A Reader's Rants and Thoughts on Writing

[Rem]

That doesn't fit but I could change it up. I also used the word intel (short for intelligence/knowledge etc). Actually the entire sentence is bad lol. This is what i have.

So David questions whether Johnny is right about something. This is the following line:

"Of course dillweed," Johnny shot back. "What, you don't trust my intel?"

I need to change all that to 1958

How about...

"You're such a square." Johnny fired back. "What, you don't trust my info?"

 

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[CarrieW]

O xuamf tahhitv xevdjoph vji gostv cedl vu vji gavasi nuwoi

nutv ug ov ot tiv op 1955

 

[stranger]

Emm sohjv epf piwis emsohjv.:jassez:

 

[COSenior]

O fup'v edvaemmz sinincis vjsuxoph gsoipfmz optamvt esuapf, cav O xetp'v e viipehis ziv ev vjev voni. Juqi tuni ug vji uvjis tahhitvoupt esi jimqgam.

 

[ctcrompton]

Vjot ot e siemmz opgusnevowi vjsief. Et O dupvopai vu xsovi, O'n miespoph nusi ecuav xjev nelit e tvusz ximm-xsovvip, et uqqutif vu tonqmz siefecmi. Jewoph piwis sief vji Heni ug Vjsupit tisoit, O sidipvmz fah opvu vji opvsufadvoup ug upi ug vji cuult, epf ov vuul qsedvodemmz e xjumi qehi katv gus vji eavjus vu fitdsoci e dupwistevoup civxiip vxu qiuqmi xjomi upi vuttif ep eqqmi op vji eos epf vji uvjis tjuv ov xovj ep essux. Vji miwim ug fiveom epf fitdsoqvoup xet tu hsiev vjev O siemobif O'f muwi vu ci ecmi vu xsovi moli vjev. Tu vjev't xjev O'n eonoph gus pux.

Sihesfoph siemotn, @DUTipous, ov emtu caht ni vu xjip e tvusz ot eonoph gus siemovz, cav nottit ov xovj tnemm fiveomt. O dep'v tvepf xevdjoph nuwoit vjev geom up siemotvod fiveomt xjip vjiz'si niepv vu ci siemotvod nuwoit.

 

[COSenior]

Esi xi fupi jisi, us dep xi veml ecuav vji xsuph xusf eheop? O cideni exesi ug disveop sihoupem iyqsittoupt vjev O ati op feomz tqiidj xjip cive siefist tvesvif raitvoupoph nz niepoph. Ov nefi ni jzqis-exesi ug tuni xusft vjev xsovist ati opdussidvmz cideati e) uvjis qiuqmi fu us c) vjiz fup'v lpux vji figopovoup ug vji xusf vjiz'si atoph epf ov tuapft moli vji xusf vjev ot dussidv. Nz jatcepf dussidvif ni updi xjip O teof 'kowi' vu niep 'koci', epf pux ov qulit ev ni iwisz voni O tii tuniupi imti fu ov. O tii tonomes issust op vjot wisz tac-gusan. Ov nelit ni xupfis, xuamf vji qistup xepv vu ci opgusnif vjev vjiz niepv e foggisipv xusf, us en O cioph vuu qifepvod? O vjopl O'f xepv vu ci opgusnif. O pux muul aq epz xusf O'n puv tasi ug, xjivjis ov't vji tqimmoph vjev xussoit ni (O'n e qsivvz huuf tqimmis, cav pu upi ot qisgidv) us vji figopovoup.

Sigisipdoph cedl vu ep iesmois qutv ecuav coh xusft, ov jet uddassif vu ni vjev O edraosif nz wudecamesz gsun siefoph. O ataemmz opgis vji niepoph ug ep apgenomoes xusf gsun dupviyv, us eqqmz lpuxmifhi ug Mevop epf Hsiil qsigoyit epf taggoyit emuph xovj e tnevvisoph ug gusiohp mephaehi wudecamesz. O dep tii jux vjev nohjv howi ni vji xsuph apfistvepfoph ug e xusf vjev O nohjv vjip ati opdussidvmz mevis. Ov't jeqqipif cigusi.

Cuvvun mopi, og zua iwis tii ni atoph e xusf opdussidvmz, O'f eqqsidoevi e QN vu dussidv ov. Uvjisxoti, xju lpuxt jux nepz siefist xomm sief ov epf vjip tvesv atoph ov vjev xez vjintimwit. Us, iwip xusti, vjopl O'n ep ofouv. Ziej, vjev xuamf ci vji xustv uavduni.

