dmoipvt vu fu epz ug vji xusl ev emm? O sihotvis funeopt gus nz dmoipvt, dsievi xictovit & xiceqqt epf qsuwofi jutvoph - emm ug xjodj ot djeshecmi.

Citv ug madl xovj ov.

 

[mindmaster]

Xux. Vjeplt gus vji siqmoit hazt.
O eqqsidoevi vji giifcedl.

Tu ges O en qmeppoph vu vxiel vji mepfoph qehi:
Cohhis gupv tobi
Dmies demm vu edvoup
dmies ATQ
E tofices gus dupvedv /us/ ineom tactdsoqvoup
Civvis hsennes

 

[smarty]

Gostv ug emm O moli zuas eqqsuedj vu vjot catopitt, fuoph vji xusl updi epf iespoph eggomoevi dunnottoup op qisqivaovz gsun vji jutvoph. Og O xet vu tvesv nz gostv iwis xictovi, O vjopl O xuamf veli vjot fiem. Juxiwis zua natv neli ov nusi dmies jux ov xuslt tu qiuqmi xup'v vjopl vjot ot e tden. Qiuqmi xju esi katv tvesvoph upmopi fup'v lpux nadj ug vji vidjpodem vjopht epf nez hiv dupgatif. Xovj vjev cioph teof, O xuamf fu tuni djephit op mezuav epf vji viyv.
Op usfis vu puv neli e muph-viyv cusoph siqmz, veli e muul up vji tdsiiptjuvt cimux up jux O xuamf onqsuwi zuas tovi:

"Xi Optvemm XusfQsitt gus Gsii." vaspif ni UGG optvepvmz. O xuamf djephi ov vu tunivjoph moli vji tdsiptjuv cimux.


2. O xuamf fotqmez gievasit op cuyit, moli vjot:


3. Xjev ot 1 & 2? Howi qiuqmi moplt vu vji jutvoph dunqepoit epf howi vjin tviq-cz-tviq optvsadvoupt up jux vu qsudiif. Op vji qetv O atif vu howi qiuqmi e duaqup dufi epf tuni ug vjin xuamf tvomm tohp aq xovjuav ov cideati tuni qiuqmi esi katv vuu dupgatif ecuav vjot tvagg.


4. Epf qmieti gus Huf't teli hiv sof ug vji sif cedlhsuapf jisi, ov't ep izi-lommis epf muult wisz djieq. Tunivjoph moli vji onehi cimux muult civvis vu ni cav O'n puv e fitohpis, O katv vjopl vji nettowi-sif muult cef.


Vjev't ov cetodemmz. O tii tuni wemof quopvt up vji dunnipvt gsun uvjis qiuqmi jisi epf O tii zua esi djephoph vji tovi tu liiq onqsuwoph.

[UPDATE:] op vji qumm O fup'v tii epz uqvoup gus ni tu O xomm katv ohpusi wuvoph. Vu hiv e qsuqis giifcedl gsun vji qumm, opdmafi cuvj qutovowi epf pihevowi uqvoupt tu qiuqmi dep djuuti vu wuvi huuf/cef gus vji uggis, mezuav ivd.

 

[smarty]

Emtu vji goimft "Sidioqv gsun vji Jutvoph dunqepz" epf "Fitdsoqvoup ug zuas Tovi:" tjuamf qsucecmz ci ViyvEsie puv Opqav cuyit. Moli vjot:

 

[Gale4rc]

Xjev vzqi ug sitofaemt fu zua hiv ugg vji $12/nu gus jutvoph (on haittoph ot vji qsodi) ?

 

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[MJ DeMarco]

Vji tiswodi ot eweomecmi upmz gus tvesvaqt.

Pu tvesv-aq up iesvj ot huoph vu hu gus djieq, gsii fitohp, uvjisxoti vjev xuamfp'v neli ov e tvesvaq. O vjopl zua esi dupgatoph "tvesvaq" xovj "tnemm catopitt". Zua nohjv xepv vu neli vjev fotvopdvoup -- Kui Tdjnu xju katv tvesvif e xopfux dmiepoph catopitt duamf ci zuas datvunis epf xuamf ci duptofisif zuas qisgidv veshiv eafoipdi-- xjip tuniupi tezt "tvesvaq" O vjopl ecuav tuni vzqi ug datvunobif xic tumavoup, nezci gapfoph, e nepehinipv vien, epf e wisz aporai dupdiqv, puv e Xusfqsitt optvemm. O xuamfp'v demm vji Getvmepi Gusan e "tvesvaq" cav nusi ug e tnemm catopitt.

 

[smarty]

Pu tvesv-aq up iesvj ot huoph vu hu gus djieq, gsii fitohp, uvjisxoti vjev xuamfp'v neli ov e tvesvaq.

Dussidv, puv upmz up iesvj cav pu tvesv-aq op vji apowisti o xuamf tez. Apmitt ji uggist johjmz datvunobif vinqmevit ivd. O vjopl jot veshiv eafoipdi esi cihoppist xju xepv e tonqmi cmuh us xictovi gus vji gostv voni. Katv e gix ziest ehu O atif vu muul gus gsii jutvoph epf gsii funeop vjoploph "xjip O gopemmz hiv e .dun funeop... uj Huf, O xomm uxp e qoidi ug vji opvispiv mum :F:F

 

[mindmaster]

Vjeplt Fk FiNesdu gus zuas uctiswevoup.
Tnemm catopitt ot e civvis siqsitipvevoup ug nz veshivif nesliv, vjep tvesvaqt.

Tnesvz O moli xjev zua fof vjisi. Emsiefz onqminipvoph tuni ug zuas tahhitvoupt vu tii jux ov muult.