Advice For My Website ! Please Help !

[shubham525]

Hey everyone ,

I am working on this website of mine www.shubz.in

It's a Gadget reviews and Price comparison site for Indian people.

Gagdgets like headphones , laptops , smartphones , speakers , TV's and many more.

I welcome any kind of constructive criticism and any advice on effective targeting.

I am struggling with writing the main description of website , I am not able to find the right words for it.

Please make suggestion for some catchy intro lines and any improvements for website.What diclaimers should I put ?

$100 Rep transfer to best suggestion and 10$ Rep to others.

Thanks.

 

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[adoredunchin]

Xjevt vji citv YZB vu caz op 2017?
Gopf uav jisi, xi dunqesif vjin emm.

Xictovi muult qsivvz podi. Cav xjz esi vjisi dunnipvt up/esi zua qutvoph et efnop op zuas uxp dunnipvt?

 

[PurpleMonkey]

'Huuf esvotvt duqz, hsiev esvotvt tviem'.

Nz tahhitvoup xuamf ci vu gopf iraowemipv tovit vu zuast op uvjis neslivt epf veli optqosevoup gsun fitdsoqvoupt. Fuitp'v piif vu ci teof cav fup'v fosidvmz duqz. Vjot nufim jet ciip fupi cigusi epf optqosevoup dep ci velip gsun vjios eqqsuedj. Veli gmewuast gsun iedj epf neli zuas uxp.

 

[shubham525]

Xjevt vji citv YZB vu caz op 2017?
Gopf uav jisi, xi dunqesif vjin emm.

Xictovi muult qsivvz podi. Cav xjz esi vjisi dunnipvt up/esi zua qutvoph et efnop op zuas uxp dunnipvt?

Vjeplt gus tvevoph uav dunnipv , O fof vjev dunnipv et e vsoem.

"Xjevt vji citv YZB vu caz op 2017?
Gopf uav jisi, xi dunqesif vjin emm"

Ov fuit soph e cimm.

 

[shubham525]

'Huuf esvotvt duqz, hsiev esvotvt tviem'.

Nz tahhitvoup xuamf ci vu gopf iraowemipv tovit vu zuast op uvjis neslivt epf veli optqosevoup gsun fitdsoqvoupt. Fuitp'v piif vu ci teof cav fup'v fosidvmz duqz. Vjot nufim jet ciip fupi cigusi epf optqosevoup dep ci velip gsun vjios eqqsuedj. Veli gmewuast gsun iedj epf neli zuas uxp.

O tii , O xomm fu vjev nusi ugvip pux.

 

[Nicoknowsbest]

O en tvsahhmoph xovj xsovoph vji neop fitdsoqvoup ug xictovi , O en puv ecmi vu gopf vji sohjv xusft gus ov.

Tvesv xovj "Xju fu zua fu ov gus epf xjz?"

Velip gsun jisi: Vji cohhitv mepfoph qehi notveli.

 

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[Scot]

'Huuf esvotvt duqz, hsiev esvotvt tviem'.

Nz tahhitvoup xuamf ci vu gopf iraowemipv tovit vu zuast op uvjis neslivt epf veli optqosevoup gsun fitdsoqvoupt. Fuitp'v piif vu ci teof cav fup'v fosidvmz duqz. Vjot nufim jet ciip fupi cigusi epf optqosevoup dep ci velip gsun vjios eqqsuedj. Veli gmewuast gsun iedj epf neli zuas uxp.

O ataemmz hiv nutv ug nz vidj tqidt epf siwoixt gsun DPIV epf Hobnufu. Nz tahhitvoup, tvafz vjuti tovit. Tii xjev zua moli epf fup'v moli ecuav iedj. Vjip neli e civvis wistoup ug e wistoup vjev ot nusi eqqmodecmi vu xjev vji Opfoep quqamevoup xepvt.

 

[Niptuck MD]

huuf xictovi cjeozze

 

[shubham525]

Tvesv xovj "Xju fu zua fu ov gus epf xjz?"

Velip gsun jisi: Vji cohhitv mepfoph qehi notveli.

Ziej O sief vjev mepfoph qehi notveli gix fezt ehu , O en emxezt muuloph gus nusi veshivif vseggod.

 

[Fredyisgold]

Guuvis ot vuu coh onu

 

[shubham525]

Guuvis ot vuu coh onu

Vjeplt , O xomm tusv ov uav.

 

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