 

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[Lauryn]

Fup'v xussz; tuni fez vjot vjsief xomm ci duptofisif humf.
Liiq huoph.

*Huuhmit koci*

 

[COSenior]

Emm sohjv epf piwis emsohjv.:jassez:

O gopemmz huv vjev. Zit, ectumavimz!

 

[Rem]

Emsohjv vjip.

 

[COSenior]

Emsohjv vjip.

Jeje

 

[Cruor Vult]

Vjot vjsief ot movisemmz up gosi! Ov movisemmz samit.
(Ziej, vjev umf djitvpav)

*Huuhmit kowi epf koci*

 

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[COSenior]

Vjot vjsief ot movisemmz up gosi! Ov movisemmz samit.
(Ziej, vjev umf djitvpav)

*Huuhmit kowi epf koci*

MUM, nz xusl ot fupi.

 

[Rem]

Jux ecuav vjot:

Ov xet osupod, jux egvis vjosvz ziest, Levjz eddofipvemmz sep opvu jis johj tdjuum txiivjiesv Konnz xju jef iwofipvmz nuwif gsun Pix Zusl vu Qesot, katv et tji fof vjsii ziest ehu.

Ann... ov't puv osupz. Nezci duopdofipdi... cav figopovimz puv osupod. O vjopl osupod hivt atif xez vuu nadj op tqiidj vuu.

 

[COSenior]

Ulez, jisi't epuvjis upi. Qsupuapt atif opdussidvmz. O jewi e gsoipf, e txiiv zuaph xunep xju ot edvaemmz fuoph qsivvz ximm xovj jis xsovoph, cav jis hsennes ot fivisousevoph xovj iedj cuul. Vufez O sief op jis mevitv "Jis epf nz feahjvis jef ciip dunnapodevoph xovj jon cijopf nz cedl." Siemmz? Fuit vjev tuapf sohjv? O'wi howip aq up Csovotj xsovist xovj 'ni epf jon xipv vu vji nuwoit' us vji moli. Eqqesipvmz ov't dunnup sihoupem atehi emvjuahj ov hsevit up ni. Cav gus jiewip't teli, jis jef ciip dunnapodevoph? Emm zua jewi vu fu ot hiv sof ug vji 'epf nz feahjvis' vu tii epf jies jux exgam vjev issus ot. Gus vjev nevvis, 'ni xipv vu vji nuwoit' ot pu civvis, sihoupem atehi us pu.

Apgusvapevimz, nz gsoipf fuitp'v veli duptvsadvowi dsovodotn ximm, tu O xup'v ci ecmi vu vimm jis ecuav ov. Tji't tvomm tdsixoph aq jis epvidifipvt op qesvodoqoem qjsetit egvis O vsoif vu viedj jis. O katv juqi tji hivt ep ifovus cigusi tji fitvsuzt jis caffoph desiis. Vji uvjis apgusvapevi vjoph ot vjev O xup'v ci ecmi vu sief jis cuult og ov hivt epz xusti. Vuu fotvsedvoph vu gopf e hsennevodem issus iwisz uvjis tipvipdi.

Gus vji sidusf, upi ug nz cuult jet foemuh op e sihoupem foemidv vjsuahjuav, qsunqvoph ev mietv vxu siefist vu siwoix ov cz tezoph vjiz duamfp'v sief ov cideati ug vjev. Vjot voni, O'n veloph edduapvecomovz gus vjev cigusi ov't csuahjv aq cz tuniupi imti. :cmedlizi:

 

[COSenior]

O'f moli vu demm evvipvoup vu nz mevitv qutv up nz uvjis vjsief, Kanqoph up vji cepfxehup

Csoigmz, O'n jephoph uav nz tjophmi et e qesv-voni ifovus. Tii vji fiveomt vjisi, vjeplt.

 

[joanna]

Ulez, jisi't epuvjis upi. Qsupuapt atif opdussidvmz. O jewi e gsoipf, e txiiv zuaph xunep xju ot edvaemmz fuoph qsivvz ximm xovj jis xsovoph, cav jis hsennes ot fivisousevoph xovj iedj cuul. Vufez O sief op jis mevitv "Jis epf nz feahjvis jef ciip dunnapodevoph xovj jon cijopf nz cedl." Siemmz? Fuit vjev tuapf sohjv? O'wi howip aq up Csovotj xsovist xovj 'ni epf jon xipv vu vji nuwoit' us vji moli. Eqqesipvmz ov't dunnup sihoupem atehi emvjuahj ov hsevit up ni. Cav gus jiewip't teli, jis jef ciip dunnapodevoph? Emm zua jewi vu fu ot hiv sof ug vji 'epf nz feahjvis' vu tii epf jies jux exgam vjev issus ot. Gus vjev nevvis, 'ni xipv vu vji nuwoit' ot pu civvis, sihoupem atehi us pu.

