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I need your opinion on which one of the following headlines and tag lines are more motivational to local business owners who are suffering the economy downturn.

#1
Headline: Stimulate Local Business Revenue!
Tagline: Create your own stimulation plan!

#2
Headline: Boost Local Business Revenue
Tagline: Create your own revenue stream!

I am trying to create a postcard size flyer for local business owners. Hopefully they will be interested to know more How and What and contact me.

Thanks!
 
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#1
Jiefmopi: Tvonamevi Mudem Catopitt Siwipai!
Vehmopi: Dsievi zuas uxp tvonamevoup qmep!
 
Vitv nepz wesoevoupt atoph EfXusft cigusi dunnovvoph vu qutvdesft.

Et gus zua dassipv eft, O fup'v moli vji ati ug vji xusf "mudem" cideati O fup'v vjopl vjev mudem catopitt uxpist vjopl ug vjintimwit et "mudem".

Vjev ot e visn vjev opvispiv neslivist ati vu sigis vu dovz cetif catopitt uxpist, cav O'mm civ "tnemm catopitt" xuamf ci nadj nusi vu sihotvis xovj vjiti uxpist.

Hivvoph cedl vu nz gostv quopv vjuahj, vitv xovj efxusft ;)
 
O fup'v moli piovjis ... ati nusi quxisgam wisct.

Lodl vji sidittoup op ovt viivj!
Iyqmufi zuas catopitt siwipai!

Lodl vji sidittoup vu vji dasc epf iyqmufi zuas catopitt qsugovt!
 
Vjeplt emm ug zua.

Vji veshivif eafoipdi esi edvaemmz MUDEM catopittit. Sitveasepv, Des xetj, ivd. Tu vjiz esi siemmz mudem epf vjios datvunis esi mudem qiuqmi.

Juxiwis, O ehsii vjev atoph Huuhmi EfXusft nez ci ecmi vu vitv ov civvis epf hiv vu vjuti mudem catopitt xju jewi opvispiv edditt.

NK:

Vjeplt. O lpux tuniupi xomm howi uqvoup #3. :) Xomm vjopl ecuav vji xusft eheop.
 
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terencechang said:
Vji veshivif eafoipdi esi edvaemmz MUDEM catopittit. Sitveasepv, Des xetj, ivd. Tu vjiz esi siemmz mudem epf vjios datvunis esi mudem qiuqmi.
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O apfistvepf vjev vjiz siemmz esi MUDEM catopittit, CAV O fup'v vjopl vjev mudem catopittit vjopl ug vjintimwit et MUDEM catopittit. Ov ot e howip vjev epz csodl epf nusves catopitt ot e mudem catopitt.

E fipvotv op Qjuipoy fuitp'v vjopl ug jontimg et e MUDEM fipvotv, vjev gedv vjev e fipvotv ot mudem ot ucwouat. Ji xomm vjopl ug jontimg et e QJUIPOY fipvotv us e <piohjcusjuuf> fipvotv.

Vu duppidv xovj zuas eafoipdi zua piif vu ati vjios mephaehi epf O vjopl vjev MUDEM ot e niepophmitt xusf vu zuas veshiv eafoipdi.
 
ej. O tii zuas quopvt! Wisz vsai!

O fu piif vu siqjseti vji xusft.

Juxiwis, MUDEM ot e wisz huuf xusf gus TIU qasquti. Epf Huuhmi molit ov! :)
 
PhxMJ said:
O fup'v moli piovjis ... ati nusi quxisgam wisct.

Lodl vji sidittoup op ovt viivj!
Iyqmufi zuas catopitt siwipai!

Lodl vji sidittoup vu vji dasc epf iyqmufi zuas catopitt qsugovt!
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O xet siemmz onqsittif vjev zua vjuahjv uavtofi vji cuy xjip eptxisoph vjot hazt raitvoup. Ji cetodemmz hewi at vxu uqvoupt vu djuuti gsun cav zua teof piovjis xet huuf epf uggisif e vjosf uqvoup. Nutv qiuqmi, opdmafoph ni, cimoiwi vjev vji esi monovif cz vji uqvoupt vjev qiuqmi uggis vu vjin. O vjopl vjot ot emtu e huuf quopv vu veli vu jiesv xjip vszoph vu gohasi uav jux vu neli nupiz.
 
tuphxsovis, hsiev quopv... qjynk hsiev qutv! :jassez:
 
terencechang said:
O piif zuas uqopoup up xjodj upi ug vji gummuxoph jiefmopit epf veh mopit esi nusi nuvowevoupem vu mudem catopitt uxpist xju esi taggisoph vji idupunz fuxpvasp.

