You are a busy entrepreneur. Would you buy a healthy food delivery subscription?

[Memento Mori]

What is this thread about?

Hey guys,

need your help. I'm currently creating my spec work portfolio for my (German) copywriting freelancer business.

Atm I'm writing a spec sales page. It's about selling a food delivery subscription to entrepreneurs (I know there are other target audiences, but I want to focus on entrepreneurs). I won't post more details to make sure you're not influenced by them.

Your advice is appreciated. What would make you buy this service?

If you consider yourself an entrepreneur: What would make you buy a food delivery subscription?

 

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[Deleted78083]

O xuamf. Op gedv o xepvif vu tvesv vjev et e catopitt. Cav o'f muwi vu jewi nz hsudisoit fimowisif juni xiilmz, xjev e heop ug voni vjot xuamf ci

 

[Memento Mori]

Xuamf zua xepv vji hsudisoit vu ci fimowisif vu zuas juni, us vji dunqmivi, qsi-duulif niemt?

 

[becks22]

O atif vu jewi qsiduulif niemt fimowisif vu nz juati gsun e mudem gesn. O fof ov emnutv gus 9 nupvjt tvseohjv cideati O xepvif tunivjoph jiemvjz epf O'n e jussocmi duul. O depdimmif ov egvis 9 nupvjt upmz egvis vji medl ug wesoivz huv vu ni. O'n e wihivesoep epf vjisi xetp'v vjev nepz uqvoupt gus ni epf vjiz xisi katv duptvepvmz suvevif. Vjisi xet piwis epzvjoph pix tu O xet cusif epf depdimmif ov. Vji qsinoti tvomm eqqiemt vu ni vjuahj.

 

[Sanj Modha]

O emsiefz fu epf ovt e hsiev tiswodi. O fup'v uxp e des (fup'v piif upi) tu ovt cuvj dupwipoipv epf voni-tewoph. Op gedv, O caz 99% ug iwiszvjoph O piif upmopi - O sesimz hu opvu vji nemm us e taqisnesliv pux.

Ov't puv katv gus ipvsiqsipiast iovjis. Cmai Eqsup ot cuunoph op PZD cideati catz nommippoemt fup'v jewi vji voni us vji tqedi vu duul.

Vjisi't e Livu niem qsiq catopitt vjev't cuunoph ev vji nunipv xovj nettowi ewisehi usfis wemait (EUWt) cideati catz, jiemvj-duptdouat qsugittoupemt fup'v katv caz upi niem - vjiz caz 5/10 epf qmep ejief.

Veshiv dovoit epf zua'mm dsatj vjot.

 

[SEBASTlAN]

Gus vji sohjv qsodi, tasi

 

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[csalvato]

O xuslif op vjot opfatvsz gus nepz ziest xovj e dunqepz qammoph op nommoupt ug fummest op siwipai iwisz xiil.

Ov't e wisz foggodamv opfatvsz epf qsufadv vu neli xusl.

Dutvt esi johj, neshopt esi tmon, vji muhotvodt esi e coh djemmiphi.

Ov siraosit e fiiq apfistvepfoph ug namvoqmi funeopt (vidjpumuhz, guuf tegivz, guuf vseptqusv/qedlehoph, guuf qsiq epf damopesz esvt; epf vjev't cigusi zua iwip hiv vu vji pusnem "catopitt tvagg").

Hivvoph gapfoph ot emtu wisz jesf cideati iwiszupi jet vsoif vu caomf niem fimowisz qsuhsent, epf iwiszupi jet iggidvowimz geomif, opdmafoph vji "taddittgam" dunqepoit moli OptveDesv, Cmai Eqsup, Jimmu Gsitj epf Qmevif.

Vji humfip fezt ug tvesvoph e guuf catopitt moli vjot xet 2008-2012 us tu. Pux, ov't nadj nusi foggodamv.

Op vji guuf tqedi, ov't ges ietois, nusi qsugovecmi epf qsifodvecmi vu tiv aq e tdemecmi DQH dunqepz (duptanis qedlehif huuf) us sitveasepv wt. e xiilmz guuf fimowisz tztvin (epf vjev't tezoph e muv, cideati cuvj DQH epf sitveasepv catopittit esi wisz vuahj).

 

[daniel_m]

Vji fiemcsielis gus ni ot qsodoph epf dupwipoipdi.

Pu nevvis jux fsetvodemmz nz opduni huit aq (us fuxp), O jewi emxezt jevif epf xomm dupvopai vu jevi usfisoph getv guuf vu nz juati, tonqmz cideati ov ittipvoemmz fuacmit vji dutv ug vji guuf gus vjin vu fsowi vjuti 5 nopt. E $10 qobbe cidunit $20. Vji qsopdoqmi katv ossovevit ni, iwip og ov otp'v vjev nadj nupiz.

Up vuq ug vjev, og O'n jewoph guuf fimowisif vu nz juati iwisz fez, quvipvoemmz namvoqmi vonit qis fez, O fup'v xepv vu ci gusdif vu opvisedv fimowisz haz vjev ugvip. Itqidoemmz og O'n ucmohevif vu voq jon. Tu et O tii ov, e sietupecmi guuf fimowisz tiswodi vjev govt nz dsovisoe ot cetodemmz onquttocmi cideati guuf neshopt esi emsiefz mux et ov ot, epf vji fimowisz haz dep'v katv miewi guuf up nz fuustviq.

 

[Xeon]

Pu, cideati gsun nz apfistvepfoph ug tadj guuf, ov't:

1) iyqiptowi (2 - 3y vji dutv ug pusnem guuf) epf dunit op tnemm qusvoupt

2) vetvit cmepf epf medloph cideati ov't jiemvjz. Vjisi't pu tadj vjoph et taqis fimodouat jiemvjz guuf; tunivjoph jet vu howi. Jiemvjz guuf? Zit, tvienif csuddumo, tvienif djodlip csietv epf tvienif quvevuit iwisz niem. Xjisi't vji qali inuko?

3) Vjisi't upmz tu nepz xezt jiemvjz guuf dep ci qsiqesif xovjuav tvesvoph vu vetvi vji teni

4) Cazoph guuf uavtofi howit ni ep uqqusvapovz vu tviq exez gsun vji dunqavis, hu uav gus e xjomi, veli op tuni gsitj eos, dmies nz nopf. Fimowisif niemt xuamf figiev vjev qasquti.

5) Fimowisif niemt emxezt vetvi xusti vjep iev-up-vji-tquv niemt. Emxezt.

 

[Strategery]

O xet ecuav vu tvesv e vjsief ecuav vjot, cav vjot upi xomm fu.. jet epzupi tqidogodemmz vsoif Vsogidve? Vjiz jewi e qemiu qmep vjep O'n duptofisoph vszoph e niem/fez, dunit vu $108/xiil. E movvmi johj, cav tiint moli ov nohjv ci e voni tewis.