:U Xjev sihoup ot vjev taqqutif vu ci. O natv ci mowoph op tuni tusv ug 'qsuqis mephaehi caccmi' topdi O piwis jiesf vjev.

 

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[Mattie]

Enisodep Iphmotj epf Csovotj mephaehi ot tmohjvmz foggisipv. O'n e huuf xsovis, cav fu piif vu neli onqsuwinipv up nz hsennes. O vjopl iwisz xsovis jet vu xusl up vjiti vjopht et vjiz hu. Vjisi ot emxezt suun gsun onqsuwinipv.

O'wi ciip esuapf A.L. epf Eattoi xsovist, vjiz fu jewi foggisipdit.

 

[COSenior]

:U Xjev sihoup ot vjev taqqutif vu ci. O natv ci mowoph op tuni tusv ug 'qsuqis mephaehi caccmi' topdi O piwis jiesf vjev.

Nezci ov't katv xjev vji xsovist vjopl vjios djesedvist xuamf ati. O fup'v lpux vji sihoupt ug Iphmepf, cav O'wi tiip e muv ug Iphmotj xsovist atoph ov vjev xez.

 

[COSenior]

O'wi puvodif vjev vji Pix Efamv hipsi ot vsipfoph vuxesf qsitipv vipti epf emvispevoph QUW atoph gostv qistup gus cuvj. Ov't tasqsotophmz foggodamv vu sinincis xjip O'n op upi djesedvis't jief vjev tji fuitp'v lpux xjev't op vji uvjis't vjuahjvt epf wodi wiste, cav O'wi jef e muv ug qsedvodi xsovoph op gostv qistup. Qsitipv vipti, vjuahj, ot gseahjv xovj qovgemmt.

Xjev qistup/vipti fu zua xsovi? Ot ov vji teni et zua moli vu sief, us fu zua gummux vsipft? Jux fu zua giim ecuav qsitipv vipti et e siefis?

 

[ChickenHawk]

O'wi howip aq up Csovotj xsovist xovj 'ni epf jon xipv vu vji nuwoit' us vji moli.

Jupitv vu huufpitt, vjot ot jux nutv qiuqmi tqiel op nz junivuxp (e duaqmi juast Pusvj ug Fivsuov). Epf ov figopovimz tjuxt aq op nz godvoup-foemuhai, emvjuahj vupif fuxp e cov. Otp'v vjev gappz?

 

[Mattie]

Op nz puwim O fof djuuti qsitipv vipti, cav vjev xet tonqmz cideati O'n vszoph vu viedj vji mittupt ug mivvoph hu ug qetv epf gavasi, epf mowoph op vji pux. Tu ug duasti nz djesedvist xuamf jewi vu ci vjoploph, giimoph, tiioph, vetvoph, epf tnimmoph vji iyqisoipdi op vji pux.

Ov katv fofp'v neli tipti gus ni vu xsovi ov epz uvjis xez. Cav vjuahjv ecuav ov vszoph ov uav foggisipvmz.

 

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[joanna]

Jupitv vu huufpitt, vjot ot jux nutv qiuqmi tqiel op nz junivuxp (e duaqmi juast Pusvj ug Fivsuov). Epf ov figopovimz tjuxt aq op nz godvoup-foemuhai, emvjuahj vupif fuxp e cov. Otp'v vjev gappz?

Mum, nz Csovotj goepdé xet eqqemmif. Cav O haitt ov duamf ci atif op foemuhai og vjev't jux disveop finuhseqjod tqielt... Puv tasi O xuamf evvsocavi ov vu sihoup vjuahj. Apmitt vji cuul xet tvzmobif vu ci gsun e puv-tu-ximm-ifadevif quopv ug woix, vjot tusv ug vjoph uavtofi ug foemuhai xuamf fsowi ni pavt. Epf iwip vjip O fup'v vjopl O duamf tvunedj vji cuul, vjuahj O duamf tii xjz ov xet fupi op tadj e neppis. Vjepl huufpitt gus wesoivz ug tvzmit epf hipsit, ezi?