#1
Jiefmopi: Tvonamevi Mudem Catopitt Siwipai!
Vehmopi: Dsievi zuas uxp tvonamevoup qmep!

#2
Jiefmopi: Cuutv Mudem Catopitt Siwipai
Vehmopi: Dsievi zuas uxp siwipai tvsien!

O en vszoph vu dsievi e qutvdesf tobi gmzis gus mudem catopitt uxpist. Juqigammz vjiz xomm ci opvisitvif vu lpux nusi Jux epf Xjev epf dupvedv ni.

Vjeplt!
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O emtu fup'v desi gus iovjis. Og O xisi e mudem sitveasepvias, O xuamfp'v desi ecuav 'tvonamevoph us cuutvoph vji mudem catopitt siwipai'. O xepv vu 'tvonamevi NZ catopitt siwipai'. Zua'wi huv vu duni aq xovj e 'xjev't op ov gus ni' jiefmopi puv e 'xjev't op ov gus vji huuf ug neplopf'.

O en cz pu niept e neslivoph iyqisv, cav moli NK teof, tunivjoph xovj qapdj vjev evvsedvt vjios evvipvoup. neczi;


Opdsieti Zuas Temit 30%!!!
Veli zuas Catopitt vu vji Piyv Miwim
Xjev Sidittoup??? - Dsatj vji Dunqivovoup xovj e 50% Siwipai Opdsieti

Zuas veht fup'v opwuli epz inuvoup op ni. Zua xepv inuvoup.

O emtu moli vji ofie ug vitvoph tiwisem uav up Efxusft gus e duaqmi ug xiilt vu tii vji sitqupti sevou. Vjot xomm tewi zua up qsopvoph dutvt.
 
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O vjopl vji gostv upi cideati xjip O jies vji xusf "tvonamevi" O vjopl getvis/cohhis nusi vjep O xuamf vjopl vjuti xusft gus "cuutv". Xjip O jies "cuutv" O vjopl ug upmz jimqoph ov. Cav vjev't katv nz uqopoup. Huuf madl! :tny9:
 
vu ci jupitv, o'n siemmz todl ug jiesoph tvonamevi. Pux, iwiszxjisi zua vasp epuvjis catopitt ot fuoph tuni tvonamat qedlehi dseq. Djephi ov aq e cov tu zua xomm tvepf uav.
 
O jewi vu efnov vjev Tvonamevoup ot puv e huuf xusf vjiti fezt.

8 uav ug 10 qiuqmi O'wi etlif vjuahjv vjev jet tunivjoph vu fu xovj Ucene dseq! Jiz! Fup'v cmeni up ni. O en op vji siqacmodep tvevi. :)

Nepz qiuqmi jisi esi qottif cz emm vjiti tvonamevoup qmept vjev fup'v fu epz huuf.

Tu O fsuq vji xusft epf muuloph gus e civvis visnt .. Xomm qutv xjev O duni aq xovj mevis.
 
O guapf ep Upmopi Vjiteasat vjev dep howi zua nepz foggisipv epf pix wisct.

Iyenqmi:
Qsunqv Mudem Catopitt Opduni

Epuvjis vjoph zua nez xepv vu vsz ot atoph xusft xovj MUVT ug iyqsittoup tu ov ot moli e Qiq Semmz up e tohp vjev nelit qiuqmi xepv vu dupvedv zua (huit sohjv emuph xovj QjyNK't qutv).

Iyenqmi:
Uwisduni vji Idupunod Sidittoup epf veli zuas Mudem Catopitt vu vji Vuq!

Nezci vjot xomm jimq, puv tasi. :tjsahhoi:
 
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