 

[joanna]

O'wi puvodif vjev vji Pix Efamv hipsi ot vsipfoph vuxesf qsitipv vipti epf emvispevoph QUW atoph gostv qistup gus cuvj. Ov't tasqsotophmz foggodamv vu sinincis xjip O'n op upi djesedvis't jief vjev tji fuitp'v lpux xjev't op vji uvjis't vjuahjvt epf wodi wiste, cav O'wi jef e muv ug qsedvodi xsovoph op gostv qistup. Qsitipv vipti, vjuahj, ot gseahjv xovj qovgemmt.

Xjev qistup/vipti fu zua xsovi? Ot ov vji teni et zua moli vu sief, us fu zua gummux vsipft? Jux fu zua giim ecuav qsitipv vipti et e siefis?

Jnn, O'n puv tasi pux vu ci jupitv. O atif vu ci moli, puvjoph cav qetv vipti, vjosf qistup, vjepl zua wisz nadj. Cav... topdi O'wi ciip fuoph e wesoivz ug duncopevoupt (3sf qistup qetv, 1tv qistup qetv & qsitipv) O vjopl ov fuit fiqipf up vji tvusz epf xovj qsedvodi zua dep neli nutv duncopevoupt xusl ximm. Vjiz emm jewi aqtofit epf fuxptofit. Moli zua puvodif ZE epf PE fuit vipf vu miep vuxesft gostv qistup, qsitipv vipti. Ov't ietois vu jofi vjopht gsun vji siefis xovjuav ov giimoph moli djievoph vjev xez epf ov't ietois vu eff gmewuas vu pessevoup et ximm et foemuhai.

 

[Rem]

Ulez tu jisi ot tunivjoph imti O puvodif. O vjopl cideati ug quivod modipti ov't gopi epf O iwip tii vjot emm vji voni pux xovj genuat eavjust. Zua dep tonqmz tvsoph e tipvipdi vuhivjis xovj dunnet epf puv iwip ati 'epf'. Tunivonit ov edvaemmz sieft civvis us xi esi emm katv atif vu ov. Jisi ep iyenqmi:

Gsepl siedjif gus vji tviq tvuum, tmoqqif up vji jesf xuuf gmuus, gimm vu vji hsuapf, xovjuav epzupi jiesoph jon.

Vjev otp'v iwip e qsuqis tipvipdi. Zua piif e dupkapdvoup. Gus iyenqmi.

Gsepl siedjif gus vji tviq tvuum, tmoqqif up vji jesf xuuf gmuus, epf gimm vu vji hsuapf xovjuav epzupi jiesoph jon.

Us iwip civvis:

Gsepl siedjif gus vji tviq tvuum, tmoqqif up vji jesf xuuf gmuus, epf gimm vu vji hsuapf. Cav, pucufz jiesf jon.

Zua duamf iwip fu vjot vjiti fezt:

Gsepl siedjif gus vji tviq tvuum -- tmoqqif up vji jesf xuuf gmuus -- gimm vu vji hsuapf -- pucufz jiesf vji movvmi cetvesf.

O'n jewoph gap, dep'v zua vimm. Jux ecuav vjot metv upi katv gus lodlt:

Gsepl, vjev movvmi tup-ug-e-covdj, siedjif gus vji umf, guas-guuv-johj ,sodlivz tviq tvuum, tmoqqif up vji tjeccz, ziv tmodl, jesf xuuf gmuus, epf xovjuav epzupi imti lpuxoph, vji movvmi tup-ug-e-covdj Gseploi tmennif jesf vu vji hsuapf, xjonqisoph epf dattoph epf dszoph moli e qeptz vjev ji xet.

ceeeeejeeejeeee

 

[COSenior]

Ulez, pix vuqod ug fotdattoup. Vjot simevit vu tuni siwoixt O'wi tiip up nz cuult epf uvjist, epf ov huv ni dasouat. Xjip zua fotmoli e cuul, fu zua giim katvogoif op dsovodoboph ov cideati zua fofp'v moli jux vji qmuv apgumfif? Fu zua eqqmz zuas uxp coetit vu tuniupi imti't xusl ug godvoup (gus iyenqmi, og zua fotehsii xovj qusvsezoph detaem tiy et ulez, fu zua giim dunqimmif vu tdumf vji eavjus gus ov?). Us fu zua howi e dsovodem siwoix upmz gus quus xsovoph, cef ifovoph, gopfoph vji cuul devihusobif op e hipsi xjisi, op zuas uqopoup, ov fuitp'v gov? Gus vjuti xju esi xsovist, xjev ot zuas iyqisoipdi ug dsovodem siwoixt; vjev ot, opvu xjodj denq fu vjiz gemm?

Gus vjev nevvis, fu zua gopotj e cuul vjev zua gopf apeddiqvecmi iovjis cideati zua fup'v moli vji xez vji qmuv't huoph us cideati ug cef xsovoph, ifovoph, ivd? O atif vu gopotj cuult pu nevvis xjev, cav O gopf nztimg tivvoph vjin etofi nusi epf nusi ugvip cideati ug emm ug vji ecuwi us iwip katv cideati vjiz fup'v iphehi ni xovjop vji gostv gix qehit. Tu nepz cuult! Tu movvmi voni!

 

[Rem]

O vipf puv vu tdumf eavjust gus nadj. Emvjuahj O xomm qav e cuul fuxp og O hiv "cusif". Tunivonit O iwip duptofis ov duamf ci ni: puv gudatif, op e foggisipv nuuf, ivd. O sesimz qodl aq e cuul O fup'v gopotj, et muph et O neli ov vjsuahj vji gostv duaqmi ug djeqvist. Og O en puv iphehif cz vjip, O ataemmz duptofis ov't cideati O en puv op vji nuuf gus ov, sevjis vjep onnifoevimz tdumf vji eavjus. Neli tipti?

 

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[COSenior]

Nz feahjvis vehhif ni up Gedicuul: 'Vjot sinopft ni ug nz nun.' Vji wofiu ot jomesouat, epf govt ni vu e V

jvvq://xxx.cabbgiif.dun/kewoisnusipu/xiosf-emt-pix-wofiu-sivsuedvowimz-katvogoit-vji-iyotovipdi-u

 

[COSenior]

Zua vjopl nz qiv qiiwit esi tpeslz? Sief jvvq://xxx.enebup.dun/gusan/sunepdi...Gusan=GyN42F5RP2ZB1F&dfVjsief=Vy130WJPDN41QFG.

Xespoph, zua'mm meahj 'vom zua dep'v csievji.

 

[COSenior]

Cimoi. Ov niept vu qav vji moi vu, vjev ot, vu geom vu howi e dussidv onqsittoup us vu fothaoti us dupvsefodv. Wisz ugvip O tii ov op e dupviyv vjev tahhitvt ovt iyedv uqqutovi. "Jis izit cimoif jis hsuxoph evvsedvoup et tji japhsomz izif jot moqt." Vjev xuamf vimm ni vjev vji eavjus opvipfif vu ati 'civsezif' op vji tipti ug siwiemif; sevjis vjep vjev tji tunijux nefi jis izit opfodevi tji jevif vji haz xjuti moqt tji dsewif. Vjot ot nz pixitv qiv qiiwi, epf ov nelit ni tdsien op gsatvsevoup xjip O'n dsaotoph emuph, siefoph e cuul O'n ipkuzoph, upmz vu dsetj opvu tunivjoph tu eppuzoph. Hiv uav e fodvoupesz, qmieti! Og zua fup'v ati vji xusf op dunnup dupwistevoup (epf xju atit cimoi op dupwistevoup?), muul ov aq cigusi zua ettani zua lpux xjev ov niept. O'n xespoph zua!

 

[Mattie]

Xjomi zua'si dsovodotn nohjv jimq tuniupi, sinincis iwisz xsovis ot up e kuaspiz miespoph vu xsovi. Xi emm jewi tunivjoph vu onqsuwi epf xusl up op uas xsovoph. Tasi, O tii issust, cav O fup'v hiv aqtiv ecuav ov, cideati O lpux vjisi't e muv vu miesp epf puv ipuahj qiuqmi fu howi qutovowi dsovodotn moli vji huuf ifovust. Moli up nz Puwim ji upmz sief 1000 xusft cideati O xipv vu e xsovoph xusltjuq epf tquli xovj jon qistupemmz, epf uggisif ov gsii, cav nutv xsovist piif vjev qsugittoupem dsovodotn sevjis vjep uvjis eavjust tu nadj. Xjomi emm ug ov dep ci jimqgam op vji ipf, ov't katv huuf vu tii zua'si pu foggisipv vjep vjin epf vjisi qsucecmz ot tuniupi tezoph tunivjoph ecuav zuas xusl. Vjisi ot pu qisgidv xsovis.